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Posted: 14 October 2009 at 10:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rajatrangini

Originally posted by maria_awan

really nice part nivedita
thankss dear
ur welcome dear Wink

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Posted: 14 October 2009 at 11:30am | IP Logged

Superb update.It's too good.Khushi is in trouble now, sameer kaya usse bachayaga,

tumne aacha suspense create kia.
Wait for the next part dear.

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Posted: 15 October 2009 at 5:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Superb update.It's too good.Khushi is in trouble now, sameer kaya usse bachayaga,

tumne aacha suspense create kia.
Wait for the next part dear.
 
thanks rakhi..
keep on roll because all suspences will flew of when they will actually meet

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Posted: 15 October 2009 at 5:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by maria_awan

all the updates are nice dear ClapClapClapsorry 4 late reply nivi  i was not heer all are very nice waiting 4 sameer to reescue our khushiWink
 
thanksa lot maria..i m glad that u all are liking it..
well i m sorry but i will make u wait a bit more for it..because i will be posting the next part after diwali.
and one more thingh...rajat's pic in ur profile is suparb..
i really loved it

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Posted: 16 October 2009 at 7:04am | IP Logged
hey sweetie
sorry for the late reply
bahot busy thi
i had 2 deadlines...workin me ..... off  for that
anyways ur update was awesome
aur ye kya khushi is in danger....sammeeer kaho ho tum
anyways...awesome and lovely as always
jaldi se nxt update kar do plzzzzz

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Posted: 18 October 2009 at 1:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by letsrockshona

hey sweetie
sorry for the late reply
bahot busy thi
i had 2 deadlines...workin me ..... off  for that
anyways ur update was awesome
aur ye kya khushi is in danger....sammeeer kaho ho tum
anyways...awesome and lovely as always
jaldi se nxt update kar do plzzzzz
 
thankss dear..
well don be sorry i can understant..
even i was too busy in this festive season..so couldn't post the part..
but  today i m posting it ..enjoy..

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Posted: 18 October 2009 at 1:49am | IP Logged

contted...

they moved few steps ahead..tabhi unhe phir se help ki aawaaz sunayi deti hai..

SK: "listen guys,,i can't go like this,,.ho sakta hai ,kisi ko hummari zaroorat
ho..at least humme ek baar dekhna to chahiye..or rahi late hone ki baat to
hum ek raat yahan bhi bita sakte hain...lekin wahan pohuchkar main chan se nahin soo
paaounga.."

Emma: "i think u are right,,at least we should go n see,shayad hum koi madad
kar paayen"

SK or Emma ko jate dekh ,sab unke peeche peeche calne lage.


IN THE BUS

khushi: "neha ,,please don't move ..koi bhi movement se bus ka balance bigaarh
jaaega ,"

Neha: "but,,hum aise khade bhi to nahin rah sakte,,nahin hilenge to bhi thodi hi
der main ye bus neeche gir hi jaaegi,,ye pedh ise kab tak roke rakhega"

Khushi: "mujhe kuch samajh nahin aa raha ,,what to do;;neha tum gate ke paas ho bahar nikalne ki
koshish karo"

neha jaise hi apne kadam gate ki taraf badhati hai,,bus hilne lagti hai..
to wo wapas apni jagah par aa jati hai.
everyone was shouting,,"khushi ,naha..are u ok"

from somewhere mr dayal has arranged a big rope...but unki samajh main nahin aa raha tha ki
how to save them#######

tabhi wahan sameer or uske dost pohuchte hain..."oh my god " Emma said.

"see that bus has fallen" she added

they get more closer to the place..sameer asked a girl standing over there
"is there someone in that bus?"

the girl replied "yaaa ,2 girls of our group are their in it..please do somethingh"

sameer or uske dost mr dayal ke paas jaate hain;or sameer unse wo rope le leta hai
..he took out his jacket...aur us rope ke ek end ko apni waist par tightly bandh leta hai..

Jai: "ye tum kya kar rahe ho?,,pagal ho gaye ho kya"

sameer smiled and said
 "don worry jai,itni jaldii marne ka mera koi iraada nahin hai,,bus tum
log rope ke doosre end ko kas kar pakardna..ya phir aisa karo tie it to that tree,,
or jaise main kahoon waise ise upar niche karna"

while they were disscussing the stratagy ,diya wahan rote rote aati hai

Diya: "pleasee meri behan us bus main hai ,aap use bacha lijiye "

Jai: "yaar ye ladkiyaan itna roti kyon hain"

SK: "dekho ,dont cry.i promoise...main poori koshish karoonga,bus aap rona band kijiye"

sameer or uske dost road ke us side jaate hai ,jahan se bus neeche gayi thi..
sameer wahan se neche utarne lagata hai,,

Emma: "sambhal kar ,,pleasee,don't hurt urself"

SK: "u just take care of this rope,,main jab kahoon ise uupar kheenchna"

sameer ,slowly slowly neeche utarne lagta hai,holding the rope..or us tree tak
pohuch jata hai jis par bas atki hui thi..
every one on the raod ,was keenly observing him and keeping their fingures crossed
were praying for their well being.

jab wo bas ke kareeb pohuch jata hai,,he screemed "please aap log dheere dheere

is bus se bahar nikalne ki kosish keejiye"

IN THE BUS

Khushi: "neha lagta hai ,there is someone too help us..tum baahar niklo..jaise jaise tum
baahar ti taraf jaaogi main aage bardti hoon,,i think it will make up the balance"

neha (as she was nearer to the door)reached the door ..very cosiously

SK: "good!!ab hold my hand" sameer ne uski taraf apna hath badhaya..

she holded his hand tightly ,,


SK: "see,,u please try to get up by this rope,,,try it ..its not so tough,,i will support u ,,or uupar jaaker
is rope ko thoda or loose karne ko kehna"

neha ko uupar ki taraf chadhate hue,,sameer realised ki uski waist par jo rope usne bandhi thi,wo dheele
hoti jaa rahi hai,,so he just rolled his left hand in the rope for the proper grip..and again came near to
the bus

SK: "dekhiye ,,aap bhi please baahar aane ki koshish keejiye..i know thoda difficuilt hai..but try it"

khushi jaise hi aage ki taraf chalne  ki koshish karti ,bus ka balance kharab ho gata,
isliye use move karne main bhi darr lag raha tha.

SK: "dekhiye aap agar baahar nahin aayengi to phir i can't do anythingh"

Khushi: "mujhe bohut darr lag raha hai,,"

SK: "dekho main is bus ke door par hi hoon ,tum bas yahan tak aa jao..pleasee"

khushi badi mushkil se door tak aane ke liye raazi ho jaati hai,,and very slowly she aproached to the door
while she was standing on the edge sameer use apna haath deta hai

SK: "hold my hand"

khushi hesitatly uska haath pakad leti hai..
but jaise hii khushi sameer ka hath pakadti hai,,he feels something ;;something
very different..he turned his head towards khushi..........and...........
"nandini"

he wassssssssssss in a complete shock......

it was a moment for which he was waiting for last 23 years..use pata tha ,ki wo ek na ek din
usse zaroor milegee ,but usne kabhi nahin socha tha 'is tarah'
this was the most happiest moment of his life..in a complete shocking situation

for a second he just became blanked...his whole body get loosen up..
or uske haath se wo rope chut gayi....and..... both of then fall down from there.

***********************************************************************************

 ek pal ke liye sab kuch ruk gaya ,a complete silence...

Emma : "o my god..sk" she screemed

diya also started crying,,

tabhi jai ,(he was holding the rope) rope chod kar wahan aaya and said "relex guys,,kuch nahin hoga
un logon ko,,,maine khud dekha hai,neeche paani hai..i mean must be a kind of lake,,
wo log paani main hi gire hain"

Angel: "thanks god"

Diya: "but khushi doesn't know how to swim"

Emma: "don worry,sk is a very good swimmer,he has promised u ,to save ur sister na..then he will do it"

 

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Posted: 18 October 2009 at 7:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rajatrangini

Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Superb update.It's too good.Khushi is in trouble now, sameer kaya usse bachayaga,

tumne aacha suspense create kia.
Wait for the next part dear.
 
thanks rakhi..
keep on roll because all suspences will flew of when they will actually meet
Welcome dear.Ok, I'll wait.

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