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Posted: 02 April 2010 at 4:11am | IP Logged

A last thought…

 

"Never take some one for granted,Hold every person Close to your Heart because you might wake up one day and realise that you have lost a diamond while you were too busy collecting stones."
"Remember this always in life."

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Here's a small poem giving you the whole picture of my story and also DMG in general..hope you like it..it's written by me..

 

Wooh The Pehle Juda Juda…

Ek Doosre Se Thode Khafa Khafa..

Par Pyaar Ka Jhoka Aaya ..

Dono Ko Saath Milaya..

Sang Ek Doosre Se Khush The..

Do Dill Mill Gaye The..

Par Toofan Bangaya Jhooka..

Saath Chut Gaya Unka..

Fasle Aaye The Kayi..

Musibaton Se Bhari..

Par Yaaron Ki Yaari Thi .Pyaar Ka Saath Tha..

Ridhimaa Ke Haath Mein Armaan Ka Haath Tha..

Fir Se Bhargayi Khushiyon Se Unki Zindagi....

Janam Janam Tak Bandh Gayi Yeh Bandagi..

Nanhe Se Mehmaan Aaye,,

Khushiya Deedh Saare Laayee..

Parivaar Unka Hua Poora...

Jo Ab Tak Tha Adhura,,

Dill Se Fir Dill Jud Gayye Hain,,

Akhir Dill Mill Hi Gayye Hain..

 

Poori Hui Kahani,,Jo Shuru Hui Thi Meri Zabani..

Anth Hain Yeh ,,Ya Fir Shuru Hui Koi Nayi Kahani..

 

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Hey folks..

 

So the journey of armaan to get back his love ridhimaa which I started few months ago with name.. My Prediction For Armaan And Ridhimaa Entry ends here. Hope you all like the journey and the ending ..tried really hard guys..so please do comment even though lately.

 

A strange feeling passes through my heart right now as I type these letters ..feeling sad and happy both at the same time..i really don't know why.May be I am feeling sad for ending it or happy that it ended successfully.

I still remember the day few months back when I posted my first part of prediction..many didn't liked the concept of shashank blaming Armaan,many thought it was like Mohabateein and many never commented again.But as the story passed for months with lots of breaks and delay's,some people still waited for my story,thanks to all of them.People commented, appreciated,criticised,gave their valuable feedback ,helped me to improve the story line and most of all supported me everytime,thanks a lot to all those ardent readers and so sorry for not updating for long.

This journey is sure to be remembered in my Life,not sure about you all though,But for me its like a Mile stone or say Turning point in my life.This may not be the best by me or read by you,,but When ever you try your hand in something new and creative you definetly feel happy…don't you,that's what I am going through.

 I promise I will improve next time if I ever write anything.But as for now I need to leave you guys with this end ..it still feels bad,,now no writings,no posting,no eagerly waiting for comments,but as they say..

 

Every Beginning Has An Ending..

And Every Ending Has A New Beginning..!!!

 

So…may be there's a new beginning waiting for me somewhere.Wish me good luck as I need them a lot and I thank each n everyone out there,,you guys have been giving me the best feedback till now and supported..so Thanks!!!!

 

Sri:-)

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Posted: 02 April 2010 at 4:14am | IP Logged
THANKS A LOT!!!
 

!!!!!!THANK YOU MESSAGE!!!!!!

 

"A BIG THANK YOU EACH AND EVERYONE WHO SUPPORTED ME.."

 

I may not be a great writer and this may be not the best fanfiction you have read or even can be included in one of list,, people wait for eagerly in FF forum,I also think many even don't know theres some FF like this and may be they will never know again..but I also do have some really sweet and great friends who have been supporting me through this journey and for me they mean a lot..so thanks to you all buddies!!!

 

I have written nearly 550 pages(In Ms-Word),,haha..i cant believe I wrote them and you all read them..sorry for the extraa lonng parts guys..lol..oops this is a Thank You message not a Sorry one. lol...but I need to say sorry for reading and thanks for bearing my story n me till now..lol..

I really cant believe that I completed a FF successfully(think so..lol),,and you all liked it,appreciated and supported me all along..THANKS!!!!

I want to thank each and every reader who have liked my work,read n commented..

Thanks a lot for liking n supporting with your wonderful comments till now..it means a lot to me..a lot..and a lot..

 

I want to thank all who have commented till now on my FF,,here in FF section and also in DMG forum..

 

Thanks a lot guys,,,(((Hugs))) and also to all regular readers who take out time to read and comment regularly...

 

And thanks to all who have pressed the "LIKE" button till now on my FF,,here in FF section and also in DMG forum..

 

Thanks a lot to u guys..

 

Not to forget all the silent readers,,and those who scrapped n Pmed me..

Thanks to all of you too..Hope you comment now..on the last part atleast..please!!!

 

I also want to thank my parents n my lovely dovey sister – My Deedi.. (jaadu ki jhappi to u dear,!!), Thanks..for always encouraging me when ever I felt I couldn't write anymore or stuck with storyline and for always supporting me whatever situation it might be in life and especially for this FF everytime..

Here's a small message for u as my thanks..

 

Aap na hote toh hum hote adhure..

Aap na hote toh hum hote besahare..

Agar,,

Aap na hote toh hum jaane kahan hote..

Aap na hote toh hum jaane kaise jeete.. 

Arre,,

Aap na hote toh hum kisko satate..

Aap na hote toh hum kisko maarte..

 

Hehe..Please ab mujhe marna mat..love yaa and thanks a ton..

And yes ..

 

"I would like to Dedicate this FANFIC with my heart to you - Deedi..!!!"

                                                                                                                                  -Love you Deedi!!!

 

I also Thank all my friends especially here in IF..thanks to "Each and Everyone"..

 

I can't thank enough you all for it..as this was my first attempt ever ,may be the last attempt too..i can't risk all your lifes..more...seriously.LOL

 

Now enough of my thanks and I will leave you all..with a small poem I wrote for u all for showing my gratitude..hope you remember this story and may be "me" too..

 

Shukriya..

Mere saath dene ke liye..

Shukriya..

Mera saath badne ke liye..

Shukriya..

Mujhe himmat dene ke liye..

Shukriya..

Mere mehnat ko saharne ke liye..

Shukriya..

Meri galtiyon ko nazar andaz karne ke liye..

Shukriya..

Meri iss choti si koshish ko kamyab banane ke liye..

Shukriya..Shukriya..

 

Hope to meet you all again..hope so..but till then,,

Take care..Bye..

Keep smiling..

Good wishes..

!!!ALVIDA!!!

Sri:-)

 

 
 


Edited by sri_4 - 02 April 2010 at 4:17am

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Posted: 02 April 2010 at 6:55am | IP Logged
good story
loved it

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Posted: 02 April 2010 at 8:19am | IP Logged
oOH!SRI! I'll miss u're story so much waited for it to end & now tat it has ended hate it.
But as it says tat every good thing must have an ending n u have written it really well..& the poems were gr8 specially the thanks giving one n DMG one!and one think kank[kabhi alvida na kahana] hum phir mile gaye!

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Posted: 02 April 2010 at 3:26pm | IP Logged

Hi Sri...

Its been a long time. Where were you yaar? No news, no message, nothing...

Even I am sooooo happy that KSG is back in DMG. I am soooo very craving to watch it again. But I have vowed not to do it, till AR are back together. I hate that disgusting SADMA track creatives (Gosh, do they even know the spelling of creativity?) have created. I am sorry to say this, but I actually never like the idea of this new gang. Yeah, earlier I thought it will be good and maybe with time it will pick up, but I regret to say that it sucks big time. And the TRPs of the show has also shown that.

Now back to the updates... Wow you updated so many parts in one go.

The file part was confusing... Riddhima CAN be treated, Riddhima CANT be treated. Then as the mystery unfolded, I understood the confusion. I loved that Atul was firm for his friend. He is right, instead of letting her live like a deadbody, they can atleast try once. How can they just keep sitting and do nothing? How can they just ignore the 5% possibility of her getting back to life? Atleast there is still hope. I liked the way you handled the treatment history.

I also enjoyed the AR scene you have used in between... the flashback one.

Karan came into light as fresh breeze of air. I was hoping he could help Armaan someway. Chalo atleast he revealed the truth that it wasn't Riddhima's full report. Anjali was a weakling into all this. She behaved in a way she is not. But that a person becomes when someone close to them is in critical situation. Loved Karan for supporting Armaan... and then Atul and Nikki as well.

Karan-Suresh scene was also entertaining. Suresh is a very lively character, much better than any other elder one in the story. He is the best.

Armaan's every word while his confrontation with Shashank brought tears in my eyes.

Then the scene after Shashank finally accepted Armaan in their life, where Atul was tubelight and Karan was even bigger tubelight, left me laughing. I loved it.

You were right, Armaan has been an Angel in disguise for everyone. He even helped in bringing ST together. Then he even played cupid for YN. I especially like YN track.

Atlast Anjali played brave by deciding on talking to Shashank about herself and Atul.

The best and the most emotional part was when you described Armaan's feelings and his reactions as he came to know about Riddhima's death.

One thing I have always loved about Armaan in DMG and that is... him climbing through the pipe and sneak into Riddhima's room to meet her at such wee hours of night. You have used it in your story and it did reminded me of those golden days of DMG.

And their sweet banter at Temple – Who-will-tie-the-holy-thread? Was very cute.

Then Anjali+girls gatecrashing their bachelor's party, it was funny. The Chiggy-Wiggy song, I enjoyed it a lot... Wo Sangeet mein ghunghat wala bhi achchha tha... Billy it too much. And boys, they wont change for anything. I loved Genda Phool as well. Boy dancing with ghunghat... LOL. The whole team reuniting at Armaan-Riddhima's wedding and then Reception party, simply superb. And that chasing scene, it was hilarious.

And I liked the way you handled everything in the story... Armaan-Shashank confrontation; then ST union; Yuvi's revenge and his confession; Adhiraaj's recovery; Everyone forgiving Yuvi; YN union; then the gang's quest as they spread all around in search of Armaan; Armaan's accident; Yuvi saving Armaan; Armaan-Riddhima recovering; Atul proposing Riddhima; Shashank accepting Atul for Anjali; AR's wedding; the people who left DMG revisiting and then the little after marriage incidences; and atlast the epilogue, I was thinking where is everyone heading to? Then I realized that they are going the Sanjeevani as Riddhima is to deliver her twin babies - AR's two kids – Ardh and Rima, so cute... everything was very nice. I just wish the same has happened in DMG, then I wouldn't have to stop watching it. I still crave for it as KSG is back and I hope the time comes soon...

In the beginning of my comment I have mentioned that I never liked the idea of new gang or interns, but after reading your story, I think I like them. I would have liked them in DMG as well, if things have happened in the way they have in your story. But unfortunately CVs have ruined it. I feel sad for our favorite DMG.

Abyways, I wonder how did you manage to write all these. But since you were away for such a long time, this shows that you never left thinking of this story and your readers. I had a joyful time reading the story... Keep writing such FFs in future as well.

Thanks for the PM.

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Posted: 02 April 2010 at 9:44pm | IP Logged
loved the story
miss u
bye
tc

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