mayur the loving birds..; prt 23 pg 53 last part - Page 7

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heyya guys........ thanx for all yur comments...... heres the 12th part....

next day

at mayank's house...

mm: mayyu................

m: aaya maa...

mm: kal teri sagaai hai aur tu ghode bech ke so raha hai..........😃

m: uth gya na maa...........

mm: wo aaj nupur ke saath baahar jaa raha hai na.....

m: haan maa...... mein aaj shaam ka khaana ghar nahi khaaunga...

mm: hm....

at nupur's house...

g: kya nupur... mujhe to apne gha rok liya aur khud mayank ke khayaalon mein doobi hui hai😉...''

n: accha,,😳... wese aaj mein kkya pehnoo??

g: sagai kal hai na...

n: duffer aaj meri mayank ke ssath date hai.......

g: hmm........

mayur get ready for the date....

mayank goes to nupurs house to pick her up in his car...

mayank rings the door bell of nupur's house...

nupur opens the door...

mayank's pov.

she is looking gorgeous.... wearing black tight long top with no sleeves and tight capry with a extra short whit jacket covering just her shoulders and nothing else........... she is lyk an angel....👏👏👏

nupur's pov.

he is looking damn hot....... with purple t-shirt...... his muscles could be seen...... and black jeans..... omgg.. he is looking so handsome,,,😛

m: tum ready ho to chale............

n: of course............

in the car..

n: aaj kaha le jaa rahe ho??

m: just wait and watch...

the car stops in front of a restaurant...

they move inside..... ther is no body inside........... myank book the restaurant for her......... just they too.......

n: mayank yeh......

m: jaanta hoo.... yeh hamaari first date hai jisme mene tumhe koi surprise nahi diya.... but iss date mein mein chaahta tha ki tumhaara dhyaan keval mujhpar rahe aur mera tumpe..... isliya......

n: i love you mayank.,,,,,,,, (and she hugs her...)

they have their dinner..... mayank is continuosly gazing nupur... and this is making nupur blush.......😳😳,,,,,,,

m: nupur you know date pe aur kya karte hai.............

n:😳....................

mayank moves closer........ and closer........ and closer........ nupur a step backward........until she is stopped by the wall.......... mayank moves his hand on her waist...... moves closer............ keep her hair behind her ear............ brushes is lips over hers😳😳............... and den deepen the kiss............... nupur also starts responding......... and the kiss changes ino a passionate one......... nupur's hands moving through mayank's hair........... both are breathless now....,,,,,,,,,,,,,, they look into each other's eyes and are lost,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

in the car.........

n: i always tried not to look into yur deep eyes .............. yur eyes are like an ocean,,,,,,,,,,,,,, never ending............... i m always lost.............

m:😛 (nupur's home has arrived mayank stops the car)

n: dont laugh.......... its a fact................ i can prove it........ or rather i will prove it sum day...

m: (mayank laughs even more😆)

n: you.......... (and she jumps on him......)

she is on him....... hitting him................ mayank tries to stop her,,,, in a way not to hurt her................. but nupur is continuously hitting him............ finally he holds her hand and put her down....................... now mayank is on her................. again there is a long eyelock................. and they broke apart after sum tym..........

nupur gets out of the car................ avoiding eye contact.........

n:byee.........

m: byee.....

nuur moves a step ahead..

m: nupur.........

n: (she turns back) hmm.........

m: you proved it............. (and he goes)

nupur just laughs.....................

the whole night they were thinking of the other............. of the kiss................ of next days engagement................

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Edited by pari.theprinces - 14 years ago

it was really good.
cont soon
will be waitin eagerly

amazing update....loved it....

Hey really awesome fanfic it's superb!

it was too good........
do continue soon.......

thnxxxxxxxx 4 d pm pari, 😃it was wonnnnderfullll, 😊plzzzzzzz upd8 soooooon😆

Hi Pari
obviously i loved it.
its really lovely
mayur r so romantic
loved them so much
good job .
keep it up

wow dear...
this part was soooo nice...omg...twas so vry nice!!!
twas xelent!!!
pls cont soon...
and thanx 4 d pm =)