hi, all.......this is my first attempt at any sort of
writing...........so please feel free to criticise............but i cudnt
help writing, this idea struck me this morning...............so
here it goes...........you can think of it as continuation from
yesterday's epi
Nupur lay awake in her bed..............sleep was far far away
from her eyes.......she was confused, about Mayank and her
relationship. Her heart was asking her to forgive him, pulling
her towards him......after all he came all the way to Morena
for her.leaving his studies,and everything, but her mind
protested......telling her that Mayank has never trusted her,
be in project issue or this.........now he is guilty, but it will
back to square one once she forgives him....she tossed and
turned thinking all this, when she heard some noise outside.
She got up and went out to see Chinky getting
ready.......surprised she asked.......Chinky, itni subah kya kar
rahi hai?
Chinky - Wo didi, aaj Karvachauth hai na, to sargi khani hai.....
Nupur - Karvachauth?
Just then Bui enters calling Chinky.......and she Nupur.........
Bui - Are Nupur, acha hua tu uth gayi, main tujhe jagane hi
wali thi..........aaj karvachauth hai, aur tujhe bhi vrath karna hai,
bablu ke liye.......
Nupur was startlked hearing this........she wanted to fast, but
for her Mayank, and nobody else...........she replied - Bui,
maine abhi kuch decide nahi kiya hai, mujhe nahi krna
vrath.......
Bui - Nupur?
Nupur - Bui please, is baat ke liye mujhe force mat karo........
Bui - jaise teri marzi.........ab tu badi ho gayi hai.........
Nupur just leaves from there..seh comes back to her room,
and quickly got ready, and slyly went down........in the dining
room, Chinky was having her Sargi, and Bui was telling her
about Karvachauth and its importance...... the more she
listened, the more stronger her resolve got to keep fast for
Mayank..........
As soon as Bui and Chinky left, she quickly went there, and
picked up the plate............she ran to the terrace, and ate her
Sargi........after that she went to the temple, to pray for
Mayank and their relationship.
By the time she came back, everyone was up, and having
breakfast.......... her eyes went to Mayank.........
Mayank's eyes lit up the moment he saw Nupur..........he was
looking for her since the time he got up........she looked
beautiful.............she always did, but today was something
special about her, he decided.........Uncomfortable by his
intense gaze Nupur moved away from there...........
Suddenly Diya asked Chinky, why she isnt eating.......
Chinky - Diya di, aaj karvachauth hai na........
Uday - Karvachauth? ye kya hota hai?
Gunjan - Uday bhaiya, karvachauth pe girls apne life partner
ki long life ke liye fastkari hai.
Uday - Wow, iska matlab agar mein shadi kar loon, to main
amar ho jaunga.........
Diya - Shut up dodo..........btw, Nupur kahan hai?
Gunjan - Main dekh ke aati hun.....
Chinky - di, aap baitho, main bula ke lati hun......
Chinky calls Nupur, who comes there, avoiding Mayank's
gaze..........
Uday - Nupur, tumhe breakfast nahin karna............ye village
ki dishes are very tasty...
Nupur ( keeping her head down) - Nahin mera mann nahin
hai........
Diya ( smiling ) - mann nahi hai, ya phir tumne bhi
karvachauth ka vrath rakha hai, kisi ki long life ke
liye.....indication towards mayank......
Nupur immediately lloked up, tensed on being
caught.......and shouted....... " mujhe kisi ke liye bhi vrath
rakhne ki koi icha nahi hai...... samjhe tum log"..and runs
away from there.........
Mayank was very hurt, and angry at himself..........he gets up,
takes his plate and move towards Nupur's room.........
Here, she was still recovering from her outburst......she is
torn between her heart and mind..........and irritated with
everything around.......when she sees Mayank entering her
room........
Nupur ( angrily) - tum yahan kyun aaye ho? muje koi baat
nahin sunni........
Mayank ( with regret in his voice) -Nupur please mera gussa
khane par mat nikalo, ye lo khalo........
Nupur - Tumhe samjh nahin aati kya, mukje nahin
khana..........mera mann nahin hai............aur tumhari vajah se
to main kabhi khana nahin chodungi, samjhe Mayank
Sharma........... and with this she leaves the room, leaving
Mayank alone to feel her pain and anger.........
The day went by...........everyone was busy with their work,
and nobody noticed the two disturbed souls...........
Mayank was in his room...........he was angry at
himself............every bitter word he told Nupur kept playing
in his mind again and again, making him more and more
guilty..........he had always taken pride in being control of
himself, and hatedhimself for loosing control with the one
person he loved from the bottom of his heart...........he was
thinking, " What did i do? Maine apne saare promises tod
diye, phir main kaise expect karun ki Nupur mujhe maaf kar
degi?.........usne meri wajah se subah se kuch nahi
khaya..........lunch par bhi nahi aayi.........kya karun, kuch
samajh nahi aa raha hai? ", and suddenly an idea struck him,
he smiled and he quickly left the room.
On the other hand, Nupur was fuming in her room, she was
hungry, and besides she hasnt seen Mayank after their
argument in the morning, she started speaking to herself
" Kya zaroorat thi tujhe Nupur Bhushan, us monkey Mayank
ke liye vrath rakhne ki.........wo tujhe itna hurt karta hai aur
tu.......pagal hai tu, bilkul pagal......kal to pure din, sorry sorry
kar ke aage piche ghum raha tha, aur aaj subah se pata nahi
kahan chup ke baitha hai......main jaanti thi wo sadu hai hi
aisa..........ek din sorry aur doosre din phir wahi..........tujhe bhi
Nupur puri duniya main Mayank hi mila tha pyar karne ke
liye............"
Suddenly she hears gunjan's voice " Chinky, chaad nikal
gaya, jaldi aa"
She moves toward the terrace, where everyone was
watching Chinky breaking her fast.........her eyes searches for
Mayank, but he was nowhere......
Meanwhile chinky does the aarti of mmon, and Uday asks -
Chinky mujhe laga tune apne hone wale husband ke liye fast
rakha hai, par tu to moon ki puja kar rahi ho?
Bui - are mubai mein kuch nahi sikha kya? Chand ki puja kar
ke apne suhaag ki lambi umar ki prarthana kar rahi hai........
Uday- Suhag? acha Chinky ke pati ka naam Suhaag hai......
Bui (irritated) - Chup kar.....
Meanwhile Nupur is lost in her thoughts, she imagines
Mayank helping her break her fast.........suddenly she feels a
hand on her shoulder, she turns around to see Gunjan,
smiling ather with a aarti thali in her hand..........
She looks, ather questioningly............Gunajn smiles " Di,
tumhe kya lagta hai............agar tum mujhe nahi bataogi, to
mujhe pata nahi chalega ki tumne subah se kuch kyun nahi
khaya? "
Nupur looks down flustered....... Gunjan..........main........wo".
she stammers......
Gunajn - "Di, kuch bolne ki zaroorat nahi hai............ye lo,
maine tumhari pooja ki thali ready kar di hai..........tum pooja
kar ke niche aa jao........hum sab jaa rahein hain....."
She gives the thali to Nupur and turns to go, but turns back
and says......." aur haan Mayank ki photo bhi rakh di.........usko
dekh lena........" winking.........
Nupur blushes, and looks down..............
Gunjan comes down to see Mayank entering the house, and
ad idea strikes her......... "Mayank tum kahan the? Di, tumhe
dhundh rahi thi"
Mayank - " mujhe kuch kaam tha....Nupur kahan hai?"
Gunajn - " Di, terrace pe hai, jao"
Mayank rushes towards the terrace...........he enters to see
Nupur doing aarti of the moon.......he was confused, as to
what she is doing.........as he watches, she slowly raises the
sieve, and looks at moon through it.............and then lowers it
to see Mayank's photo in her hands..........
Realization dawns on Mayank, that she kept fast for
him.........he is happy, surprised, shocked all at the same
time.
Recovering himself he calls out to her " jab main tumhare
samne hun to photo dekhne ki kya zaroorat hai"
Nupur turns as she hears his voice........she is shockd to see
him there...........and upset at being caught............but
somewhere in her heart she was happy to see him......
He slowly moves towards her, and stands infront of
her......and smiling he says " vaise maine tumhare DDLJ,
mein dekha hai, ki ye fast tumhe mere hi haathon todna
padega........."
Nupur ( not ready to give in) - Maine tumhare liye fast nahin
rakha hai.....
Mayank ( holding out the photo in her hand) - Acha, par ye to
meri hi photo hai........
Nupur was al loss of words........Mayank made her look up at
him, and says........" Nupur, dekho please ab to khalo.....ye lo."
and holds out to her Super Sweets ki Jalebi......... :)
Nupur looks up at him, smiling softly, happy that he
remebered - ye?
Mayank - Tumhe pasand hai na.........to lo na.......and feeds
her with his hand, he then makes her drink water.......
After that he cups her face in his hand, and says " nupur,
main jaanta hun maine tumhe bahut hurt kiya hai....aur ek
nahi kai baar.........main hamesha promise karat hun ki
tumhari smile kahin jaane nahin dunga........tumhe hurt nain
karunga..........but i end up giving u only tears....i think main
tumhe deserve hi nahi karta.........."
Nupur looks up and says " nahin Mayank........."
Mayank interupts her........"Mujhe bolne do Nupur.........aisa
nahin hai ki main tumse pyaar nahin karta, ya phir mujhe
tumse sharam aati hai..........par haan apne pyar ko sab ke
samne lana mujhe uncomfortable kar deta hai"
Nupur looks as he turns his back towards her.and continues "
Nupur, tum jaanti ho na, main hamesha se hi akele raha
hun......except for maa, agar maine kisi se bhi apni life share
ki hai to wo tum ho, aur sirf yehi reason hai ki mujhe,
sabseapni zindagi ki itni khaas baat share nahin karna chahta
tha........."
" par mujhe tumhari baat bhi sunni chahiye thi..........i m really
sorry nupur, please mujhe maaf kar do"
Nupur feels bad hearing all that.........she comes infront of
him and holds his hand........and says " I m sorry Mayank,
kimaine hamesha tumhe force kiya sabko batane ke liye, par
main kya karti mujhe hamesha dar tha ki tum mujhe chodke
chale jaoge.......tum itne perfect jo ho........"
Mayank holds her hand, and smilingly says " aur tum mere
liye perfect ho........."
The both smile at each other, and Mayank pulls her in for a
hug..........they hug each other for a long time, when Mayank
remembers something, and pulls back......
he takes out that chain fro his pocket, and showas it to
Nupur " ye tumhare liye, maa ne di thi"
Nupur is shocked " Aunty ne? matlab tumne unhe sab bata
diya........."
Mayank smiles and says " haan , aur ye unka hi idea tha,
tumhe yahan aake manae ka....chalo ab pehen lo..."
Nupur looks at him annoyed and says "uuf-ho Mayank tum
bhi na............pehen lo matlab.........pehna do............" saying
this she turns, and he slowly makes her wear the chain.
He turns her towarsd himself, and slowly kisses her
forehead, and says " ab main tumhe kabhi bhi hurt nahin
karunga, aur ye promise main kabhi nahi todunga"
She smiles, but next moment in her full nautanki mode says
" aur toda na, to main tumhe tod dungi........."
They both laugh, and then she says " ab chalein, mujhe
bahut bhookh lagi hai"........Mayank just nods.........and they
move downstairs to have their dinner......
Later at night they both sit under the stars, with her head on
his shoulder, and his hands around her waist............and
talk......about their dreams,
aspirations.......childhood.........everything........their bond
getting stronger.......
Thats it guys................I know it has become too long, but
please do comment............positive or negative anything will
do..........thanx for reading.........
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