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Posted: 09 November 2009 at 6:50am | IP Logged
        
 
                 I sat at the table stirring my hot cuppa tea
             A fruit pie with peach cream I didn't even see
             A worried frown on my face as I ate the muesli
             I worried about my friend across the seven seas.
 
 
            The day was dull, the clouds filled the blue sky
             My concentration was gone and I could tell why
            Some one far away was to be put through a test
            My Sakhi was harried by an exasperating pest.
 
 
        
 
             I sat in my carriage and returned over the bridge
             The buggy jolted as it ran noisily over the ridge
             T'was the end of day for me but what about her?
             I prayed that things would change for the better.
 
 
             The water ran gurgling by but I did not heed it
             The birds cooed in their nest but I didn't heed it
             The clouds descended down but I didn't see it     
             My heart prayed for her - I hoped she'd heed it.
 
 
            
 
             I lay down on my bed my lashes floated down
             In the silence of the night there was not a sound
             I saw a beautiful valley with the flowing stream
             Was this real or just a part of my dream?
 
             The firs stood upright and with them I did plead
             I spoke to every flower and to every seed
             Will she be okay, will she have a reason to smile 
             Will her anxiety go away in just a little while?
 
 
              
 
 
              I reached the end of that most ethreal forest
              A figure was there in white looking the purest
              He was writing with his plume in golden ink
              I was so mesmerised, that I just couldn't think. 
 
                   Who was in the gazebo.... .God or a holy man?
              I couldn't reach him due to the water's span
              Oh take my message across, ye divine birds
              And exactly express my thoughts in simple words.
 
 
             The leaves looked purple in the blessed light
             Flowers growing on the banks were such a delight
             My heart almost stopped its beat at this lovely sight
             I hope my friend is spared and is no more in fright.
 
 
                            ********************
 
            
            
 


Edited by skeptical - 09 November 2009 at 6:54am

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Posted: 09 November 2009 at 9:24am | IP Logged
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Posted: 09 November 2009 at 9:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by h&rblock

Clap
 
Dear Kal,
 
It's so nice to know you are visiting this forum.........................Hug
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Posted: 09 November 2009 at 9:44am | IP Logged
thats so wonderfully put SkepClap ...I have prayed for our dear Sakhi too...hope all her worries end and she is back with her lovely smile.

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Posted: 10 November 2009 at 6:03am | IP Logged
That was awesome Skep ....
 
One small Q .... who is sakhi ? ....... anyone I know ?
 
I pray too that her troubles melt away ......
 
 
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Sakhi is Sammy

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Posted: 10 November 2009 at 11:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by skeptical

        
 
                 I sat at the table stirring my hot cuppa tea
             A fruit pie with peach cream I didn't even see
             A worried frown on my face as I ate the muesli
             I worried about my friend across the seven seas.
 
 
            The day was dull, the clouds filled the blue sky
             My concentration was gone and I could tell why
            Some one far away was to be put through a test
            My Sakhi was harried by an exasperating pest.
 
 
        
 
             I sat in my carriage and returned over the bridge
             The buggy jolted as it ran noisily over the ridge
             T'was the end of day for me but what about her?
             I prayed that things would change for the better.
 
 
             The water ran gurgling by but I did not heed it
             The birds cooed in their nest but I didn't heed it
             The clouds descended down but I didn't see it     
             My heart prayed for her - I hoped she'd heed it.
 
 
            
 
             I lay down on my bed my lashes floated down
             In the silence of the night there was not a sound
             I saw a beautiful valley with the flowing stream
             Was this real or just a part of my dream?
 
             The firs stood upright and with them I did plead
             I spoke to every flower and to every seed
             Will she be okay, will she have a reason to smile 
             Will her anxiety go away in just a little while?
 
 
              
 
 
              I reached the end of that most ethreal forest
              A figure was there in white looking the purest
              He was writing with his plume in golden ink
              I was so mesmerised, that I just couldn't think. 
 
                   Who was in the gazebo.... .God or a holy man?
              I couldn't reach him due to the water's span
              Oh take my message across, ye divine birds
              And exactly express my thoughts in simple words.
 
 
             The leaves looked purple in the blessed light
             Flowers growing on the banks were such a delight
             My heart almost stopped its beat at this lovely sight
             I hope my friend is spared and is no more in fright.
 
 
                            ********************
 
            
            
 
OMG skepy i came 5 minutes ago..and called jo and arranged to post previously made postof gavie's bday..and here i saw ur poem u used pictures i sent yesterday
thanks fo r being there for me..
tribunal found me to be not at fault and decided to give me reason to smile i feel ist wishes of u and many of my friends who prayed for me ..my earnest thanks to you, shauleen , jo , michelle , rachna, ranju , bonai ,arwen and all others who prayed for me
this poem is best re.........am just feeliong blessed right now to have a second home in this forum among such lovely people.................thanks skepy from bottom of my heart.....EmbarrassedCry,,,,,,,khushi ke aansoo

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Posted: 15 November 2009 at 1:18pm | IP Logged
Ugate suraj ki tarah khushi ko mere paas aane do
Doobte hue suraj ki tarah dard ko kahi jaane do
Jahaan khushi hai wahaan dard pehra deta hi hai
Jitna maalik hume deta hai utna hi humse leta bhi hai ...........
 
Zindagi kabhi chupsi reh jaati hai
Nadi ki paani ki tarah beh jaati hai
Rukne ka kabhi naam hi nahi leti
Khichti leh jaati hai magar doobne nahi deti..............

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