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Posted: 12 October 2009 at 3:53am | IP Logged
hey lovely characters...lovely pics huni
and well written update
please jaldi se next update kar do
thanks
and thanks for the pm too

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Posted: 12 October 2009 at 5:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Lovely intro and wonderful part dear.I enjoyed it lot.
Wait for the next part dear.
thankss rakhi..

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Posted: 12 October 2009 at 5:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by maria_awan

really nice dear  our sam was great and khusi ki enagagement ho gayi ab no worry ik year hai abhi hope who sam ki hi hogi Winksayi kaha na sweeti waisay what is ur real name dear Wink
thankss dear...yaa itni jaldi sab thode hi ho jaaega..
abhi to kahani shuru hui hai..
and yaa my name is nivedita..
 

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Posted: 12 October 2009 at 5:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by letsrockshona

hey lovely characters...lovely pics huni
and well written update
please jaldi se next update kar do
thanks
and thanks for the pm too
 
thankss dear..
yaa i will update it soon..definately..
 

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Posted: 12 October 2009 at 5:46am | IP Logged

 

 

contted...

PLACE----G M W girls colledge poona

the classes were suspened so diya and khushi were just sitting in the corridor of
the college,..
and khushi was just admiring her engagement ring..
diya: "its beautiful..isint it?"

khushi: "yaaa.."..in a low voice

diya: "accha ..tue raaj se baat kya ki thi?"

khushi: "kuch khaas nahi..bas yuhi"

diya: "yaar u are too dumb...kuch to excitment hona chahiye na life main..
and he is such a hansom boy..at least start it with friendship"

khushi: "hmmm..but yaar i m still confused"

diya: "confused for what?...don't u like him"

khushi: "no..i mean ye baat nahi hai..but i don know,,wether he is the right person
for me or not"

diya: "ek baat to main clear kar deti hoon..ki tera mr perfect is duniya main to
tujhe milne waala nahi hai..
so its better u make ur mind.."

suddenly a croud approched towrads the notic board..

a big notice was been displaced on the notice board for the final year students..
"a tour to shimla"..get ur name registered now!!!!1

on the way while going towards their home

Diya: "woow khushi i am sooo exited,,hum log shimla jaaenge,,kitna mazza
aaegana"

khushi: "yaa main aaj tak kabhi hill station par nahin gayi,,(she said in a dreamy  mood)it will be
really exiciting,,but tu to bilkul chote bacchon ki tarah behave kar rahi hai
pehle mom dad se jaane ki permission to mil gaye"

Diya: "chachi ko to main mana hi loongi,,or nahin maani to bhi tu chachu se baat karna,,
wo teri baat zaroor maan jaaenge"

khushi: "acchaa,acchaa,chal ghar bhi aagaya,,"

they entered the house mrs agarwal was watching television..

Diya: "chachi u know hum shimla jaa rahe hain,,"

Mrs agarwal: "shimla????? "

Khushi: "haan maa wo colledge tour jaa raha hai,,"

Mrs agarwal: "kitne dinon ke liye or kab?? "

Diya: "chachi bas 8 days ke liye,next weak jaa rahe hai ,,pleaseeeee jaane dijiyee na ;
phir to khushi chalii jaaegi,uske saath phir jaane ka mouka nahin milega"

Mrs agarwal: "theek hai,theek hai chale jaana,,but wahan zyada shararat mat
karna or wahan kafi thand rehti hai to bimaar mat padd jana"

Diya: "no chachi hum apna khayal rahkenge,,thank u ,thank u very much"

****************************************************************

PLACE----london...in sameer's bedroom

Asma: "sameer beta kya baat hai ,aaj tu nashta karne nahin aaya?? "

Sameer: "wo khala kuch nahin ,bas bhook nahin thi"

tabhi wahan ek servent aata hai

servent: "sameer baba wo aapke dost aaye hai"

Asma: "aisa karo tum un logon ko yahin par le aao,,pata nahin aaj ye sab itni
subah subah kyon aaye hai"

Emma ,Tom ,Jai, and angel enter in Sameer's room,,seeing asma there they all wish her
"good morning khala"

Asma: "good morning bata,,tum log baat karo main abhi aati hoon"

she walks away calling the servent ....

SK: "kya baat hai ,tum sab itni subah subah,,any problem"

Emma: "kyon hum tumse problem ke time hi milne aa sakte hai "

SK: "nahin mare kahne ka wo matlab nahin tha"

Angel: "leave that matlab,,SK listen ..we are planing a trip,,"

SK: "trip??? "

Emma: "yaa SK,kahin saath ghoomne chalte hain ,,will hav fun"

SK: "but where?? "

Tom: "we had a great fight on this topic,, but at last we hav finalised it"

there was a complete pause for a minute

SK: "i m waiting,,where"

Tom: "INDIA,,jai has suggested it"

Emma: "ya actually we thought,,hum jahan ke music ko use karte hai
we should go to that place to hav a better knowledge about it"

india ka naam sunke sameer ke ankhon main ek ajeeb saa glow aa gaya

tabhi wahan asma aati hai,,"kahan jane kii baat ho rahi hai"

SK: "khala ye log india jane ka program bana rahe hain,,mujhe bhi jana hai
pleaseeeeeee khala,,aap dad se baat karo na"

Asma: "india...acchaa theek hai ,,tu chala ja,,magar tujhe yaad hai jab hum
london aaye the ,tab main tujhe ek darghah par le gayi thi...sabse pehle wahan jana,,or
babaji ka ashriwaad  leke phir kahin jana"

SK: "oh khala i love u soo much"

Asma: "aacchaa ,,to bataoo kab ki tickets book kara doon"

Emma: "actually khala hum tickets book kara chuke hai,,4 days baad ki"

SK: "tum logon ne tickets bhi book kara di"

Tom: "yaa actually we were knowing ,,u will not say no for india"

yeh sameer was soo happy today,,he could feel ki ab zyada waqt nahin bacha
use uski nandini se milne main..
he was damm sure ..ki uska intezaar zaroor khatam hoga..god can't be soo unfair..

in the night he as usual walkup in the balcony,,and was remembering
his past moments...
              zab kahin bhi aahat hui
              yuun laga ki tu aa gaya
              khusboo ke jhonke ki tarah
              meri saanse mahkaagaya
              ek wo daur tha hum sada paas the
              ab to hain fansle darmiyaan

              main yahan tu wahan
              zindagi hai kahan
              tu hi tu hai sanam
              dekhta hoon jahan
              need aati nahin
              yaad jaati nahin
              ab to tanha jiya jaye na naaa


he said "i m comming nandini,,bas kuch din aur..."

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Posted: 12 October 2009 at 1:42pm | IP Logged
really nice part nivedita

letsrockshona

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Posted: 13 October 2009 at 4:13am | IP Logged
wonderful update huni

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Posted: 13 October 2009 at 5:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by maria_awan

really nice part nivedita
thankss dear

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