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letsrockshona IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 20 October 2009 at 7:16am | IP Logged
hey nandini...beautifully written....lovely update
maria_awan IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 20 October 2009 at 4:19pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rajatrangini

Wink
Originally posted by maria_awan

really great bohat acah laga sameer ko shock lagna in a happy situaion Winknext part jaldi post karna dearWink
 
thankss maria
WinkWinkwell kuch shocks bhi acche hote hain..
and u will kepp getting such shocks here
 
yr welcome dear and i loved these shock waiting 4 moreWink
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Posted: 20 October 2009 at 4:38pm | IP Logged
too beautifull dear i loved the khushi and sameer momentsWinklkae mein girna ...............LOLLOLLOLnight scene........... EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedfight and romance from sameer to khushi are great.........Wink.......jaldi update karna me waiting SmileSmileSmile
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Posted: 20 October 2009 at 9:30pm | IP Logged
Superb update.I loved the scene between sammer and khushi.It's very sweet and cute.
Pls post next part soon.
rajatrangini Senior Member
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Posted: 22 October 2009 at 6:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by letsrockshona

hey nandini...beautifully written....lovely update
 
thankss dear..
rajatrangini Senior Member
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Posted: 22 October 2009 at 6:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by maria_awan

too beautifull dear i loved the khushi and sameer momentsWinklkae mein girna ...............LOLLOLLOLnight scene........... EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedfight and romance from sameer to khushi are great.........Wink.......jaldi update karna me waiting SmileSmileSmile
 
thankss maria..
i too love them....sorry for a day delay..
so this time i m posting a long update..Smile
rajatrangini Senior Member
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Posted: 22 October 2009 at 6:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Superb update.I loved the scene between sammer and khushi.It's very sweet and cute.
Pls post next part soon.
thankss rakhi..hope u will like the next too
rajatrangini Senior Member
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Posted: 22 October 2009 at 6:20am | IP Logged


contted...

after a pause..

Sameer: "are yaar.. mere saath rahogi ,to life main kuch exciting to hoga na
u know  'sanggati ka asar'"

Khushi: "u are immpossible..har baat ko mazak main hi lete ho"

thay walked for a bit,,or kuch doori par unhe ek chota sa market nazar aata hai.

Sameer: "wo dekho ,wahan ek chota sa market hai,,i think there we will get something
to eat,or aage ke raaste ke baare main bhi pata chal jaaega"

Khushi: "yaa mujhe bhi bohut bhook lagi hai,,or ab chala bhi nahin jaa raha"

Sameer: "but let me check one thingh...."

sameer apni pockets check karne laga.."shit ,i don't hav any cash..,aur yahan ye dhaabe wale
credit card to accept karenge nahin"

Khushi: "ab hum kya karenge.."

Sameer: "tum itna pareshaan kyon ho jaati ho,main hoon na..chalo mere saath"

he holded her hand or use wahan market tak lekar jaata hai..there he sold out his watch
to get some money...to hav somthingh to eat.

after a refreshing lunch..sameer asked the dhaabe wala "suniye ,,humme shimla jana hai,
kya yahan se koi convince mil sakta hai?"

Dhaabe wala: "haan..haan shimla jaane waali saari bus yahan rukti hai,,aap log
thoda wait karo koi na koi bus aati hi hogi"

sameer: "thankss..,kya yahan koi std booth hai?"

Dhaabe wala: "haan wo saamne hai"

sameer khushi ke paas aata hai "problem solved,,shimla ki bus aati hi hoga,,or hum shaam tak
wahan pohuch jaaenge,,abhi jara mere saath chalo..ek phone karna hai"

sameer ko std booth to mil gaya ,but phone number...

Khushi: "kya  hua,,"

Sameer: "actually mujhe kisi ka bhi number theek se yaad nahin hai..but try karta hoon
i hope ki yahi hona chahiye"

he dialed a number ********** "its ringing"

sameer : "hello,,"

Jai: "hey sk,,are u ok"

Sameer: "yaa.i m fine..tum log kahan ho"

Jai: "shimla,,green paradise hotel..and where r u,,hum tumhara kab se wait kar rahe hain"

Sameer: "yaa ,hum shaam tak shimla pohuch jaaenge..and wo poona se jo group aaya hai,,
they are with u??"

Jai: "yaaa ,wo to main bhool hi gaya,,is that girl ok??? acchaa hua yaad dilaya
warna uski sister phir se rona shuru kar deti"(he tooked it as a joke)

Sameer: "yaa,wo bhi theek hai,tum unhe inform kar dena..ok abhi main rakhta hoon ,bye"

Jai: "bye...take care"

Khushi: "kya hua...wo log kahan hain"

Sameer: "don worry,wo log shimla pohuch gaye hain...or probably hum bhi sham tak shimla main hi honge"

thodi der wait karne ke baad ,they got the bus..or apni bus ki journey ko enjoy karte hue..they
reached shimla...

Khushi: "really sameer,,thanks very much..tumhaari wajah se hee meri jurney itni mazzedaar rahi..
pata hi nahin chala ki kab pura din guzar gaya...
i hav really enjoyed it,,or ab mujhe lag raha hai,ki saare group main agar koi hai jo is tour ko nahin
bhool paayega to wo main hoon."

Sameer: "khushi,,mujhe laga tha ,ki tum mujhe apna dost samajhti ho..par"

Khushi: "offcourse,sameer...ye to maine tumhe aaj subah hi kaha tha,,that u r my friend.."

Sameer: "phir ye thanks kis ke liye ,chalo apna thanks wapas lo....or or ab pleasee
sorry mat bolna"

they both passed a smile on it,,or chalte chalte..they reached to hotel 'green paradise'.

AT THE RECEPTION

Sameer: "may i know the people from london...jai,tom ,emma,angel are in which room no."

Receptionist: "sure sir...let me check.....they are in room no. 134 n 135..1st floor"

sameer thanked ,the receptionist or khushi ke saath 1st floor par jaane laga....tabhi wahan khushi
ke collegde ki kuch ladkiyan aa gayin ...or khushi ko dekhkar wo use apne saath le jaane lagin..

sameer ke haaath se uska haath choot ta jaa raha tha...unki nazarein ek doosre ko dekh rahi thi
....aur kuch hi palon main wo log khushi ko wahan se le gayin..

tabhi wahan MR .dayal aa gaye.."hello young man,,really i will give ur name for the bravary award,,
warna aaj ke zamaane main kon kis ke liye apni jaan khatre main daalta hai"

Sameer: "well thanks u sir,,but ye to mera fraz tha..mere dost mera wait kar rahe honge ,,so i hav
to leave"

Mr.dayal: "yaa yaaa ,go ab to mulakaat hoti hi rahegi"

he reached to the room where his friends were residing..

Jai: "hey,,aa gaya mera sher,,,come.."he hugged him

Emma: "yaa sk,i was really worried for u...ab tumhe dekhne ke baad ,i m really relexed..soo how was ur
journey"

Sameer: "beautiful..."

Jai: "haan...ab ek ladki saath hogi to journey to beautiful hi honi hai na..kyon bhai..?"

Sameer: "shut up jai,,har koi teri tarah nahin sochtaa"

Jai: "are yaar main to mazak kar raha tha..."

Sameer: "where is my jacket?"

Emma: "its in ur bag..there"

sameer bag main se apni jacket nikaalta hai,,uske andar se apna wollet nikalkar apni pocket main
rakh leta hai
Jai: "ohh shit,,missed a golden chance....sk ke wollet main jo photo hai,,,use dekhne ka isse
acchaa chance nahin mil sakta tha"

Sameer: "sorry..ab to miss kar diya...(he lie down on the bed)i m feeling very tired,,so pleasee
son disturb mee"

***********************************************************************************

khushi,,apne room main pohuch gayi,,everyone was soo happy to get her back...
diya use dekhte hi uske gale lag kar rone lagi

Diya: "thanks god ki tu theek thaak wapas aa gayi...main to bohut daarr gayi thi"

Khushi: "yaaa,wo agar sameer nahin hota to pata nahin kya hota...main bhi bohut darr gayi thi,but
he is soo sweet..ki usne mujhe koi problem nahin hone dii"

Diya: "tune kuch khaya bhi ya nahin"

Khushi: "yaaa, hum logon ne shimla ke baahar ek dhaabe par lunch kiya,,,really telling u yaar
maine itna tasty khana kabhi nahin khaya,,or us par sameer ki non stop baatein..i hav really enjoyed
a lot"

Diya: "kya baat hai..,hum log yahan itna pareshaan the...or tu  ....
jab se aayi hai,bas sameer sameer sameer..jaise main to kuch hoon hi nahin,,ek baar bhi nahin poocha
ki main theek hoon ya nahin..pata hai,teri wajah se maine kal se kuch khaya bhi nahin hai"

Khushi: (holding her ears)"sorry diya...dekh mujhe maaf kar de...wo main to apni journey ke baare
main batane ke liye itni excited thi,,ki tujhse poochna hi bhool gayi..chal ab hum saath main kuch
khane chalte hain..,,ab chal na,ek ssmile to de"

Diya: "theek hai theek hai,,chalo.."

they went to the hotel's restourent...and ordered somethingh to eat

Diya: "ek baat bata khushi,tujhe darr nahin laga...ek to wo accident..or us par ek ajnabee ke saath
is nayi jagah par."

Khushi: "jab hum log bus main the..i was really very scread ...bas lag raha tha..ab nahin bachenge
but all thanks too god.....but uske baad bilkul darr nahin laga,even maine journey ko kafi enjoy kiya"
or ... sameer is such a nice boy ki uske saath ek pal ke liye bhi ye nahin laga that he is
a stranger..or main uske saath itni hi comfortable thi jitna ki tere saath...its strange..but true..
.....but yaar ab din bhar ki thakaan pata chal rahi hai..and i m feeling very tired"

 

 

 


 


 

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