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Posted: 06 December 2009 at 10:39pm | IP Logged
thanks evryone..
well khushi ke peeche kon hai??..ye answer u will get in this update..
hope u will like it..

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contted...

as they were moving in a delightful manner..not knowing about the danger which were surrounding
them...
sameer asked.."tumhe ye sab main bohut mazza aa raha hai na??"

she streched out her hands and took a round.."haan..maine to kabhi socha bhi nahin tha
ki ghar se bhagne main itna mazza aata hai..really"
but she suddenly get disbalanced..sameer supported her.."sambhal kar....
kya hua"

khushi saw towards her sandle..whose heal was shaking.."mera sandle toot gaya.."
but then she smiled and said.."ab itni lambi daud lagaai hai to toote ga hi..,"

Sameer: "wo jahan se humne ice cream lee thi..wahan ek shoping complex tha..waapas chalte hain"

she said "ok" and she bend down to take off her sandles..sameer asked her.."ye kya kar rahi ho"

Khushi: "mujhe girne ka koi shock nahi hai"

but then she started jumping..because of the heated road.."ouiiii maa kitna garam hai.."

Sameer: "wait a minute..." he band down to pull her up..

khushi: "what are you doing..????????????"

he lifted her up in her arms and asked "ab theek hai" n started walking towards the shoping complex..

Khushi: "wowwwwww..waise ek baat bataoo..main zyada bhaari to nahi hoon na..,"
he just passed a sweet smile..

she continued.."main aaj kal kuch zyada hi bakwaas karne lagi hoon...well sab tumhaari company ka asar
hai..warna main to aise bilkul bhi nahi thi.."

in whole way..her stupid chatt was on ..and sameer just smileing on her mischieivous topics..

                 haan hai kitni hansi teri dosti
                    haan lage hai naii mujhe zindhi
                    ab chahe ho khushi
                    ya chahe ho gum
                    i will be there for u

they get in the compex..and selected a pair of shoes..jisse unke tootne ka khatra zyada na ho..

sameer reached the counter to pay of the bill..he took out his wollet and was about to pay in cash..
but he thought for a moment and gave his credit card to the counter man..

salesman checked for his credit..but said.."sorry sir..ur account is been sealed.."

sameer took back his card..thinking ("ohhh god..lagta hai,dad ko sab pata chal gaya..,")
and gave him the price in cash.

khushi too came there.."kya huaaa"

sameer just said .."kuch nahi..
shaam hone waali hai ab no time waste ..aur seedhe station chalo"

"ok" she sweetly replied..

they came out of the shoping complex...and took an auto for the railway station.

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PLACE - poona.
agarwal's house.

diya was sitting very quitely..in her room..putting her head down on her laps..

then mrs agarwal entered in her room,,she put her careing hand on her head and said..
"beta ..apna saamaan pack karle ,,kal wo log tujhe lene aaenge"

she just put her head up..and started crying.."chachi..mujhe wahan nahi jaana..,
mujhe yahin rehna hai..
khushi...khushi patanahi kahan hai..kaisi hai..mujhe uske paas jana hai"

mrs agarwal try to convince her.."beta pichle dino jo kuch bhi hua hai..uske baad
bhaisahab tujhe yahan nahi rehne denge..
aur sahi bhi to hai..unhe teri fikr hai, tere liye loi bhi dicission lene waale hum kon
hote hain.."

suddenly the door bell ringed.."ting tong"

diya got up .."main dekhti hoon"

she ran down stairs..to open the door.
but as she opeed it what she saw..was..'jai'........

Jai: "ohhhhhhh aate hi aate miss problem ka chehra..ab pata nahi aage kya hoga"

but on this diya was silent ..which was a bit tough to digest..but still he entered..
and seated on the sofa which was lying in the living room.."sameer aur khushi kahan hain?
mujh se naraaz hai kya??
i know teen din ka bola tha ,,ek din late hoon..but kaam usi ka tha..
.....................................
tum kuch bol kyon nahi rahi..mon vrat hai kya..
kahan hain wo dono???"

diya very quitely said.."woo wo log yahan nahi hain.."

his expression suddenly changed to very serious.."yahan nahin hai to kahan hai?"

diya explained him all...what has happened three days back...
he was just blank.."ohhhhhhhhh god....ye kya ho gaya.."

Diya: "kya huaa..kuch problem hai kya."

"yaaaaaaaaa..."he took out his mobile and start trying sameer's number..

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sameer and khushi reached the railway station..lobby

khushi: "pleaseee tum ander inquery main pooch kar aao..main yahin hoon"

Sameer: kya hua..battery down"

khushi: "yaaaaaaaaaa..wo whan bohut bheed hoti hai..aur mujhe thoda safocation ho raha hai"

"ok..tum yahin betho main bas abhi aata hoon.." he replied nad entered inside from the main
corridor.

while he was going towards the inquery section..his phone ringed up...he took out his mobile
..'it was jai''
he felt very happy to see his name on his mobile.."hey jai...kahan hai tu"

jAi: 'main to wahin hoon jahan mujhe hona chaiye .poona main...tu kahan hai."

sameer: "woo abhi tak kota pohunche hain..diya ne tumhe sab batahi diya hoga"
jai: (very seriously) "sameer ..tere dad ko sab pata chal gaya hai"

sameer: "i know...wo unhone mere accounts seal kar diye hain..but unhe pata to chalna hi tha.."

Jai: "baat sirf itni si nahi hai..wo abhi india main hain.."

Sameer: "what???????"

jAi: "yaa..sameer sach batana ..tum log theek ho..khushi theek hai..wo tere saath hi haina"

SAmeer: "haan but tu aise kyon pooch raha hai..is everythingh ok.."

Jai: "actually no... teri khala se baat hui thi.,unhone bataya ki tere dad ne tujhe doondne ke liye
kuch logon ko hire kiya hai..aur shayad wo log tumhe follow kar rahe hain"

sameer: "but unhe kaise pata chala ki main kahan hoon"

Jai: "ur cell phone...unhone tere cell phone se tujhe trace kiya hai..
isliye main tujhe is number par call nahin karna chahta tha..but ab koi aur option nahi tha..
through out that sim as soon as possible.."


Sameer: "but..dad..wo.mujhe lag hi raha tha,ki wo log humaara peecha kar rahe the..dammm"

jai: "i don know wat to do..but khushi ko ek pal ke liye bhi akela mat chodna..
she is not safe..."

sameer was blank..he just turned back..and said.."jai ..main tujh se baad main baat karta hoon.."
and he ran outside..
he don know wat was happneing,,but ek darr tha jo phir se uske dilo domaag par chata ja raha tha..
darr phir se use kho dene ka..

he was feeling ki itne saalon baad wo phir se wahin aa gaya hai..
railway station...
log kehte hain .history repeats itself....but not like this...this is unfair..
he does not want to accept it..uski ankhon ke saamne phir se wahi andhera cha raha tha..

he reached the place..jahan usne khushi ko choda tha..but she was not there..

he broke out with fear..fear of loosing her again..."khushi..."he screemed and sat on the ground..
on his knees..

suddenly..he realised a voice from his back.."kya hua"

he instantly stood and turned.."khushi"...and he filled her in his arms..very tightly..
he was still terrified..

khushi was confused seeing him like this ,,she asked.."what happened"

sameer: "kahan thi tum...main..main kitna darr gaya tha"

Khushi: "darr gaye ..but kyon..main bas do minute ke liye washroom gayi thi"

sameer took a look around the lobby..everyperson was seems to be an evil for him..
he could not trust anyone present there..
"chalo humme yahan se nikalna hoga"..he took out the sim from his cell and put it in the dustbin..

khushi: "baat kya...aur ye sab kya kar rahe ho..kuch to bataoo"

sameer: "sab batata hoon..but pleaseee abhi yahan se chalo.."

 as they left the premises...a man appeared from behind a pillar..he called someone from his cell
and said.."boss ...us ladke ko hum par shaq ho gaya hai,,ab humme zyada der nahin karni chahiye"

 

 

 

 


 

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contted...

they came outside the station..
sameer was still in the troma..he was just in the confusion what to do...
uski ankhon ke saamne 24 saal puraana haadsa ghum raha tha..
he could hear the sound of bullets..,people calling for help..
abhi uske liye wo har insaan jo uske aas paas tha..was looking as a suspect,jise uske dad ne
khushi se door karne ke liye bheja hai..
he was restless..aur khushi ..,sameer ko is tarah dekhkar use bhi kuch nahi samajh aa raha tha ki
wo aise kyon behave kar raha hai..abhi panch minute pehle wo bilkul theek tha..to phir aisa kya hua
jisne use itna dara diya hai.

she make him stand at the place..and asked.."kya baat haii.."

sameer: "pleaseee yahan se chalo..,main tumhe phir se nahi khona chahta"

khushi asked very sweetly as she is deeling with a small child.."acchaa theek hai..,chalte hain..
but ye to bataoo ki tumhe jana kahan hai.."

Sameer has no answer..he was just looking around..,and was trying to sence the danger
at the place..

khushi called an auto..and they get settled into it...
she asked the autowaala to drop them in any nearby  hotel.

then she took his palm and put it between hers tightly.."relex..kuch nahi hua,,"

they checked in ,in a small hotel,which was near to the station..

room no. 123 ,,1st floor.,as they entered sameer instantly locked the room..
the put on the curtains..was busy checking the room and the washroom attached to it..

khushi holded him and make him sit on the bed..."pleaseeee..koi nahi hai yahan ,bas main hoon..
jo shayad tumhe nazar hi nahi aa rahi"

then he just looked towards her..his eyes were totally red,,confused..dipressed..

khushi then asked her.."kya hua..kyon itna pareshaan ho,,"

sameer: "maine tumse kaha tha na..koi humme follow kar raha hai..,i was right,aur wo log tumhe
mujh se door kar denge"

khushi was shocked on hearing this..she just hugged him to console him.."dekho main tumhaare paas hoon
..koi humme door nahi kar sakta ,."

sameer: "nandu..un logon ko mere dad ne bheja hai,.mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha main kya karoon.."

khushi: "kuch mat socho..abhi tak sab theek ha hai na ..to aage bhi sab theek hi hoga,
jis cheez par humaara koi bas nahin hai uske baare main sochkar koi faayada nahi..
meri taraf dekho...
cool down..accha socho..,"
she put her hands around his neck..and make her face close to him..touched his head with
hers..where they feel the closeness..and the warmth of their bredth.

                 tumhi bekaari tumhi ho karaar
                    suni rahen karen tera hi intezaar
                    har ghadhi dhoonde tujhe ye nigaahen
                    kabhi na choote ye tera mera saath

"i love u"

he make her sit on the bed..and put his head on her laps.."aaj pata nahi kya hua tha,,
ek pal ke liye laga jaise maine tumhe kho diya hai...
phir sab puraani baaten yaad aa rahi thi,i don know why..,magar ye darr lag raha tha ki jo
pehle hua tha wo phir se na ho"

khushi who was grooming her fingures in his hairs..said.."waqt kabhi nahi rukta..jo beet gaya wo beet
gaya ..ab wo kabhi waapas nahi aaega,,har din ek naya din hai,aur usme kuch naya hoga..
aur is baar to maine god se poori setting kar lee hai ,wo humaare saath hi hain"

then both of them lie down on the bed..khushi continued.."do raat bus ki seat par bitaane ke baad
ye bed kuch zyada hi accha lag raha hai..really"

"aise kya dekh rahe ho"...
sameer replied.."i love u to"

khushi: "kitna waqt laga diya na ye baat kehne main..24+20 almost 44 years..
waise mujhe pata tha..ki mera ye duffer dost kabhi nahi bolega..pehle mujhe hi bolna padega..
and see it.."

sameer: "kehne ki zaroorat thi kya????...tum humesha se jaanti hi thi"

khushi: "haan but ...formality bhi koi cheez hoti hai"

sameer: "yahi to farq hai ek friend aur ek girlfriend main..u need not to be formal with a friend..
kyonki wo humaare dil ki baat humaare kehne se pehle hi samajh jaate hain"

she just smiled..on it as was agreeing on his comment,and the scene moves into a complete silence..

sometimes silence speaks more than what words can say,..and their are only few peoples who
can read the words behind ur silence..those are whom we call friends

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next morning when she waked up..sameer was not there beside her..
she moved her eys up..he was standing at the window and was looking upon the traffic..down on
the road...

she walked upto him.."gud morning.."

sameer.."oh gud morning..tum kab uthi,maine dekha hi nahi"

khushi: "ab aapka dhyan to kahin aur hi hai..(she stare at him for a moment)..bolo kahan jana hai"

sameer: "kahin bhi..but ye shahar chodna..kyonki jab tak hum is hotel main hain safe hai..but baahar
kuch bhi ho sakta hai"

khushi: "aaann ..jab tak hum saath hai tab tak safe hain..it looks more easy..
chalte hain..but usse pehle ek coffee to le hi sakte hai..kyon??"

sameer: "yaa..main order kar deta hoon..tab tak tum fresh ho lo"

they had a light breakfast there and left that hotel..

while they were in the way to the station..the auto suddenly stopped..
four man were standing at the mid of the road..forming a wall..they really look dangerous.

sameer steped to get out..but khushi holded his hand to stop him.."ruko..bhaiya..aap auto chalaaiye
khud hi hat jaaenge"

the auto moved a bit ahead..but he had to stop it..when the distance remain an inch between them..
one of them saidd.."ladki ko baahar nikaalo.."

so the other tried to pull her out..but sameer and khushi were resiting it...
but at last they came out ...sameer .."khushi bas mera haath mat chodna..jab tak saath hain we are safe.."

he was just trying to protect her from those peoples..but one of them took out the pen knife..
and tried to stab her..
which has make a wound on her upper arm....he screemed.."aeeeeeeeeeeee"
next time he holed the knife..and pushed that man..in the bushes in the  side of the road.

a tough fighting started between them..his eyes..were gone red..
as if he will not leave anyone of them..

the auto waala..stoped his other ...fellows..who were taking their pessengers..
they also helped them,,..

sameer said.."nandu..its the race of life and death....run..just run"

both of then ran ..upto their fullest..
they were injured..badly...but still there was no other way out for them.

...and those peoples were also following themm..
at last they reached the platform ..of the station..
a train was leaving from there..it has not yet speeded up..

sameer.."get in the train.."

they ran for it..and finally,, they manage to get in...
time till those peoples (who were following them)..reached the platform..
the train has left the platform...

 

 

 

 

 

 

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contted....

so finally they managed to get in the train...
both of them were standing at the gate..and can see the leaving platform..and the people..who were
behind them..

sameer was holding khushi in his arms..who seems to be very feared..
he took a relexing deep breath...then he saw towards khushi...
her head was resting on his chest..
and her hand was bleeding very badly,,.when he realised it.."ohh my god..,ye..ye.."

she was holding her arm tightly..as it was paining het too much ,,"wo kuch nahi bas..thoda sa.."

but he could feel the pain which she was bearing..'wo ladki jise zara se kharonch bhi aa jati thi..to
poora ghar sir par utha leti thi..'..today she was quite..
this was filling his heart with more agression and obsession for his father.,
he take off her scarf..and tied it to her arm.

and took her inside the in the compartment...
all the peoples..present there turned towards them.,one of the lady..who was looking very gentle
and soft ..said.."ye aap logon ko itni chot kaise lagi"

then she asked her son to gave his seat to them..sameer make khushi to be seated there..
"wo humm logon ke peeche kuch gunde pad gaye the"

his eyes were constantly on khushi's face..he could see ,that the wound was paining her a lot.
he holded her hand tightly..

then another man who was sitting near to them ..said.."tum yahan kyon aaye ho,,ise to hospital le jana
chahiye tha na.."

he has no answer to it...he was quite but his mind was busy..in planning what to do..

three hours paas by..and he herad from somewhere that TT is comming for checking out the tickets.
then he asked khushi .."chalo"

khsuhi was feeling a bit unconsious..so she tried to avoid it.."pleaseee abhi i can't go"

sameer: "dekho..we hav to move to the last compartment..aur agle hi station par utarna hoga..
we don hav the tickets..
tumhara...bandage bhi karana hai"

he somehow manage to take her ..to the last compartment ..where they could get some more time from
the TT and ..can get down on the next station..

he asked the peoples present there.."next station kon sa hai?"

one of them replied.."agra"

after 15 minutes..the train stopped.,it was not the station..but most probably it must be signal..
he peeped out from the door..the platform was still ahead..

and thought it is safe to get down here only,,as if they will get down on the station ..
anyone could askk them to show the tickets.

they both manage to escape from there,and reached a hospital..

he asked the doctor.."how is she..?"

doctor: "the cut was quite deep..isliye kafi khoon bah gaya hai,,stiches laga diya hain..
aur drip chal rahi hai..then she will be fine...
but i think app ko bhi bandage ki zaroorat hai"

but sameer ka dhyan to poori tarah se khushi par hi tha,,"haan but kya main usse mil sakta hoon"

doctor: "yaa sure..but abhi wo hosh main nahi hain..wo pain kafi zyada tha,to humme unhe injection
dena pada...(he called the nurse)..nurse,,aap inki bandage kar deegiye...(he turned towards sameer)
phir aap unke paas ja sakte hain"

he entered in the room where khushi was sleeping..he get by the side of her bed..
she was still not in her sences..he affectionately moved his hand on her head..
"aaj jo hua hai,,wo main dobaara nahi hone doonga..kabhi nahi,"
his eyes again get filled with anger.."i promise u..i won't leave anyone.."
he turned and left the room..

he walked outside the hospital..and buyed a new sim for his cell..
returned back..and then called jai..

the phone was ringing..and after few minutes..jai attended it..

sameer: "jai..sk here"

jai: "thank god tune call kiya..us waqt suddenly call cut kiya..aur bola baad main baat karega..
aur phir contact hi nahi kiya..we were so worried about u"

sameer: "sab theek hai...n..n..i need ur help"

jai: "bol..aur tu hai kahan hai abhi"

sameer: "hum log abhi agra main hain..mujhe kuch cheezon ki zaroorat hai..tu unhe lekar yaahn aaja"

he told him the things which he needs..

jai: "are u sure u need it?.."

sameer: "yaa..i need it ..aur haan milna kahan hai..wo main tujhe kal subah hi
inform kar doonga"

jai: "ok..main abhi nikalta hoon..u take care"

...jai was about to leave ,,suddenly diya came there.."jai..pleasee i wil also come with u"

jai: "tum..kyon??? i mean ...i mean nothing..but u can't come with me"

diya: "pleasee jai..bhale hi humaare raste alag ho..but hum dono unhe saath dekhna chahte hain..
aur khushi itni museebat main hai,,mujhe usse ek baar milna hai,she may need me..pleasee
i promise main tumhe bilkul pareshaan nahi karoongi"

jai tried to take it a bit seriously.."but tumhe mere saath jaane ke liye tumhaare parents allow karenge kya?"

diya: "this doesn't matter to me,kyonki mere maa baba mujhe yahan rehne nahi denge..
aur unke paas main jaana nahi chahti,"

jai thought for a moment..then he exrended his hand towards her.."soch lo..ek baar ghar se gayi..
to waapas aana shayad possible na ho"

diya: "let it be"..

they departured from poona that evening only...

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awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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wonderful update,but iye sameer ke dad iye sab kar rehe hain,oh no, Sameer aur khushi  injured bhi hogaye.
continue soon dear.

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wow lovely work
fabulous update
plzzz continue dear
 

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thanks sana..,rakhi,and shona..

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