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Pavitra Rishta - Chapter 4 (PG 3) ArMan Meet

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Pavitra Rishta
Dates of Update - Monday, Wednesday and Friday

Links to Chapters
Chapter 1
Chapter 2

Manav [Sushant]
Archana [Ankita]
Nandhini [Divyanka]

Edited by ~*Thamizhan*~ - 25 October 2009 at 7:59am

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mellisai IF-Sizzlerz

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Chapter 1 - First Meeting

Archana pushed through the early morning crowd. She looked radiant even with simple makeup and every part of her sparkled. She reached Ganapati bappa and mentioned her prayer in silence. She surveyed the crowd of girls surrounding her and called out to her mother.
"Archana, you stay there until the prayer is complete!" Sulochana shouted.
Archana turned around and continued her prayer.

Manav was lying awake thinking about the busy day ahead and his phone rang. He moved quickly to the other side of the room hoping to answer a call of a needed customer, but the call was from Nandhini, his boss' daughter.
"Manav, get to the station temple," she said urgently.
"Are you OK?" He asked impatiently.
"No!" She ended the call.

Manav braked his bike near Nandhini's car. He looked through the closed window of the car and it was unoccupied. He turned to look for Nandhini, when an old looking woman approached him.
"She awaits you in the temple," She said softly, giving him a smile.
Manav smiled back and rushed inside.

Manav moved through a crowd of young girls bickering about the early morning prayer. He came to a halt when Archana turned and called, "Aai!" All of a sudden his mind shifted and he moved closer to her, breathing in her subtle fragrance.
Please share your thoughts and suggestions.Big smile The chapters will be short this week.

Edited by ~*Thamizhan*~ - 21 October 2009 at 1:43am

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.Angel IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 18 October 2009 at 1:35pm | IP Logged
thank u sweetieSmile

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devashree_h Moderator

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Posted: 19 October 2009 at 12:27am | IP Logged
I really loved it.Thanks.

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lramanujam Senior Member

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Posted: 19 October 2009 at 8:28am | IP Logged
super 1st chapter. Pease continue even if they are short they are always welcome.

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Thanks for the encouraging comments!Big smile
Chapter 2

"Manav," a female voice whispered in his ears. He turned around and Nandhini was giving him a silly face.
"What are you doing here?" Manav asked, bewildered by Archana's beauty.
"Duh! I told you to come here," she answered as she clipped her bushy hair.
Manav took a quick glance at the unaware girl next to him and turned to see whether Nandhini had noticed. Nandhini rolled her fine eyes towards Archana.
"I'm not good enough, eh?" She dragged him out of the crowd forcefully.

"Perfect morning." Sulochana handed some prashad to her husband. She continued, "Where is everyone? Archana, you get ready fast!"
Manohar moved closer to his wife, "Varsha didn't take the day off and Vaishu left complaining how things are disrupting her studies."
"Archu stopped her studies to look after these two, but they show no kind of respect to her!" Sobbing hard, sulochana sank into a chair.
"Aai, Varshu forgot to take her lunch." Archana walked in from the kitchen carrying Varsha's tiffin box. Her heart sank seeing her mother and rushed to comfort her.

Varsha entered her boss' room and closed the door quietly.
"Welcome, Varsha," he said and looked at his watch. "Late. Once again!"
"Sorry, sir."
He moved to his drawer and pulled out an envelope. "Your payment," he added.

Well that's all for today! Keep your comments/ suggestions coming!Wink

Edited by ~*Thamizhan*~ - 21 October 2009 at 1:42am

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Posted: 21 October 2009 at 3:59am | IP Logged
Hey Thamizhan, that's a very nice idea to write the tamil version of PR as a FF .. well written and explained, continue soon ..
ps : love ur Surya-Jo avi

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Thanks its really interesting,looking forward for more chapters.:)

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