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LOVE STORY (some relations live forever) (Page 4)

letsrockshona IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 08 October 2009 at 7:43am | IP Logged
hey huni
very nice update...actually a very wonderful ff
plzzz add me to ur pm list
thanks
update the next part plzzz
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Posted: 08 October 2009 at 8:20am | IP Logged
Superb update, too good dear.It's very emotional update, sach mein destiny hume kaha le jate hain koi nehi janta.
anyway, post the next part soon dear.
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Posted: 08 October 2009 at 10:59am | IP Logged
superub yaar
nice update par how will she return shent she dead or alive i cnt understand
anyways ur ff is amazing
plz continue soon
and thanx for the pm
 
 
sana
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Posted: 09 October 2009 at 6:48am | IP Logged

contted...

jo waada kiya wo nibhana padega
roke jamana chahe roke khudaaye
tumko aana padega
jo waada kiya wo nibhana padega

 ye maana humne jaan se jana padega
 par ye samah lo tum ne jab bhi pukara
 hum ko aana padega
 jo waada kiya wo nibhana padega


promisess are to be kept.....

PLACE : LUCKNOW

lucknow ko nawabon ka shahar kaha jata hai,,yahan ke hi ek jaane maane nawab sahab hai 'nawab atif khan'
bohut maan hai unka lucknow main,,shanoo ,shokat se zindgii jeete hai,
unka ek chota sa priwar hai,nawab sahab ,unki begum (zenab) ,or unki choti behan (asma),,jo yahan ke ek aalishaan ,ghar main rehte hai

chaliye hum is ghar ke andar chal ke dekhte hai ki yahan kya hua hai??

wahan ek doctor nawab sahab se baat kar rahe the "nawab sahab,,humne bohut koshish ki par hum aapki;begum ko nahin bacha sake,"
he added "aapke ghar ek bete ne janam liya hai"

nawab: "ya allalh,," and he left to see his wife for the last time.

asma,who was beside the nawab,said "bhai jaan ap fikr mat keejiye,,hum ise apne bacchee ki tarah hi pyar denge,,ise bhabi jaan ki kami kabhi na maaloom hone denge"

she took that beautiful child in her hands,,and kissed on his forehead,,"ab tum hamare ho; apni khala se dosti karoge na"

few days spend like this..apni begum ke jaane ka gum nawab sahab ke dil main kam na tha ,,par jab bhi wo us pyaare se bacchee ko dekhte to sab kuch bhool jaate

asma: " bhai jaan ,,maine iske liye ek naam socha hai,,ap bataeeye kaisa hai "sameer" ek hawa ka jhonka ,,jisne hamari zindgi khushiyon se bhar di"

nawab: "bohut pyaara naam hai ,,hume pasand hai ,,aj se hum ise isee naam se bulaayege  SAMEER "


HAAN AP SAB SAHI SAMJHEE YE HEE HAI HUMARA PRITHVI,,AB AAP APNI NANDINI SE NAHIN MILNA CHAHEENGE,,TO PHIR CHALIYE.....

PLACE : POONA

khushi,,wo jo agarwal family main ke liye dherr saari khushiyan saath leke is duniya main aayi hai,,
mr. alok agarwal ka khushi ke aate hi promation ho gaya,,unhone apna ek naya ghar khareed liya ,or apni choti see gudiya ke ghar aane par ek choti see party bhi di..

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har koi apni zindagi main khush hai ,,par shayad kisi ne un do bacchoon kee ankhon main chupe us intezaar ko nahin dekha,,jise hum or aap mahsoos kar sakte hai.

unki nazaren jab bhi charon taraf jhomti ,,mano bas ek doosre ko us bheed main khojne ki koshish karti..

bas ise intezaar main ki kab zindagi unhe ek doosre ke saamne le aaye,,

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time never stops for anyone..,,dekhte hi dekhte panch saal guzar gaye.
in panch saalon main bohut kuch badal gaya ,,par badla nahin to wo intezaar....

khuhsi was living her life just like a normal child..with her mom ,dad and her cousin diya in poona.....but our sameer,he was different,,har waqt udas rehta tha,,kisi se koi dosti nahin ,kahin aana jaana nahin,bas apne main hi mashroof rehta tha.
jahan bhi logon ki bheed dekhta ,wahan uski ankhen bas apni nandini ko dhoonne ki koshish kartiin..

nawab sahab bhi apne kaam main kaafi busy ho gaye,,or sameer ko time nahin de pate the,,par uski khala use bohut pyaar karti,,hamesha hi use khush rakhne ki koshish main lagi raheti,,par unhe kya pata tha ki uski kushi to kahin or hai.

ek roj nawab sahab asma se baat kar rahe the.

nawab: "asma,,tum to jaanti ho ki hummara,london main jo bussines hai wo kafi badhta jaa raha hai,ab use yahan rah kar nahin samhala ja sakta,,to main soch raha hoon ,ki hum london shift ho jate hai"

asma: "ji bhai jaan ,,aap theek kah rahe hai ,,sameer bhi bhuja bhuja sa rehta hai,jagah badalegi to shayad use bhi acchaa lagega"

sameer unki baaten sun raha tha,,waise wo zyada bolta nahin tha par ,jaane ki baat sunkar he rashed there and said
sameer: "nahin hum kahin nahin jaaeenge,yahin rahenge"

nawab: " beta london bohut acchii jagah hai ,,tum ek bar chal kar to dekho"

asma: "bhai jaan ,main use mana loongi,aap fikar mat kijiye,,bas jaane se pehle main sameer ko dargaah par lekar jaana chahti hoon,,kal wahan peer baba aane wale hai ,ek bar sameer ko unka ashriwaad mil jaye to sab theek ho jaeega"

nawab: "jaroor jaaeye,hume khushi hogi,to main agle hafte ke london ke tickets book kara deta hoon"

asma took that little boy to the darghah,,
wahan ek bohut jane mane peer baba aaye the,..

peer baba: "kya baat hai beti"

asma: "baba,ye sameer hai,,bohut udas rehta hai,jiddi bhi hota ja raha hai,aap hi allah se fariyaad kigiyee ,wo zaroor suneege."

baba,sameer ko dekhte hai,,or uske sir par apna haath pehrte hai "bohut pyaara bacchaa hai"

baba ,sameer se kahte hai
"beta,,kyon itna pareshaan hai; shant ho jaa,tere man main jitne bhi sawaal hai ,unke jawab tujhe milenge,,par intezaar kar
upar walle ne har kaam ke liye ek waqt nishchit kiya hai ,jab sahi waqt aayega to raste tuhje apne aap mil jaaenge"

sameer smiled on it.as if he has really got all the answers of his question..

asma: " iska kya matlab hai baba"

baba: "kuch nahin beti,,jise samajhna tha ,wo samajh gaya,,ab to jaa,baaki allah par chod de"

they left from there,,,and the most amazing thing was ,ki ghar pouchtee hi samer ne apni packing shuruu kar di..now he was ready to go.

and they flied out their way to london.


LONDON ek aisa shahar jiski khoobsoortee ko shabdon main bayan nahin kiya jaa sakta,,to phir chaliye apko dikhate hai wo jagah jahan humaare sameer ko apne aage ki life spent karni hai...


sab kuch itna khoobsoorat tha par phir bhi apna sameer khush nahin tha...
   kehne ko saath apne ek duniya chalti hai
   par chupke is dil main tanhaaee paltii hai
   bas yaad saath hai....

asma ko ye samajh nahin aa raha tha ki wo sameer ke liye kya kare ki wo bhi aam bacchoon ki tarah khele khoonde,,khush rahe,,
so she took her to the market..
the place was new..enerything was beautiful..but still the boy was upset,

,par sameer ko wahan bhi kuch pasand nahin aata ,,,,,
achaanak uski nazar ek music store par padti hai,wo asma se wahan jane ke liye kahta hai,,
there he points towards a guitar,,

asma: "tujhe wo guitar chahiye"
sameer innocently nodded his head..
asma buyed thet guitar for him,,phir kya tha,sameer ke liye wo sirf ek guitar nahin tha,ek aise kadii thi jo use uski nandini se jodti thi.

bas iske baad wo kabhi udas nahin raha ,wo phir se jeene laga,,kahin na kahin wo ye jaanta tha ki jo uska hai ek na ek din use wo jaroor milega,,bas use us din ka intezaar karna hai..
his every note..goes for his love..
which inspires him to play more ...he has made music his life..because it really reminds him of his life..

prithvi kabhi ek acchaa painter nahin tha,,par shayad sameer ke paas apni yaadon ko sametne ka isse acchaa substitute nahin tha,,usne nandini ke hazaaron pictures banaye,,or unhe saamne rakh kar ,ghanton guitar bajaata rehta..
wo roj shamko tarris par jaa kar taaron se baatein karta
guitar bajaata or kabhi kabhi to wahin soo bhi jata tha

bas kuch yuhi 15 years beet gaye...

 

 

 

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Posted: 09 October 2009 at 6:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by letsrockshona

hey huni
very nice update...actually a very wonderful ff
plzzz add me to ur pm list
thanks
update the next part plzzz
thankss dear..surely i will pm u.

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Posted: 09 October 2009 at 6:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Superb update, too good dear.It's very emotional update, sach mein destiny hume kaha le jate hain koi nehi janta.
anyway, post the next part soon dear.
 
thankss rakhi..
i hope u will enjoy this part too

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rajatrangini
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Posted: 09 October 2009 at 6:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sana866

superub yaar
nice update par how will she return shent she dead or alive i cnt understand
anyways ur ff is amazing
plz continue soon
and thanx for the pm
 
 
sana
 
thankss sana..
well this story is based on rebirth..
and i hope this update will give ur answers
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Posted: 10 October 2009 at 2:04am | IP Logged
It's superb update.Toh undono ka phir se janam ho gaya, thanks dear.
aab baas intejaar hain undono ke phir se milne ka.
Continue soon  dear.

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