~*~Prida Romantic Scene Thread~*~ - Page 9

Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by krupur1103


great job ivy!!! loved it!!!


honey where's your scene???😉
😆 krupsi....its on its way 😛😛😛...soooonn!!
Posted: 14 years ago
o honey...i can't wait..!!!
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by krupur1103


o honey...i can't wait..!!!
😛....don't do that KRUPSI.....anticlimax na ho jaye!!!
Posted: 14 years ago
lol honey what i meant was that i can't wait till i get to read the scene...lol

Posted: 14 years ago
Honey...ur "soon" is taking an awfully long time...*stares at Honey suspiciously*

@Krups-why don't u try writing one!😃
Edited by Erutan99 - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by Erutan99


Honey...ur "soon" is taking an awfully long time...*stares at Honey suspiciously*

@Krups-why don't u try writing one!😃
 
*high fives DOC*.......yea Krupsi....u got talent girl....def write one!!
 
Doc.....don't be suspicious.....still have to start....so tomm def u'll get it!!😛
Posted: 14 years ago
lol ivy and honey...if i start writing prida scenes....do you want me to go in to hibernation...me and writing prida scenes...nahhh..i don't think i could ever do anything like so. lol i like reading you guys's write up......😉


btw honey..i got to go to bed now....got school tomorrow....goodnight!
hopefully i will see the scene tomorrow morning 😉
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by krupur1103


lol ivy and honey...if i start writing prida scenes....do you want me to go in to hibernation...me and writing prida scenes...nahhh..i don't think i could ever do anything like so. lol i like reading you guys's write up......😉


btw honey..i got to go to bed now....got school tomorrow....goodnight!
hopefully i will see the scene tomorrow morning 😉
sweety...u will be reallly excellent at those!!! try once!!
 
have a nice day at skool!!
 
ummmmnot tomm morn but by afternoon or even for sure....promisssssseeeee
Posted: 14 years ago
**Writing by sistu**
 
 
 
FICTION 2
 
This is a poem about how Damini feels in Prithvi's presence:
 
Tumse Mil ke........
 
Tumse milti hoon to milti hoon us ladki se........
jo kabhi jhula jhulti thi
jo taaron ke niche baith ke kisi raajkumar ke sapney bunti thi
jo waqt ke haathon majboor hoke kahi kho gayi
parivaar ka beta bane ke liye khud so gayi
 
Tum choote ho to milti hun ek ehsaas se......
jisme phir se sawarne ka man kare....
nikharne ka dil kare......
tumahre toot ke bikharne ka ji kare
 
Tumse milti hoon to milti hoon subah ki taazi hawa se
jo apne saath subah ki pehli kiran laati hain
koyal ki meethi kook chupi rah ti hain
jisme phoolon ki khusboo simat aati hain
jisme bhavron ki gunjun shamil hoti hain
 
Tumse milti hoon to milti hoon mausam ki pehli baarish se
jisme  mitti ki saundhi mehek saason ko mehkaa jaati hain
jo apne saath raahat ka paigam laati hain
jo sabko bheego deti hain
jisme sab magan ho jaaten hain
jhoomte hain gaate hain
 
Tumse milti hoon to sunti hoon apne dil ki dhadkan ko
jisme sirf ek hi naam baar baar dhakta hain......
Prithvi
 
Title credit: It is from the song tumse milke aisa laga.......Movie-Parinda
 
P.S. Ivy sorry for not posting it here. Plz dont feel bad😊
Posted: 14 years ago
Ivy..That was awesome, so awesome..Absolutely LOVED it..Please continue writing..

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