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Posted: 06 October 2009 at 11:37pm | IP Logged

hi, all.......this is my first attempt at any sort of

writing...........so please feel free to criticise............but i cudnt

help writing, this idea struck me this morning...............so

here it goes...........you can think of it as continuation from

yesterday's epi

Nupur lay awake in her bed..............sleep was far far away

from her eyes.......she was confused, about Mayank and her

relationship. Her heart was asking her to forgive him, pulling

her towards him......after all he came all the way to Morena

for her.leaving his studies,and everything, but her mind

protested......telling her that Mayank has never trusted her,

be in project issue or this.........now he is guilty, but it will

back to square one once she forgives him....she tossed and

turned thinking all this, when she heard some noise outside.

She got up and went out to see Chinky getting

ready.......surprised she asked.......Chinky, itni subah kya kar

rahi hai?

Chinky - Wo didi, aaj Karvachauth hai na, to sargi khani hai.....
Nupur - Karvachauth?

Just then Bui enters calling Chinky.......and she Nupur.........
Bui - Are Nupur, acha hua tu uth gayi, main tujhe jagane hi

wali thi..........aaj karvachauth hai, aur tujhe bhi vrath karna hai,

bablu ke liye.......

Nupur was startlked hearing this........she wanted to fast, but

for her Mayank, and nobody else...........she replied - Bui,

maine abhi kuch decide nahi kiya hai, mujhe nahi krna

vrath.......

Bui - Nupur?

Nupur - Bui please, is baat ke liye mujhe force mat karo........

Bui - jaise teri marzi.........ab tu badi ho gayi hai.........

Nupur just leaves from there..seh comes back to her room,

and quickly got ready, and slyly went down........in the dining

room, Chinky was having her Sargi, and Bui was telling her

about Karvachauth and its importance...... the more she

listened, the more stronger her resolve got to keep fast for

Mayank..........

As soon as Bui and Chinky left, she quickly went there, and

picked up the plate............she ran to the terrace, and ate her

Sargi........after that she went to the temple, to pray for

Mayank and their relationship.

By the time she came back, everyone was up, and having

breakfast.......... her eyes went to Mayank.........

Mayank's eyes lit up the moment he saw Nupur..........he was

looking for her since the time he got up........she looked

beautiful.............she always did, but today was something

special about her, he decided.........Uncomfortable by his

intense gaze Nupur moved away from there...........

Suddenly Diya asked Chinky, why she isnt eating.......

Chinky - Diya di, aaj karvachauth hai na........

Uday - Karvachauth? ye kya hota hai?

Gunjan - Uday bhaiya, karvachauth pe girls apne life partner

ki long life ke liye fastkari hai.

Uday - Wow, iska matlab agar mein shadi kar loon, to main

amar ho jaunga.........

Diya - Shut up dodo..........btw, Nupur kahan hai?

Gunjan - Main dekh ke aati hun.....

Chinky - di, aap baitho, main bula ke lati hun......

Chinky calls Nupur, who comes there, avoiding Mayank's

gaze..........

Uday - Nupur, tumhe breakfast nahin karna............ye village

ki dishes are very tasty...

Nupur ( keeping her head down) - Nahin mera mann nahin

hai........

Diya ( smiling ) - mann nahi hai, ya phir tumne bhi

karvachauth ka vrath rakha hai, kisi ki long life ke

liye.....indication towards mayank......

Nupur immediately lloked up, tensed on being

caught.......and shouted....... " mujhe kisi ke liye bhi vrath

rakhne ki koi icha nahi hai...... samjhe tum log"..and runs

away from there.........

Mayank was very hurt, and angry at himself..........he gets up,

takes his plate and move towards Nupur's room.........

Here, she was still recovering from her outburst......she is

torn between her heart and mind..........and irritated with

everything around.......when she sees Mayank entering her

room........

Nupur ( angrily) - tum yahan kyun aaye ho? muje koi baat

nahin sunni........

Mayank ( with regret in his voice)  -Nupur please mera gussa

khane par mat nikalo, ye lo khalo........

Nupur - Tumhe samjh nahin aati kya, mukje nahin

khana..........mera mann nahin hai............aur tumhari vajah se

to main kabhi khana nahin chodungi, samjhe Mayank

Sharma........... and with this she leaves the room, leaving

Mayank alone to feel her pain and anger.........

The day went by...........everyone was busy with their work,

and nobody noticed the two disturbed souls...........

Mayank was in his room...........he was angry at

himself............every bitter word he told Nupur kept playing

in his mind again and again, making him more and more

guilty..........he had always taken pride in being control of

himself, and hatedhimself for loosing control with the one

person he loved from the bottom of his heart...........he was

thinking, " What did i do? Maine apne saare promises tod

diye, phir main kaise expect karun ki Nupur mujhe maaf kar

degi?.........usne meri wajah se subah se kuch nahi

khaya..........lunch par bhi nahi aayi.........kya karun, kuch

samajh nahi aa raha hai? ", and suddenly an idea struck him,

he smiled and he quickly left the room.

On the other hand, Nupur was fuming in her room, she was

hungry, and besides she hasnt seen Mayank after their

argument in the morning, she started speaking to herself     

" Kya zaroorat thi tujhe Nupur Bhushan, us monkey Mayank

ke liye vrath rakhne ki.........wo tujhe itna hurt karta hai aur

tu.......pagal hai tu, bilkul pagal......kal to pure din, sorry sorry

kar ke aage piche ghum raha tha, aur aaj subah se pata nahi

kahan chup ke baitha hai......main jaanti thi wo sadu hai hi

aisa..........ek din sorry aur doosre din phir wahi..........tujhe bhi

Nupur puri duniya main Mayank hi mila tha pyar karne ke

liye............"

Suddenly she hears gunjan's voice " Chinky, chaad nikal

gaya, jaldi aa"

She moves toward the terrace, where everyone was

watching Chinky breaking her fast.........her eyes searches for

Mayank, but he was nowhere......

Meanwhile chinky does the aarti of mmon, and Uday asks -

Chinky mujhe laga tune apne hone wale husband ke liye fast

rakha hai, par tu to moon ki puja kar rahi ho?

Bui - are mubai mein kuch nahi sikha kya? Chand ki puja kar

ke apne suhaag ki lambi umar ki prarthana kar rahi hai........

Uday- Suhag? acha Chinky ke pati ka naam Suhaag hai......

Bui (irritated) - Chup kar.....

Meanwhile Nupur is lost in her thoughts, she imagines

Mayank helping her break her fast.........suddenly she feels a

hand on her shoulder, she turns around to see Gunjan,

smiling ather with a aarti thali in her hand..........

She looks, ather questioningly............Gunajn smiles " Di,

tumhe kya lagta hai............agar tum mujhe nahi bataogi, to

mujhe pata nahi chalega ki tumne subah se kuch kyun nahi

khaya? "

Nupur looks down flustered.......  Gunjan..........main........wo".

she stammers......

Gunajn - "Di, kuch bolne ki zaroorat nahi hai............ye lo,

maine tumhari pooja ki thali ready kar di hai..........tum pooja

kar ke niche aa jao........hum sab jaa rahein hain....."

She gives the thali to Nupur and turns to go, but turns back

and says......." aur haan Mayank ki photo bhi rakh di.........usko

dekh lena........" winking.........

Nupur blushes, and looks down..............

Gunjan comes down to see Mayank entering the house, and

ad idea strikes her......... "Mayank tum kahan the? Di, tumhe

dhundh rahi thi"

Mayank - " mujhe kuch kaam tha....Nupur kahan hai?"

Gunajn - " Di, terrace pe hai, jao"

Mayank rushes towards the terrace...........he enters to see

Nupur doing aarti of the moon.......he was confused, as to

what she is doing.........as he watches, she slowly raises the

sieve, and looks at moon through it.............and then lowers it

to see Mayank's photo in her hands..........

Realization dawns on Mayank, that she kept fast for

him.........he is happy, surprised, shocked all at the same

time.

Recovering himself he calls out to her " jab main tumhare

samne hun to photo dekhne ki kya zaroorat hai"

Nupur turns as she hears his voice........she is shockd to see

him there...........and upset at being caught............but

somewhere in her heart she was happy to see him......

He slowly moves towards her, and stands infront of

her......and smiling he says " vaise maine tumhare DDLJ,

mein dekha hai, ki ye fast tumhe mere hi haathon todna

padega........."

Nupur ( not ready to give in) - Maine tumhare liye fast nahin

rakha hai.....

Mayank ( holding out the photo in her hand) - Acha, par ye to

meri hi photo hai........

Nupur was al loss of words........Mayank made her look up at

him, and says........" Nupur, dekho please ab to khalo.....ye lo."

and holds out to her Super Sweets ki Jalebi......... :)

Nupur looks up at him, smiling softly, happy that he

remebered - ye?

Mayank - Tumhe pasand hai na.........to lo na.......and feeds

her with his hand, he then makes her drink water.......

After that he cups her face in his hand, and says " nupur,

main jaanta hun maine tumhe bahut hurt kiya hai....aur ek

nahi kai baar.........main hamesha promise karat hun ki

tumhari smile kahin jaane nahin dunga........tumhe hurt nain

karunga..........but i end up giving u only tears....i think main

tumhe deserve hi nahi karta.........."

Nupur looks up and says " nahin Mayank........."

Mayank interupts her........"Mujhe bolne do Nupur.........aisa

nahin hai ki main tumse pyaar nahin karta, ya phir mujhe

tumse sharam aati hai..........par haan apne pyar ko sab ke

samne lana mujhe uncomfortable kar deta hai"

Nupur looks as he turns his back towards her.and continues "

Nupur, tum jaanti ho na, main hamesha se hi akele raha

hun......except for maa, agar maine kisi se bhi apni life share

ki hai to wo tum ho, aur sirf yehi reason hai ki mujhe,

sabseapni zindagi ki itni khaas baat share nahin karna chahta

tha........."

" par mujhe tumhari baat bhi sunni chahiye thi..........i m really

sorry nupur, please mujhe maaf kar do"

Nupur feels bad hearing all that.........she comes infront of

him and holds his hand........and says " I m sorry Mayank,

kimaine hamesha tumhe force kiya sabko batane ke liye, par

main kya karti mujhe hamesha dar tha ki tum mujhe chodke

chale jaoge.......tum itne perfect jo ho........"

Mayank holds her hand, and smilingly says " aur tum mere

liye perfect ho........."

The both smile at each other, and Mayank pulls her in for a

hug..........they hug each other for a long time, when Mayank

remembers something, and pulls back......

he takes out that chain fro his pocket, and showas it to

Nupur " ye tumhare liye, maa ne di thi"

Nupur is shocked " Aunty ne? matlab tumne unhe sab bata

diya........."

Mayank smiles and says " haan , aur ye unka hi idea tha,

tumhe yahan aake manae ka....chalo ab pehen lo..."

Nupur looks at him annoyed and says "uuf-ho Mayank tum

bhi na............pehen lo matlab.........pehna do............" saying

this she turns, and he slowly makes her wear the chain.

He turns her towarsd himself, and slowly kisses her

forehead, and says " ab main tumhe kabhi bhi hurt nahin

karunga, aur ye promise main kabhi nahi todunga"

She smiles, but next moment in her full nautanki mode says

" aur toda na, to main tumhe tod dungi........."

They both laugh, and then she says " ab chalein, mujhe

bahut bhookh lagi hai"........Mayank just nods.........and they

move downstairs to have their dinner......

Later at night they both sit under the stars, with her head on

his shoulder, and his hands around her waist............and

talk......about their dreams,

aspirations.......childhood.........everything........their bond

getting stronger.......


Thats it guys................I know it has become too long, but

please do comment............positive or negative anything will

do..........thanx for reading.........

 

 

 

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Posted: 06 October 2009 at 11:55pm | IP Logged
hey that was awesome yaar
very sweet
do write more

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Posted: 07 October 2009 at 12:50am | IP Logged
good work for ur first FF
:D
was really cute
xSonia

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Posted: 07 October 2009 at 1:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by zoya_me

hey that was awesome yaar
very sweet
do write more
 
Thanx Zoya, it really means a lot

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Posted: 07 October 2009 at 1:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Bollywood_chic

good work for ur first FF
:D
was really cute
xSonia
 
Thanx Sonia, coming from u, it means a lot...btw i am looking forward to ur update today

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Posted: 07 October 2009 at 1:47am | IP Logged
gud one yar...... mazaa aa gya Smile

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Posted: 07 October 2009 at 4:50am | IP Logged
cool one shot.. keep writing..
 
love
deepu Big smile

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