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gr8_mms IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 06 October 2009 at 11:17am | IP Logged
nice part

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roshni_light Groupbie

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Posted: 06 October 2009 at 11:51am | IP Logged
I really liked it.Sounds interesting.........Pls continue soon and add me to your pm list.

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.PINK. IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 06 October 2009 at 3:23pm | IP Logged
So here is the 3rd part.
Mayank drove to the petrol pump. It was foggy outside. Mayank got out of the car, and look around for someone. No one was there. Then he turned around.
S:Don't be scared it is me, did you find someone?
M:No, humme agge jake kissi se help le na cha hi hai.
S:Ok then.
They went back, and Mayank start driving again. Everyone was still kind of scared, so to cheer them up.
M:Guys you want music?
He opened it. And this time it was working.
N:Mayank, how much do you think will take us to reach there?
M:Ummmmm. Don't worry Gunjan.
N:Hello, I am Nupur.
N:Stop kidding and concertrate on driving.
They were passing throw a mansion.
D:It looks so scary.
U:I wonder who lives in it.
B:I think yahan koi hazzaro saal lo se nahi gaya.
D:I know.
Then the car went crr crr crr. And it finally stopped.
S:What happen?Out of petrol?
M:No, I don't know let me check.
S:No dude, you look tired already, let me check.
M:*Smiled* ok.
Samrat went to the front trunk. 20 minutes past. The gang was worried. They all got out of the car, to look for him.
She started crying. Nupur putted her hands in her shoulders to calm her down. While all this, Sammy was hiding behind a tree. To see Gunjan cry like this.
S:Laagta hai, kuch zyada ho gaya.
He went to them.
Gunjan looked around and found Samrat standing. She went to him, and hugged him. Then realized it was all a prank. She broke the hugged.
M:Samrat that wasn't funny.
N:We were all worried sick about you.
D:I know, after that.
U:I almost had an heart attack.,
S:Relax relax, let me say something.
All except Gunjan: What?
S:I am sorry.
Gunjan came and punch him in his shoulders.
G:Never do that you idiot.
S:Yes mam.
M:Ok. did you find what is wrong with the car?
S:It is not working.
D:Now what?
M:Lets go in that haveli, and ask for help.
N:You must be crazzy,I will never go in there.
M:Do we have a choice?
N:No. But still I am not going.
M:Lets go guys, jisko yahan reh na hai, ussko chhor do.
They all went. Nupur looked at the dark place.
N:Kitna soon san hai yahan. Bikul ek kabristan ki tarah.
She looked back. Then.
N:Tum, I thought you were in that haveli.
M:Tumko yahan chhor ke jata?No ways.
N:I am not coming.
M:Ok then.
He grabbed her hands.
N:I demand you to let go of my hands.
M:Chup chap challo.
They reached the gang. Who was starring at the mansion.
M:*Gulp* Should I knock?
He was about to knock, but the the door opened by itself. They all went in except Nupur. She looked back at the dark foggy night. Then she noticed something behind a big, old tree. Curiously she went to see what it was. it was...............
Hope you liked it. And thank you so much for all the comments. And next updates has many scary events. So be safe until then.LOL

Edited by rkmnkp - 07 October 2009 at 1:48pm

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myownarea IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 06 October 2009 at 3:50pm | IP Logged
Lina...ufff this is totally cool yaar Smile

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.PINK. IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 06 October 2009 at 4:01pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by myownarea

Lina...ufff this is totally cool yaar Smile
Thanks so much Divya diSmile
so happy to hear that from you.

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tingtingteeding IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 06 October 2009 at 8:32pm | IP Logged
hey totally creepy but a like it
plzzzz cotninue soon

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ShwePoo IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 06 October 2009 at 9:04pm | IP Logged
very nice update...

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Nikki_Titli IF-Addictz

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Posted: 06 October 2009 at 9:28pm | IP Logged
awesome............w8in for more..........plz continue soooooooon

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