~*~Prida Romantic Scene Thread~*~ - Page 4

Posted: 14 years ago
 **Writing by diya86**
 
 
 
FICTION 2
(Damini's Point of View)

What makes him so special,
that I can't look away?
What gives him the right to fill
my thoughts, night and day? 
 
Why does he have the power,
to make me cry and hurt?
Why is he the only one,
who can give me comfort?
 
Why do I feel so much for a man,
who doesn't care for me?
Why can't I stay away from him?
He doesn't like me, clearly.
 
How am I supposed to deal with this,
and how much more can I take?
How exactly did I end up here?
It feels like my heart will break...
 
*****

Edited by Erutan99 - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago
 **Writing by Dawn Idol**
 
 
 
FICTION 1
(Prithvi's Point of View)

What's wrong with me ?
She's just another girl, can't you see?
Why does her entry
Put me in such a tizzy .....

How does she do it?
Make my heart skip a beat
Just a look, just a glance
Leaves me in such a trance ....

Does my day have to start
With her radiant smile
Is she aware of what
She's doing to me all the while ?

I know she's strong
I know she's capable
Then why do I long
That she finds me dependable

Why the need ?
To be her shield
To wipe her tears
To remove her fears ....

Will she ever read my mind ?
How do I tell her, how will she find
How much I need her
Love her & cherish her forever and ever .....

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Posted: 14 years ago
**Writing by sistu**
 
 
 
FICTION 1

Hum Aap

Hum aaye the jaal beechane ke liye
Kab aapke liye sapne sajaane lage pata nahi

Hum aaye the aapko rulaane ke liye
Kab aapke aasuon pe khud rone lage pata nahi

Hum aaye the aapko khushiyon se door karne ke liye
Kab aapke saath muskuraane lage pata nahi

Hum aaye the aapki aakon ke neend udane ke liye
Kab aapki aakhon mein khone lage pata nahi

Hum aaye the kaali ghata ban ke
Kab aapki kaalin julfon mein ghum hogaye pata nahi
 
Hum aaye the aapke hosh udane ke liye
Kab hum madhosh hone lage pata nahi
 
Hum aaye the aapko chot pahucahane ke liye
Kab aapke marham ban gaye pata nahi
 
Hum aaye the aapko sharminda karne ke liye
kab khud sharmane lage pata nahi
 

Hum aaye the yeh soch ke aap humare kusurwaar hain
Kab khud aapke ghunegaar ban gaye pata nahi

Hum aaye the apko akela karne ke liye
Kab aapke humsafar ban gaye pata nahi

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Edited by Erutan99 - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago
 **Writing by diya86**
 
 
 
FICTION 3
(Damini's Point of View)

Things I hate about you

I hate it when you stand up to me,

I hate it when you don't.

'cos you choose the worst time to listen to me -

When I'm counting on the fact that you won't.


I hate it when you pull away,

I hate it when you're cold.

I really really hate it

When you're forward and bold.


I hate you when you smirk at me,

I hate it when you stare;

I also hate your sarcasm,

And that attitude that says 'devil-may-care'.


I hate it when you support me,

Through my pain, my misery.

It makes it just that much more hard,

To hate you for eternity.


I hate it when you're nice;

I hate everything about you.

But most of all I hate myself,

When I forget my hate around you...


I hate feeling at home in your arms,

I hate losing myself in your eyes.

And I hate it when the thought comes to me,

that you may not feel likewise.


I always thought I was independent and strong.

That was my conceit;   

Then you came by and I realised,

What it is to feel complete.

 
There's a thin line between love and hate,

That's what I've heard people say,

I have the feeling that I've crossed the line,

that it is love that I think is hate...

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Edited by Erutan99 - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago
 **Writing by diya86**
 
 
 
FICTION 4
(Prithvi's Point of View)

Things I hate about you

There're so many things I hate about you

I can't possibly list them all.

You're fiery and impulsive, and

you just drive me up the wall.

 

I hate it when you get perverse,

When you yell till your throat is sore.

I hate your insulting tone, it's true,

But I hate your tears more.

 
I hate it when you say you need no help

I hate that you're so headstrong

I hate when you don't act like a girl

I hate it when you prove me wrong.


I like nothing about you

You aren't sweet or shy or kind

You're not the girl I wanted

Yet I can't get you out of my mind

 

I hate your eyes, your smile

Hate your pretty hair

I hate that look on your face

that says you really care

 

I hate that there are boundaries,

That we are not to cross.

I hate that you've become

my anchor in this chaos.

 

I've seen how much it affects you

when I suddenly pull away.

I hate myself for hurting you

But it's just better this way... 

 

I can't afford to fall for you

But I have, and that's my curse

Now I have to get away

Before things get any worse.

 

There will come a time, very soon,

When you'll know I've been untrue. 

But when you mourn your broken heart,

know that mine's broken too...

********


Posted: 14 years ago
This is totally awesome!  We soo needed one place to post all this good stuff!  Is this a sticky??  I hope it is!

Thanks!!
Posted: 14 years ago
hi Nisha.....u r dere in Indya forum too..ryt? Actually sometimes I find ur posts there too..
Neway welcum to this forum...Njoy a lotttEdited by paaal - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago
totally wonderful thread..... gr8 idea...πŸ‘


@sistu n diya86

Gosh ...u bth were awsm !!!!!!!!! loved ur poems... jus tooo gud !!!!! keep it up !!πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘

-luv niki
Posted: 14 years ago
 **Writing by Who-I-Used-2-Be**
 
 
 
FICTION 1
(Diaries of the 'hot' undercover spy...)

There will be a moment


There will be a moment when I don't have to fake a smile, change the subject, or laugh a false laugh, when I'm with her,

A moment when we can share every fear, dream every dream, celebrate every joy together,

A moment when we can sing the love song, freely and blissfully,

A moment when we can let our spirits soar, our souls rejoice, with each other,

A moment when I can stare at her, for as long as I want to, without any inhibitions,

A moment when I can touch her hair, hold her hands, without bothering about letting go,

A moment when I can make her feel shy, and bothered,

A moment when what is mine is hers, and vice versa,

A moment when we are equals, spiritually, emotionally, and in every other sense of the word,

A moment when we can feel what the other one feels, think what the other thinks without the slightest hint,

A moment when our silence speaks for itself, and the sounds of silence overcome everything else,

A moment when I can trust her, as much as she trusts me,

A moment when I can share my problems with her, just like she does,

A moment when I can be myself, the real me, in her company,

A moment when we can enjoy a dance truly, and cherish the feeling of getting lost,

A moment when our tempers don't spoil a beautiful evening,

A moment when we act as a soothing coolant to each other's mad rages,

A moment where there's no me, and no her, just us,

A moment when we truly live, and cherish the journey together,

A moment when love is totally a friend, a mate of ours,

A moment when we are one,

A moment when she's mine, and I'm hers, completely,

A moment when it's real, me and her, her and me, it's real..


There'll be a moment like this, when there is time...


-Prithvi 'hot undercover spy' Saxena..

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Posted: 14 years ago
 **Writing by Who-I-Used-2-Be**
 
 
 
FICTION 2
(Diaries of the 'firecracker'...)

There will be a moment


There will be a moment when he doesn't hide things from me,
A moment when he answers every question of mine,
A moment when he doesn't avoid meeting my eye,
A moment when he is the one to wish to initiate a dance badly, without me even hinting at that,
A moment when he wants our dance to go on forever,
A moment when he doesn't leave me abruptly,   
A moment where he accepts that we are equals,
A moment where he appreciates that very fact, cherishes it,
A moment when he doesn't get restless in my company,
A moment when he doesn't cover his jealousy with lame excuses,
A moment when he doesn't destroy a beautiful evening, 
A moment when I can tell him he looks mad hot when he's angry,
A moment when he doesn't behave like an idiot when he is with me,
A moment when he enjoys my company as much as I do his,

A moment when he tells me every story that he has lived, every smile that he has smiled, and everything that he has witnessed,

A moment when I completely own his soul, his heart, and his mind..

There will be a moment like this, someday, some place.

A moment...that moment..



-Damini 'firecracker' Gujral~

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