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MAYUR FF : BEST FRIENDS UPDT AT PG NO 22 (Page 6)

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Part- 4

(mayank aur nupur jaise hi rasm me pahuchte hai nupur ki bui ussi whqt ghar me enter karti hai aur wo mayank aur nupur ko ek sath dekh kar kuch aur hi soch leti hai. Waise nupur bui k bahut closed hai to nupur bui ko dekh kar bahut khus hoti hai aur unke gale lag jati hai)

N : kya bui kitni derr laga di aane me. Main to kab se aapka intzaar kar rhi thi. Apne ghar ki shadi me koi itni late aata hai kya. Btao 2 din baad shadi hai aur aap aaj aa rhe ho. Aisa thode hi hota hai''.(interrupted by bui)

B : bas ladki bas saans to le le. Aur mujhe bhi lene de. Aur sab kuch bhul gyi. Mere pair to chu.

N : oh haan bui. Aapko dekh kar itni khus hu k bhul hi gyi thi (Nupur bui k pair chuti hai.)

B to M : tu wahaan khada kya kar rha hai. Main nupur ki bui hu to teri bhi bui huyi na. Chal aa kar pair chu mere.

(mayank ka expression hota hai kya aap mujh se bol rhi hai)

B to M : haan tujhe hi bol rhi hu.

(mayank jaakar bui k pair chuta hai then bui dono ko ashirwad deti hai)

B to M,N : sada khus raho. Haste khelte raho aur tumhari jodi hamesha bani rahe.

M,N (shocked) : jodi????????

N to herself : oh shit. Bui  ko to mayank k bare me pta hi nhi hai. Wo pta nhi kya kya soch rhi hai.

N to B : Bui meri baat suno. Aisa kuch'' (interrupted by Bui)

B to N : bas kar ladki. Waise to main yeh sochti thi tere liye ladka main dekhungi. Pr teri khusi sabse pehle hai. Aur waise bhi yeh ladka kitna achcha hai bilkul tere layak hai'(interrupted by nupur)

N : bui meri baat to suno aap.

B : mujhe kuch nhi sun na hai. Mujhe pehle ander to aane de.

M to B : aaiye bui. Main aapka samaan guest room me rakhwa deta hu. Aap fresh ho jaiye. 

N to B : pr bui meri baat to suno'.. (interrupted by mayank)

M to N : abhi bui pehle aaram karengi tabhi tumhari baat sunegi. Abhi wo mere sath jaa rhi hai.

B to N : dekha usse kitna khayal hai mera. Bui main teri hu aur khayal isse hai mera.

(bui to dono ko shagun k taur pr 101 rs deti hai)

N (shocked) : ab yeh kya hai

B : yeh mera ashirwad samjh k rakh le.

N to M : tum bui ko kuch kyun nhi bolte

B to N : yeh kya bolega. Main hi bolungi jo bolna hai. Pr abhi mujhe aaram karne de.

M to N : main bui ko guest house me le jaa rha hu. Tum bui k liye nasta le kar aao.

(Mayank nupur ko ishare me samjhata hai k wo sab handle kar lega)

Guest house me

M : bui mujhe aapko kuch kehna hai

B : haan beta bolo.

M : bui jaisa aap soch rhe ho aisa kuch bhi nhi hai. Nupur aur main sirf achche dost hai. Syad aapne pehle kabhi hum dono ko sath me nhi dekha isliye aapko lga. Ya fir yeh keh sakte hai k aapke zamane me ek ladka aur ek ladki dost nhi hote the. Isliye aisa laga aapko. Aur aapne nupur ko bolne bhi nhi dia to wo preshan ho rhi hai. Aur main uska best friend hu to yeh mujhe achcha nhi lagega k wo pareshan rhe aur mujhe pta hai k aapko bhi achcha nhi lagega

B : achcha to sari yeh baat hai. Mujhe lga meri nupur sudhar gyi hogi. Pr wo waisi ki waisi hai.

M : Bui, jo badal jaaye wo mausam hai nupur nhi

B : haan. Yeh to hai. Iska matlab yeh hua tum dono rajkapoor aur nargis ki jodi nhi ho.

(itne me nupur naste k sath guest room me enter karti hai)

N : Rajkapoor aur nargis ???????

B : haan hamare zamane me inki jodi perfect maani jaati thi.

M : nhi bui. Hum sholey k jai aur veeru hai. Bas fark itna hai k jai female ho gya hai.

N : oh hello. Mujhe end me nhi marna hai to jai tum banoge.

M : Pr sholey me veeru k sath basanti thi. Aur jai k sath koi nhi. To main to veeru hi banunga.

N : aisa koi zaruri nhi hai

M : bilkul zaruri hai. Aur waise bhi tera character jai se zyada milta hai.

N : dekho mayank mujhe mat btao mera character kis se zyada milta hai''..(interrupted by bui)

B : yeh kya ho rha hai. Kuch to mera lihaj karo

M, N : sorry bui.

B : haan thik hai. Chalo ab main jaati hu sabse mil bhi lu.

N : bui main bhi aa rhi hu.

B : aa ja. Waise bhi agar yeh tera friend hai to isne mere armano pr paani fer dia hai.

(Nupur Bui ko sabse milwane le jaati hai aur mayank bhi kuch kaam naa dekh kar unke piche piche chal deta hai. Tabhi nupur kisi ko dekhti hai aur uska hasta khelta chehra utar jaata hai. Ye mayank dekh leta hai)

M : kya hua

N : yeh log yahaan kya kar rhe hai

M : maine bulaya hai.

N : pr kyun??? Tumhe pta hai naa main inhe apne aas pass bhi nhi dekhna chahti

M : pr aunty to chahti hai naa. Aur uncle bhi. Kya teri khushi inn sab se badh kar hai kya. Tu inn sab pr dhayan mat de na.

N : Aise kaise naa du. Yaad hai naa in logo ne hamare liye kitni problem create ki thi

M : cool down. Pr aunty uncle ko to nhi pta naa. Aur tum hi chahti thi k unhe pta naa chale. Isliye cool down. Aur haan unhe kyun dikhana k unke hone yaa naa hone se tumhe ya mujhe koi fark padta hai.Ab shant ho jaa devi

N : hmm

 

To be continued'''''''

PART 5 - PG 8

 

 



Edited by Annudsweetgirl - 07 December 2009 at 11:31am

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Posted: 28 October 2009 at 1:19pm | IP Logged
on parts 3 & 4:
very nicely updated dear....dis is a complete fresh n vibrant ff..coz it deals only wid frndship!!! m loving it... Heart Hug
waitin 4 d next one...tk cr... Star
luv mayur always!!! luv mjht... Hug

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Posted: 28 October 2009 at 2:03pm | IP Logged
really nice part :)

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lol bui!
loved the part
continue soon

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Posted: 28 October 2009 at 7:15pm | IP Logged
 continue soon
 fr3esh fresh ff
lovely

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amazing ff...........keep it up anu

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