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tingtingteeding

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Posted: 06 October 2009 at 8:31am | IP Logged

Originally posted by hgrhr

ohhh why did it have to be so sad...!!!

but awesome one yaar....loved the ay you described their longing for each other....both of their ego came in between their friendship...between something that could hev been....*sigh*

but great job..!!!!

do write more..!!

i knw its sad but some stories never really reach their destinations

i'm glad you liked it though

Edited by zoya_me - 06 October 2009 at 8:32am

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Posted: 06 October 2009 at 8:33am | IP Logged

Originally posted by NabeehaFS

hey Zoya

awesome
Fantastic
Superb
Brilliant

good job loved it
but I wish you continue with their meeting

hey thanks a lot

i dont think they can meet anytime but i do wish they did

tingtingteeding

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Posted: 06 October 2009 at 8:34am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Ansh_Arti

omgsh zoya, u got me teary!

this is something that actually happened in my life!

the way u described is hats off u u girl!

my most fav dialogue, the thing i used to do or i still do it:

I usually go online just to see her icon on my friends list. I feel some strange happiness seeing her online at the same time as me. Crazy you might say but that's how it is.

thanks a lot

strange but it is something that happened to me too

yeah and even i do the same thing

m glad you liked it

Edited by zoya_me - 06 October 2009 at 9:17pm

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tingtingteeding

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Posted: 06 October 2009 at 8:53am | IP Logged

Originally posted by aish_punk

Hey Zoya..really good yaar.!

Nupur thinks that he hates her now n she loves him!

Mayank thinks she dusnt wanna talk to him!

they both are SO stupid!..they never understud each oda i guess..but really loved d bond dey shared before..

do write more

-Aish

hey thanks a lot

yup both are stupid

sometimes misunderstandings ruins even the most beautiful and simple realtionship

shinz

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Posted: 06 October 2009 at 8:59am | IP Logged

aww..it was so beautiful...but sad...cant u make it a three shot.and well make it happy
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
it would be awesome then.....plzzzzzzzz

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Posted: 06 October 2009 at 9:01am | IP Logged

Hi Zoya
its an awesome shot dear.
its so touchy yaar.
And truly this happened in my life also.
Nice 1 dear.
u r just fabulous.

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Posted: 06 October 2009 at 9:53am | IP Logged

it was amazing, but 2 painful..............how abt a part 2, where they meet?

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Posted: 06 October 2009 at 10:44am | IP Logged

hmmm,
toooo sad story........mayu aur nups ki kahani ithni sad sad.....mujhe tho bahut dukh hua!!!

u touched my heart, by the way u described their feelings!!
i really admit tht many love stories r left incomplete ...as people dont express their feeling properly....
eachone waits for the othr to start!!!!!

hey zoya....make othr story wid happiness & fun!!!!
mayu aur nups ki kahani shd never be sad....plzzzzzzzzz

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