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Posted: 06 November 2009 at 6:31am | IP Logged
                  Went climbing up my spiral tower
                  To take a look at my birdie dour
                  He looked at me with a scowl
                  What do I do with this old owl?
 
 
                  So I went to my favourite nook
                  To scan some old forgotten book
                  One just fell into my lap
                  All the pages starting to flap
 
   
 
 
                      My eyes fell on one page
                      It was set for a child's stage
                      I had written this one just for fun
                      So I hope you'll read through this one?
 
 
                              Where would I be?
 
 
                    Where would I be?
                              In a boat upon the sea.
 
 
                
 
 
                                What would I like to do?
                                Sit on branches where doves coo
 
 
 
                      
 
 
                                 Or like a bird learn to fly
                                 And float about in the sky
 
 
 
    
 
 
 
                                Or laze beneath the palm trees
                                That nod in the cool breeze
 
 
                                        
 
 
                                Or be with flowers when they dance
                                And play with lambs as they prance
 
 
 
                                                 
 
 
                                        Or watch the dotted butterflies
                              That visit blossoms in a trice
 
 
                   
                                    
 
 
                                           Or dwell in the awesome rainbow
                                           Looking down at fiels and meadows
 
 
                             
 
 
                               Or hide in the grass with hares 
                               And chase rabbits everywhere
 
 
                            
 
                               Or stand quietly like a stork still
                               With one foot up and a fish in the bill
 
 
                            
 
 
 
                                Or hear the grugling from a nearby nook
                                Of running waters of a laughing brook
 
 
                                
 
 
                                Or swim about like a silvery fish
                                And flip my tail with a swish
 
 
 
                  
 
                               Or sleep cosily in the clouds white
                               An talk to the moon and stars at night
 
 
                                               
 
                                Where would I like to be?
                                With God in Heaven and quite happy.
 
 
         
 
 
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Posted: 06 November 2009 at 8:48am | IP Logged
i havent visited this thread in a while .... now i see what i m missing ..... incredible skep Clap


sorry for my long absences but i m just too bz Ouch so can't be too involved on IF though i try to stay active in one place or the other Ouch

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Posted: 06 November 2009 at 10:39am | IP Logged
*Sigh* - Skep your poems are so heartwarming - who needs hot chocolate on a cold morning, I just need to read your poems...absolutely awesome!

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Posted: 06 November 2009 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by h&rblock

*Sigh* - Skep your poems are so heartwarming - who needs hot chocolate on a cold morning, I just need to read your poems...absolutely awesome!


DITTO!! So well put...look how she brings the best even in in us!
God bless you Meera........My Mon Ami!

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Posted: 06 November 2009 at 12:47pm | IP Logged
skep.....i don't know what to say...i mean i can't describe ur poem...its simply so sweet..reallu liked ur poem....thanks for letting me know about ur poem..really enjoyed reading it..the poem is just mindbling....and awesome i can say...ur a great poem writer...keep it up...
luv,
Mariam

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Posted: 08 November 2009 at 11:49pm | IP Logged
That was absolutely awesome Skep ....*applause* ....
 
All I can do is sigh with pure happiness !!!!!!
 

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Posted: 09 November 2009 at 12:42am | IP Logged
You know Skep ..... I had posted a poem by Brian Patten just like the one you've written ..... about a child's thots and dreams .... I'm copying it here again ..... just to refresh your memory .......
 
You Can't Be That ................. By Brian Patten
 
I told them:
When I grow up
I'm not goimg to be a Scientist
Or someonewho reads the news on TV.
No, a million birds will fly through me
I'M GOING TO BE A TREE.
They said:
You can't be that ...... No, you can't be that.
 
I told them:
When I grow up
I'm not going to ba an airline pilot,
A dancer, a lawyer, or a MC.
No, huge whales will swim in me
I'M GOING TO BE AN OCEAN.
They said:
You can't be that ...... No, you can't be that.
 
I told them:
I'm not going to be a DJ,
A compyter programmer, a muscian or a beautician,
No, streams will flow throughme, I'll be the home for eagles,
I'll be full of nooks, crannies, vallyes and fountains.
I'M GOING TO BE A RANGE OF MOUNTAINS
.
They said:
You can't be that ...... No, you can't be that.
 
I asked them:
Just what do you think I am?
Just a child, they said,
And children always become
At least one of the things
We want them to be.
 
They do not understand me.
I'll be a stable if I want, smelling of fresh hay........
I'll be a lost glade in which unicorns still play......
They do not realise I can fulfill any ambition.
They do not realise among them
Walks a magician.
 
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Isn't that fabulously written ?????
I felt enchanted reading this.......
 
How beautifully the poet has captured a child's thoughts !!!!!!!
 
Imagine, all of us started like this ....
And then, we grew up .....
 
Sighhhhhhh !!!!!!!!!


Edited by Dawn Idol - 09 November 2009 at 12:43am

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Posted: 09 November 2009 at 5:50am | IP Logged
Yes............sigh!!!!! Day Dreaming

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