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Posted: 20 October 2009 at 6:11am | IP Logged
Hope u all enjoyed diwali nicely…happy diwali again!!!!
This part is a bit dramatic…so if u feel it not up to mark……I am sorry..
Thanks to all who read and commented,"like"d,also silent readers…
Thanks for all u r support till now….
Please do comment…
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ARMAAN-RIDHIMAA : PART 9

"Laye hum Hasi laye hum Khushi jee le phir se zindagi…
Taaron se aage hum jaayenge cheen le ayenge roshni …
Dil ho jahaan dost ho vahaan aisa manzar hain yahan…
Manzil nayi,rasthe naye …
Phir bhi chale,hum saath mein…
Hum toh chale the dost banke…
Jaane kahan dill mill gayye!!!!"

Next day…

At sanjeevni…….

At locker room…

SIDDANTH:Wow!!!!!!!what a party man!!!cool!!!
J.P:Cool nehi sidhantji hot…pata nehi Dr.Shashank hum sab ko kya kehenge…
ATUL:Haan J.P ….aur kal toh wooh tumhe kaise ghoor rahe the..
J.P:Mere kapde dekh rahe the?(poping up his eyes with fear and seeing his dress now)..pata nehi yeh sidji ne kya pehena diya….
SIDDANTH:Dekh J.P maine sorry bol diya..so now finish it dude…
NAINA:Hai tamanna..(tamanna enters sadly)
TAMANNA:Hye…
J.P:Kya hua flowerji….
TAMANNA:Kal raat theek se nehi soyi,pata nehi Dr.shashank kya kehenge..,,
SIDDANTH: (Not thinking in flow)Kya karenge….sabko sanjeevni se nikaal denge…….bas!!!!!

All look at him seriously…..tamanna was shocked…

SIDDANTH:Cool…main mazak kar raha tha….waise mujhe tho koi problem nehi hain…(cooly)
ATUL:Sid baat karne se pehle ek baar sochlo….hum sabko sanjeevni mein internship milna bahut badi baat hain… aur agar hume nikal diya toh..?
TAMANNA:Agar aisa hua tho hum kya karenge…(to herself)main baaba se kya kahungi..
NAINA:Haan yaar mein wapas nehi jaana chahthi…papa phir se mere peeche pad jayenge….
ATUL:Yeh internship mere liye bahut important hain,,,(thinking of that's days incident which effected his life and internship for second time)
J.P:Arre aap sabki chodo mere baare mein socho…apni mougal saraye mein meri izaat kya reh jayegi…Humare toh wahan photo bhi chapa hain…
NAINA:3rd page par..hume pata hain…
J.P:Ab hum sab ko apna muh kaisa dikhaye…
NAINA:Shut up J.P!!!
Sid seeing tamanna and felt sad..
SIDDANTH:Yeh armaan bhi na… pata nehi party .
ATUL: (cutting his words)Armaan ne kya kiya……
J.P:Aap unki tarafdaari kyun kar rahe hain…unhone hi toh party rakha hain..
ATUL:Par Dr.shashank ne usse bualaya hamme nehi…pata nehi kya kaha hoga..
NAINA:Haan AJ sahi keh raha hain…hope Dr.Armaan ko kuch nehi hua ho(dreaming)
SIDDANTH:Hello kya hua..phir se kaha kho gayi,,?(waving his hand infront of him,she comes out from dream)
J.P:Arre haan nainaji..aap sahi keh rahe hain….matlab,,,,,aap sab sahi keh rahe hain…hum aaj unse duty par milenge na tab poonchenge….theek hain….aap chinta mat kariya..hum he na..

YUVRAAJ:Wohh rahenga tab toh kuch poochoge.. (Yuvraaj enters)
SIDDANTH:Kya matlab..
YUVRAAJ:Dr.armaan sanjeevni chod ke jaa rahe hain….
NAINA:kya…
All were shocked and exchanging looks to eachother..
ATUL: (was most shocked)Are u sure..tumhe kaise pata…
YUVRAAJ: (seriously)Mujhe jhoot bolna ka shauk nehi hain…

Atul was now worried,how can this happen,how can armaan do it,he didn't tell him-his best friend,and most of all –why??, but first he needed to talk to armaan to confirm it and also inform to anjali and others..

ATUL: (To himself)Mujhe anjali ko batana hoga…
He leaves fastly,others were busy in their conversation....

TAMANNA:Par kyun…
YUVRAAJ: Dr.Shashank ne warn kiya hoga aur wooh darr ke bhaag gaya hoga,,,,,,,
(smiling wickedly)

Naina was irritated listening to that and was about to bash him when sid talked..

SIDDANTH:See I said na yeh Dr.shashank nehi Dr.Draculla hain..sab par hamesha aag barsathe rehthe hain..kal dekha na..,poor armaan..…..
TAMANNA: (was worried listening to him and Dr.shashanks anger,to herself)Pata nehi hume kya kehenge…
J.P:"Poor" wooh nehi hum ban jayenge agar hum duty pe ab nehi gaye toh… (seeing watch)
NAINA:Mujhe toh yeh pata nehi chal raha ki Dr.shashank toh kisi kaam se bahar gaye the na,toh itni jaldi wapas aaye kaise..(looking suspiciously at yuvi)
J.P:Yeh sab batein chodo nainaji..Hume jana chahiye… (worried again seeing watch)
SIDDANTH:Hey… duty pe chalthe hain shayad kuch pata chal jaye..
TAMANNA:Haan… warna phir se Dr.keerthi kuch kehengi.
SIDDANTH:Uffo!!!tum sab se itna darthi kyun ho…
TAMANNA:Tum nehi samjhonge…(looking sad thinking what shashank will tell)
J.P:Chaliye na…

All leaves except yuvi….

He was seeing his locker,he was about to see file which armaan kept when naina who was about to leave stops and talks..

NAINA:Ek minute…Yeh sab tumhe kaise pata……tum toh kal party se chale gaye the na…
YUVRAAJ:Wooh……wardboy ne bataya…
NAINA:Aur Dr.Armaan jaa rahe hain iske baare mein hum mein se koi nehi jantha,,,..tumko kaise pata…..
YUVRAAJ: (trying to divert)Mujhe jana hain……. Kaam hain.. (he turns,naina comes front and blocks him)
NAINA:Itna jaldi bhi kya hain…(stopping him from going)
YUVRAAJ: (coming near her)Maine pehle bhi kahan aur phir se keh raha hoon,,,mujhse door raho………understand,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

He bangs the locker door not seeing file,naina backs hearing sound and he goes away locking it….

NAINA:Kuch toh chakkar hain..hamesha Dr.shashank ke peeche rehna…ajeeb harkate karna……
Mr.dafod mein toh tumhe nehi chodoongi…main bhi naina hoon..naina….

In sanjeevni……..

One place….

WARDBOY1: Tumhe pata hain ..Dr.armaan sanjeevni chod ke ja rahe hain…
WARDBOY2: Kya??

Other place..

SISTER1: Haan maine bhi suna hain…
SISTER2: Par kyun??
SISTER3: Kal ke party se shayad Dr.shashank naraz ho gaye…aur kuch kaha hoga..

Other place…

WARDBOY1: Nehi wooh khud chod ke jaa rahe hain..
SISTER1: Wooh kitne achche hain…
WARDBOY2: Haan unhone sanjeevni ke liye itna kuch kiya,,

Other place…

SISTER2:Hume unhe rokna hoga..
WARDBOY1:Haan ..hum sab unse baat karenge..
ALL: Haan…

Atul-anjali……..

ATUL:Anjali…(panting and coming near her)
ANJALI:Kya hua atul tum itna bhaag ke kyun aa rahe ho..mujhe dekhne ke liye..u are so sweet atul…..
ATUL:Anjali…….(breathing heavily)wooh…armaan…armaan sanjeevni chod ke jaa raha hain..
ANJALI:Kya……..kya matlab hain jaa raha hain..
ATUL:Maine khud suna hain…..
ANJALI:Armaan se mile…baat kiya…(tensed)
ATUL:Nehi.. maine pata lagaya… wooh abhi tak nehi aaya.. …aur uska phone bhi nehi lag raha hain…
ANJALI: (Thinking for sometime)Mujhe papa se baat karni hogi…
ATUL:Par anjali….
ANJALI:Please atul……iss baar mujhe mat roko…peechle baar main kuch nehi kar payi,,is baar toh main usse rokungi…(catching his hand)tum mere saath hona,,,
ATUL:Main tumhare saath hoon anjali….
ANJALI:Thanks atul..
ATUL:Chalo…….


At reception…….

JIAH:Hello Dr.keerthi….hello nikki….
KEERTHI:Hye jiah….
Nikki just smiles unwantedly……
NIKKI:Aap kal party pe nehi aayi..(asking keerthi)
KEERTHI:Wooh meri tabiyat theek nehi tha…
JIAH:Its o.k…mujhe toh Lagtha hain aaj sabki tabiyat kharab ho jayegi…
KEERTHI:Wooh kyun??
JIAH:Aapko nehi pata…
She nods in "no"…
JIAH:Yehi ki Dr.armaan sanjeevni chod kar jaa rahe hain..sabhi tho yehi baat kar rahe hain….
NIKKI:Kya???????????????(files in nikkis hand falls,she takes them shes shocked and so is keerthi and she keeps hand on nikki controlling her)
JIAH:Poor armaan aake kuch din bhi nehi hue aur jaa raha hain..so sad na…(nikki turns to go)….
arre nikki kaha jaa rahi ho…
NIKKI:Wooh..kuch kaam hain….
KEERTHI:Main bhi chalthi hoon… interns ko duty dena hain..

They both leave..

JIAH:Ab abhi aur mere beech mein koi nehi rahega….abhi baby…I am coming…..
Smiling to herself..

Nikki is in corridor thinking what to do..shes tensed..she tries to call armaan….but armaan is not lifting…

NIKKI:Main kya karoon.. … ….kaise pata lagau …….uska phone bhi nehi lag raha..kahi wohh..phir se toh nehi chala gaya……mujhe kuch toh karna hoga… kisse madad maangoo…
She thinks for sometime and remembers someone….
NIKKI:Abhimanyu……….par kaise……armaan ke liye itna toh kar hi sakthi hoon…


General ward……….

Yuvi-naina…

Naina is spying on yuvi to know whats the secret hes hiding from all and what are his intentions….

Yuvi is seeing a patient and naina a old man …
She was checking his heart beat coming near to him and he was hitting on her,but she was busy seeing yuvi and didnt see/listen to what he was saying…
The old man was very happy to see her so close and was lost in her..

PATIENT:Tum toh bahut sundar ho…
NAINA:Haan..(not listening and repeating the same word)
PATIENT:Main bhi kuch kam nehi hoon…
NAINA:Haan..
PATIENT: Main tumhe achcha lagtha hoon..(excited)
NAINA:Haan..
PATIENT: (to himself)Arre yeh to itni jaldi maan gayi ….
PATIENT: Tum mujhse shaadi karoogi?
NAINA:Haan..
PATIENT: (coming close to her) Toh main aaj hi meri teesri biwi ko tallak de detha hoon…..
NAINA:Haan…..

She just realised what she said..

NAINA:Kya….kya?????????

The old man was excited and he climbed on bed and was calling all to inform ..

PATIENT:Waah!!!!!arre bhaiyon aur yeh sundar ladki ko chod kar saari beheno…main tum sabko apni chauthi shaadi par bula raha hoon……. doctor naina ji ke saath….aap sab log aayiyega zaroor…

All other patients rushed to him and naina to congratulate and naina was confused and shocked not knowing whats happening….

All were rounded around them and yuvi was smiling at her …this irritated her the most…

She was angry….

NAINA:Stoppp!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
NAINA:Band karo yeh sab,jau sab jao apni beds par..jao…

She shooed them all away…….
All went back…
Now she looked at old man who was still on bed standing….and was seeing him with killing looks..

PATIENT:Jaan…kya hua…
NAINA: Jaan…..(imitating him) Main tumhari jaan le loongi…tum….. (pulling him down and coming near to his face pointing finger)ayinda mujhse baat kiya..toh main ..main ..
YUVRAAJ: Toh yeh Tumse shaadi karlegi....(coming from her back)
NAINA:Haan… (not realising again) kya????
PATIENT:Toh maina kab mana kiya…maine toh honeymoon ka bhi plan bana diya…..goa kaisa rahega jaan…..
NAINA:Tumhari toh(pointing yuvi)
PATIENT: Itni naraz kyun ho rahi ho jaan..Maine kahan na meri teesri biwi se koi problem nehi hoga…

Naina was irritated and now frustated..she sees old man and then yuvi and catches her head….

NAINA: (shouting)Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Nikki goes to abhis cabin………….

(knocking)
ABHI:Come in..(without seeing)
NIKKI:Dr.modi…..
ABHI: (seeing her)Nikki aao na baito..
NIKKI:Mujhe aapse kuch baat karni hain…….
ABHI:Haan bolo nikki kya baat hain…
NIKKI:Wooh kal party ke baare(she was telling about armaan)

But abhi understood something else…..

ABHI:Nikki..its ok…tumhe mujhse kuch bhi kehne ki zaroorat nehi…..tum mujhse pyaar karo ya na karo,phir bhi main tumse pyaar kartha hoon aur hamesha kartha rahoonga…main samajh saktha hoon nikki tumpe kya guzar raha hooga….
NIKKI:Nehi wooh jiah ne..(she wanted to tell what jiah told at reception to her)
ABHI:Nikki….i know….maine kal tumse baat karne ke baad iske baare mein socha….aur mujhe laga ki aise rishtey se na hi main khush hoon aur na hi jiah…toh is liye maine mere liye..tumhare liye… humdono ke liye….ek faisla liya hain….main jiah se baat karoonga………..shayad wooh samajh jayee….
NIKKI:Par…
ABHI:Please nikki mujhe pata hain maine tumhe bahut dukh diya hain…par please ek …mujhe bas ek mauka do ..main sab kuch…theek kardoonga..believe me…
NIKKI:Yeh sab……. tum..(she was happy but was confused not able to believe what abhi said)
ABHI:Tumhare liye main itna bhi nehi kar saktha kya.…tum mere liye bahut important ho nikki…sab se zyaada…jiah se bhi…..
NIKKI:Abhi..kya sach mein…(she was now very happy and knew that abhi was telling truth)
ABHI:Haan..nikki ab mein hum dono ke beech ki doriyon ko kam karna chahtha hoon…bas mujhe tumhari saath chahiye…..dogi na…
She nods and comes near him and hugs …
NIKKI:Abhi…I love u….
ABHI:I love u too nikki……tum khush toh hona..(he too hugs her)
NIKKI:Hmmm!!abhi………tum mujhe kabhi chod kar mat jao…mujhe bilkul achcha nehi lagtha…
ABHI:Nehi…kabhi bhi nehi…
NIKKI: (she was very happy,after many days abhi had said her what she wanted,,,,she wanted to something else but remembered why she came)……
abhi,,,,,,,,,,,,,,armaan………….
ABHI:Kya hua armaan ko………

After telling to abhi…….

ABHI: (to himself)Armaan ne mujhse kuch nehi kaha…?(to nikki)Tumne usse baat ki…
NIKKI:Usska phone nehi lag raha hain…
ABHI:Anjali-atul ko pata hain…
NIKKI:Main toh bhul hi gayi…main bahut tensed thi…bas tumhare paas aa gayi………
ABHI: ..(abhi smiled thinking nikki still believes him and came first to her)Humme unhe bhi batana hoga…
NIKKI:Hmm…abhi… tum armaan ko rokoge na..
ABHI:Main kuch karoonga nikki…
NIKKI:Abhi tumne last time bhi usko help kiya..please abhi..iss baar bhi kuch karo..(hugs him)
ABHI:Don't worry main kuch karoonga..(hugs her)

Last time…..

At the time of armaans memory loss and his re-exam,nikki asked abhis help and he wanted to do,but before he could shashank solved the matter…

ABHI: (to himself)Mujhe iss baar toh Dr.Shashank se baat karna hoga..….



Abhi,nikki comes to talk with shashank ,they meet atul-anjali there…

ANJALI:Nikki…
NIKKI:Anjy…yeh armaan…sanjeevni chod kar…….yeh sab kya hain…….
ABHI:Aapne usse baat kiya…(asking atul-anjali)
ATUL:Nehi uska phone nehi lag raha hain..
NIKKI:Kahi wooh chala toh nehi gaya…
ATUL:Please guys…hume pehle Dr.Shashank se baat karna hoga…
ABHI:Haan sirf woohi hume bata sakthe hain ki kal kya hua hain…
ANJALI:Main papa se baat karoongi..
ABHI:Main bhi chaloonga…

Abhi looks at nikki and she catches his hand and nods to him…atul also sees anjali and smiles at her
,she to smiles..
They both enter the cabin…

In shashanks cabin………….

ABHI:Dr.shashank…
SHASHANK:Oh …Dr.modi aur Dr.anjali…dono saath mein..kuch important baat hain kya..?
ANJALI:Wooh kal party ke baare mein..
SHASHANK:Its ok …maine iss bare mein socha hain..is baar main aap sab ko maaf kar rahan hoon…..but yes doctors aapko aage se yeh dyaan rakhana hoga..this is sanjeevni and discipline yahan bahut zaroori hain….
ANJALI:Par Dr.Shashank.. Dr.Armaan..     
SHASHANK: (cutting her words)Aur haan..aap interns aur baaki staff ko bhi keh deejiye….iss baar ke liye unhe maaf kiya jaa raha hain..par doobara yeh repeat nehi hona chahiye..ok..
ABHI:Dr.shashank …
SHASHANK: (not listening)Ok I think its late now..mujhe kahin jana hain,,,will talk to u later…
ANJALI: (loudly)Papa……….
ANJALI:Aapne armaan ko kyun sanjeevni se nikala…

Shashank stops and turns…

SHASHANK: (he thinks for sometime)Dr.Anjali yeh ek hospital hain…appka ghar nehi..
ANJALI:Ho..ok..Dr.Shashank gupta…kya aap yeh bata sakthe hain ki aapne Dr.Armaan ko kyun sanjeevni se nikala ja raha hain..
SHASHANK:Maine unhe nehi nikala hain…..
ANJALI:Kyun aap jhoot bol rahe hain..
SHASHANK:Dekhiye Dr.Anjali mujhe unhe nikalane ka powers nehi hain,,yeh toh sirf trustees ke haath mein hain…(saying sarcastically as if he don't knw)
ABHI:Toh kya trustees ne Dr.Armaan ko nikala hain…
SHASHANK:Nehi….(facing abhi)wooh unki khud ki decision hain….Dr.Armaan khud sanjeevni chod kar jaana chahthe hain.. ….
Now anjali and abhi felt that armaan is leaving sanjeevni for sure…but why ?
ANJALI:Armaan aisa kabhi nehi karega….main janti hoon usse…
SHASHANK:Aap agar janthi hain toh unse khud yeh kyun nehi poonchthi…
ABHI:Dr.Shashank…Dr.Armaan abhi tak nehi aaye aur phone ka bhi response nehi de rahe…
SHASHANK:Wooh aaj shaam ko aayenge apni resignation dene….tab aap unse baat keejiye…
ANJALI:Aap aisa kyun kar rahe hain papa please…armaan bahut achcha hain….usse humari zaroorat hain…hume uski zaroorat hain aur ridhima ko sabse zyaada…
SHASHANK:Anjali………… (loudly)
ABHI:Dr.shashank aap kyun apni professional aur personal life ko mix kar rahe hain..i mean,..
SHASHANK:Dr.Modi….aap iss baare mein baat na hi kare toh behtar hain..
ABHI:Sorry Dr.Shashank,par yahan ke senior doctor hone ke naate mujhe yeh kehna hoga ki…Dr.armaan ek bahut hi achche doctor hain..unhone aathi hi itni complicated case solve kiya hain.. ,,,sanjeevni ko unki zaroorat hain….
ANJALI:Haan papa…sanjeevni ke liye toh aap usse rok leejiye..please….
SHASHANK:Enough…maine pehle bhi kahan hain …aur phir se keh rahan hoon..Dr.Armaan mallik khud sanjeevni chod kar jaa rahe hain……wooh unka khud ka decision hain..now please mujhe jana hain..
ANJALI:Par papa…

He leaves…..

Atul and nikki who are waiting sees shashank going away and then sees abhi and anajli coming out…

NIKKI:Abhi…kya hua…
ATUL:Anjali..kya kahan Dr.shashank ne..
ABHI:Humme armaan se baat karna hoga…

At canteen…

All interns are having their break…

NAINA: Hye ..guys….
J.P:Hye nainaji…
SIDDANTH:Hey whats up…kya hua….aise kyun ho??
NAINA: Kya batau sid aaj toh bahut thak gayi aur wooh budha mera peecha hi nehi chodtha…
YUVRAAJ:Shayad tumse bahut pyaar kartha hain… (comes and sits next to her)
YUVRAAJ: (gets irritates seeing him)Jaise tum Dr.shashank ko karthe ho aur unka peecha hi nehi chodthe…
He sees seriously…
SIDDANTH:Chill guys…(they both see away from each other)
NAINA:Hey tamanna..tumhe kya hua….
TAMANNA:Kuch nehi…
SIDDANTH:Arre yaar yeh phir se shuru ho gayi..dekho miss gayab puppy tumhe kuch nehi hoga…pata nehi hamesha kisi saas-bahu serial ki heroine ki tarah rothi rehthi ho…
NAINA:Chodo sid…..waise kisi ko yeh pata chala ki Dr.armaan kis wajah se jaa rahe hain…
SIDDANTH:Nope…
J.P:Woh toh aaj bhi sanjeevni nehi aaye…
NAINA:Nehi aaye ….toh kahan hoonge..

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ABHI:Shayad hume armaan ke ghar jana chahiye…
ANJALI:Haan ..shayad tum theek kehrahe ho…
ABHI:Main jayonga,(he thinks for sometime,he wants to take nikki but)anjali tum bhi chalo..
Anjali nods…
NIKKI:Main bhi aaongi..
ABHI:Nehi nikki tum yehi raho….
NIKKI:Par………
ANJALI:Atul nikki ke saath raho..abhi hume jana chahiye…..
ATUL:Haan anjali..tum log jao..

After sometime…nikki and atul are waiting but they don't get any response from anjali and abhi…

ATUL:Nikki shaam ho gaya hain…tum bahut thaki lag rahi ho,,,jaake thoda fresh ho jao….agar kuch pata chala toh main batadonga…
NIKKI:Thanks atul..
He smiles…

Nikki goes to washroom ,infront of mirror …….and is thinking…

NIKKI:Pata nehi abhi ne phone kyun nehi kiya…armaan ka pata chala ya nehi….shaam ho gaya hain….
Anjali ne toh kahan ki Dr.Shashank ne usse kahan ki armaan shaam ko aayega…..agar wooh aa gaya hoga toh……… kahan hoga…………………………………………..(she washes her face)
Shayad mujhe pata hain …

Nikki goes to I.C.U,ridhimas room…and yes her guess is correct………

Armaan was sitting beside ridhima holding her hand…..he wanted to see her before he leaves….

ARMAAN:Mujhe maaf kardo basket…….mujhe maaf kardo…….main jaa rahan hoon…..main jaa rahan hoon………tumhe chod ke ….(crying)

Nikki was shocked to hear from armaans mouth that he is going,that means what all were saying is true..but why.??

ARMAAN:kyun ..kyun ……jab bhi hum paas aate hain toh kyun hume door hona padtha hain….kyun ridhima ….(he cries)mujhe maaf kardo……

Nikki keeps her hand on armaan and he sees her,she sits beside him…

NIKKI:Armaan…….(he doesn't talk)
NIKKI:Armaan….yeh sab mein kya sun rahi hoon..tum..tum jaa rahe ho…kyun armaan kyun…..
ARMAAN:Nikki please..
NIKKI:Jab bhi mujhe ya kisi ko bhi tumhari zaroorat thi toh hamesha mere saath rahe..toh ab kyun saath chod kar jaa rahe hoo…

Armaan felt sad ,the thought of leaving their friends ,made him sad,leaving sanjeevni made him sad,
he hugged her tightly and so did nikki…

NIKKI:Hume chodo..ridhima ko tumhari zaroorat hain…please mat jao…….
ARMAAN:Nehi nikki mujhe jana hoga…
NIKKI:Par kyun…kyun jana chahthe ho tum….Dr.Shashank ne kuch kahan…..
ARMAAN:Nehi….(he didnt want to say)mujhe jaana hoga…bas….
NIKKI:Tum mujhse kuch chupa rahe ho…….
ARMAAN:Nehi nikki…….mujhe sach mein jana hain….
NIKKI:Tum jhoot bol rahe ho……armaan…….kyun jana chahthe ho tum bolo kyun……
ARMAAN:Ek bahut zaroori kaam hain…..
NIKKI:Hum sab se bhi zaroori….ridhima se bhi zaroori……..(he felt very sad hearing it)main tumhari baat nehi sunoongi….main abhi Dr.Shashank se baat karne jaa rahi hoon..(he stops her)
ARMAAN:Nehi nikki…..please,,,,mujhe jaana hain aur tum mujhe nehi rokoge…tumhe meri kasam……..isse aage kuch mat poonco..please………

Nikki sits down and looks down not facing him…

ARMAAN:Nikki ,,,,nikki,,,(she sees him)mujhse ek vaada karogi....ridhima ka khayal rakhogi..usse kabhi bhi meri kami mehsoos mat hone dene….(nikki nods)….aur haan tum bhi apna khayal rakho,
Aur rona mat..tumhe bilkul suit nehi kartha…aur haaan....dekho kitni patli ho gayi ho..kuch kha lena nehi toh…(he couldnt go further,he couldn't hide his feelings and hugged her)
NIKKI:Armaan….
He got up saw ridhimaa and kissed her forehead…….
ARMAAN:I love u ridhimaa…….
ARMAAN:Ab mujhe jana chahiye…

He looked once back and left the room……….


At reception…………

All staff and interns were gathered to give farewell to armaan..all were sad…………
Abhi and anjali still didn't came…….

ARMAAN:Dr.keerthi …maine saari formalities complete kar liya hain… …yeh raha file..thanks for everything…….
KEERTHI:we will miss u Dr.Armaan…
He smiled…he moved forward..
WARDBOY:Armaan..aap mat jayiye..(giving boquet)
SISTER:Please Dr.Armaan…(giving flowers)
ALL:Please...

He moved forward…

PATIENT:Dr.armaan aapne meri jaan bachaya hain…thank u so much…please aap mat jayiye…
He was Mr.Avinash,whose surgery armaan did,he was still on wheel chair…
GIRL: (She was daughter of Mr.Avinash)Bhaiya..(armaan kneels down to her,she kisses him on cheek and gives a flower)aap bahut achche hain..apne mere papa ko bachaya hain..aap mat jau..mere liye…
He hugged her…

Armaan moved forward …
UMAR BHAI:Armaan beta mat jao..na…
ARMAAN:Umar bhai…sanjeevni ka khayal rakhna…

He moved forward to interns……..
SIDDANTH:Armaan..dude..Will miss you..(sid hugged him)
NAINA:Dr.Armaan mat jayiye na…
All were seeing him sadly except yuvi who wasn't here…
ARMAAN:Do u work nicely…….be the best doctors ever..,,ok

Armaan move forward to atul..

ARMAAN:Atul…(he turned around not listening to him)
ARMAAN:Atul..meri baat suno..apne bhai ki baat nehi sunoge…….skhiri baar…….
ARMAAN: (he turned)Apna khayal rakhna aur anjali ka bhi,usse jaldi hi batado…warna meri tarah baad mein pachtaoge…(laughing but it didn't last long)
ATUL:Armaan…..(he hugs him)

He moves to nikki,,
ARMAAN:Nikki…kabhi kabhi doosre ki nazariya se bhi dekhne ki koshish karo…,,agar koi tumse sache dil se kuch kehna chahtha hain..toh usse ek mauka zaroor dena…mere liye….ok..(she nods)
NIKKI:Armaan…..(she hugs him)
ARMAAN:Anjali aur abhi kahan hain..
NIKKI:Tumhe doondhe ke liye tumhare ghar gaye hain……..
ARMAAN:Lagtha hain mere naseeb mein unse milna nehi hain..
NIKKI:Aisa kyun kehrahe ho armaan…..woooh aate hi honge..
ARMAAN:Main aaj raat ki flight se america jaa raha hoon…,,
Now that was another shock to them,,
ATUL:Armaan…
NIKKI:Armaan………par kyun…please armaan …please…mat jao..hum sab ko chod kar mat jao..
ARMAAN:Nikki tumne wada kiya tha ki tum mujhse kuch nehi poochogi…aur rona mat…
Nikki is sad and is still crying..
ARMAAN:Ok then..bye…….
He walks…
ALL: Dr.armaan ..mat jayiye….
ALL: Hum sab Dr.Shashank se baat karenge…hum unse maafi mangege…..please..
ARMAAN:Nehi..yeh faisla maine khud liya hain…aur haan is baare mein koi bhi…koi bhi(pointing all)Dr.Shashank se nehi baat karenge…please mere liye……..
All nod unwantedly…..
ARMAAN:Ab mujhe chalna chahiye…….
He sees all and waves them good bye..all follow him…….
SISTER:Please Dr.Armaan aap mat jayiye,hum sab ko aapki zaroorat hain…
ATUL:Please armaan..
ALL: Please…
ARMAAN:Main faisla kar chuka hoon aur tum mein se koi bhi mujhe nehi rok sakthe….
Hes almost near sanjeevnis entrance now..
ARMAAN:Main jaa rahan hoon…
VOICE:Aap ko kahin jane ki zaroorat nehi hain Dr.Armaan..

All turn to see whos voice is it and its……………..SHASHANK'S….!!!!!!!!


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Ok guys that's it for this time…
A bit dramatic and suspense ending..with lots of twists..i knw....
Please do comment…..
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My next update could be a bit late due to my computer problem,,
But if its solved will update early…
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Hye guys…
I know I am late and I am sorry for that ,its because of my computer and I am still struggling with it,but the good news is that I became a "senior member"wow!!!…
And the biggest news is I completed writing 10 parts (I know they are very long enough to complete 20),I cant believe I wrote them,,,par yaar please tum log toh yakeen karo..lolz..o.k!!
Never in my life I thought I could write atleast a page with something interesting,but I wonder how I wrote nearly 100 pages…gosh!!!
I want to thank my parents and my sweetest big sister(love u deeds <3) for always supporting me and encouraging me…
Thanks to each and everyone who have supported me and encouraged me here and in fanfic section… for whom i take out break from my studies and write even at the time of my exams which are in next month…thanks a lot….
Thanks to all my friends here,who read and commented regularly,"like"d,also silent readers(guys ab toh comment karo)…
The next parts will have a lot of twists and turns..so keep reading….
Please do comment…
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ARMAAN-RIDHIMAA : PART 10

"Laye hum Hasi laye hum Khushi jee le phir se zindagi…
Taaron se aage hum jaayenge cheen le ayenge roshni …
Dil ho jahaan dost ho vahaan aisa manzar hain yahan…
Manzil nayi,rasthe naye …
Phir bhi chale,hum saath mein…
Hum toh chale the dost banke…
Jaane kahan dill mill gayye!!!!"



At sanjeevni..

VOICE:Aap ko kahin jane ki zaroorat nehi hain Dr.Armaan..

All turn to see whos voice is it and its……………..SHASHANK'S….!!!!!!!!

All were shocked,nikki and atul as they know abhi and anjy have talked to him and he has not agreed…
But who was most shocked was armaan….he felt this as his imagination…
Seeing all staring at him,Shashank came near all of them and repeated the words again….

SHASHANK:Aap ko kahin jane ki zaroorat nehi hain Dr.Armaan..
All staff gathered around shashank…
WARDBOY1: Hum sab aap se maafi mangthe hain Dr.Shashank…
SISTER1: Sorry sir…please Dr.Armaan ko mat nikaliye…
WARDBOY2: We are very sorry Dr.Shashank…
SISTER2:Jee sir ,,,hum doobara kabhi nehi karenge..please sir..
ALL: Please sir…

SHASHANK:Dekhiye…maine pehle hi Dr.Modi aur Dr.Anjali se kahan hain ki maine aap sab ko maaf kiya hain..unhone aapko inform nehi kiya…

He looked around but didn't find them…

SHASHANK:So ..its..o.k..par haan dobara aisa nehi hona chahiye..

WARDBOY: Thank u Dr.Shashank…
ALL: Thank u sir…
UMAR BHAI:Shukriya.. Dr.Shashank…
GIRL: Dr.Armaan ab kahin nehi jayenge na uncle..
SHASHANK:Jee haaan..unhe kahin jaane ki zaroorat nehi hain…

Armaan looked at him shocked…why is he doing,,may be because he didn't wanted to spoil his image before staff…but he was still confused…

SISTER3:Aap sach keh rahe hain..Dr.Shashank…
WARDBOY3: Dr.Armaan kahin nehi jaa rahe,hain na…..

SHASHANK:Haan..wooh kahin nehi jayenge..…waise mujhe lagtha hain ki sanjeevni ko itne kabil doctor ko khona nehi chahiye…kya kehthe hain…

He smiled at all and all were happy listening it,all exchanged looks to each other and were very happy for armaan..butArmaan was still shocked,he didn't know what was happening for a minute and stared at Dr.Shashank..

Dr.Shashank..smiled at all and said ..

SHASHANK:Ok..ab aap sabke favourite Dr.Armaan kahin nehi jaa rahe,toh aap sab apne kaam par jaa sakthe hain..
SISTER(s)/ WARDBOY(s):Jee sir..thank u sir..
OTHER INTERNS/STAFF:Thank u Dr.shashank..
SISTER(s)/ WARDBOY(s):Congrats Dr.Armaan..
OTHER INTERNS/STAFF:Congrats…(to armaan)
Armaan thanked them still confused..
Nikki and atul were still standing along with keerthi and interns…

SHASHANK:Interns…aapka duty ab tak khatam nehi hua…
J.P:No sir..yes sir… no.sir…hum jaa hi rahe the sir,,
SHASHANK:Toh jayiye….
All interns looked at themselves and fastly left except atul..afterall he was also intern..
SHASHANK:Dr.Joshi…. aap bhi..
ATUL:Jee ..yes…sir..
Atul left only to stop at a distance…

SHASHANK:Dr.keerthi aap jaldi conference room mein ayiye (he turned around to go but stopped and turned to armaan)aur Dr.Armaan mallik …aap bhi…

Armaan was confused and stood still…
Keerthi followed Dr.shashank and said to armaan…
KEERTHI: "Welcome back Dr.Armaan" and he smiled faintly to her and she left…

Nikki and atul (who came after seeing shashank going)came and hugged him..they were very very happy for him..and it showed on their faces,,,

ATUL:Armaan suna…tumhe kahin jane ki zaroorat nehi hain…main tere liye bahut khush hoon mere bhai…ab tum please koi behas mat kar…theek hain,,(he hugged him again)
NIKKI:Welcome Dr.Armaan mallik to sanjeevni again…(nikki said smiling and hugging him)

Then they heard the announcement asking Dr.Armaan to come to conference hall immediately….

But armaan stood there not listening to it,thinking how could shashank do it,as per their deal shashank has forgived all staff infront of him but how did he call him again back to sanjeevni…whats on shashanks mind….what he is upto now….but he was happy atleast he was back to sanjeevni….but he still didn't know how all this happened..

NIKKI:Armaan…armaan…
ARMAAN:Kya… (he came back to senses)
ATUL:Jao…
ARMAAN:Kahan..
NIKKI:Conference room…..annoncement bhi aaya hain..
ARMAAN:Haan…haan…
NIKKI ATUL:All the best armaan..

They both gave a thumps up to him..
He smiled at them thinking again and left…while nikki stood there thinking something..
ATUL:Nikki…ab tum kya soch rahi ho..
He shook her calling her name again,,,
NIKKI:Haan..atul…
ATUL:Hume anjali aur Dr.Modi ko inform karna chahiye..
NIKKI:Haan,,,
ATUL: (atul was trying to find his phone when he talked again)Nikki … yeh Dr.Shashank kaise maan gaye..mujhe kuch ajeeb lag raha hain..
NIKKI:Wahin toh mujhe bhi samajh mein nehi aa raha hain atul…
ATUL: Chodo yaar armaan wapas toh aa gaya..main abhi phone karke aata hoon…(he went out to call them)
He was very happy and left to call anjy to inform the good news…

NIKKI: (to herself)Pata nehi…par mujhe kuch toh gadbad lag raha hain…hope armaan theek ho…

At conference hall….

Armaan entered the conference hall still confused,but he realised one thing shashank has not allowed him back in sanjeevni just listening to others pleas or his capability as a doctor,,then what is the reason…as soon as he entered he saw some person coming near him and shaking hand…he didn't see his face cos of his thoughts…then he again saw him and was surprised..,,,

MEHRA: Congratulations Dr.Armaan..
ARMAAN:Mr.Mehra.???aap yahan….(he shaked his hand)
MEHRA: Kya hain yeh Dr.Armaan,aapne humko itni badi baat nehi bataya..?
Armaan thought he was talking about his leaving of sanjeevni…As he was the one through which he came again to sanjeevni,he felt sad for not telling him…
ARMAAN:Wooh….main….
MEHRA: Apne nehi bataya toh kya…hume pata chal gaya..(he walked back to his chair and sat)aur hum toh bahut khush hain…

Khush?what is talking about… thought armaan..

ARMAAN:Jee main kuch samjha nehi…
MEHRA: Ismein na samjhne ki baat kya hain..,,comeone have u r seat…

Armaan proceeded ,he looked at keerthi who was smiling,shashank was behaving normally …
He took the seat and looked at all ..there were around 4 more people not including them,,, ,2 of them were trustees for now quite some years…and the remaing two would have joined recently,,,,they smiled at him and he gave a smile back….

MEHRA: So Dr.Armaan…
Armaan was very much confused..why did they came…and they also know hes going leaving sanjeevni..and they are happy about it…what???he cleared his mind and talked..
ARMAAN:Aap sab…
ARMAAN:Bhai ..Dr.Armaan…aapne hume bataya hi nehi ki aapne itni badi operation successfully kiya hain….par hume toh pata lag gaya hain..
TRUSTEE 1:And we are all very proud of it…
TRUSTEE 2:Yes Dr.armaan ..apne sanjeevni ka naam roshan kar diya hain….
TRUSTEE 3:Itni complicated surgery tha aur apne aati hi solve kar diya..…

Armaan thought they came here to ask about his operation..o.k..

ARMAAN: (as true professional)I just did my duty sir… nothing more than that..
MEHRA: Dekhiye…Dr.Shashank main na kahan ,yeh ladka toh hain hi aisa…itna bada operation kiya phir bhi kehtha hain sirf duty hain…

Mr.Mehra-Mr.Suresh Mehra… he was of age of shashank but a man with sense of humour…knows armaan from the days he joined life care hospital…he was also a regular visitor their and was quite impressed with his work and got fond of him due to his dedication and hard work,,,armaan to got close to him as he didn't have anyone at that time,mehra guided and supported him in various occassions and he called him "uncle" when ever they were alone…and mehra to felt him as his son..and that's how he recommended his name to sanjeevni… though he did know armaan did his internship in sanjeevni he still didn't know many details why he left it..…as he joined later in sanjeevni as trustee when shashank left to abroad leaving his responsiblites,,,,, he is also a good friend of Dr.Shashank for a long time though professionally as he was in same circle,and shashank respected him for that,he became close to him in these 6 months when he took care of sanjeevni in his absence …but mehra didn't know much of his personal details except some… …

TRUSTEE 4:Aapko pata hain…media toh aapki tareef karthe nehi thakthi…
ARMAAN:Media..par maine toh kuch interview nehi diya….
MEHRA: Arre aaj kal media ko kuch bolne ki zaroorat hain…wooh toh sab apne aap hi jaan lete hain..kyun Dr.Shashank..
Shashank smiled fakely.…
MEHRA: Waise Dr.Armaan hum toh aapse bahut naraaz hain..
Armaan looked at him questioningly..
MEHRA: Pehla toh yeh ki aap toh hume sanjeevni ke join hone ke baad jaise bhool hi gayee..na milna,na phone,,,kya chal raha hain..
ARMAAN:Wooh bas main case mein…
MEHRA: Jantha hoon jantha hoon…   
TRUSTEE 2:Aur doosri baat kya hain Mr.Mehra..
MEHRA: Arre wooh to yeh ki isne humko abhi tak "party" jo nehi diya…itni badi success aur "party" nehi hoga toh kaise chalega…..

Armaan looked at shashank and so did keerthi with their eyebrows narrowed and shashank too gave them a stern look..

Party……..???????The things which all happened in last 2 days which have effected armaans life drastically were all because of this so called "party",and here we hear again about it..
Mehra noticed it armaan and keerthi looking at shashank,he knew shashank well and said …

MEHRA: Arre Dr.Shashank aap aise kya dekh rahe hain..haan haan… hume pata hain aapko yeh sab achcha nehi lagtha..par kabhi kabhi hum jaise "jawaan" logon ko bhi thoda kaam se break lena chahiye….
ARMAAN: "Jawaan"…aap?(teasing)
MEHRA: Arre yaar kyun meri jawani ke peeche pade ho…..achcha toh ek treat hi dedo usse hi kaam chalayenge…
Everybody started laughing…
TRUSTEE 3:Haan Dr.Armaan humko bhi treat chahiye…
ALL: Haan..haan..
ARMAAN:Jee zaroor…(seeing shashank with cornor of his eyes to see his reaction,he was trying to control himself,it was shown on his face..)
ARMAAN:Waise aap yahan aaye kis liye..
Shashank has not talked till now and now the main thing for which he came to this meeting and most of all stopped armaan came along..
SHASHANK:Haan Mr.Mehra,apne kahan ki apko ek important annoucement karni hain aur jaldi hi sabko inform kardo especially Dr.Armaan ko,,,aur apne yeh bhi kahan hain ki yeh sanjeevni ke liye ek bahut hi achcha mauka hain…..akhir kya baat hain…

Now armaan knew why shashank asked him to come back,for sanjeevnis sake…

MEHRA:Arre dekho jo kehne aaye hain wooh toh bhul hi gaye…arre Dr.Shashank,jo hamare foreign clients hain….unhone funds dene ke liye haan kardi..
Everyone beamed with happiness especially shashank..
SHASHANK:Wow!!!!!!!its great news..par yeh sab achanak….i mean wooh log toh kayi dino se mana kar rahe the na….unhein abhi hum par confidence nehi hain..
TRUSTEE 1:Jee haan…par maan gaye…
SHASHANK:Kaise..
MEHRA: Dr.Armaan ki wajah se…
ARMAAN: (He was shocked more than shashank did)Mere wajah se….
TRUSTEE 4:Yes…aapki wajah se….they were very impressed with u r work..the way u handled the case,they have also seen on t.v too…
TRUSTEE 2:Thanks to Dr.Keerthi…jinhone apki surgery ki news hume di and we could update to them…and they were impressed with u r work…

Shashank and armaan looked at keerthi,she was sitting in between them,keerthi faced shashank..

KEERTHI: (bit tensed)Wooh sir maine saari surgeries ki tarah iska bhi report bheja tha…apko tho pata hain ki kisi bhi badi operation trustees ko inform kiye bagair nehi hota…
Shashank noded silently…
TRUSTEE 3:Haan …they have seen sanjeevni work before and now after seeing Dr.Armaans work they were very impressed…unhe laga ki jahan itne dedicated aur kamiyab doctors hain sanjeevni mein,their funds could be utilised in correct way..
TRUSTEE 4:Is funds se hume kayi nayi equipment aur new advanced facilities ke liye use kar sakthe hain..
TRUSTEE 1:Its really good news to sanjeevni….

SHASHANK:Par wooh ayenge kab…
MEHRA: They havent informed but yes they have sent this fax,they said they will call u too..…
He hand overed the papers to shashank and he saw and was very happy but seeing armaan he looked away from him….
TRUSTEE 3:We are very happy Dr.Armaan…
TRUSTEE 4:Hume lagtha hain apko yahan bhejkar Mr.Mehra ne sahi decision liya hain…
Mehra smiled..
TRUSTEE 1:Aap aise hi sanjeevni ka naam uncha keejiye…
MEHRA: I think we all will leave now,we wanted to inform this good news immediately,iss liye itne urgently bulaya hain,,hope ako disturb nehi kiya ho..
ARMAAN:Disturb..nehi bikul bhi nehi…(under his breathe)par kisi aur ko mujhe nehi pata..(seeing shashank)
TRUSTEE 2:Apne kuch kahan..
ARMAAN:No..
TRUSTEE 4:Ok then we will take leave…
MEHRA: Aur haan humare treat ke baare mein mat bhuliye…
All laughed again and they were at door when mehra talked again..
MEHRA:Waise Dr.Shashank ,,,,aap Dr.Armaan ko kahin jaane mat deejiye..
All looked at him,shashank ,keerthi and armaan thought he knew armaan was going leaving sanjeevni and all three looked at eachother shocked…
MEHRA: Mera matlab hain ki kaafi saari hospitals Dr.Armaan ki kabiliyat ko dekhkar bahut zyaada impress ho gaye hain…ya phir yu kehiye jealous ho gayi hain..aur ho bhi kyun nehi…itna dedicated doctor jo hain…..
Armaan just smiled looking at him..he knew him well,he has this habit of praising him at others….seeing him smile mehra continued..
MEHRA: Arre Dr.Armaan aapko pata nehi wooh toh apko offer dene ke liye ready hain,bahut logon ne toh baat bhi kee hain mujhse,even from abroad…par maine keh diya…Dr.Armaan toh sanjeevni chod kar kahin nehi jayenge… (showing with hands)
MEHRA: Wooh toh sanjeevni ke amanat hain…kyun sahi kahan na Dr.Shashank..
SHASHANK:Yes yes…ofcourse…(smiling fakely)
ARMAAN:Aap chinta mat kee jiye Mr.mehra,ab agar koi chahe toh bhi mujhe sanjeevni se nehi nikaal payega…mera matlab hain ki……..mein nehi jaaunga…
MEHRA: Good to hear that…(he came near him and said slowly and patted his back)keep it up my boy!!!
ARMAAN: (slowly)Thanks uncle..

All left………outside…mehra stopped shashank..

MEHRA: Dr.Shashank mujhe aapse kuch zaroori baat karni thi…
SHASHANK:Jee..mere cabin main…ayiye..

Inside…all were gone except armaan and keerthi..

ARMAAN:Thanks Dr.Keerthi..apne unko…
KEERTHI: Its o.k..Yeh toh bas meri duty thi ,mujhe toh yahan conference hall aane tak pata hi nehi tha,,,aur isse agar tum sanjeevni chod kar nehi jaa rahe ho..i am more than happy for u …and u deserve it..
ARMAAN:Thanks again…
KEERTHI: Its late now…I need to go.
ARMAAN:Main aapko chod do…
KEERTHI: No its ok main chali jaungi…welcome back Armaan…

She smiled and left…
Armaan too was happy and went out..nikki and atul were waiting for him….
Nikki came towards armaan he was smiling….

NIKKI: Armaan tum theek toh hona…Dr.Shashank ne kuch kahan toh nehi…mera matlab phir se…
ARMAAN:Nikki..nikki…I am fine …I am fine…waise baaki sab kahan hain…
ABHI: Bas atul phone karni hi gaya hain..aate hi honge….
ANJALI: Armaan……..
She came towards him running and hugged him..
ANJALI: Armaan,,,,,,,,,,oh god I am so happy u are not going…humne tumhe kahan kahan nehi doondha..
ABHI: Haan armaan humne tumhe sab jagah doondh liya par tum kahin bhi nehi mile ….tumhare ghar par bhi nehi…
ATUL:Haan armaan waise tum subah se the kahan,,,,
ARMAAN:Wooh main…bas aise hi…basketball court pe..
ABHI: Basket ball court…?
NIKKI: Great…how could I forget….. main bhool kaise gayi …..ki tum jab bhi pareshan rehthe ho tho basketball khelthe ho…
ANJALI: Par tumhe hume batana chahiye tha…. Pata hain main kitna darr gayi thi….
ABHI: Haan armaan..
Armaan didn't get a chance to talk..
ATUL:Tumhe pata hain anjali yeh toh america jane ki baat kar rahan tha…
ANJALI: America…?
Now it was turn of anjali and abhi to get shocked..
ATUL:Haan wooh bhi aaj raat ki flight se…
ABHI: Kya…?
Armaan now knew he is big trouble..
ANJALI: Tum apne aap ho hero samjthe ho…ek pal mein aa gaye aur ek pal mein chale gaye….tumhe toh humari fikr hi nehi hain…..
ARMAAN:Par meri baat to suno..
ANJALI: I am not going to listen to u..
ATUL:Haan anjali aur dantho usse…
NIKKI: Main bhi bahut naraz hoon…
ABHI: Haan armaan humsab tumse naraz hain…..
All were facing their back now,,,
ARMAAN:Babrebab!!!poori gang mujhse naraaz hain….sorry yaar maaf kar do..
When he saw no one turned he went to each of them,,
ARMAAN:Nikki tum toh meri best friend ho na….
ARMAAN:Atul …mere bhai..
ARMAAN:Anjy…
ARMAAN:Abhi…
ABHI: Armaan not this time…
All shrugged and turned around..
He knew its getting difficult now..
ARMAAN:Sorry sorry sorry… (he kept his hands to ears)
ARMAAN:Aap sab mujhse abhi bhi naraaz hain…
All noded…
ARMAAN:Toh theek hain main jaa rahan hoon,meri flight ko abhi bhi time hain…
Armaan went outside,…
ATUL:Arre yeh toh sach mein jaa rahan hain..(seeing him going)
NIKKI: Main janthi hoon usse,sab natak hain..
ANJALI: Nehi nikki yaad hain..uss din wooh sach mein chat se kudne wala tha..
NIKKI: Oh god…
ANJALI: Armaan..armaan…
ABHI:Armaan…
ANJALI: Kahan chala gaya…
They all followed him to parking,but he was nowhere…
ATUL:Sab tum dono ki galti hain…
NIKKI: Maine kya kiya..galti toh anjy ki hain..first usine dantha..
ANJALI: Par tum toh usse rook sakthi hona..galti tumhari hain..
NIKKI: Nehi tumhari..
ANJALI: Nehi tumhari…
Atul and abhi were seeing the two girls fight like small kids and were admiring them inside..
ARMAAN:Ahem..ahem..ho gaya..(armaan who was at back of car came front)
All came near him..
ANJALI: Armaan…tumbhi na…
NIKKI: Waise mujhe pata hain tum hume chod kar kahin nehi jaouge…(nikki folded her hands)
ATUL:Aur na hi hum tumhe chodne wale hain..
ARMAAN:Tum sab log toh sirf bata karthe ho,,..kisiko bhi meri fikr hain hi nehi…..agar ridhima hoti na woh toh mujhe….(unknowingly he said it in flow)
All came closer to him..
ATUL:Armaan..,,please phir se aisa mat karo…tum hum sab ko chod kar kabhi mat jao…
NIKKI: Haan armaan pata nehi aaj aisa laga ki tum humse bahut door jaa rahe the..
ANJALI: Ek pal le liye laga ki meri sach kehne se pehle hi tum chale jaouge…
ARMAAN:Kaun sa "sach"..
Anjali said it in flow,atul and nikki knew what anjali meant and tried to divert armaan…
ATUL:Wooh..Kuch nehi…
NIKKI: Armaan..idhar dekho..Bas tum ab hum sab ko promise karo ki tum hum sabko chod kar kahin nehi jaouge…
ARMAAN:Promise… main in sab mein nehi mantha..
ANJALI: Armaan..
ARMAAN:Theek hain babaa..promise..ab khush…
All kept their hand infront of him and he kept his hand on them,abhi was standing a bit far,he always wanted to be a part of them,but due to many conflicts it couldn't happen…
Armaan saw him and also took his hand from his other hand and kept on all hands…all were happy…tears started flowing from nikki and anjys eyes…armaan saw them..
ARMAAN:Waise sab log itne sad sad kyun hain..chalo yaar main wapas aa gaya hoon…toh… tumhe khush hona chahiye..kyun..
All were smiling again..
ARMAAN:Waise ek aur Party ho jaye….
ALL:Nehi……..(shouting in his ears)
ARMAAN:Ok.ok.chillao mat..
ABHI: Armaan..tum na…kabhi nehi sudhroge….
ARMAAN:I know!!!i know!!!
All were walking to their cars..
ATUL:Armaan..Waise flight kitne baje ki thi…
ARMAAN:Wooh…toh…. book karne ke baad pata chalega.…
NIKKI: Kya..?par tumne toh kahan ki aaj raat ki flight hain..
ARMAAN:Haan flight to aaj raat ki hi hain..par maine book karna bhool gaya...
All stopped walking,looked at him seriously…Armaan knew hes in big trouble now and started walking a bit fast and then ran..
ATUL:Ruk saale tumne humse jhoot bola…main tumhe nehi chodonga…
Atul was running behind armaan and others were laughing seeing them…
After such a long time all were together..everyones eyes seem to be filled with happiness and they never want it to go….they really missed their old gang….sapna,muskaan,rahul and ridhima the most…
But none could say that loud as they don't want to loose this happy moment and make others sad …After their meeting all left to their houses..


Back in shashank's cabin..


MEHRA: So shashank kaisa chal raha hain sab..
SHASHANK:Fine…aao baito..(both sat)
MEHRA: Padma bhabhi kaise hain….
SHASHANK:Theek hain..bas aaj kal uski tabiyat thodi kharab rehthi hain..
MEHRA: Kyun kya hua..
SHASHANK:Bas wooh pareshaan ho jaati hain..ridhima ko le kar…(trying to divert)tum batao kaunsa zaroori kaam hain..
MEHRA: Shashank ..tumne ridhima ke case ke baare mein kya socha hain…
SHASHANK:Main iss baare mein baat nehi karna chahtha..
MEHRA: Shashank…
SHASHANK:Suresh..please..tum janthe ho na..
MEHRA: Jantha hoon Shashank is liye toh keh raha hooon…tum khud ek doctor ho aur janthe ho ki aise cases mein ilaaj..
SHASHANK:Suresh…tum kyun nehi samjthe yeh meri beti ki zindagi ka sawal hain…
MEHRA: Haan..yeh ridhima beti ki poori zindagi ka sawal hain…..kya tum usse ek zinda laash ki tarah dekhna chahthe ho....
SHASHANK:Nehi,,,
MEHRA: Maine pechle 6 mahine se dekh raha hoon usse aur tumko bhi,,,kahan kahan nehi gayye tum uske liye…kuch hua kya…nehi na ..tum meri baat maanoo shashank…
SHASHANK:Main aisa nehi kar saktha…kabhi nehi…Maine tumse pehle bhi kahan tha ki koi achche se doctor ko consult karo..…aur koi raastha zaroor hoga..
MEHRA: Maine..kiya tha par………….ek minute…Dr.Armaan ..haan…. tumhe usse consult karna chahiye…shayad wooh kuch kare….hes really good at all this…main jantha hoon usse..wooh kuch na kuch zaroor karega…I have confidence in him..main usse kal ki ridhima ki case history detha hoon….
SHASHANK:No…………… (loudly)
MEHRA: Kyun…
SHASHANK:Nehi..arm..i mean Dr.Armaan ko nehi…
MEHRA: Par..
SHASHANK:Suresh..maine kahan na,,,wooh baaki ki cases handle kar raha hain na…tum…tum kisi aur ko consult karo…please….
MEHRA: (giving up)Theek hain..jaise tumhari marzi…akhir wooh tumhari beti hain….abhi main chaltha hoon…tum aa rahe hoo..
SHASHANK:Nehi..tum jao..bye…
He got up and went near door and turned back ..
MEHRA: Ek baar phir se socho shashank…..
SHASHANK:Hmm… good night…
He left..

Shashank sat back on chair and took ridhimas photo beside his table and stared it for a long time….
He smiled seeing her smiling face,it was her single photo….she was looking beautiful…and he closed his eyes….thinking about past..
He remembered all her moments from her childhood,how she was adopted,how she grew,her first day in sanjeevni,their father-daughter bond,all lovely moments..then he remembered how she got shot…and abhi announced him she was in comma…all his dreams shattered…he woke up suddenly trying to catch her in his arms as she fell…

SHASHANK:Ridhima……..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
He came back to senses..
SHASHANK:Main usse phir se nehi kho saktha…kabhi nehi,,,,kabhi nehi…chahe kuch bhi ho…


Next day…….

All were very happy to see armaan and wished him a very good morning…
He was also very happy to be back in sanjeevni,now he knew that no one could take him out and especially shashank,but he still felt he will never repeat the thing he did,afterall sanjeevni was very imporatant to him and he cant be careless again..
ARMAAN:Waise aur bhi kayi raasthe hain masti karne ke liye…
Armaan will be armaan..he will never change..uff!!

He wished all wardboys,as usual flirted with sisters who were very happy to see him back..…
He saw umar bhai cleaning and talked to him,,he was one of the persons he really respected..

ARMAAN:Kaise ho umar bhai..
UMAR BHAI:Hum theek hain beta..aap jo aa gaye..
ARMAAN:Waise mujhe aapse kuch pooncna tha…(he noded to ask him further still cleaning)…25 saal se aap yahan kaam kar rahe hain aapko bore nehi lagtha…ki ek hi jagah pe subah se shaam tak raho,,kaam karo..etc..
UMAR BHAI:Nehi..armaan beta…sanjeevni toh hamare liye doosra ghar jaisa hain..aaj hum jo kuch bhi hain…sirf main hi kyun har koi aaj jo yahan kaam kar raha hain…sanjeevni ke wajan se hi hain….agar sanjeevni nehi toh hum bhi nehi…..isne itne saalon se humko sab kuch diya….ghar,khana,bachon ki padayi,,,,isliye toh main hamesha chahtha tha meri beti yahan kaam kare aur aaj mera sapna..(he stopped realising what he just said)
ARMAAN:Umar bhai..aapki beti bhi hain…mera matlab ki,,,kya kar rahi hain wooh…
ARMAAN:Wooh….(he believed in armaan and thought to say but he does want to create complications to tamanna and her future)…abhi….pad…pad rahi hain…
ARMAAN:Good..app usse achche se padne deejiye aur haan koi bhi madad chahiye toh apne armaan bete ko mat bhuliye..theek hain…
ARMAAN:Hum aapko kaise bhool sakthe hain beta..pechle 6 mahino mein chahe kuch bhi ho..(he stopped cleaning and saw at him)..hum sab ko aapki aur ridhima beti ki hamesha yaad aati hain…ab tum aa gaye ho,toh sab pehle ki tarah ho jayega…
ARMAAN:Hmm..(armaan felt happy hearing that,still people believed in him)
ARMAAN:Mujhe aur hum sab ko aap par poora bharosa hain …jaise sanjeevni par hain…na hi wooh hamari bharosa toothne deegi na hi aap…ab chalthe hain beta..kaam hain..(he left)

Armaan felt very sad listening to those words,unknowingly he would have taken everthing from them,if shashank had dismissed,,,,first he thought he had taken decision to leave sanjeevni in haste…but now he felt that sanjeevni is not just a hospital for all these people and of course him too….

He saw all around feeling happy to be in "sanjeevni"…

Many wardboys were roaming around,sisters taking files,many patients coming,going on stretcher.,interns walking here and there,people chatting in canteen…

He was happy to be a part of this wonderful place again..where he had spend his best moments of his life…where he got everything he could say he have now in his life,his career,his friends and most of all-his love of his life-ridhima..…it made him smile..

He remembered all those moments he spent in sanjeevni,his first day,fighting with ridhimaa,friends-anjali,atul&sapna,basketball match,rahul and muskaan,byke race,boxing matches,his all patients starting from gappu,nana,mini …..to dhruv,how they handled many cases,did a serious operation in lift with ridhima,nikki-abhi,how he left sanjeevni many times and came back again…sanjeevni has given him more than he asked for…he felt he was back to the place where he deserved to be…a place where he could say as his home…and is very important in his life…and he could never ever leave it and go…….

It could have changed in physical appearance,its walls,colours,and also some new staff,new interns… but its still the same place where everyone would come with lots of dreams,anticipations, expectations….to achieve something in their life…their fields may be different but still their mission is same..to be a part of sanjeevni….where their life would be complete.!!!

He thought for a second seeing around and said ..

"Sanjeevni-A medical boon….!!!!"

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Hey guys,so hows it..
I felt the need to describe a bit more …..giving some details ,so that u can also see from my vision,please do say about it….
If u feel bore or unnecessarily long,or anything,feel free to let me know, I will try to improve..
Appreciation or criticism,both are welcomed…
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Hey guys..
Its my 10th part..and I am really happy completing it….
I want to thank all my readers who have commented and supported me till now in fanfic section and also in DMG post…I want say them thanks by taking their names here, a "big thanks"to each and everyone,it means a lot to me that u took time to read it and commented….

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Good job girl... quickly make Armaan work his magic to get Riddhima come out of coma....

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Good job girl... quickly make Armaan work his magic to get Riddhima come out of coma....


hey long time..
thanks for reply..ya u will see some thing related to what u asked in next..
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