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SwatiBeanyBrown

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a very sweet ff huny!! well kuch naya bhi to try karna chahiye..n u hav done dat annu!!! well done dear!!! Clap do continue soon.... Star
luv mayur always!!! luv mjht... Hug

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PART - 2


(mayank nupur ko dhudhta hai then wo usse kitchen me mil hi jati hai )

M : Hey bhagwan aaj to maine duniya ka akhiri ajooba dekh lia. Nupur aur kitchen me

(Nupur k hath me knife hai. Ussi Knife ko ghumate huye)

N : tum??? Kitchen me kya kar rhe ho.? Yahaan tumhara koi kaam nhi hai

M (Pointed to the knife) : Kyun iss bechare ki jaan k piche padi ho chalo yahaan se

N (again knife ko ghumate huye) : Dekho tum mujhe aur gussa mat dilao. Tum jaa rhe ho ya fir (knife dikhate huye)

M : Ok ok meri maa jaa rha hu. Pr dekh lunga

N : anytime. Ab jao yahaan se

(mayank chala jaata hai )

N to herself : Isko too main dekh lungi

NM : abhi wo tujhe dekhne ki baat kar rha tha aur ab tu usse. Bas ek dusre ko hi dekhte rehna. Iske siva tum dono karte bhi kya ho

N : Maa. Pls. tum hamesha uski taraf se kyun bolti ho.

NM : Beta tum dono ek hi taraf ho. Per tum itna jhagda kyun karte ho. Wo itni dur se aaya hai'.(interrupted by nupur)

N : kitne time baad aaya hai aur sirf tumhare kehne per aaya hai''. Yahi bolna chahti ho na maa. To kya karu aaya hai koi ehsan nhi kiya hai usne.

NM : Beta. Aisa nhi bolte.

N : maa pls mujhe mat btao uss se kaise bolna hai usse to main dekh lungi

(Mayank dobra wapas aa kar nupur aur uski maa ki sari baate sun leta hai )

M : anytime. Kaho to yahi khada ho jaata hu. Fir pure 2 saal ki kasar nikal lena. K 2 saal se chehra nhi dekha. And all that

N : jab 2 saal se shakal nhi dikhai to ab bhi kya zarurat thi. Mat aate. Tumhare bina bhi shadi ho jaati

M : haan wo to hai. Per kya karu koi meri baat sun ne ko taiyar hi nhi hai to main kya karu

NM to N : beta uski baat to sun le

N to NM : Maa mujhe kisi ki baat nhi sun ni. Aapki bhi nhi

M to NM : aunty aap jaiye. Main hu na isse handle karne k liye

N to M : Kyun main koi machine hu jo tum mujhe handle karoge.

NM to M : dekha iss ladki ki zubaan kitni chalti hai.

M to NM : aunty aap jao main dekh lunga isse

NM to M : beta yahaan kitchen me kaam kaun karega

M to NM : aunty main hu naa. Aap jao. Itna to believe karo mujh per

(nupur ki maa kitchen se chali jaati hai_

N to herself : main hu naa. Yahi to hai srk.

N to M : kitchen me aaj se pehle kabhi kadam bhi rakha hai kya

M : kyun tumhe kya lagta hai

N : lagna kya hai. Tumhe gas jalane to aati nhi hai

M : Itni badi galatfehmi Oh hello. 2 saal ghar se dur tha. to sab aata hai banana

N : haan aur logo ko banana bhi aata hai

M : matlab

N : kuch nhi.

M : abhi tak naraz ho mujh se

N : dekho mayank. Mujhe kuch sun na hi nhi hai. Tumne promise kiya tha k tum sara kaam karwaoge. Maine nhi kahaan tha. aur fir chief guest ki tarah 3 din pehle aa rhe ho.

M : nupur meri baat to suno

N : mayank agar tumhari baat sun ni hoti. To kab ki sun li hoti. Mujhe koi behana nahi sun na

M : to meri maa kya karu k tera gussa shant ho jaye

N : sach me chahte ho k main gussa na karu. To mujh se baat mar karo

M : thik hai tum gussa karo. Main to tujh se baat karne ki wala hu. Ab chahe tujhe psnd ho ya na psnd hai

N : let's see.

M : any time

N : to thik hai tumne kaha hai na maa ko kitchen me meri help karwaoge. Aur khade ho kar gappe marr rhe ho.

M : haan thik hai batao kya karna hai.

N : yeh knife chodo mera sar kalam karna hai kya

M : irada to kuch aisa hi hai

N : Itni jaldi nhi marne wali. Agar marr gyi to tujhe bhoot banke daraungi

M : Main to tujh se waise hi darta hu. Tujhe bhut ban ne ki koi zarurat nhi hai. Aur waise bhi to bhut nhi bhutni banegi.

N (with anger) : mayank????? Kaam karwao

M : jo agya devi ji

(tabhi nupur ki masi kitchen me enter karti hai. Wo mayank ko kitchen me dekhti hai )

Masi to M : beta tum yahaan kya kar rhe ho.

N to Masi: yeh kitchen me kaam karwane aaya hai. Chalo masi jaldi jaldi batao isse kya kaam karna hai

Masi to N : per yeh to mehmaan hai aur aaj hi aaye hai inse kaam karwayegi tu

N to Masi : Yeh aur mehmaan???? Masi aapko galatfehmi hai wo bhi badi wali. Yeh to yahi rehta tha pehle. Ab 2 saal baad aaya hai to mehmaan nhi ho jayega.

M to Masi : haan masi ji. Aur nupur ne keh dia to keh dia. Ab to mujhe naukaro ki tarah bas kaam karne ko bolti jaaye

Masi to M : beta perrrrrrrrr

M to Masi : per war kuch nhi. Aap jaiye. Main hu na

(Nupur ki masi chali jaati hai)

N to Herself : fir se srk ban ne ki try. Per yeh ban nhi sakta. Kuch bhi kar le

M to N : Agar tere gusse ko jhelne k liye main kitchen me kaam kar sakta hu to tere liye kuch bhi ban sakta hu

N : gud dekhte hai kitchen ka kitna kaam karwate ho.

(nupur aur mayank mil kar kitchen sambhal lete hai. Even sab surprise hai k nupur kitchen se nikal nhi rhi hai wo nupur jo kitchen me badi muskil se jaati hai. Kitchen k kaam k baad)

N to M : mayank tum sham ko rasm k liye kaun si dress pehan rhe ho

M : kaun si rasm

N (with anger) : tum yahaan kis khushi me aaye ho. Di ki shadi hai to rasme to hongi hi na

M : arre main to tujh se milne k liye aaya hu. Tera wahi purana record sun sun k bore ho gya tha k 2 saal se shakal tak nhi dhikai 'in all that. Isliye aaya. Tujhe to pta hai mujhe in rasmo me koi interest nhi hai

N : mujhe kaun sa interest hai. Per ghar me shadi hai to hum logo ka hona bhi zaruri hai na

M : haan yeh to hai. Per maine dress decide nhi ki hai

N : pta tha mujhe. Teri rag rag se wakif hu. Per maine tere liye already select kar rakhi hai dress. Uday bhaiya k pass hai

M : tu hai to mujhe tension lene ki kya zarurat hai. Aur tere liye main dress laya hu wo di ko de di hai maine

N : di ko kyun di. Mere liye laaye the

M : wo kya hai k tu bahut gusse me thi mujhe laga agar tune fek di to mera to dil hi tut jaata na

N : dil tut jaata??????

M : aur kya itne mann se tere liye dress laya hu

N : haan thik hai sham ko rasm me wahi dalungi

M : nhi. Wo tum shadi wale din dalna. Tum per bahut achchi lagegi. Aur rasm me to humne rukna nahi hai

N : rukna nhi hai ka kya matlab hai

M : arre dekh jaise hi rasm chalu hogi to sab bade log busy ho jayenge. To main mauka dekh kar chat per aa jaunga. Mujhe to koi rokne wala bhi nhi hoga. Bas tu dekh le kaise aayegi

N : mujhe rokhne k liye puri fauz hai yahaan kaise aaungi.

M : ek kaam kar na. tu kisi ko kuch mat kehna rasm start hote hi kisi tarah bas mere pass aa jaana. Kisi ko kuch pta nhi chalega. Waise bhi tujh se bahut sari baatein karni hai mujhe. Pta hai tujhe kitna miss karta tha wahaan main. Ek ek din badi muskil se nikala

N : maine bhi. Chal thik hai. Waise bhi rasm me meri kya zarurat. Aur main kisi na kisi ko laga dungi kaam me apni jagah

M : tu ek kaam kar na. Tamanna ko laga dena. Wo sab sambhal legi

N : yeh idea to achcha hai. Per wo kyun karegi

M : wo tu mujh per chod de wo zarur karegi

N : ok done sham ko milte hai rasm k time per''

M : haan thik hai. Warna yahaan sab mujhe halwai samjh lenge.

N : haan haan thik hai. Tu jaa yahaan se

 

TO BE CONT''.


PART 3 - PG 4

 

 

 



Edited by Annudsweetgirl - 07 December 2009 at 11:27am

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ha ha...d conversation btwn dem is realy funny!!! vry sweet...lets c wat u do wid dem next..coz as u said it's a frndship ff,so m gonna keep a watch on it!!!! Smile
tk cr...god bless!!!
luv mayur always!!! luv mjht... Hug

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Great part!!!
Thanks for the PM..
Continue soon!!

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love the convo b/w them!
very sweet part
continue soon

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great job............ it was gud............ thanx for the pm.......

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hey nice update n long one too thanks for pm plz update soon

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