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Krishna_Sourav

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Posted: 18 October 2009 at 7:24am | IP Logged
Wow, Superb part.
Thanks ke sameer ne bacha lia , Finally they meet to each other but again they fall from there.
Great update.Continue soon dear.

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maria_awan

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Posted: 18 October 2009 at 1:12pm | IP Logged
really great bohat acah laga sameer ko shock lagna in a happy situaion Winknext part jaldi post karna dearWink

letsrockshona

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Posted: 19 October 2009 at 12:25am | IP Logged
o wow such a sweet update...sameer go shock..anyways well written,,,and awesome and lovely as always
jaldi se next update kar do
and thanks for the pm

rajatrangini

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Posted: 20 October 2009 at 6:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Wow, Superb part.
Thanks ke sameer ne bacha lia , Finally they meet to each other but again they fall from there.
Great update.Continue soon dear.
 
thanks rakhi..
yaa finally they met....but in a tragic way..
now hav to see wat will happen next in their lives

rajatrangini

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Posted: 20 October 2009 at 6:19am | IP Logged
Wink
Originally posted by maria_awan

really great bohat acah laga sameer ko shock lagna in a happy situaion Winknext part jaldi post karna dearWink
 
thankss maria
WinkWinkwell kuch shocks bhi acche hote hain..
and u will kepp getting such shocks here
 

rajatrangini

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Posted: 20 October 2009 at 6:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by letsrockshona

o wow such a sweet update...sameer go shock..anyways well written,,,and awesome and lovely as always
jaldi se next update kar do
and thanks for the pm
thankss dear...
yaa this time updating it with a long post..
enjoy

rajatrangini

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Posted: 20 October 2009 at 6:21am | IP Logged

 

contted...

Jai: "to mr dayal apne aage kya socha hai? i mean yahi unka wait karenge yaa phir??"

Mr dayal: "i think humme unka wait karna chahiye,,aakhir bacchche hi to hain
or wo bhi yahan naye hai"

Mis kriti: "but mr dayal ,yahan par kisi ka bhi wait karna bewakoofi hogi...yahan
 na hi to koi hotel hai,or na hi koi guest house.. or phir hummare saath ye
ladkiyan bhi to hain"

Tom: "yup ..we are going , sk will manage everythingh,,and above all,he knows about this
place more than us"


Jai: "yaa i think u r right tom,,SK yahan kyoun aaega ,he will prefer to go shimla straight"

jai ,tom ,emma or angel wahan se shimla ki taraf nikalne lagte hain,,

Mr dayal: "listen ,we are also coming,,or phir that brave boy is ur friend ,ho sakta hai wo
tum logon ko contact kare.."

Emma: "u r most wellcome sir,instead we will feel happy ki yahan ke logon ko aur
janne ka mouka milega."

Mr dayal: "waise aap log hindi kafi acchii bol lete hain,,very good"

Emma: "yaa sir wo jai and sameer are indian na,,they hav tought us.."

Tom: "but i m still bad at it,"

Mis kriti: "com'on all girls,,ur luddge will be recovered tommorow,,abhi all of
u follow us.

sameer ke dost ,or khushi ke colledge ke sabhi log shimla ke liye nikal liye
ye soch kar ki sameer or khushi unhe jaldi hi mil jaaenge.

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sameer or khushi uupar se ek lake main gire..

as sameer was holding her hand,,use khushi ko wahan se bahar nikalne main koi
zyada problem nahin hui.
he came out of that lake,holding khushi in his arms...
usne use,,wahan niche rakha,,or uski body ko shake kiya

Sameer: "nandu....nandu .. are u ok,,"

after few moments she came back in her sences...

Khushi in a feard voice " hum log kahan hain"

Sameer answered her very lightly "pata nahin"

Khushi: "what do u mean by pata nahin...ab hum kya karenge,,main to yahan pehlee baar
aayi hoon."

and she started crying..." mummaaaaaa"

Sameer: "hey please ....don ..don't cry...i mean main hoon na tumhare saath,(he swifty holded her hand)
i promise main tumhe
shimla ...,tumhare group tak pohuncha doonga"

Khushi: (she take away her hand fron his)"wo to tumhe pohunchana hi padega,,ye sab tumharee wajah se hi to hua hai...tum ..tum
ek rassi bhi theek se nahin pakad sakte"

Sameer: "wowww... kya baat hai,ek to jaan bachaoo or phir dant bhi khaoo"

sameer ne khushi ko dekha she was shivering with cold...he realised ki its getting colder every passing
minute.

Sameer: "take out ur clothes"

Khushi: "what?????????"
 
Sameer: "i mean ,the woolens ,wo geele ho gaye hai,,agar thodi der or pehnee rahi then u will get cold..
or waise bhi ab jaise jaise raat hoti jaaegi ,thand badhti hi jaaegi"

khushi took out her jacket,which was totally wet...

Khushi: "ab to raat hone waali hai,..ab hum kahan jaanege?"

Sameer: "kahan jaanege se kya matlab...ye jagah acchii nahin hai kya?? a beautiful lake,,ye hari bhari
wadiyan..sab kuch kitna sapne jaisa hai"

Khushi: "yahannnn..are u sure!!!!!"

Sameer: "absolutely..or waise bhi is waqt kahin jaakar koi hotel dhoonne ka koi matlab nahin..
or mujhe to lagta bhi nahin ki yahan aas paas kuch milega
...tum aisa karo yahin ruko ...main abhi aata hoon"

Khushi: "ab tum kahan jaa rahe ho.,main bhi tumhaare saath chaloongi,,(she moved her head around) mujhe aakele yahan darr lagega"

Sameer: "ok ..to phir chalo,,kuch lakdiyan doondte hain,warna sardi se raat bhar main bura haal
ho jaaega"

sameer or khushi lakdiyan doondne nikal jaate hai,,

while walking...

Khushi: "u know maine kabhi bhi nahin socha tha,ki kabhi main aise kho jaaongi..isliye main thoda darr
gayi thi...or tumhe thankss bolne ki jagah tumhe he blame karna shuruu kar diya"

Sameer: "koi baat nahin nandu,aisa hota hai..or sach bataoon to tumhari dant bhi itni pyaari hai na..ki.."

..his leg suddenly stuk.and he fall down

Khushi: "are sambhal kar..tum theek to ho,,;or tum mujhe ye nandu kyon bula rahe ho,,mera naam khushi hai"

Sameer: "naam se kya farak padta hai,,tumhe pata chalna chahiye ki main tum se baat kar raha hoon"

Khushi: "ab wo to ovious hai,,is sunsaan jagah par tum mujh se hi baat karoge,koi doosra hai
kahan baat karne ke liye...waise tumne bhi to apna naam nahin bataya"

Sameer: "maine kaha na,jis naam se chaho bula lo,..naam main kya rakha hai"

Khushi: "ohhhhh itna bada naam ,koi chota naam nahin mila tumhe"

Sameer: "u are soo funny,,call me sameer..itna chota kaafi hai ya phir ..."

wo log baaton baaton main kuch lakdiyan lekar wapas usi jagah aa gaye,,,

sameer started rubbing stones to get some fire...but jab kaafi der tak aag nahin jali to..

Khushi: "tum is tarah aag jalaooge na  to subha ho jaaegi,,or ye aag nahin jalegi"

Sameer: "mujhe lagta hai ,u r right..."

he took out a lighter from his pocket,,or usne us lighter se lakdiyon main aag laga di

Khushi: "don't tell me,,,,jab tumhare paas lighter tha,to itni der se pathar kyon ghis rahe the"

Sameer: "actually main try kar raha tha..shayad jal jaye,,,filmon main ekha tha..but failed...
now come here u will feel better"

Khushi came close to himm.. ans there she sat down.....

sach main kuch rishtey ,insaan ki soch or yaddash se pare hote hai....tabhi to kuch pal ki
mulaakat bhi humme kisi ke itne kareeb le aati hai..ki lagta hai,hum saalon se use jaante hai,
to kabhi zindagi gujar jaati hai,or hum kisi theek se pehchan bhi nahin pate....


 

rajatrangini

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Posted: 20 October 2009 at 6:22am | IP Logged

contted.....

khushi: "tumhe darr nahin lagta??? "

Sameer: "darr!!! kis baat ka...life ka har moment precious hai..so live it to the fullest,or
waise bhi ,jo kuch normally hota hai...use kon yaad rakhta hai,,,ye wo pal hain jinhe hum
zindagi bhar yaad rakhenge"

phir kya tha,,ye baatcheet ka silsila yunhi chalta raha....

                        AE MERE HUMSAFAR EK ZARA INTZAAR
                        SUN SADAAYEN DE RAHI HAIN
                        MANZIL PYAAR KI
                        AE MERE HUMSAFER EK ZARA INTZAAR
                        SUN SADAAYEN DE RAHI HAI
                        MANJIL PYAAR KI
                      
                        AB HAI JUDAAYI KA MAUSAN
                        DO PAL KA MEHMAAN
                        KAISE NA JAAEGA ANDHERA
                        KYON NA THAMEGA TOOFAAN
                        KAISE NA MILEGI MANJIL PYAAR KI
                      
                        AE MERE HUMSAFAR EK ZARA INTZAAR
                        SUN SADAAYEN DE RAHI HAI
                        MAINJIL PYAAR KI

                        PYAR NE JAHAN PE RAHA HAI
                        JHOOM PE KADAM EK BAAR
                        WAHIN SE KHULA HAI KOI RASTA
                        WAHIN SE GIRI HAI DEEWAAR
                        ROKE KAB RUKI HAI
                        MANJIL PYAAR KI

                        AE MERE HUMSAFAR EK ZARA INTZAAR
                        SUN SADAAYEN DE RAHI HAI
                        MANZIL PYAAR KI....


or pata hi nahin chala ki kab subah ho gayi...

sameer ki ankh khuli,,to it was morning ..a beautiful morning
abhi wo hil nahin sakta tha...kyonki khushi uske shoulder par sir rahkar soo rahi thi..
he was just smiling ...aj he was genuinly happy..or wo khushi uski ankhon main nazar aa rahi thi

sameer(thinking): tum bhale hi mujhe nahin pehchaanti,,,but tumhara dil mujhe pahchaanta hai nandu
isliye ,tum dekhna; 7 days to bohut zyada hai ...within 5 days main tumhe is baat ka ehsaas kara doonga
that how much u love me....
tumhe jagaane ka dil to nahin kar raha but....mujhe bohut bhook lagi hai sooo..


Sameer: "khushi,,get up....subah ho gayi hai,or humme shimla pohunchna hai"

khushi: "gud morning"

as she completely opened her eyes...and saw around "wowww its so beautiful..maine aaj tak itni khoobsurat
jagah nahin dekhi,,,,"

wo wahan se uthi,or khushi se jhoomne lagi.."jante ho ye sab maine bas kitaabon main padha tha,
kabhi nahin soocha tha ki ek din main jab subah anken kholoongi to mere saamne ek lake hogi
jahan ki thandi thandi hawaaen ...ohhhhhhh or ye chidiyon ki chahchaaht ..its all like a dream"

khushi apni hi duniya main khoyi hui thi,,or sameer bas use dekh kar muskura raha tha

khushi: "aise kya dekh rahe ho"

Sameer: "well,...kal raat se hum yanhi hai,,approx. 10 hours"

khushi: "yaaa ,but wo raat thi,and now its a new morning..phir tumhi ne to kaha tha life ka har moment precious
hai ..live it to the fullest ......well ..or bhi reasons hain....jaise,, kal main bohut
darri hui thi,isliye notice nahin kiya..or....its was night time to kuch nazar bhi nahin aaya..or.."

Sameer: "or???"

Khushi: "orrrr kal main yahan ek ajnabee ke saath thi ,or aaj ...ek dost ke saath..,thoda farak
to padta hai"(and she smiled innocently)

sameer utha,or khushi ko pakad kar bola "ab chalo yahan se mujhe bohut bhook lagi hai"

khushi: "haan haan theek hai,pehle mujhe muh to dho lene do"

sameer just paased a smile ,or khushi lake ke paas chali gayi,,to get freshen up,or sameer ye sochne laga
ki unhe kis raaste se jana chahiye

tabhi paani ki kuch bocharein uske uupar aayi,,and he turned back

sameer: "ye sab kya hai khushii"

khushi ne ek aur baar uske upar paani daalte hue kaha "ye india hai dear ,,yahan khane se pehle
nahana to padega"

Sameer: "uuuuuu,abhi batata hoon"

and both of them started running,here and there...or hona kya tha..in the end khushi ne sameer ko lake main
gira hi diya....

Khushi: "dekha girls are the best"

samreer momorise the day when they use to fight ...especially the fight for cockroch ..and said(thinking)
"girls vrs boys ..naaa abhi tum khushi nahin ho ,,nandini ho ..or nandini to kaise jawab dena hai
ye main acchii tarah se janta hoon"

Sameer started acting ,,ki us ka per phas gaya hai

Sameer: "khushi ..please apna haath do ,mera per phas gaya hai"

khushi ghabra gayi,,or jaise hi usne sameer ko apna hath diya..he pulled her into the lake..he put his
hand around her waist...and his eyes into her eyes...........or ek pal ke liye sab kuch tham gaya.,,
par agle hee pal,khushi ne apni nazarein jhuka leen or sameer ne bhi muskuraate hue use apni baanhoo
ki kaid se aazaad kar diya..

Sameer: "well...sorry dear ,when its boys vrs girls ..then i can't help u..ab soch kya rahi ho
bahar niklo"

wo dono lake se bahar nikal aate hain..

Sameer: "tum bhi na,itni mushkil se raat bhar main kapde sookhe the,ab phir .....ab to chalo,,
come this way,,"

khushi: "but sameer i think we should go that way"

Sameer: "are main kah raha hoon na idhar se jaayenge,us taraf kafi chadhaaii hai"

Khushi: "nahin mujhe to us taraf se hii jana hai...pleaseee"

Sameer: "acchaa theek hai ,,chalo..tum kabhi nahin sudhrogi"

Khushi: "tum to aise kah rahe ho jaise mujhe saalon se jante ho"

Sameer: "nahin mera matlab hai,,tum bohut naughty ho or ziddi bhi"

khushi bas wahin ruk gayi or kuch sochne lagi

Sameer: "kya hua,tum ruk kyon gayin"

Khushi: (very seriously)"pata hai main kabhi bhi aisee nahin thi,,either i was naughty...or bachpan main bhi maine
kabhi kisi cheez ke liye zidd nahin ki..i don know ki yahan aa kar mujhe kya ho gaya hai???"

Sameer: "well mujhe pata hai ki tumhare saath ye sab kyon ho raha hai"

khushi: "kyon..kyon ho raha hai ????"

he tooked a pause....

                                          

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