Humain Aisi mohabbat hai tumse... FF RA - Page 7

Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Friendz... m back.. m really sorry for the delay.. but there is lots of work at the workplace these days and iss week to subah 7 baje se training hai.. but aaj mujhe bahut mann kiya aage ki story likhne ka.. so ... here I am....
I really appreciate all of you.. 4 taking time out to read the story... love you guys !!!!                                      

                             HUMEIN AISI MOHABBAT HAI TUMSE



Raj bahar hota hai woh soch raha hota hai..
mujhe aise achanak se kya ho gaya..pehle to kabhi kissi ko dekh kar kuch bhi mehsoos  nahin hua..fir aaj Kashish ke saath Dance karke ek..ek..aanjana sa.. fir bhi apna sa..ek andekha sa...fir bhi jaise harr roz dekha hua sa..ek ehsas jaisa mehsoos hua..
ek aarzoo hai..tumhein paane ki..
tumhein apna banane ki..
tumhare saath zindagi bitane ki..
tujh main khud ko bhool jaane ki...


Dr Raj..aapko pehli nazar main pyar ho gaya hai..the moment he thought about this thought that came into his mind..in his thoughts..he hit himself hard on his head and with a no no smile.. composed himself to go back inside to be the part of the party again..


Udhar Angad, Kripa, Akshat aur Charu sab baat kare rahe hote hain.. Kashish aur Raj ke
baare main..
Angad: Aaj bahut dino ke baad Kashish ke chehre par thoda sukoon dekha hai..
Kripa: haan maine bhi dance ke time note kiya tha ki Kashish bechain nahin thi aaj..Kaash woh hamesha aisi hi rahe..
Akshat: hmm.. yeh baat to hai..aur usmain aaye iss change ka reason shayad Dr Raj hai..
Everyone looks at him..
Akshat: are maine aisa kuch nahin kaha, maine to bas wahi kaha jo maine notice kiya..
shayad tum logon ne dekha nahin..Kashish ke chehre par jo chain hai..woh dance ke time
se hi hai..main bas yahi dua karta hun ki woh hamesha hi khush rahe. Piyush ka bacha..
waise hi mujhe aacha nahin lagta tha..pata nahin kahish ko iss halat main chod kar
chala kahan gaya hai... kahin mil jaaye na.. to uski woh haalat karunga ki yaad rakehga..


In the meantime.. Raj joins the gang standing there and listens to Akshat speaking the last sentence.
Raj: kiski dunayi karne ki soch rahe ho Akshat, mujhe maarne ka irada to nahin hai na tera..
Raj ko achnak aaya dekh aur Akshat ki baat sun lete dekh,sab ek ddosre ki aor dekhna
shuru kar dete hain, kynki unki samajh main nahin aata hai ki Raj se woh log kya kahein..

Akshat: are Raj, tujhe maar kar main khud marna nahin chahta hun..tujhe maar diya to Charu mujhe maar dalegi...tum uske iklote bhai jo ho..bhai kaha hai to charu ne tumhein dil se maana bhi hai...aur agar main main maar gaya to charu .. yeh bolte bolte Akshat ki halat kharab ho jaati hai ....nahin nahin.. tujhe to main kabhi bhi nahin maar sakta... sab hass padte hain..

Angad: are yeh Kashish kaha reh gayi.. abhi to yahi thi..pata nahin kaha chali gayi..Tabhi Kashish aati hai..
Kashish: aacha mujhe dhoondha ja raha hai..
Akshat: are aacha hua tum aagayi.. main to police main jaane hi waala tha..
Kashish: Police.. kyn?
Akshat: are tumhare gum hone ki FIR likhvane ke liye..
Kashish: Akki .. tu bhi na..main kahin nahin gayi thi.. bas mama ke paas gayi thi. tum log jahan ekhate hote ho to tum logon ke saamne  haar 5 min main mujhe hazari lagani padti hai.. warna pata nahin kya haal karoge mera tum log...

Kripa: wahi to..tumhari fikr hoti hai isliye..
Kashish: are bhai, main theek hun.. aachi hun..

Kripa: aacha aab yeh sab baatein chodo..tum logon ko yaad hai na ki kal 31st hai...
Charu: are haan.. yaad aaya.. aab aayega mazaaa....
Akshat: kyn aisa kya hai kal.. tabhi woh Kripa ki taraf dekh kar apna sar hilata hai aur smile karta hai.. areeeeee kal to mera fav day hota hai US ka...

Kripa: aur nahin to kya.. bhooton ko bhooton se milna jo hota hai..
Angad: are haan.. kal to holloween hai.. mast mazaa aayega...aur iss bhoot ka bhi din hai..
Akshat: to sahi hai.. kal ki bhooton ki party, iss bhoot ke ghar par..sab aache aache bhoot ban kar aana.. are kal to Raj bhi yahi hoga.. kyn hai na Raj..

Raj: jo ki Kashish ko gaur se dekh raha hota hai..achanak se apna naam sun kar akshat ki taraf dekhta hai.. kuch kaha Akki..

Akshat: hey bhagwan.. yaha poori ramayan khatam ho gayi hai.. aur yeh puch raha hai ki sita ji kaun thi... Raj.. maine kaha ki kal holloween ki party hai aur sab ko aanana hai..

Raj: ohh okay.. main aajaunga...woh bhi best bhoot ban kar.. 😆

Haste haste party comes to and end and everyone bid goodbye to one another...

Kashish ghar pahunch kar change karke waapis se khidhki ke paas baithi hai.. aaj bhi uska dil bbaichan hota hai.. woh sochti hai...
Aakhir kab tak main doosron ke saame apne aap ko sambhalti rahungi... mujh main itni himmat nahin hai Piyush .. bilkul bhi nahin hai.. thak gayi hun main .. aisa lagta hai ki zindagi ke koi mayne nahin reh gaye hain... tumhari yaad aati hai Piyush.. jahan bhi ho waapis aajaoo... apni aankhein band kar khidhki ke kinare baithi hoti hai kashish....

tabhi band aankhon se woh Raj ka chehra dekhti hai.. aur jhat se kashish ki aankhein khul jaati hai.... woh aur bhi baichan ho jaati hai...
yeh kya hua mujhe.. mujhe ekdum se Dr Raj ka chehra kyn dikhayi diya... kuch samajh main nahin aaraha hai mujhe... piyush tum hi kuch bataoo na.. main kya karun.. kahan dhoondhun tumhein...

Udhar apni window se bahar dekhte hue Raj sochta hai.... Kashish.. ajeeb se kashish hai usse judi hui.. bilkul waise hi jaise uske naam main hai...
Raj Kashish ka naam leta hai aur apni aankehin band karta hai.. jaise hi Raj ki aankhien bandd hoti hai.. usse Kashish muskurati hui dikhayi deti hai.. aur Raj hass deta hai..
Sach main Kashish, upar waale ne tumhein bahut fursat main banaya hai... par, pata nahin.. yeh dil hai ki yeh baat manane ko tayar hi nahin hai ki tum aisa bhi kar sakti ho.. kissi ki jindagi ke saath khel sakti ho ki woh insaan apni sudb budh kho baithe.. main ek psychiatrist hun.. par fir bhi tumse pehli baar main mil kar main tumhari sachai nahin jaan paya... yeh mere saath pehli baar hua hai.. ki main kissi se mil kar khud hi thoda ghoom raha hun.....
Samajh main nahin aata hai ki kya karun... tumhein dekh kar aisa lagta hai ki duniya ki haar khushi tumhare hi pairon tale hai... par yeh bhi lagta hai ki kissi ki zindagi ko roondne waali bhi tumhi ho.. aab to yeh raaj suljhana hi padega ki aakhir tum main aisi kaun si baat hai.. aur kaun sahi hai aur kaun galat....

dono hi yeh soch kar so jaate hain...
The next day is Holloween .. Kashish is not that excited this time as she was the last year.. iss saal kynki Piyush uske saath nahin tha.. par fir bhi woh baki sab ke liye khush rehne ki koshish kar rahi thi...

The party is at Akshat's house and he has decorated the house very well...



Every where in the house is a scary effect the moment you enter in the hall..



Akshat is wearing and is looking a pakka bhoot...
Charu is wearing...


Angad comes as


and Kripa is accompanying and complementing Angad....





Kashish choose to be a bit sober and she is dressed like a princess..





Unaware of each other choice for the dresses , both Kashish and Raj complement each other and are wearing dresses which are incomplete and tangibly meaningless without it's counterpart.... Raj comes as dressed as Robinhood .....




Both are silently complementing each other .... in the dressing style which is noticed by all...

the FUN AND FROLIC BEGINS.................................. and IT'S GONNA BE SCARY...........


Edited by rmanu7382 - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago
guys I will post the next part by this Sunday... please bear with me...
Love you all !!
Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely part !
The chosen costumes were fab...Especially Akshat and Charu's..
Continue soon !!
 
Regardz,
Vandu
Posted: 14 years ago
manu i know you were busy for so much time.. but i'am glad that tumne part update kiya.. waise ek baat bata yeh part training ke time par likhi kya..hehehehe.....😉 manu yaar part tho bada hii interesting tha... mujhe behad pasand aaya.. raj aur kashish ke beech kii chemistry sabko dikhne hii lagi hai.. i like it.... aur tho aur raj aur kashish ke  dilon mein bhi ek ajeeb si hulchul hone lagi hai... i can just see sparks flying in the air between raj & kashish... i'am happy kii kashish has such sweet people to take care of her.. they are there always by her side to support... yahaan akshat is discussing about the Halloween party & raj hai kii kashish ko ghoor ne mein busy hai.. is baat par main raj se kehne chahoongi lage raho raj.... hehehehe.... tho then coming to the night time.. jahaan ek taraf kashish is thinking about raj.. well yeh tho achcha hai.. i'am happy kii uske khayalon mein piyush ko chodkar raj bhi aaya.. & yeh tho bas shuruwaat hai.. i'am sure ek din aisa hoga kii kashish ke zindagi mein, khwabon, khayalon mein sirf aur sirf raj hoga.. & i'am waiting for that day... & dusari taraf raj is getting attracted to kashish, but he is confused.. mere khayal se yahii confusion will pave way for raj's love for kashish..this confusion is just the start... & mere hisaab se raj ke dil par already kashish hii chayi hui hai, bhale hii raj yeh baat maane ya phir na maane....  the start of the party was nice.... sujal, kashish complimenting  each other in clothes cooll.. but i'am waiting for that day when they both will understand kii they compliment each other in life perfectly...hahaha.. anyway good going manu yaar.... very interesting.....👏 manu dekh jaldi se continue karna.. i'am waiting for the next part eagerly... aur haan agar tum jaldi se next part post nahii karogi tho suri tumko tung karegi... ym par or gtalk par.. idea kaisa hai bol tho zara..hahaha.... aur haan fanfic ke liye ek idea mere dimaak mein aa raha hai we will discuss that when we chat.... okies... continue soon......😊 love you... 🤗
Edited by sun_423 - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago
hey dear finally u updated...................very nice part...................raj is highly confused and also somewhat attracted to kashish......raj should have listened to angad kripa and akshat's convo fully then he would have known what really happened but anyways thats not gonna happen this soon..............the dresses are very nice.................cant wait to know how the party is gonna take on.................cont soon dear............
Posted: 14 years ago
Nice part. U knw wat I'm glad that Raj at least wants to knw who is right n who is wrong.....I hope he tries to find out n not just do anything....(I guess my cutie is sensible enough to do that...hehe😳😳)...and Raj n Kashish r complimenting each other.....well they hav to.....the part was actually very sweet....n Akshat was very funny....(he didnt like Piyush na.....so I'm supposed to find him gud....hehe).....And yes....I luved the lines u wrote in the beginning describing Raj's thoughts😃....they were lovely....anyways, pls try to continue soon.....w8ing for the scary Halloween.  😉
Edited by sumaiya wahid - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago
manu jaldi continue karna.. me waiting..😊
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by togepe30


Lovely part !
The chosen costumes were fab...Especially Akshat and Charu's..
Continue soon !!
 
Regardz,
Vandu


Thanks Vandu.. i loved to hear tht u liked it..
will post the next part soon.... this weekend pakka se...
love Manu
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by sun_423


manu i know you were busy for so much time.. but i'am glad that tumne part update kiya.. waise ek baat bata yeh part training ke time par likhi kya..hehehehe.....😉 manu yaar part tho bada hii interesting tha... mujhe behad pasand aaya.. raj aur kashish ke beech kii chemistry sabko dikhne hii lagi hai.. i like it.... aur tho aur raj aur kashish ke  dilon mein bhi ek ajeeb si hulchul hone lagi hai... i can just see sparks flying in the air between raj & kashish... i'am happy kii kashish has such sweet people to take care of her.. they are there always by her side to support... yahaan akshat is discussing about the Halloween party & raj hai kii kashish ko ghoor ne mein busy hai.. is baat par main raj se kehne chahoongi lage raho raj.... hehehehe.... tho then coming to the night time.. jahaan ek taraf kashish is thinking about raj.. well yeh tho achcha hai.. i'am happy kii uske khayalon mein piyush ko chodkar raj bhi aaya.. & yeh tho bas shuruwaat hai.. i'am sure ek din aisa hoga kii kashish ke zindagi mein, khwabon, khayalon mein sirf aur sirf raj hoga.. & i'am waiting for that day... & dusari taraf raj is getting attracted to kashish, but he is confused.. mere khayal se yahii confusion will pave way for raj's love for kashish..this confusion is just the start... & mere hisaab se raj ke dil par already kashish hii chayi hui hai, bhale hii raj yeh baat maane ya phir na maane....  the start of the party was nice.... sujal, kashish complimenting  each other in clothes cooll.. but i'am waiting for that day when they both will understand kii they compliment each other in life perfectly...hahaha.. anyway good going manu yaar.... very interesting.....👏 manu dekh jaldi se continue karna.. i'am waiting for the next part eagerly... aur haan agar tum jaldi se next part post nahii karogi tho suri tumko tung karegi... ym par or gtalk par.. idea kaisa hai bol tho zara..hahaha.... aur haan fanfic ke liye ek idea mere dimaak mein aa raha hai we will discuss that when we chat.... okies... continue soon......😊 love you... 🤗



hahaha.. tujhe jitna tang karna hai tu utna kar.. mere liye to woh tang nahin hota hai..
love u too dear.. pakka se jaldi se continue karungi...
iss week band baji hui hai.. bure tareeke se.... subah 7 baje uthna .. baap re..

glad that you liked it dear.. actually soch rahi hun ki Holloween ko scary aur romantic kaise banaun.. he he...

love u.. manu
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by spvd


hey dear finally u updated...................very nice part...................raj is highly confused and also somewhat attracted to kashish......raj should have listened to angad kripa and akshat's convo fully then he would have known what really happened but anyways thats not gonna happen this soon..............the dresses are very nice.................cant wait to know how the party is gonna take on.................cont soon dear............


hey sweetie.. glad that you liked the part and is awaiting for the next scary one.. he he..
pakka se scary hoga.. dnt wrry...
are agar Raj .. unki conversation sun leta to fir to raaz raaz kya rehta.. suspense dheere dheere kholna chahiye :D

will continue soon..
love ya
Manu

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