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Posted: 29 October 2009 at 1:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Veena..

hey wow nice part pooja....... i liked it too
keep it up dearThumbs Up

Being cool is being yourself'.
yep rite Thumbs Up


:D it is one thing i have discovered!

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Posted: 29 October 2009 at 1:43pm | IP Logged
I think we all HAVE to discover that one way or the other...no matter when!!

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Originally posted by Aaditee

I think we all HAVE to discover that one way or the other...no matter when!!

interesting....Wink

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Posted: 31 October 2009 at 3:55am | IP Logged
4. The Performance

Black jeans, a black t-shirt with silver grafitti...A black bandanna with white spots....A violin in my hand....

I swallowed. I was standing on the dias in the largest hall of the farmhouse. Towards left, Aadi was on the synth, Sphurti held the dhol, Varsha the tasha.....

Towards my right, Geeta lazily held a flute between her fingers and Zoya was standing clutching the mic.

Aadi's hand moved on the synthesizer.....

The soft notes reverbated in the air and a hush spread over the crowd. Initially, many had raise eyebrows at our 'venture' as I would call it, and by now, I was feeling extremely tensed.....

The note reached a high level...That was my cue....The bow flew over the srtings......Geeta's flute sounded silently, as I and Aadi stopped for her little solo....

Aadi smiled, truly relaxed, her hands on the black and white keys, truly in her element....


Walking under the sun

Laughing and shouting having fun

The sweetness of the first rain on our cheeks

And standing still looking at distant misty peaks

The long trudge through the grass and reed

And ways through dangers lead

Bending over in the paddy fields

And pushing each other in the mud

Theflute did a small double take.....



Sailing lamps on the river

Bobbing up and down…..

So much fun we had together

None of us will forget it ever…



But now



But time has spilt through our hands

Like the golden sands

Care for the remaining

For it will pass like before



Now is the time …this is the place

To recognize ourselves, who are we..

To see potential

And our future



Make way for us

We now come to rise above all

With the same thirst of knowledge

And desire to prove…



Yes we will

We will

Yes we will…

Yes we will


Aadi crooned the last "Yes...we....will....."

There was a stunned dilence in the hall....

And then applause............


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Posted: 31 October 2009 at 6:02am | IP Logged
wow..so the crowd liked their performance..!..nice..!..the song was good..

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I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Hug

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Originally posted by aish_punk

wow..so the crowd liked their performance..!..nice..!..the song was good..


thanx ash (is it okay if i call u ash?Wink)
i had really written the song for our reunion!

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Posted: 01 November 2009 at 4:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aaditee

I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Hug

dont worry, me 2! LOL

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