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crazy4KASH_AR

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Posted: 03 October 2009 at 2:44pm | IP Logged
oh madam u r here
NNivedita ji finally humney aapko dhoondh hi liya gud.
chalo ab aapki ff hum yahaan padh toh sakengay
luv u dear gud beginning n yes the photo related  to the title is excellent.
keep it up

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Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Hi dear ,very nice concept, intro and starts dear.Pls continue soon and pm me when u 'll update the next part.
thankss dear..
surely i will inform u.

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Originally posted by sana866

wow nice update dear
plz continue soon
i will be waiting for ur next update


sana


http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1252000
hey ragini if u have time plz read my ff on sajan i mean samrat gunjan
 
thankss sana..
 
ans yaa i will surely wisit the thread

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Posted: 05 October 2009 at 5:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by asma_227

oh madam u r here
NNivedita ji finally humney aapko dhoondh hi liya gud.
chalo ab aapki ff hum yahaan padh toh sakengay
luv u dear gud beginning n yes the photo related  to the title is excellent.
keep it up
 
yaa ..aap ne dhood liya..
surely zaroor pad sakti ho...but aapko to poori story pata hi hai TongueTongueTongue
thankss

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contted....

intro of some new characters.


AVANTIKA----ise sab pyar se avi kahtee hain.
          a very simple and studiuos girl..one of the closest friend of nandini.Smile

KARAN----a very overweight boy,,who all the time keep thinking of food,,he can't live without eating ,even for a moment.ye hamesha colledge canteen main hi paye jate hai.Tongue

ARJUN----a very hilarious boy who always wants to flurt with girls ,,but hamesha maat kha jata hai...he thinks ladki patana uske bas ki baat nahin hai.Wink

GINNY----a girl who always thinks like a boy..she always dresses up like a boy,with a turned cap.Shocked

ANANYA---- a very stylish girl,,who has been new admission,,
she was there from delhi..staying in shimla as a pg.Smile


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all the friends avi ,karan ,ginny ,arjun was sitting in the college canteen,,and prithvi arived there..saying "yaar tune aate hi khana shuruu kar diya" to karan

karan with as sandwitch in his hand "yaar ab tu bhi mujhe nandini ki tarah mat tok,,,are  haan nandini kahan hai"Confused

avi: "yaa prithvi nandini aj tumhare saath nahin aayi,kya tum dono ka phir sr jhagdha ho gaya?"

prithvi: no yaar wo actually kal ek chota sa accident ho gaya tha to uske haath main fracture ho gaya hai;;
she is missing u all,or usne ye request ki hai ki tum sab  usse jake milo"

all: "yaa sure yaa kal chalte hai"

prithvi: "u guys carry on main abhi office main kuch docoment jama kar ke aata hoon ok"

prithvi left from there,and suddenly someone calls from back "excuse mee" she was a very smart girl,,looking new,prithvi doesn't know her.he replies her "yes"

the girl said "hi i m ananya ,,new here !! kya aap mujhe bata sakte hain ki yahan office kahan hai"

prithvi: "yaa sure ,,main bhi wahin jaa raha hoon u can come with me"

ananya: "thankss,,can i know ur good name"

prithvi: "prithvi,,prithvi sinha,,,well aap yahan nayi hain ,,kahan se?"

ananya: "delhi,,yahan mba finance ka course karne aayi hoon"

prithvi: "ohh great ,then classmates,,ohh office bhi aa gaya"

both of them has submitted their documents,and completed the formalities..and left

prithvi: "to kaisa laga apko shimla"

ananya: "very beautiful place,,aur yahan ke log bhi bohut aacchee hain ,agar ye delhi hota to ek office doonte-doonte main poora college ghom leti or sham tak kuch nahin hota"

they reached to the canteen,,where all were sitting.

arjun: " shhhh see avi ye prithvi ke saath kon hai"Shocked

ginny: "oho hoye...kudi to badi changi lagti hai"

avi: "don't know,,yahin aa rahe hain abhi pata chal jaaega"

prithvi: "hey guys kaam ho gaya"

arjun ananya ki taraf aankhon se ishara karte hue "kya baat hai beta ,naye naye dost;humse milwaaoge bhi nahi kya"WinkWinkWink

prithvi: "ohh i m sorry,,ye hai ananya,,or ananya ,ye avi ,karan arjun or ginny"

all say hii to each other..

prithvi: " ok guys aj 1st day to class to hongi nahin ,so i m leaving ghar par koi intezaar kar raha hoga"
 
all said "ok..and tell her we will surely come in the eve" prithvi was just going and ananya stoped him and said "nice to meet u "

prithvi: " same here" with a smile.

ananya: "ok then main bhi chalti hoon ,nice to meet u all"

as ananya was going..arjun karan ke kaan main bolta hai "what do u think ye ananya kaisi hai"

karan: " very tasty" licking his fingures.

arjun: "kya "

karan: "are yaar main to sandwitch ki baat kar raha tha"

...ananya again met prithvi on the college gate..she was waiting for some convince to go..
and prithvi get there on his byke.."what happened"

ananya: "nothing..just seeking for some convince"

prithvi: "waise aapko jaana kahan hai?"

ananya: "mmm..park street.."

prithvi: "wo to paas main hi hai..on my way..i can drop u there..
yahan se convince aasaani se nahi milte..so its better,ki aap pehle se hi arrange kar len"

"ok..thankss"..she replied..and sat back on his byke..

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prithvi reached home,,,he first directly reached nandini's  place.

prithvi: "hello aunti"

mrs sudha: "hello beta ,nandini tumhara bohut der se wait kar rahi hai ,,apne room main hi hai"

he opened the door of nandu's room,,she was sitting on her bed with some old albums.

prithvi: "ye kya kar rahi ho"

nandini: "kuch nahin bore ho rahi thi ,,to bas ;tum bataoo how was the day,,sab kaise hai.."

he told him all the things ...

then he told him about ananya "or ek nayi ladki bhi aayi hai ,delhi se;ananya"

nandini,,saw him with a naughty sight "ohhhhhhhhhhhhh,,"

prithvi: "are aise ghoor kyon rahi ho,,nahin batana tha kya ?"

then they both started laughing,,saw their old photos..
and remembered the old memories of their childhood,,and after few hours he left to his place.

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Posted: 05 October 2009 at 1:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rajatrangini

Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Hi dear ,very nice concept, intro and starts dear.Pls continue soon and pm me when u 'll update the next part.
thankss dear..
surely i will inform u.
Welcome dear.Ok.

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Posted: 05 October 2009 at 1:34pm | IP Logged
It's wonderful updateClap.Post next part soon dearSmile.

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contted...

10 days just paas by,,,,now nandini was getting better,,
ananya was more getting towards prithvi,..

and there was a special announcement about the intercolledge music comptition after 2 days.

 after the classes were over everyone was sitting in the canteen area..

arjun: "kya farak padta hai ,,ye compitition jeetega to apna prithvi hii"

ananya: "wow prithvi tumhe music main bhi interest hai"

arjun: "interest!!!! are tumhe nahin maloom pichle 6 sallon se apna prithvi hii ye comp. jeetta aa raha hai"

prithvi: "isliye soch raha hoon is baar kisi or ko chance doon,,i m not partcipating"

karan: "kya bol raha hai prithvi,,tu music comptition main particitate karne se mana kar raha hai ,,,teri tabiyat to theek hai na"

avi: "mujhe pata hai nandini yahan nahin hai na isliya is ke nakhre badh gaye hai,,warna iski kahan chalti"

prithvi: "but yaar har baar wo mere saath hoti hai,,,uske bina i can't do it man"

ananya: "ye nandini kon hai?"

prithvi: "nandiniiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii,,humari dost hai,tum usse nahin mili,,"

ananya: "hum bhi to tumhare dost hai na ,,and we are wid u,,tumhe participate to karna hoga"

then suddenly..someone came from back and said.."haan bahi!!..ab apne new friends ke liye inta to karna hi chahiye..na"

all said in a shock.."nandini!!!..tum yahan "..even prithvi was surprised,,and said.."tum yahan kya kar rahi ho,
aur agar aa na hi tha,,to mujhe batana tha,i would hav picked u "

ananya.too..glacefully looked at her..his left hand was having bandage..nandini too greeted her..saying..
"hii ananya....nandini,mera naam suna to zaroor hoga"

ananya: "hii..off course"
then nandini continued answering prithvi's question.

nandini: "wo maine abhi comptition ke baare main suna..to bas seedhe yahan aa gayi..
tumhara ragistration form jo fill karna tha.."

ginny: "ab na bol ke dikha hero.."

prithvi: "sorry ab plan changed..mere hote trophy kisi aur ko mile ..accha nahi lagta"

avi: "nandini..accha hua tu aa gayi..warna ye mahashay to participate hi nahi karte"

nandini: "aise kaise nahi karta...jab tak main zinda hoon,tab tak to iski marzi nahi chal sakti.."

prithvi: "..leave it yaar..chalo form lene chalte hai.."

they filled up the form...and returned towards the byke stand..where ananya was waiting for him...
as prithvi was droping her since last 10 days..

prithvi: "ohh oo..sorry ananya..wo aaj nandini mere saath hai,so can't drop u...
but wo main arjun se kah deta hoon he will drop u"

ananya became a bit unconsious..she refused it and said.."no..thankss i will manage"

instantly avi came there and said.."ananya..park street is not so far..u came with me"
"ok"..both of them left walking..

ananya: "ye nandini..aur prithvi..,i mean.."

avi: "wo dono pagal hain..actually they are best friends,they can do nything for each other..
i know them from last 6 years..roj jhadte hai..but sunte bhi sirf ek doosre ki hi hain.."

ananya: "ohhh..i thought..she is his girlfriend"

avi: "well sweety..wanna tell u one thing ..she is more then a girlfriend for him"

ananya: "wat do u mean?"

avi: "nothing..tumhara ghar aa gaya.."

ananya: "ohh..yaaa..byee,,and thankss"

 

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prithvi has prepared for the comptition ,,and finally the day came...................................
every contestent performed one by one..
and finally prithvi
was on the stage with his lucky guitar in his hand..
he saw towards the audience..in the 4th row as preplanned was sitting his group..
 then he saw towards nandini..who wished him all the best..with is thumbs up..he smiled and said thankss..
ananya who was just sitting beside her ..thought that that smile was for her..
he gave a beet of it and the whole auditorium start was ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

he started......

     and sang,,,do dil mil rahe hai
                do dil mil rahe hai
                magar cupke cupke
                sabko ho rahi hai haan
                sabko ho rahi hai khabar chupke chupke
                nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

                sanso main badi bekaraari
                ankhon main kaeee ratjage
                kabhi kahin lag jaaye dil to
                kahin phir dil na lage
                apna dil main zara tham loon
                jaadu ka main ise naam doon
                jaadu kar raha hai asar chupke chupke
                do dil..........

                aise bhole ban kar hai bethe
                jaise koi baat nahin
                sab kuch najar aa raha hai
                din hai ye raat nahin
                kya hai kuch bhi nahin hai agar
                hoton par hai khamoshi magar
                batein kar rahi hai nazar chupke chupke

the whole enviornment was full of romance..nandini was sitting there and was just became too emotional,,her eyes was wet,,she was very happy for prithvi..

suddenly ananya stood up on her seat and started clapping...every one present there stood to clap for the performance.

the result............every one was knowing it...but still its a ceremony..to be completed.

and the winner is .."PRITHVI SINHA"

OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH  every one screemed.

prithvi took his award and walked towards the audience..ananya was waiting to congratulate him,,but prithvi,,he doesn't gave a sight to her..
and just gone and hugged nandini,,and handed over the trophy to her.
nandini was just in the mood of jumping..and celebration.."congratulations.."

ananya really felt bad about this,tabhi avi ananya ke paas aati hai,,,or prithvi or nandini ki taraf point karti hai

avi: "ye donon ek saath kitne aacchee lagte hain na,,just made for eachother"

ananya: "but wo to sirf dost hai na"

avi: "that  is the beauty of there relation,,jaanti ho aaj tak inhone ek dusre ko kabhi propose nahin kiya,,,par har situation main ek dusre ka saaath diya hai.
kabhi official date par nahin gaye,,but ek dusre se baat kiye bager inka din nahin poora hota.
boyfriends,girlfriends ,lovers,sab kahene ki baatein hai,,but inka rishta kuch aaisa hai,jisme kuch kahne ki zaroorat hi nahin hai,,,wo doonon ye baat jaante hain ki wo ek doosre ke liye special hai,,and thats enough..

ananya was speechless,she could not say anythingh.

avi: "i know ki tum prithvi ko like karti ho ,isliye ye sab kah rahi hoon,,aaj shayad tumhe hurt hua hoga but its truth..."

they all left from there ,,but ananya kept on thinking onwhat avi has said,,,,,

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