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Posted: 10 October 2009 at 2:35pm | IP Logged
 
Hey guys i am back with another one shot recommened by someone Smile
Hope you enjoyEmbarrassed
Do comment and tell me what you thinkEmbarrassed


Here it is ...


Premeer OneShot

 

   Prem extended his hand towards Heer forehead to fill her mang. Both of them smiling at eachother.

But suddenly his hand stopped, and his smile truned into fear. Everyone looked towards the room and saw a girl standing their, wearing a black sari. Heer turned around to see where everyone was looking. She froze their when she saw Ash.

Prem looked at Heer and totally broke when he saw tears rolling down her cheek.

All the juneja's shocked as hell. She walked in and stood in front of the mandap.

Lalit "Tu yahaan kya kar rahi hai."

Ash "Apni Heer di ki shaadi deknay ayi hoon or kya."

Preet "Tumhein kisi ney invite kiya?"

Ash "Yeh meri family bi hai." She said giving Prem a smile. He looked at her in digust.

Ash "Come on Prem Heer ki maang mein sindoor dalo." Heer looked at her with tears rolling down her cheek.

Prem truned Heer around to face him.  She didn't look at him and just looked down. Prem looked at her with a broken heart. He was about to put the sindoor back into the little box when Heer caught his hand. Prem looked at Heer and she nodded. He smiled and filed her mang. Heer closed her eyes as Prem kissed her forehead.

Both of them looked at each other and Heer finally broke and hugged him *Like she did in their last marriage*.

Everyone clapped and Prem smiled. Ash acted happy and clapped.

Heer and Prem broke apart.

Ash "Congrats." She said handing Heer a boquet.

Ash smiled and left giving Prem a weird look. The whole family walked upto them. Premeer took everyone's blessing.

 
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Heer hugged the whole family followed by Prem hugging everyone.

Preet "Babhi mubarak ho." He said putting his arm around Prem.

Preet "Babhi wasay bhai ko miss tu bohat kiya hoga apney."

Heer looked down blushing as Prem smiled at her.

Preet "Bahi deko kasay sharma rahi hain aj raat " before he could say anything Prem covered his mouth.

Prem "Chota sa bacha hain a koi baath ka nahi pata.. meray saath chal." Heer smiled and went to the side to get a drink when she saw Ash standing in the door looking at the family smiling a evil smile. Heer put down the drink and walked to her.

Heer "Wapis kyun ayi ho?"

Ash "Meri marzi." She said looking at Heer with a raised eyebrow.

Heer "Tum iss ghar mein nahi aa sakti."

Ash "Ana bi kon chata hai."

Heer "Tu yahan kya kar rahi ho,"

Ash "Tumhein iss sey matalb."

Prem "Matlab hai yeh ghar iska ahi or yahan wohi ayay ghaa jissey Heer cahaay." He said placing a hand on her shoulder. Heer smiled. Ash just rolled her eyes.

Ash "What happened 6"

Prem "Woh bohat purnai kahni hai tum yahaan sey chali jayo."

Ash "Koi shoq bi nahi hai yahaan rahnay kaa." She said in a boring voice and walked away.

Prem turned towards Heer.

Prem "Heer "

Heer "Prem mein nahi chati kay hum Ash kay baray mein baath Karin aj haari shaadi hai or mein nahi chati kay koi hamray beech mein pher sey ayay." Prem smiled and was about to pull her into a hug, when Preet coughed.

Preet "Wah wah Romace or woh bi akelay akelay."

Prem "Or romance kasay hota hai 2 logon kay beech mein hi hota hai."

Preet "Bahabi or devar kay beech mein bi hota hai .... I mean agar uska pati usko todi deaar chor dhay"

Heer looked down blushing.

Prem "Preet mein Heer kay saath rahata hoon tu woh deaak  tujhe Meher bula rahi hai."

Preet "PB hum ap dono ki taran chupkay chupkay romance nahi kartay."

Prem "Tu public mein hi shure ho jatay ho."

Heer "Prem kya bol rahay ho."

Preet "Or nahi tu kya PB ab ape k baap ban cgukay hai todi tu sharam Karin kuch b bool detay hain."

Prem "Oh hello tu bi baap ban gaya hai or aj meri shaadi hai meri ek baath maan hamin todi deaar kay liye aklea chor dhaay."

Preet "Ap ko jo karna hai karon mein kya bol raha hoon." Prem pulled him by his arm and took him to Meher.

Prem "Meher apnay pati ko sambalao."

Preet "PB mujhe bhabi bula rahi hai." He said going to Heer.

Prem swore under his breath.

 
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Preet "Bahbi wasay PB kitnay kush lag rahay hain."

Heer "Hmmm" Both of them talking while watching Prem play with Chahat.

Preet "Yeh sab ap ki wajah sey hua hai babhi." Heer patted his cheek.

Heer looked at Prem smiling and Chahat laughing and smiled.

She went to all the girls and talked.

All of them teasing Heer about her Suhaag raat.

Heer got so embarrsed, she left and went to the terrace.

Heer looked at the moon and smiled palying with her chuni.

Prem came from behind her watched her smiling.

Prem "Uhammm." He made a little making Heer realize that he was here.

Heer "Arrey Prem tum." He walked upto her.

Prem "Heer mujhe tumhein kuch dena hai."

Heer "Kya??" Prem went on his knee and took her feet out of her shoes.

Heer "Prem kya kar rahay." Prem took the payal out of her hand and placed it on around her ankle. He put her feet back into the shoe and got up.

Prem "Ab yeh kabhi nahi utray ghee."

Heer nodded. Prem smiled and kissed her forehead.

Prem "Wasay tumhein pata hain mein is duniya ka sab sey kushnaeeb dulha hoon." He said placing a hand on her waist.

Heer "Kyun?" she said in a confused tone.

Prem "Kyun kay meri dulhan iss duniya ki sab sey pyari dulhan hai." Heer smiled and looked at Prem.

Heer "Wasay pata hain mein is duniya ki sab sey kushnasseb dulhan hoon."

Prem "Kyun?" he said bringing her closer.

Heer "Kyun kay mera dulha duniya ka sab sey acha pati hai."

Prem "Acha"

Heer "Haan." Prem smiled as he was to kiss her.

Chahat "Papa mama kay meray sey bi baath karney do na." both of them let go of each other.

Heer "Haan chalo hum baath kartey hain." She said taking her hand out of Prems hand and walking away.

Prem smiled and looked at the moon.

Prem "Aj mera Parivaar pora ho gaya hai." He smiled and went down stairs.

While ASh was driving going home she had an accidednt and diedLOL.
(I am sure everyone is happy with that) 

That's it Guys Hope you liked Do comment and Press like Button

I will post the other oneshots people asked me to make soon

 

Thankyou for the comments on my other one shots :D

Love Ayysha


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Edited by Premeerxoxo - 10 October 2009 at 2:55pm

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niceeeee
i hatee this ASH
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Posted: 10 October 2009 at 2:51pm | IP Logged
Wow nice shot !! but what happened to Ash next ? Matlab did she repent or did she continue to break them up apart ?
otherwise well written, keep writting and thks for the PM :)

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Posted: 10 October 2009 at 2:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by tasnime

Wow nice shot !! but what happened to Ash next ? Matlab did she repent or did she continue to break them up apart ?
otherwise well written, keep writting and thks for the PM :)

Read it again i edited it :D

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Posted: 10 October 2009 at 3:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Premeerxoxo

Originally posted by tasnime

Wow nice shot !! but what happened to Ash next ? Matlab did she repent or did she continue to break them up apart ?
otherwise well written, keep writting and thks for the PM :)

Read it again i edited it :D


ROFL!! I like I like !! pheww no more Ash, atleast here !!



Edited by tasnime - 10 October 2009 at 3:02pm

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Posted: 10 October 2009 at 3:01pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by tasnime

Originally posted by Premeerxoxo

Originally posted by tasnime

Wow nice shot !! but what happened to Ash next ? Matlab did she repent or did she continue to break them up apart ?
otherwise well written, keep writting and thks for the PM :)

Read it again i edited it :D


ROFL!! I like I like !! pheww no more Ash, atleast here !!
!!
 
HEHELOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL 
Who wants her anyways i mean she can get eaten by dogs and no one would careROFLROFLROFLROFL

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Posted: 10 October 2009 at 3:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Premeerxoxo

Originally posted by tasnime

Originally posted by Premeerxoxo

Originally posted by tasnime

Wow nice shot !! but what happened to Ash next ? Matlab did she repent or did she continue to break them up apart ?
otherwise well written, keep writting and thks for the PM :)

Read it again i edited it :D


ROFL!! I like I like !! pheww no more Ash, atleast here !!
!!
 
HEHELOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL 
Who wants her anyways i mean she can get eaten by dogs and no one would careROFLROFLROFLROFL


U shd have tortured her a lil b4 killing her n our behalf .. she shdn't die that easily lollz ;-) ..
U shd have shown her face n the mirror without make up since she cares a lot abt it LOL

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