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Posted: 06 October 2009 at 9:34am | IP Logged
Wow, brilliant , superb update.I liked the this part.Wait for the next part.

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Posted: 06 October 2009 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
wow brilliant
superb
AWESOME
really fantastic
plz continue soon
and thanx for the pm
 
 
 
 
sana Smile


Edited by sana866 - 06 October 2009 at 12:23pm

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Posted: 08 October 2009 at 5:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Wow, brilliant , superb update.I liked the this part.Wait for the next part.
 
thankss rakhi..i m glad that u liked it..
now the story will take some..lifetaking turns..so be ready of it

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Posted: 08 October 2009 at 5:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sana866

wow brilliant
superb
AWESOME
really fantastic
plz continue soon
and thanx for the pm
 
 
 
 
sana Smile
 
thankss sana..

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Posted: 08 October 2009 at 5:29am | IP Logged

 

contted....

two years passed like this only......
prithvi has got a very good placement in a company of canada..he was very happy :) :) :) :).

today nandini was going to delhi,,for a two day training by the evening train,,so prithvi has planned to go for some shopping with her
before leaving her to the station.

in the parking of the shopping plaza..

prtihvi: "nandu tum andar resturent main chalo main abhi gadi park kar ke aata hoon"

nandini: " ok"

while she was going towards the resturent,,in the nearby shop she saw a watch,,and she really liked it very much.
and she entered that shop to inquire about that watch.

when prithvi reached to the restourent .. ,,he doesn't found nandini there,,he waited there for a while,,but after that he became a bit tense..
he ran all around in the mall like mads,,to search her,but doesn't found her,he was totally blank..ConfusedConfused

after a long search..he too get in the same shop in which nandini was gone,,and when he saw her there
"nandini pagal ho kya tum ,,maine tumhe kaha tha ki mujhe resturent main milna,or tum... pata hai main kitna pareshaan ho gaya tha"

nandini: "relex ,,chill,pagal main nahin tum ho ,,shayad tum bhool gaye ki mobile phone naam ki cheez ka invention ho chuka hai,and more importantly u hav my number,,tum call kar sakte the ,,"LOLLOLLOLLOL

prithvi: " yaa actually ,tumhe wahan nahin dekha to mujhe kuch samajh nahin aaya,,pata nahin aj bohut darr lag raha hai ki kahin main tumhe khoo na doon"

nandini: " don't u worry,,itnii jaldii tumhe chod ke jaane ka mera koi iraada nahin hai,,,trust mee agar mar bhi gayi na to bhi bhoot banke tumhe pareshaan karoongi;,,ab jaldi chalo,,jo bhi lena hai get it ,do ghante baad meri train hai"

they finished their shoping,,and reached the station..

the train was standing on the platform..

prithvi was looking a bit low..so nandini said.."kya hua..do din ke liye hi to jaa rahi hoon..
pleasee tu aisee shakal mat bana..darr lagta hai"

prithvi: "do din ki training hai..u will come back in three days!!"

nandini: "dekh ab itna senti mat ho ..warna main rona shuroo kar doongi,aur waise bhiCry
tum bhi to do maheene baad canada jaa rahe ho..maine to kuch nahi kaha"

prithvi: "soo..main tumhe saath leke jaaonga"

nandini: "seriously????"Tongue

prithvi: "offcourse"Big smile

then the train whistled ........
nandini: "okk..we will carry on this topic..
but pleaseee..mujhe wish to kar do"

prithvi: "yeah...all the best..mera naam roshan karo..
gud byeee"

nandini: "nnhhm...see u soon.."

and she entered the compartment..the train left within fer minutes..

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the next day prithvi ,,went to nandu's house and ..

mrs sudha: " are prithvi ; aaoo beta,,"

prithvi: " aunti aap free ho na,,mujhe aap se kuch baat karni hai"

sudha: "haan mere paas aisa kya kaam hai ,,tu bol"

prithvi: "aunti main soch raha hoon,,ab to meri padhaii bhi poori ho gayi hai,,or aacchaa job bhi mil gaya hai;hopefully do months main canada chala jaaoonga,,to soch raha hoon ab shadi kar leta hoon"

sudha: "haan!!! baat to theek hai..aage bol"

prithvi: "to aap bataeeye aapka kya iraada hai,,i can promise u,,apki beti ko hamesha khush rakhoonga,,"

sudha: "agar main naa boloon to"

prithvi: "aunti aap mujhe naa nahin kahengi,,or agar aisa hai to pehele hi bata deta hoon,,nandini ko bhgaa le jaaoonga"

both of them start laughing on this..

prithvi:" actually aunti ,,main nandini ko uski life ka sabse bada surprise dena chahta hoon,,jab wo delhi se wapas aaegi,to main use ye good news dena chahta hoon"

this was really the big day for which prithvi was waiting....
he arranged a party for her..with the help of his friends..in which he was supposed to ask her for marriage...
the 3rd day,,in the afternoon..he was gone to a jwellary shop to buy a ring for nandini,,and there while he was selecting the ring... a sound came in his ear..

he turned towards the television of the shop,,there was in news..

"aj delhi ko bomb dhamakoon ne dhahlaa diya,,ek ke baad ek panch jagah bomb blast hue jisme 200 se zyada longon ke mare jaane ki aashankaa jataaii jarahi hai..
aatankiiyon ne shahar main dhahshat macha rakhi hai,,
anumaan lagayaa jaa raha hai ki is waqt delhi main 10-15 aatanki chupe hue hai,,police ki khoj zaari hai,,

abhi abhi khabar mili hai ki do aatanki harinagar iilake kee ek building main hai,,police ki unke saath firing zaari hai"

after hearing this...the ring which he was holding between his fingures,,,just slipped down from his hand..
he was blank..as if the floor has been slipped off from down his feets..

 

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Posted: 08 October 2009 at 6:01am | IP Logged
wow nice update
but plz dont make nadini dead in ur ff
 
 
 
sana
 

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Posted: 08 October 2009 at 6:43am | IP Logged


contted...

here pritha has also seen the news..mrs pari said to pritha "prithvi ko call karo ,or haan use kuch mat batana ,,bas ghar aane ko bolna"

pritha: "hello prithvi,,kahan ho tum"

prithvi: "hello diii ......dii nandini :'( :'("and he just started crying....

pritha to her mom "ma use sab pata chal gaya"
mrs pari took the phone.

pari: "beta ,,tum jalldi se ghar aa jao"

prithvi: "nahin maa main abhi delhi jaa raha hoon"

pari: "ye tu kya kah raha hai,,wahan ki condition abhi bohut kharab hai ,,tu abhi wahan nahin jaaega"

prithvi: "i know wahan ki condition bohut kharab hai ,isliye main yahan nahin rah sakta ;;maa nandini,,she needs me,or agar aaj use kuch ho gaya ,to main ..."

pari: "beta lekin tu wahan jaa kar bhi kuch nahin kar sakta"

prithvi: "bhale hi main kuch nahin kar sakta,,,but yahan rah kar ek pal bhi jee nahin sakta,,"

pari: "beta,,main tujhe kaise samjhaoon,,waise hi nandini wahan hai ,,ab tu bhi wahan chala jaaega too"

prithvi: "maa aap kehti hain na ,,ki hota wahi hai jo kismat main likha hai,,par phir bhi hum kosish karna nahin chod sakte,,theek adhe ghante baad ,delhi ki train hai ,i m going"

he cuts the call.

pritha: "kya hua maa,,main arjun ko phone karti hoon,,uska ghar station ke paas hai ,wo prithvi ko rok lega"

pari: "koi fayada nahin hai ,,wo nahin rukega ,,bas ab to yahi dua karo ki dono sahi salamat wapas aa jaaen"

********************************************8

prihvi get into the train ,,in the midway he tried to call nandini ,but there were no signals..as soon he get down on delhi station,,he saw a diif face of delhi,everyone was running ,,screeming,,crying.
he became more,,frightened..

now he again tried to call nandini..this time it ringed up..

prithvi: "hello nandini,,nandini tum theek to ho na"

nandini: "haan prithvi,,main theek hoon,,u don't worry,,but i don't know ki agle pal yahan kya hone wala hai"
nandini ki aawaj sun kar prithvi ki jaan mein jaan aa gayi.

prithvi: "tum kahan ho,,main tumhe yahan se lene aya hoon"

nandini: "tum pagal ho kya ,,yahan kyon aaye ,o ,my god tum jaante bhi ho ki yahan kitna khatra hai,,pehele tum mujhe bataoo ki tum kahan ho"

prithvi: "main abhi railway station par hoon"

nandini: "now listen to me,,tum wahan se kahin nahin jaaooge,,bahar bohut khatra hai,;
main abhi station se thoda door delhi ke ek regional police station hai ,,wahin hoon ,or safe hoon..bas tum wahin mera intezaar karo,jaise hi rasta clear hota hai ,,main khud wahan aajaaoongi,,u don't hav to leave the place"

prithvi: "okk ,,but apna khayal rakhna"

nandini: "tum bhi ,,wait for me ,,main jaroor aaoongi,,,abhi rahkti hoon,battery down hai"

prithvi was waiting for nandini,,in the waiting room of station,,there was a television set there,,where everyone was looking for the news of the current situation..
suddenly ...
BREAKING NEWS

" abhi abhi sahar main 2 jagah or bomb dhamake hue hai,,jismin se ek,,rohini ,ke market place main hua hai ,,or ek ,delhi police station main,ashanka ye jataayi ja rahi hai,,ki is hamle main police ke kafi jawan shaheed hue hai,par abhi dawe ke saath kuch bhi nahin kaha ja sakta,,,,"

itna sunte hi ,,prithvi,,just gone out of his mind..


place ,,delhi police station..

everythingh was destroyed,here. in one corner we see a girl,ie nandini she was very injured,use dekh kar aisa lag raha tha maano,bas kuch saanse hi bachi hai uske pass,,shayad apne us waade ko pura karne ke liye jo usne prithvi se kiya tha.
bas prithvi tak pohuchne ki himmat nahin hai,..she is trying to move,,but shayad wo jaanti hai ki zindgii ab uska saath zyada der nahin degi

******************************************


here ,,on listening the horrible news,,prithvi just couldnot controll himself,and he just left the station,.bas ab use nandini se milna tha chahe jo bhi ho,
he started running madly on the road. all around firing was going on,,but he cared of nothing..
bas wo us police station main pohuchne hi wala thi ki ,,a bullet stuck in his back.........
"nandini" he screemed,,took a few more steps ,and then fall down......just said "i am waiting....."
...


shayad in donon ne kabhi aisa nahin soocha hoga ,,ki ye din bhi unki zindgi main aaega,,jab sirf ek doosre se akhri baar milne ka mooka bhi kismat unhen nahin degi.
ye do din ki doori,,unhe ek doosre se itna door kar degi.

soch kar ajeeb lagta hai ,par sach hai ,kuch log jinki aapse koi dushmani nahin hoti ,aap to unhen jaante bhi nahin hai phir bhi wo aapki kismat ka feensla kar dete hai,..na jaane aise humloon main kitne ghar tabaah ho jaate hain,,kitne innocent log maare jaate hain...or hum kuch nahin kar sakte..

a small dot can stop a big sentence,but few more dots give it a continuity...amazing but true..every end is a new begining.

log kahte hai ,,jab marte waqt,,insaan ki koi icchaa adhoori rah jaati hai ,to wo use poora karne jaroor wapas aata hai..
shareer marta hai par aatma kabhi nahin marti,,kuch rishtey aise hote hai jo kabhi nahin marte,,some relations live forever

to yahan se shuru hoti hai ek nayi daastan,,daastan apne pyar ke intezaar ki.,,ek aise intezaar ki jo koi nahin jaanta ki kab khatam hoga,,,bas vishwas hai ,,ki wo apna waada zaroor pura karegi..

 

 

 

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Posted: 08 October 2009 at 6:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sana866

wow nice update
but plz dont make nadini dead in ur ff
 
 
 
sana
 
thankss and sorry sana..
this story is prewritten..so can't make such changes..
u enjoy with it..

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