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Posted: 13 October 2009 at 5:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by letsrockshona

wonderful update huni
 
thankss dear..hope u like todays tooo

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contted...

after a long journey they landed on delhi airport...

delhi: wo shahar,jisne prithvi or nandini ko itna door kar diya..
now everything is being changed ,but sameer !!aj bhi us din ke dard ko mahsoos kar
raha hai...wo goliyon ki aawazen ,,wo logon kee cheekhen,,sab kuch uske
jahan main ek dum taaza hain..

wo haadsa shayad aaj kisi ko bhi yaad nahin hoga..par wo beetee yaaden sameer
ki ankhon ke saamne kuch youn jhoom rahi hain ki wo ek pal ke liye khud par kaabo
nahin paya or bas wahin khada raha,,still silent..

Emma: "what happened SK"

emma kee awaaz se maano ek sapna toota ho,,sameer just reacted "kuch nahin ,,chalo"

they all set into a taxi...sameer was sitting on the window seat..
while travelling,,they passed through that devil road...wahi road
jis par wo police station tha,,jahan tak pohuchne ke liye us waqt prithvi kuch bhi
kar sakta tha.....

kitne saal beet gaye,,lakin sameer aaj bhi us jagah ko nahin bhula paaya
jahan usne apni akhiri saansen lee thi.

mere liye ye sab likhna itna mushkil nahin hai,,par jab bhi is baare
main soochti hoon..to lagta hai..kitna darawna hoga wo manjar,..jab
sab kuch narmal hota hue bhi,,aap usee jagah hui dehshat ko yaad karen.

khair ye sab chodhkar aage badte hain..

to jaise ki sameer ki khala ne usse kaha tha,,they reached to the 'darghah'

usne wahan sajda kiya or peer baba ke paas gaya,,ofcourse apne doston
ke saath

            jo bandishen thi zamaane ki tod aaya hoon
            main tere waaste duniya ko chod aaya hoon
            aaya tere dar par deewana
            aaya tere dar par deewana
            aaya ho aaya..aaya tera deewaana
            aaya tere dar par deewaana
            tera dewaana tera deewaana tera deewaana
            aaya tere dar par deewana
            ye hai tera hi saudaai
            ye hai tera hi sahadaayi
            tere ishq main hai ise mar jaana
            aaya tere dar par deewaana

peer baba sameer ko dekhkar muskuraye ,or bole "tu aa gaya beta..maine kaha tha
na ki jab bhi sahi waqt aayega,,tuhje apna rasta apne aap hi mil jaaega,,
or dekh tu aa gaya.."

SK: "baba,,kya main ab usse miloonga?? "

peer baba: "milna bichadna to laga hi rehta hai..bas sabr kar or,apne
vishwas par humesha vishwas rakhna..wo uuparwala humesha tere saath hai.
apne dil ki baat sun,,kyonki wo hi tujhe sahi raasta dikhaega..
baki sab us par khod de,,."

Tom: "what is he saying,,i mean i am not understanding what he wants to say"

SK: "don worry,,its not for u"

they all left the place...

Jai: "to bolo ab kahan chalna hai"

SK: "SHIMLA"

Jai: "SHIMLA???..i mean jab bhi koi india aata hai to wo delhi ghoomta hai.,
taj mahal jata hai,,,even i egree to rajasthan,,but shimla!!!!kyon??"

SK: "kyonki mera dil kah raha hai.."

Jai: "bhai ye kon see baat hai,,agar main kahoon mera dil to mumbai jaane ka hai
to"

SK held his baggage up on his shoulder and said: "to tum jaoo,main to shimla hi jaaonga"

Emma: "stop this,,agar wo shimla jane ke liye kah raha hai .to wahin
chalte hain na,,it doesn't make any difference..waise maine suna hai
shimla is a very beautiful place"

Tom: "yaaah ,even i m feeling hot here,,india is tooo hot ,my vote is for shimla"

Angel: "pleaseee jai,,its final.."

Jai: "ok ok to by train or plane"

Angel: "train...i hav never travelled in a train,,"

they all reached the railway staion,,booked the tickets of shimla.
its boggie no.A10

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PLACE---railway station of poona.

a very adorable sound can be heard here "girls,,take up all ur things,
see nothing should be left behind,,and get up into the train"

ohhh chaliye dekhte hai ye hai kon hai

Miss kriti

and Mr dayal

ye wo do professors hai ,jo is trip par apne students ke saath jaa rahe hain.

Mr dayal: "so all the 50 grls are here ,,get ut seats in boggie  no.A10

so all the students get seteled in the train..and it started moving towards its
 destination...

 

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contted...

PLACE---in the train

Mr dayal: "so students,,are u ready for enjoying" :Tongue

" yesss"  LOLLOLLOLall screemed.

Mr dayal: "then wat are u waiting for..lets play antakshari"

Miss kriti: "look mr dayal ,aap bhi kya bacchaon ke saath bacche ban gaye hai"

Mr dayal: "kya baat kar rahi hai aap ,yahi to time hai enjoy karne ka;;
so girls divide urself in 2 groups,,one team is mine and one of miss kriti"

"hurrreeeeeeeee"  Smile

with all masti and pleasure,,they were supposed to reach delhi..

Mr dayal: "chalo sab apna apna ,saaman collect karo ,we will go by
bus from delhi"

Diya: "but sir ye train to seethe shimla hi jaa rahi hai,,then why by bus"

Mr dayal: "beta humne pata kiya tha,ye train,shimla se ek station pehle
tak hi jaa rahi hai,,uske aage ke track par kuch kaam chal raha hai..
wahan se koi convince milna mushkil hai ,,isliye hum delhi se hi bus main jaaenge
..........and u will enjoy more in the bus ,,,so be happy"

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PLACE---- delhi railway station

Tom: "where is the train?? its time.." >:(

SK: "yaa... but this is india ,yahan trains time par nahin aati..,infact we are lucky
ki aj its only half an hour late"

ANOUNCEMENT--the train from mumbai to shimla is arriving at platform no 2 ..

Jai: "guys move to platform no.2"


INSIDE THE TRAIN

Miss kriti: "ok girls we are getting to the platform,,u all should move out
from the front door,,be ready"

THE TRAIN ARRIVED

SK: "boggie no. A10..,Jai -tom u search in front we are seeing at the back"

Jai: 'okies"

they all were searching for the boggie,,jai has got it..usne sameer ko aawaz lagaii

Jai: "SK A10,,come here.."

sameer ,emma and angel rushed towards A10

sameer lifted his right leg to get inside the train,and he just spoted for a second..
usne boggie ki front door ki taraf dekha,,wahan se some girls were getting down..and
suddenly

Jai: "what happened sk,,uupar chado na"

SK: "yaa"

as he stepped up into the train ,,khushi stepped down on the platfrom,,from the front
door of the similar boggie.

sameer and group has occupied a chamber ,,and sk was sitting on the window seat, busy talking
with angel,,at that moment khushi passed away ;;..infront of that window..
sameer felt her existence and he turned back ,and started peeping from that window,,
but it was too late,,she was ..gone..

the train started moving......

Jai: "see guys main kya laya hoon,",he opened a packed

Angel: "wat is this"

jai: "it is samosa,,khake dekho,its really very tasty,,,or waise bhi india aakar yahan
ke khane ka mazza nahin liya jaae to aana bekar hai"

they all enjoyed those delicious samosas,,and kulladh walli chai..

**************************************************************

khushi was moving with her troop..outside the railawy station..she felt that
someone is following her.wo peeche mudkar dekhtii hai,,,no one

wo log thoda aur aage chalte hain,,and suddenly peeche se ek haath aata hai
towards khushi's shouler..wo ek dum se darr kar peeche palattee hai..

"raj!!!,,tum yahan " she said very suprisingly

Raj: "yaa,main...sorry tumhe darra diya na.."

Khushi: "nahin wo bas..,hum log shimla jaa rahe hain" khushi ne baat ko badalte hue kaha

Raj: "yaa i know,maine tumhare ghar call kiya tha,aunti ne bataya,that u are going
shimla ,to maine soch tum delhi hokar jaaogi,isliye tum se milne aa gaya"

maahol ko kuch light banane ke liye he added "wo main to late ho gaya tha,,
but see i hav a good luck ,ki phir bhi tum mil gayin...."

after a pause he added "main tumhare liye kuch gift laya tha.".he took out a
samll box .

khushi: "ismain kya hai.."

Raj: "kuch khaas nahin,bas ek chota sa gift hai,i hope u will like it"

Diya: "ohhhh khushi,,abhi se gift shift shuruu ho gaye ,,"

khushi,,ne diya ko chup hone ka ishara kiya,,and said "thankss raj"

raj: "hav a happy jurney,,bye"

khushi: "bye"...and passed a sweet smile

raj: "always keep smiling ,,tum muskurate hue bohut acchaii lagti ho"

they left from their,,,and get loaded in the tourist bus...raj came there till
to see off khushi and diya..

 

******************************************************************


 



Edited by rajatrangini - 13 October 2009 at 5:31am

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Originally posted by rajatrangini

 

 

contted...

PLACE----G M W girls colledge poona

the classes were suspened so diya and khushi were just sitting in the corridor of
the college,..
and khushi was just admiring her engagement ring..
diya: "its beautiful..isint it?"

khushi: "yaaa.."..in a low voice

diya: "accha ..tue raaj se baat kya ki thi?"

khushi: "kuch khaas nahi..bas yuhi"

diya: "yaar u are too dumb...kuch to excitment hona chahiye na life main..
and he is such a hansom boy..at least start it with friendship"

khushi: "hmmm..but yaar i m still confused"

diya: "confused for what?...don't u like him"

khushi: "no..i mean ye baat nahi hai..but i don know,,wether he is the right person
for me or not"

diya: "ek baat to main clear kar deti hoon..ki tera mr perfect is duniya main to
tujhe milne waala nahi hai..
so its better u make ur mind.."

suddenly a croud approched towrads the notic board..

a big notice was been displaced on the notice board for the final year students..
"a tour to shimla"..get ur name registered now!!!!1

on the way while going towards their home

Diya: "woow khushi i am sooo exited,,hum log shimla jaaenge,,kitna mazza
aaegana"

khushi: "yaa main aaj tak kabhi hill station par nahin gayi,,(she said in a dreamy  mood)it will be
really exiciting,,but tu to bilkul chote bacchon ki tarah behave kar rahi hai
pehle mom dad se jaane ki permission to mil gaye"

Diya: "chachi ko to main mana hi loongi,,or nahin maani to bhi tu chachu se baat karna,,
wo teri baat zaroor maan jaaenge"

khushi: "acchaa,acchaa,chal ghar bhi aagaya,,"

they entered the house mrs agarwal was watching television..

Diya: "chachi u know hum shimla jaa rahe hain,,"

Mrs agarwal: "shimla????? "

Khushi: "haan maa wo colledge tour jaa raha hai,,"

Mrs agarwal: "kitne dinon ke liye or kab?? "

Diya: "chachi bas 8 days ke liye,next weak jaa rahe hai ,,pleaseeeee jaane dijiyee na ;
phir to khushi chalii jaaegi,uske saath phir jaane ka mouka nahin milega"

Mrs agarwal: "theek hai,theek hai chale jaana,,but wahan zyada shararat mat
karna or wahan kafi thand rehti hai to bimaar mat padd jana"

Diya: "no chachi hum apna khayal rahkenge,,thank u ,thank u very much"

****************************************************************

PLACE----london...in sameer's bedroom

Asma: "sameer beta kya baat hai ,aaj tu nashta karne nahin aaya?? "

Sameer: "wo khala kuch nahin ,bas bhook nahin thi"

tabhi wahan ek servent aata hai

servent: "sameer baba wo aapke dost aaye hai"

Asma: "aisa karo tum un logon ko yahin par le aao,,pata nahin aaj ye sab itni
subah subah kyon aaye hai"

Emma ,Tom ,Jai, and angel enter in Sameer's room,,seeing asma there they all wish her
"good morning khala"

Asma: "good morning bata,,tum log baat karo main abhi aati hoon"

she walks away calling the servent ....

SK: "kya baat hai ,tum sab itni subah subah,,any problem"

Emma: "kyon hum tumse problem ke time hi milne aa sakte hai "

SK: "nahin mare kahne ka wo matlab nahin tha"

Angel: "leave that matlab,,SK listen ..we are planing a trip,,"

SK: "trip??? "

Emma: "yaa SK,kahin saath ghoomne chalte hain ,,will hav fun"

SK: "but where?? "

Tom: "we had a great fight on this topic,, but at last we hav finalised it"

there was a complete pause for a minute

SK: "i m waiting,,where"

Tom: "INDIA,,jai has suggested it"

Emma: "ya actually we thought,,hum jahan ke music ko use karte hai
we should go to that place to hav a better knowledge about it"

india ka naam sunke sameer ke ankhon main ek ajeeb saa glow aa gaya

tabhi wahan asma aati hai,,"kahan jane kii baat ho rahi hai"

SK: "khala ye log india jane ka program bana rahe hain,,mujhe bhi jana hai
pleaseeeeeee khala,,aap dad se baat karo na"

Asma: "india...acchaa theek hai ,,tu chala ja,,magar tujhe yaad hai jab hum
london aaye the ,tab main tujhe ek darghah par le gayi thi...sabse pehle wahan jana,,or
babaji ka ashriwaad  leke phir kahin jana"

SK: "oh khala i love u soo much"

Asma: "aacchaa ,,to bataoo kab ki tickets book kara doon"

Emma: "actually khala hum tickets book kara chuke hai,,4 days baad ki"

SK: "tum logon ne tickets bhi book kara di"

Tom: "yaa actually we were knowing ,,u will not say no for india"

yeh sameer was soo happy today,,he could feel ki ab zyada waqt nahin bacha
use uski nandini se milne main..
he was damm sure ..ki uska intezaar zaroor khatam hoga..god can't be soo unfair..

in the night he as usual walkup in the balcony,,and was remembering
his past moments...
              zab kahin bhi aahat hui
              yuun laga ki tu aa gaya
              khusboo ke jhonke ki tarah
              meri saanse mahkaagaya
              ek wo daur tha hum sada paas the
              ab to hain fansle darmiyaan

              main yahan tu wahan
              zindagi hai kahan
              tu hi tu hai sanam
              dekhta hoon jahan
              need aati nahin
              yaad jaati nahin
              ab to tanha jiya jaye na naaa


he said "i m comming nandini,,bas kuch din aur..."

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Sorry for late reply.It's wonderful update.

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It's superb updates.Lovely dear.Now wait from sameer and khushi kab mile?

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Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

It's superb updates.Lovely dear.Now wait from sameer and khushi kab mile?
 
thankss rakhi..
i hope u will like today's update too..

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contted....

 while they were moving with the beautiful nature .....

train achaanak ek station par kaafi der ke liye ruk gayi..

Emma: "kya shimla aa gaya"

SK: "no ,,ye to solan  hai ,shimla would be the next station,,"

Jai: "to ye train yahan kyon ruki hui hai,,main abhi dekh kar aata hoon"

jai get out of the train,,or bahar jaakar station master se poocha "ye train yahan kyon ruki hai?"

station master: "ye train aage nahin jaaegi,,track par kaam chal raha hai,
agar aapko simla jana hai,,to taxi ,,ya bus dekh leegiye"

he ran towards ,the train ,,and entered the boggie..

jai: "chalo yaaron,,ab train ka safar yahan tak hi tha"

SK: "kya hua?? "

Jai: "aage track par kaam chal raha hai,,train aage nahin jaaegi"

SK: "wow!!ab mazza aaega,,get up guys"

Tom: "now how we will go from here"

Sk: "dekhte hai,koi taxi mil jaati hai ,,otherwise we hav to see for lift"

wo sab train se nikalkar main road par chalne lagte hai,,taxi ke liye try karte
hai but koi baat nahin banti..
now they see for the secon option,,,soooo finaly they see a truck ,and they ask
for lift..

truck wala: "kee hue puttar,kithe jana hai"

Sk: "sardarji wo humme shimla tak jana hai"

truck wala: "puttar shimla to nahin jaanda ,,magar haan thoda pehle tak chod doonga,
chalna hai to aa jaao"

koi doosra option nahin tha ,,isliye wo log truck main beth gaye.

it was a bit sophasticated for those forigners to sit in a truck
 ,but wo kehte hai na
museebat padne par gadhe ko bhi baap banana padta hai.
so somehow they managed in the truck,,

SK: "kya hua tom,...ye indian sawaari hai,,ohhh abhi to tumhe ek or cheez main
sair karaanee hai 'bell gadhi' i mean bullak cart"

Jai: "SK mujhe lagta hai ,tum aj tom ka band bajaa kar hi rahoge"

Tom: "well its not that bad,,..just it seems that ki mujhe electric shock laga hai
,,its shaking me tooo much"

all started laughing on this. ;LOL

truck wala: "lo bachoon,ab tum sab ne yahin utarna padega,,yahan se shimla kareb 4-5 km hoga
pedal,,pahaadi ke raste se jaaoge to,,3-3 1/2 km padega"

they all get down from the truck...

"thank u sardarji" replied all.

Sk: "chalo,is taraf se chalte hai" he pointed towads a hill

Angel: "wat are u saying we hav to climb that hill"

Sk: "yaaa,bas ye hill hi cross karni hai,uske aage we will be there in shimla."

Tom: "okk,now no other choice,lets go"

Emma: "yaa why u all are sounding soo low ,its mountain climbing,,hav fun"

they all start mountain climbing ...thoda thakaane wala kaam hai,,but they were enjoying

*********************************************************************

the turist bus in which khushi n group was travelling ,..was also approching
shimla...suddenly...somethingh happened...and bus stoped

miss kriti: "what happened; bus kyon rok dii"

dirver: "madam ,wo bus main kuch kharaabi aa gayi hai,dekhna padega"

girlss: "ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh"

mr dayal: "are bhaii shant ho jaao,,ya phir aisa karo ,sab niche aa jaoo
yahan bhi pahaadh to hai hi,yahin shuroo ho jao"

mr dayal to driver--bhai ye bataoo ,yahan se shimla kitna door hai

driver: "sir bas 4-5 km hoga."

mr dayal: "acchaa ,jaldi repair karo......ok girls get down"
infact mujhe bhi aisa hi lagta hai ,,shayad pichle
sab log bus se niche utar aate hai ,,,or wahan ki haseen wadiyon ka mazaa
lene lagte hain,,tabhi wahan baarish hone lagtii hai.

Diya: "wow ye haseen wadiyan ,or baarish ,ye sab to bilkul filmon jaisa ho raha hai."

khushi ko bhi baarish main bheegna bohut pasand tha,,so she was also enjoying..

************************************************************************

SK: "aaj kitne time baad , baarish main beegne main mazza aaya hai.."

Jai: "ya sk apne desh ki mitti ki khusboo hi alag hai,,ye baat wahan london main kahan"

 thodi der main baarish band ho jaati hai....or wo sab hill ke top par pohuch jaate
hain.


Emma: "wowwwwww so beautiful" wo bas us jagah ko dekhti hi rah jaati hai..

Sk: "yaaa it is,,ise jaanku hill kehte hai,,yahan se poora shimla nazar aata hai..
abhi to kuch nahin ,,jab snow fall hota hai ..to it looks like heaven"

Emma: "tum to aise kah rahe ho jaise hummesha se yahin rehte ho"

Sk: "infact mijhe bhi yahi lagta hai,,shayad pichle janam main yahin rehta tha."

Emma: "what??? u belive on this stuff"

sammer just passed a smile and said ,,"ab chalo warna raat hone se pehle nahin pohuch
paayenge"


they started walking...

********************************************************************

diya: "yaar ,kya baarish thi ,,but ab to mujhe bhook lag rahi hai"

khushi: "are bus main khana hai,,main abhi lekar aati hoon...neha(a friend)
mere saath bus tak chalo"

neha: "yaa sure"

both of them walked to the bus...
wo bus main chade..

Khushi: "wo bag nahin mil raha ,jisme khana rakha tha"

Neha: "khushi ,yahan aage diver seat ke paas bhi kuch bags hain ,main yahan dekhti hoon"

khushi: "yaa dekho,,black bag hai"

Neha: "yaa its there,,,but bohut niche hai"

neha pulled the bag to take it out..and unknowingly bag ke saath saath
bus ke brakes bhi upar ho jaate hain
as bus was standing on a slope,,or baarish ki wagah se soil kafi slipery ho gayi thi,,bus peeche
ki taraf slip karne lagti hai..

Khushi: "ye kya ho raha hai,,ye bus peeche kyon ja rahi hai"

isse pehle ki wo log kuch soch paayen..bas khaii main girne lagti hai,,but
ek tree main jaa kar aatak jaati hai.

they start shouting...HELP!!! HELP!!!

even jab troop ke sab log ye dekhte hai..wo log bhi pareshaan ho jaate hain ,or help
dhoonne lagte hain..

****************************************************************

SK: "hav u heard someone shouting..for help"

Emma: "yaa shayad peeche se aawaz aayi hai"

SK: "chalo chal kar dekhte hain"

Tom: "if we will go back ,,than we will not be able to reach before night..
so pleasee go ahead,,"

tom ke kehne par wo log aage ki taraf chalne lagte hain..

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all the updates are nice dear ClapClapClapsorry 4 late reply nivi  i was not heer all are very nice waiting 4 sameer to reescue our khushiWink

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