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Jaane pehchaane se do ajnabee-PART 1-PAGE 4-3/3/10

dmg_fanatic IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 October 2009 at 4:13am | IP Logged
Heyy guys.......
this is the fic related to my shop of requests......u  dont know about it then chek dis link
THE MAIN CONCEPT OF THIS FIC IS BY SONALI DI  (sonalihutifan) so most credit goes to her........
it is a mini fic of about 5 parts

Kehte hain ki jab rishton par mausam ka rang chadhta hai to rishtey aur bhi mazbut ho jaate hain magar kuch rishte dabe paon aakar mausam par bhi apna ranga chod jaate hain,, rishte aur raaste to ek hi sikke ke do pehlu hain, kabhi raaste pe chalte chalte rishte ban jaate hain aur kabhi rishte nibhaate nibhaate raaste mil jaate hain par fark sirf itna hai ki koi rishton mein gum hoke raate bhul jaata hai aur koi raate milte hi rishton ko bhul jaata hai. Apno par bharosa na karke shaayad unpe bharosa karte hain jo apne pe hi bharosa na kar paayein. Kitni ajeeb baat hai ki kabhi kabhi vo log jinhe hum sabse jyaada pyaar karte hain, jinhe hum pehchaante hain vo anjaane ban jaate hain aur kuch anjaan log jaane pehchaane lagne lagte hain. Shaayad yahi zindagi ki sachai hai ki jo kabhi anjaan hokar bhi ek dusre ko pehchaante the vo ban jaate hain jaane pehchaane se do ajnabee


Kabhi yuhi mil jaate hain jeevan ke raastey

Saamne hoti hai manzil dil ki

Lekin do chaar kadam ka chota sa faasla

Ban jaata hai doorie meelon ke

Phir ek baar humein raah na milti

Reh jaati saari khushiyan adhuri

Aisa bhi hota hai pyaar mein kabhi kabhi

Ban jaate hain hum



Sometimes our approach to life meets

In front of us stands our destiny

But the distance of a few short steps

Might change suddenly to miles many

Again it happens, we don't find our way

Again in life we cannot have our say

Love becomes enclosed in risks and dangers

And together we become






" basket you sure ?" he questioned as he stroked her hair and kissed her forehead.


She looked up at him and widening her lips into a smile she replied " yes armaan I am perfectly alright"


" yes armaan I am perfectly alright "he said mimicking her as he continued "it was me who was not so well this morning and had to take an early leave from duty"


She smiled at his concern and said " armaan mera itna khayal mat rakho, kahin mujhe khud ki hi nazar na lag jaaye"


" ridhima tumhaari khushiyon ko kabhi nazar nahi lagegi, main hun na tumhaare saath" he replied as he caressed her cheek


" armaan tum kabhi mujhe akela to nahi chodoge na"she asked with tears welling up her eyes just at the mention of having to be without him


He looked straight into her eyes and said " ridhima kabhi nahi, bharosa hai mujhpar"


She looked at him and said " khud se zyaada"


" bas now go to sleep '. Good night kal savere hospital bhi jaldi jaana hai"  he replied as he softly caressed her back and pulling the comforter up slept hugging her.




As she felt the rays of the sun reach her eyes she slowly shifted in her sleep and hugging him tight she kissed his bare chest as she spoke sleepily " armaan utho'.subah ho gayi"


He smiled as he felt her lips on his chest and after kissing her forehead he got up and buttoning his shirt went to get freshened up and coming back he went to the kitchen to make a cup of coffee for them. He moved back with coffee to his room and settling himself beside ridhima he kissed her gently as she woke up and settled herself on his lap and picked up the coffee mug and alternately both started sucking sips of coffee from it. This was like their normal routine now. They woke up early and then lazied around for a while before actually getting ready.



to be continued..................

Edited by dmg_fanatic - 03 March 2010 at 7:17am

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k_anjali12 IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 9740

Posted: 16 October 2009 at 4:16am | IP Logged
Haiiiiiiiiiiiiii KavyaHeart how r u Heart

                                     Congrats For The New FF Heart


                             Awesome start SweetheartHeartThe starting lines of the story r really THE TRUE n PERFECT onesHeart I too agree with it , some people became our life even we don't have them from the start of our life Heart

                            I really LoVe to read the next coming story of this FFHeartWill be waiting for ur next updatesHeart

                                                              Takecare . . .  LoVe UHeart




Edited by k_anjali12 - 25 November 2009 at 9:03am

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leftIF4eva Senior Member

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Posted: 16 October 2009 at 4:57am | IP Logged
Mrs.Hulk IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 16 October 2009 at 5:40am | IP Logged
good one
Riddss IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 October 2009 at 6:19am | IP Logged
heyyy dear,
nice part
thanks for PM

frnd.of.frndz Goldie

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Posts: 1578

Posted: 16 October 2009 at 9:14am | IP Logged
Kayva..  Sweetu..
yeh kaise likha tumne..?
Pata hai intro ka jo First Para thha na.. I read it like 6-7 times..
It was PERFECTLY written yar..
Mujhe ab bas jaldi se yeh padhni hai..
Sonali Seems like an interesting start for ur idea..
You've chosen right person to give words to ur thoughts..
Thanx for the PM sweetu..
Wish you nd ur family a Very happy nd Safe Diwali..
dmg_fanatic IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 October 2009 at 10:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by k_anjali12

still waiting hima di
Lovely_Diva Groupbie

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Posts: 165

Posted: 16 October 2009 at 6:11pm | IP Logged
hey kavya, nice one... really liked the intro..looking forward to reading this one too :)
thanx for the pm

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