**Writing By Kheerni (Nisha)**
FICTION 2
My thoughts:
Here is a marriage where each is unsure about what and how much the other feels. They are married - husband and wife. So accessible to one another, yet not. They have the right to reach out and touch and taste, but don't. It is so hard. Like a thristy person standing near an oasis, knowing its a mirage. Afraid to touch, and take, afraid of being hurt when its not really there. So that's the difference between them and Savni. Savni marriage is a secret, no one knows, and yet Sam did everything to get her in bed.
Prida marriage everyone will know and celebrate their union, except the two of them. And Prithvi will be trying his best NOT to bed her! Add do that the constant battle of wits, which will really be an expression of their unspent desire.
She's his!!! But he can't have her!!! He's her's to have, to hold, to touch, to taste!!! But godddddd!!! She can't let herself!
Jahan mein, jahan tu,
Aur jahan, bass tere mere jazbaat hai,
Hogi jahan subah teri,
Palko ki, kirano mein,
Lori jahan chand ki,
Sune teri baahoin mein..
song
stops.. the truth out scene plays, song starts again... during the last
two lines camera zooms back on prithvi.. regret on his face..., he
wants to go back in there, he looks at damini - damini unable to bear
it any longer, turns towards the other side - she is no longer seen by
prithvi. prithvi shakes his head sadly and leaves...
(Jaane naa kahan wo duniya hai,
Jaane naa wo hai bhi ya nahi,
Jahan meri zindagi mujhse,
Itni khafa nahi..) - 2
damini
peeks out of her window again to see the man she loves going away from
her life - she gulps, she wants to call him back, wants to go go
running to him, wants him to turn around just once,
Saasein kho gayi hai kiski aahon mein,
Mein kho gayi hu jaane kiski baahon mein,
Manzilon se raahein doodhti chali,
Kho gayi hai manzil kahin rahon mein..
She hopes things were different between them - wishes they could go back to being the happy couple that they were... that they used to be... a few happy scenes playing now...
Kahin to, kahin to,
Hai nasha..
Teri meri har mulaqaat mein,
Hoton se, hoton ko,
Chumti, o rehte hai hum har baat pe,
Kehti hai fiza jahan,
Teri zamin aasmaan..
Camera
again goes back to Prithvi, and a small flashback oh happier times -
just one scene, probably when they both were lauhging over somethign
silly... and then again it shifts back to damini
Jahan hai tu, meri hassi,
Meri khushi, meri jaan…
Frame
is now divided into two - with both Prithvi and Damini - each thinking
about one another - each of them hoping things could be different -
each of knowing wat happened was all wrong.. yet their love felt all
right!!