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hey maha
ww yaar , really my comment make your day , oh that's soo sweet of you , but you know what actually your ff and parts make my day sweety , i just  cant tell you how much i love reading them , wow yaar the part was great
 
great going sweety loved it soo much ,the way you written about the boy ehsaas  was the best , poor small child allways remained deprived of love and now his fear that riddhima will also leave her like everyone else , ohh sooo nice yaar , i felt sad for that little child yaar ,
loved ar together , on that stairs  , and then armaan consolling her when she was scared , loved all that soo much , they were really nice ,
and armaan being selfish and just wanted that his home shall be in safe hands now , wow yaar that was great
 
would love to see how long they can just stay apart from each other sweety,
waiting for the next part please update that soon ,
and as per your thinking over that karan's news , please don't worry yaar , its ok , please don't stop writting just for this news , ok
 
will be waiting for your next update
till then take care and thanks for the pm
lots of love
simi

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Posted: 08 October 2009 at 6:01pm | IP Logged
Hey

Awesome!! I love this fanfic.. You've got me hooked to it!!! I have a confession to make- I'm usually a silent reader and don't really press the like button but today I was compelled to press the like button and comment too!! I guess it's your fanfics affect ROFL please do add me to your PM list of you don't mind??

Love sana

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im really liking the story! i feel bad for eshaan, he just wants someone to hold him and love him! really good part, continue soon!

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Posted: 08 October 2009 at 9:29pm | IP Logged
Hey!
Glad you've started another ff!
Love the story (so far) lol!
Eshaan sounds really cute!
Can't wait till the next update!
x
Sunayna

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Posted: 09 October 2009 at 2:08am | IP Logged
it was really good
loved it
waiting to see what happens next
it was so sweet how rids got close to eshaan
and armaan feelings also
really rocked
thanx for the pm
contd soon

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hey Maha....awesome part.....eshaan's a cute kid, i think he cn help thm get close......n thy already having feelings for each other, tht's gr88888.....i love ur fics as thy concentrate only on AR.....i knw u hvn't comment n its ok i cn understand u have studies n all, so take ur time n do it wen ever u cn, (but plzzzz do lolzzz).....n thn the current Karan situation hmmmmm m nt taking abt it at alll....once again awesome part......plzzzz do continue soooon dear, will be waiting.....thnx alot for the PM.....

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EShaan too cute........
           riddhima resembles his mother....that part was really touching
                      and as usual you rocked the 1st part
                             n plz continue soonn do pm me ..........
                                          i love ur writing u know that so just keep on writing

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 ~||PART 2||~

"Bye Eshaan..." she waved at the duo, who was leaving for work.


"Sonali...." she shouted, calling one of the maid and walked in the kitchen "I m going to my apartment to bring my things and will be back by 1 before Eshaan OK?" the maid made a nod and went back to her work.

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After taking all the things she might be needing, Riddimaa moved in and shuffled her things at the proper place. Soon she helped the servants in preparing food.


"Ridddimaaaaa" she shrieked at her name being shouted with joy and happiness


Riddima made her way out of the kitchen and took hold of Eshaan, who ran straight in her arms. And kissed her cheek number of times.


"heheee.... aree ajj tou bara pyar araha hai." she took him up to his room.


"yes..! u know what I got an Excellent from my teacher..." Eshaan spoke with thrill.


"reallly? Thats great...." she withdrew him off the bag and cloths and told him to take bath till she take some cloths out for him.


Soon both made their way down to kitchen


"u know, today a girl.. really got impressed by me." He blurted


"ah-an..!" Riddimaa cocked her eyebrows


"yea..." he mumbled and blushed a bit. "and what u did whole day?" he changed the topic


"nothing brought my things to ur place." she placed another spoon in his mouth and in reply he made a small nod.


"bass..." Eshaan spoke up.


As soon, Eshaan and Riddima were making their way up, the door bell rang and Arman, yes Arman with a gloomy face ' entered the house and threw his coat on the near by chair and bag their


Eshaan ran up to him for a hug but that merely went un-notice by Arman. Eshaan made a face, kicked the door to shut off.


"Eshaan..." Riddimaa gave a glass to sir and spoke Eshaan's name in a warmly tone, a tone that promised everything will work out.


"i want to sleep. Lets go Riddimaa." Eshaan Grabbed her hand and pulled her up stairs, while soon Arman came to notice that Eshaan came to greet him and he just ignored and then he saw Riddimaa leaving with Eshaan and giving him a disappointment look.


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"Arman Sir, u need anything to eat?" Riddima immediately came down after making Eshaan sleep.


"yes please" Arman said, while changing the channels.


"Is every thing OK?" she didn't knew but felt like asking and soon felt awkward feeling his eyes on her.


"hmm...." he diverted his attention. Riddima was now sure that something surely had happened, but will he tell her? She brushed away the thought and placed food for him.


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at night, after completing Eshaan's home work, the duo made their out in the garden. Arman, who sat in front of the TV hold day. Took a notice of them going out. He frown a bit and then heard a loud shriek. He went out to see, Eshaan, shouting and trolling in the rain while a figure right next to Eshaan was trolling in the same way.


Closed eyes, head tilt up to the sky. Water drops kissing her face, her dress had cling to her body. Making a clear view of her curves. A feeling aroused in him, he made his way towards her and stopped her from trolling. Riddima looked at him strangely, and soon she felt his cold fingers on her cheeks. She shivered and placed her hands on his wrist and moaned his name and he ' he quickly placed his lips on her and smudged them till the were swollen




"Dad...." he heard a light voice and soon a bulk of water was thrown on his face. "Dad...." Eshaan shouted and laughed when he saw, his dad had got wet.


Arman smiled at his son and soon frowned 'waiit ' did I just dream about me kissing Riddimaa?' Arman thought 'shit shit... shit....'


"Dad? Where were u lost...."Eshaan asked while pulling him out.


"No where..." pause " and now get in... Riddimaaa" he shouted his name and gave her look to get in !


Just to a get pleasing look in return


"NO... get in both of u!" he spoke sternly


"Arman sir please '." "Yes dad please" both requested while making puppy faces.


"No... now get in before I give both of u a spank.!" he took hold of Eshaan in his arms. And said Riddimaa to come in Right now and she quietly followed him in the house with a gloomy face.


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Giving a hot glass to Eshaan, Riddima made him change and made him sleep...Riddima on one place thought where her life was taking her. She lived in an unknown house, took care of every little thing here. It had only been 2 days but the thought of working as nanny, filled her heart with guilt. Was that her dream? That what she wanted ?? she came from a small town to work ' to do something big but guess life is tough ' she had to work to get a good degree. And if not, then she promised to be a good person and gain enough for an independent life.


She drifted off with the same haunted-guilt dream...


on the other hand, Arman, was wide awake. Thinking over things. Things that were said by people. Saying that people remarked on him. On his character.


He is gay.

Her wife ran away may be she was afraid of him.

Didn't u saw him staring at Rohit, at morning today.

Whole office is busy talking about our boss being gay.

God, Rohit is a dead meat today he had been called in the room. Alone.


Comments, wondered in his head and the very next moment Riddimaa's face ' figure came in his eye. But soon, he shrugged and made himself lay down on bed and went to sleep.


'Miss u Ayes-ha' he whispered.


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next week went by, Arman use to come late that Eshaan use to be off to bed till he reach and Riddima wondering over her studies ' in her room, as she had asked Arman for loan for further studies.


"Sir, I won't leave I promise till I pay u back." she made a pleaded back


"i will not let u leave !" he remarked seriously, seeing how change his son was. He was happy to see Eshaan in good hands.


Riddima looked at him strangely but brushed off the thought as he placed a cheque in her hand, that had the equal. She needed for completing her bachelors. She smiled wholeheartedly and he blinked in return and went off to his work.


From that day, her most time went off in studying. She was giving private papers. In that she would be sitting at home and just go uni. For the papers.


"hello? This is Riddima speaking" Riddima said while placing the call-less on her ear and wondering her pencil on book.


"this me Arman." he smiled, after hearing her adourable voice.


She fumbled and her book fall on the floor "yes-- yes sir"


"relax Riddima" he chucked


"je sir!" she asked picking her book and placing the phone straightly on her ear


"acha listen, I have some work here ' will be coming back in morning. Soo ' hmm do drop Eshaan, to school... can you?"


"yes ' I will do that. Do u want me to bring food for u their.. sir?" Riddima frowned.


"Armann" a little moan came from behind.


"hmm no... .ok bye" Arman hung up


'is he ..? is he with a girl?' her eyes pop out 'I knew it. !! he is such a ' urghhhh.... well forget it. He is a shameless man. And I don't care.' she thought and made her self busy in her studies.


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'Why can't I SLEEP? DOES IT MATTER that he is with a girl ?? NO it doesnot ' I M NOT his wife , WHY SHOULD I get worried if he is doing something or anything with a girl or boy '! I Dont CARE '! AND I M GOING to sleep '' she kept on tossing in the bed while her brain was getting werid imagination of Arman with different girls '.


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"Arman sir is still not here?" she tossed in the lounge a bit worried of him being out of the house.



Just than the door bell rang and she ran to open with a big smile



"Hello Sir" she welcomed him with a huge smile and felt embarrassed when he cocked his eye brows



"Hi" he twisted his nose and made his way in. she bowed her head down and took his suit case and coat from him. And brought water for him.



"Riddima, I wanna talk to you." Arman said, while giving her the glass back.



"yes Sir..." she smiled and took a seat on the opposite couch.



"I need a favor..." she made a nod in a way to tell him to contine. "aaa... dont take me wrong but" he placed his hand on his head and rubbed the sweat off " how do we say this.... Gossh" he said, while riddimaa frowned and looked at him waiting for him to continue. "Riddimaa let me get this straight and simple -" he stood up



while Riddimaa got nervous, she was afraid that is he going to throw her out or something ' he made his way up to her, and moved his hand further to make her take hold of it.



She looked at him strangely and confused but soon placed her trembling one in his strong hand.



"Riddimaa..."he pulled her up with a force, her body slightly brushed with her ' making her shiver a bit.



"y-yes ' sir..." she looked down at her hand in his and soon pulled them out.



"Riddima will u Marry me...." he whispered. Her eye grew bigger with a slight mouth opened- she had hold her breath in her throat.... he placed his hand on her hands. He knew it will be hard for her to digest the proposal ' so, he kept quite.



Riddima, she didin't knew what to say, how to feel.? She had been dreaming about him, but that does not mean she should marry him. Though, she knew, he was handsome ' adorable but was this enough.? It had been a week and here she is standing. She had her future in stack. She had a wave of joy that touched her heart but soon, turned in a scary shiver.


'He was already married and had a son too' she shrugged.


"Riddima, don't take me wrong. It will be a ..."


"Arman sir ' I dont know, what to say? I mean, all of a sudden" she interrupted him. And looked at him with numerous questions in her eyes.


"Look Riddima thats what I m saying ' I don't Love You." he said with a sigh.


Her head jolt up and a gasp came out from her mouth, her eyebrows merged together


'Then, why did he proposed me?' she thought.


"I don't love you" he turned and gave her his back. "I only ..." he took a slight hiccup "I only love Ayes-ha" pause, she gulped with pain "she was my first love and giving some one her place in my heart, is wrong... totally wrong." he turned towards her and saw her looked at him shocked.


An anger took place in her, she just couldn't hold her self back "Then, why did u asked me for marraige" she spoke in anger.


"Listen, Riddimaa its a bit complicated"


"DO u want me in ur bed??" she asked this from nowhere.


"Riddimaa" his voice aroused up from soft. She looked at him scaredly. "how could u say that..."


"Than WHAT Sir??" she matched his voice the next moment.


"I want to marry, because people say I m '. I m gay. And Ayes-ha went away because I m gay. I want to tell people that I m not that. And I want to show them I m bloody Normal. And I ' I think u should help me ' U can take it as an Order" he finished not making any eye contact with him


"NO way" she shrieked.


"listen..." he made a step towards her, with a pleasing look


"no sir !" she moved back.


"I dont care with ur no's ..! I have granted u a loan of 78,000 and u have to pay back till then u will do -Exactly, what is told to u ..GOT IT" he shouted the last phrase and holding her tight from her shoulders.

 

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Nidha di- Thanks for liking it 'Smile

Hima ' yaar I think, I m out of this karan mess ' as I told u, I love Arman. And I dont give a damn to ppl, who say karan is a bad guy ' so lets just forget what happened few days back ' and start with a fresh '. soo, Thanks for liking my Part and Yes I m will rite the next part as I dont want to die any where soon ! Smile

Nruti ' Thanks yaar... I happy u liked it Big smile

KJ ' thanks a lot Smile

Killerabit ' thanks I happy u found it interesting '..Big smile

Karans-angel ' thanks ' lol u read "How much ' u love her" God it is closed by mods due to adult content hahahaha '. well I hope u "NJOYeD it" heeheee thanks for loving it ! I m conti. it... as I m happy now. .!LOLLOL

Mar ' thanks I happy u liked it Smile

aati1429 ' hey thanks.... yea I m doing that ' I m totally in love with aRman ' and I m gonna rite while thinking arman !LOLSmile

Habs ' thanks lol karan yea u can go --- I want only Arman.... heheee thanks anyways for liking it TongueSmile

dipu ' thanks for the support and I m happy u lked it Smile

Rucha ' I happy u atleast read it ! And its ok '. if u don't reply regularly as I know ur condition ! Love u !Smile

Simi ' thanks yarr I m happy u liked it ' and I guess I m over the sad mood now ..TongueSmile

Armania aka Sana ' thanks for liking it and yup I mind ' ! I only add those who ORDER me to add them in list ! Order me then I will surely pm u ' LOL :PTongueTongue

Robin_M ' thanks ' I hapy u found it interestingSmile

Sunayna ' lol thanks I hapy u found it good till now ' and I hpe u like it in future tooSmile

Sanjana25 ' thanks a lot Big smile

crazy_4_karan ' thanks for commentng and I happy u liked it !Smile

Deba --- thanks yaaar u r too sweet !Big smile

 
LOve Maha Embarrassed
. I got less comments from the first time i guess, but its ok. u hav full right not to comment ! i won't force u ppl out their !Smile NJOY....


Edited by Hello_01 - 10 October 2009 at 8:33am

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