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Posted: 15 October 2009 at 1:18am | IP Logged
Hye guys……..thanks yogitha...s
Thanks to each and everyone who commented..
Heres my next part………hope u like it………..
Please do read it and review..appreciation/criticism both are welcomed….
Even a sentence or a word…please do comment…
Thanks to all who read it,commented, "like"d it ,also to the silent readers…
Really appreciated…
Sri..

ARMAAN-RIDHIMAA : PART 7

"Laye hum Hasi laye hum Khushi jee le phir se zindagi…
Taaron se aage hum jaayenge cheen le ayenge roshni …
Dil ho jahaan dost ho vahaan aisa manzar hain yahan…
Manzil nayi,rasthe naye …
Phir bhi chale,hum saath mein…
Hum toh chale the dost banke…
Jaane kahan dill mill gayye!!!!"

At canteen……

The song ended,everyone clapped….all came back to senses ,
Yuvi left naina,also the party in hurry not looking back as though he remembered something,naina was confused looking at him,,,
Sid and tamanna too parted….tamanna was a bit uncomfortable…
Anjali was happy,but atul left her and went away thinking she might feel bad ,anjali was left confused…

Armaan too came back to senses and looked for ridhima but couldn't find her ,it was his imagination,
was sad and a tear escaped his eyes..but he was happy seeing his friends,,,..

ARMAAN:Yeh party toh bas ek bahana tha tum logon ko milane ka,paas le aane ka…lagtha hain ab jaldi hi sab theek ho jayega…

Abhi-nikki were still lost in eachother,,,it was after a long time they came together and spent time with eachother,though they didn't talk ,one could feel the other…they didn't move from their positions..
Armaan was happy for both of them but he sees jiah coming,,he signed abhi and tried to call but he was lost in nikki,,,,so he needed to be quick.. and goes to them….

ARMAAN:Abhi…Ek minute yahan aao....mujhe kuch case discuss karna hain..(they both come back to senses and leave eachother,nikki was feeling uncomfortable)
ABHI:Kya hain…
Armaan drags him to a side…
ABHI:Kya kar rahe ho tum..tumne hi kaha tha uske pass jao..aur ab..
ARMAAN:Wohh..
Before he could say…..
ABHI:Main jaa raha hoon,,(he turns around)
ARMAAN:Meri baat suno..
He catches from back and is pulling towards him…
ARMAAN:Dekho meri baat suno..wooh ……………jia..

Jiah comes near nikki and asks..

JIAH:Abhi kahan hain,,??
NIKKI:Wooh shayad armaan ke saath hain…
JIAH:Armaan….!!

She sees both of them and is shocked again..
JIAH:Abhi…….armaan,,,,,,,,,,,(armaan leaves and both are standing a bit far now)
ABHI:Wooh jiah …hum bas case discuss kar rahe the…ek Saath ….
ARMAAN:I mean saath saath ,,hain na abhi,,,,
ABHI:Haan bas saath saath,,,(realising what armaan and he said just now)what???????
ARMAAN:Main abhi aati hoon……..how silly of me,,… I mean aata hoon,,,bye.. (armaan leaves)
JIAH: (jiah is angry and frustated)Abhi…..main ghar jaa rahi hoon,,,
ABHI:Jiah ..wooh armaan toh…
JIAH:Tum aa rahe ho ya nehi…ok fine……….Main jaa rahi hoon..bye…

Armaan comes back..
ABHI:Armaan yeh sab……..
ARMAAN:Chillax dude..enjoy the party,,,
ABHI: (to himself)Tumhe nehi pata,jiah agar hyper ho gayi toh..usi tabiyat phir se kharab ho jayegi.. aur mein yeh nehi chahtha jo pehle hua hain………………woh doobara ho..

All friends were sitting and chatting and armaan was busy talking and laughing with abhi….

NIKKI:Anjali,,armaan ko yahan wapas dekhkar bahut achcha laga..
ANJALI:Haan nikki,,,aisa lag raha hain ki ab sab kuch pehle jaisa ho jayega…
ATUL:Wooh humse itna pyaar jo kartha hain…aur hum bhi toh usse karthe hain…wooh humse door kabhi nehi reh payega..
ANJALI:Haan,,,(feeling happy atul talked to him atleast,she was worried when he left her after dance)
NIKKI:Anjy……….(in serious tone)hume armaan ko sach bata dena chahiye…..
ANJALI:Nikki,,yeh tum kya keh rah ho..(shocked)
ATUL:Anjali shayad nikki sahi keh rahi hain.. ab usse sachayi bata deni chahiye…
ANJALI:Tum log pagal ho gaye ho kya?? Dekho usse ,ek baar uske taraf dekho..wooh khush hain yahan..sanjeevni mein..hum sabke saath…tum dono chahthe ho kya wooh kuch aisa kare ki hum usse dobara kho de…
NIKKI:Par anjy…hum kab tak usse sach chupayenge..usse ek na ek din toh…
ANJALI:No…usse kabhi bhi nehi pata chalna chahiye….kabhi nehi…..agar usne kuch kardiya toh ..nehi main aise nehi hone dongi,,(getting tensed)atul-nikki tumne mujhse vaada kiya tha..ki tum usse kabhi nehi bataoge…hain na..nehi bataoge na..please,,warna papa……….aur ridhima……….nehi..(more tensed and crying a bit)
ATUL:Anjali ..relax.. hum nehi batayenge,,,
NIKKI:Haan anjy..nehi batayenge…cool,,,
ANJALI:Promise..(cooling now)
NIKKI:Haan promise…
ATUL:Meri sheena ki kasam anjali …please……….. ab toh hason..
ANJALI:Atul……..(she smiles a bit)
ATUL:Tum hasthi hui bahut achchi lagthi hoon…..
NIKKI:Ahem..ahem,,aur main..
ATUL:Tum bhi..bahut…achchi lagthi ho..(blushing)

Anjali excuses herself to get a drink…

ANJALI: (to herself)Kash armaan ko kabhi sachayi ka pata na chale…


All were enjoying the party and dancing…

Sid was feeling guilty,o.k just a little bit,,also he was afraid that abhi will take his car.. and he hated the idea of going by INDIAN auto,imagining it how it would be going in auto with driver in slums etc.…
SIDDANTH: No ways…main nehi jaounga….comeone sid,,do something…
So thought to cheer J.P…he went near him..

SIDDANTH: J.P I am really sorry…(he kept his hands to ears and was asking genuinely)
Tamanna was watching it and she felt funny and happy seeing that he realised his mistake…
SIDDANTH:Really really sorry..tum agar chaho toh mein bhi super man ban jau..(he acts like superman and flys here and there)
(J.P had forgiven him as he himself was naughty and did lots of pranks ,but first time he was the one to fall for his own prank,he was sad,but now he was back to normal,smiling silently and was trying to pull sid's leg and to give it back to him in his own style..)
J.P:Par aap toh makad maanush the na….aap toh ek bulding se doosre bulding ko rassi se chadthe hain…udthe thodi na hain..
SIDDANTH:Haan yaar spiderman toh fly nehi kartha…main bhi na,,....(he didn't realise he was being fooled )
He acts like spiderman to cheer J.P..but all were laughing at him and so was J.P that too loudly..
Sid was busy doing stuff,but then realised that hes being watched by all,came to senses and also laughs but artficially to cover his embarrasment..,,but he was happy that J.P had forgiven him and now he didn't need to go by auto atleast..….
SIDDANTH:Uff!!!bach gaya…(seeing J.P smile)
Tamanna was happy seeing it,,,she herself didn't know why she was being attracted to sid who was sometimes stupid,mischevious,flirty….. yet so sweet and caring….

Sid-naina-J.P

Sid and J.P patched up and were sitting with naina..
J.P:Yeh yuvi bhaiya chale gaya kya?
NAINA:Mujhe yeh pata nehi chala ki wooh dafod party mein aaya kaise..
SIDDANTH:Par tum toh uske saath dance kar rahi thi wooh bhi chipak ke..(sid and J.P were laughing)
NAINA:Dance my foot ..wooh toh bas main us par taras kha gayi thi…
J.P:Yeh A.J ji kahan hain…lagtha hain unki dosti bahut jamm gayi senior doctors ke saath..
SIDDANTH: Yeh uncle ,wooh log bhi uncle,,,,,,,,,haaha!!! (to himself)par yeh miss gayab kahan hain..

Outside sanjeevni………

We see a person's back and he is talking on phone…
VOICE:Aap sanjeevni jaldi aayiye…..abhi isi waqt…
He cuts the call and smiles to himself..


Anjali-armaan…
Anjali goes to get a drink……..

ARMAAN:Anjy….
ANJALI:Haan armaan…..(she was a bit tensed remembering about what they just talked and was avoiding armaan's gaze )
ARMAAN:Tum aaj bahut sundar lag rahi hoo…
ANJALI:Thanks ..ab kya baat hain..bolo..
ARMAAN:Nehi aur kuch nehi…
ANJALI:Armaan….dekho bato kya baat hain…
ARMAAN:Kahan na kuch nehi..
ANJALI:Armaan…dekho mein apne friends ke baare mein janthi hoon..ab bolo..
ARMAAN:Tum sach mein sabke baare main janthi ho…
ANJALI:Haan..kyun..sab friends ke baare mein toh janthi hoon tum,rahul,muski,nikki..sabke baare mein..
ARMAAN: (slowly)Aur atul…
ANJALI: (in flow not realising)Haan atul ke baare mein mere alawa kaun itni achchi tarah se jaan saktha hain….wooh toh mujhse itna pyaar….(stopping realising what she said)
ARMAAN:Aur tum……….anjy…….tum atul se pyaar karthi ho??
ANJALI: (avoiding)Armaan,…please main is baare mein baat nehi karna chahthi hoon…
ARMAAN:Par kyun…..tum usse pyaar nehi karthi….
ANJALI:Armaan…please
ARMAAN:Ok..Mujhe pata chala gaya hain….
ANJALI:Kya??
ARMAAN:Tum usse pyaar nehi karthi..
ANJALI:Nehi..
ARMAAN:Tum usse pyaar nehi karthi..
ANJALI:Nehi…armaan..
ARMAAN:Toh tum usse pyaar karthi ho..
ANJALI: (a bit loudly)Haan ,,,,haan ,,,,mein usse pyaar karthi hoon bahut pyaar karthi hoon..
ARMAAN:I know that…..(cooling enjoying his drink)
ANJALI:Armaan ..wooh…..
ARMAAN:Maine kisise kahan tha ki pyaar chuapaya nehi chupatha aur tum mujhse please chupane ki koshish mat karo…ab kaho tumne usse kyun nehi keha..
ANJALI:Kaise kahu……….usne hamesha mere liye itna kiya aur maine kya kiya usse ignore kiya,,usse sataya..usse itna dukh diya,,..i just took him for granted …pata nehi wooh mujhe abhi bhi pyaar kartha hain ya nehi..main uske layak hi nehi hoon….
ARMAAN:Same dialogue.…
ANJALI:Kya..
ARMAAN:Tum donoo na ..ekk number ke bewakoof hooo,,,,
ANJALI:Matlab…
ARMAAN:Wahan wooh aur yahan tum..dono pyaar toh karthe hain,,par batana nehi chahthe..
ANJALI:Main kuch nehi samjhi…..
ARMAAN:Arre wooh tumse bahut pyaar kartha hain…
ANJALI: (excitedly) Usne kahan hain tumse..
ARMAAN:Agar nehi kahega toh tum nehi manogi…….
ANJALI:Armaan please..
ARMAAN:Haann….. usne kahan…
ANJALI:Sach..
ARMAAN:Wooh tumse aaj bhi utna hi pyaar kartha hain jitna pehle kartha tha….par shayad tumhari tarah hi batane se darr raha hain…apne feelings ko chupa raha hain…..
She smiles..
ARMAAN:Anjy tum atul ko janthi ho na wooh pehle kadam badane se dartha hain…….aur shayad iss liye bhi ki wooh tumhare feelings ke baare main abhi bhi nehi jaantha….tumne usse hamesha ignore kiya hain…usse khul kar baat nehi kiya hain..
ANJALI:Main kya karoon armaan..main jab bhi koshish karthi hoon tho..wooh mujhse door jata hain...aaj bhi dance ke baad wooh chala gaya….
ARMAAN:Kyunki wooh tumhe pareshan nehi karna chahtha, …usse laga hoga ki agar wooh tumhare paas aane ki koshish karega toh tum phir se usse door ho jaogi..
ANJALI:Toh ab main kya karoon….
ARMAAN:Kya karoon matlab……..Jaake usse batao aur kya..
ANJALI:Wooh manega…….
ARMAAN:Wooh itna bhi bewakoof nehi hain..haan diktha thoda bahut hain……..
ANJALI:Armaan……..(angrily)
ARMAAN:Ohoh…possessive…
She gives him a killing look..
ARMAAN:Achcha baba …usse batado…aaj hi…
ANJALI:Par kaise batao…
ARMAAN:Muh se aur kis se,haan……..agar tum "kiss"…….i….. aur tareeke se kehna chachthi ho toh..no problem at all..bas atul ko thoda sambhal lena…..ok.
ANJALI:Armaan…tum na bahut shaitan ho gaye hoo..ridzy ko pata chal gaya na toh tumhari toh kair nehi…(in flow not knowing)
ARMAAN:Haan haan batao bato apni behen ko main dartha thodi hoon,,,mein bhi armaan mallik hoon….bulao usse ,,
ANJALI: (funnily to tease armaan )Dekho wahan ridzy,,,
ARMAAN: (not realising and not looking back) Basket dekho maine kuch nehi kahan ..promise,,yeh anjy ne sab…
ANJALI: Maine ..maine kya kiya…armaan…….. ridzy tum na iski baat mat sun….isse bahut maroo..
ARMAAN:Nehi basket…
They were fighting childishly not realising what they were doing…armaan looked back and to anjali..they both felt extremely sad and anjali mainly as she started it..
ANJALI: Sorry armaan..woh mein bas…
ARMAAN:Nehi anjy..its o.k……….(coming back to form)par haan tum atul ko zaroor kaho warna pata nehi tumhe apna pyaar kabhi milega ya nehi…..bahut logon ko toh pyaar milke bhi……..anyways…all the best anjy aur haan mujhe batao kya hua hain..ok..…..(he hugs her and goes )
ANJALI: Main apne pyaar ko ek baar kho chuki hoon apni wajah se,fir se nehi khoungi..
armaan,,promise…aur haan..tumhara pyaar tumhe jaldi hi wapas milega….shayad nikki aur atul sach kehrahe the….main armaan ko aise ghuthe nehi dekh sakthi…mujhe usse sach bata deni chahiye……..


Armaan was a bit sad and was standing alone,abhi saw him,came near him…

ABHI:Armaan kya hua..
ARMAAN:Nehi kuch nehi… .
ABHI: (knowing what hes thinking)Ridhima ki yaad aa rahi hain..
He noded…
ABHI:Armaan…….tum aur ridhima ek doosre se sacha pyaar karthe ho na….
He gave him a questioning look and then noded again..
ABHI:Toh…kya tum yeh chahthe ho ki wooh dukhi ho..
ARMAAN:Nehi..kabhi nehi..main uske ankhon mein ek aanson bhi nehi dekh saktha….kabhi nehi..
ABHI:Tumhara pyaar tumhara takat hain,bharosa hain,vishwaas hain,,,….kamjori nehi…. wooh yahi hain tumhare saath …..hain na …….agar tum hi himaat har jaouge toh wooh toh akeli ho jayegi aur aisi halat mein uska saath kaun dega…
ARMAAN:Hmm…
ABHI:Tum apne upar bharosa rakho aur dekho sab theek ho jayega….aur ridhima bhi..
ARMAAN:Thanks abhi……….
ABHI:Its ok….
ARMAAN: (armaan was back to normal)Waise charlie..lagtha hain tum mujhse bhi expert hoo…… tumhe meri help ki kya zaroorat?(abhi gave him a "why"look)haan bhai hum toh bas ek ladki se hi khush hain aur aap toh do-do ko handle karthe karthe experienced ho gaye honege..hain na…
Now abhi was angry and his face was red..
ARMAAN: (keeping hand and controlling him)Relax….its joke…maarne ka irada hain kya…….
Achcha agar tum itna janthe ho toh ….. abhi tak yahin atke hue kyun ho..jau nikki se baat karo,usko manao, apne pyaar ka ehsaas jatao.…tum bhi toh usse sacha pyaar karthe hona and I know she will be urs…forever…
ABHI:Par agar usne baat nehi kiya toh…
ARMAAN: Koshish ..agar koshish hi nehi karoge toh kaise pata chalega..try try till u suceed..aur waise ladkiya bahut sensitive aur emotional hoti hain..agar hum unke saamne thodha rooke ,thoda emotional hokee ….
Abhi saw him again with a look..
ARMAAN: I mean sachche dil se kaha toh wooh zaroor maan jayegi….cry cry till u suceed….waise yeh hamare liye ek advantage hain…. (smiling)
Abhi saw him and thought for something…..armaan was thinking that this time abhi will not leave him for sure and he was in a position to run…but..
ABHI:Shayad tum theek keh rahe ho..agar maine koshish hi nehi kee toh…kaise pata chalega..ok done tango…main aaj hi usse baat karne ki koshish karoonga….lets go..
ARMAAN: (feeling relaxed)Good…

Armaan and abhi joins others…anjali too was back..

ARMAAN:So guys kaisa hain party…
ANJALI:Great yaar..
NIKKI:Superb!!!!
ARMAAN:Thank u ..thank u ..(he sits)
ANJALI:Waise bahut dino ke baad hum sabne itna mazaa kiya…
ATUL:Yaad hain jab humne last time party kee thi,,,..rahul aur muskaan ki breakup party,,,
ANJALI:Uff!!!kya hungama hua tha…
ATUL:Tab toh,,hamare armaan ki yaaddash bhi nehi thi…
ARMAAN:Ab toh aa gayi na…
NIKKI:Haan ussi ki toh hame bahut afssos hain..
ARMAAN:Nikki…(hitting her playfully)
NIKKI:Oops sorry!!(abhi was happy seeing her) Achcha mein toh nehi thi na,main toh rajasthan gayi thi,,,
ABHI:Mere saath…. (joins them,nikki looked away)
ANJALI: (trying to divert)Aur muski toh poori pagal thi,,,
ARMAAN:Haan usne saare gifts bhi jala diya…
ATUL:Pagal toh wooh nehi,ridhima ho gayi thi,,,usne sharab jo pee liya tha aur….
Pata nehi kya kya kaha… hum toh usse rokne ki koshish kar rahe the..par wooh toh ruk hi nehi rahi thi…hain na anjali…(not realising he might hurt armaan)
ANJALI:Atul…!!!!!(she was already feeling bad what she did a bit earlier and now)
ATUL:Armaan..main toh bas aise hi…
ARMAAN:Nehi champ!!its o.k ,,,main bas abhi aata hoon,(he goes away,feeling again sad hearing ridhimas name)
NIKKI:Atul..ek baar soch ke toh baat karthe..
ABHI: Nikki..ismein atul ki kya galthi hain…..ridhima armaan ki takat hain,kamjori nehi,(repeating his words)hum sab usse aur kamjor nehi karna chahiye,balki hume uske saath dena chahiye..tabhi armaan phir se normal hoga….
ANJALI:Haan Mr.Modi ,I think so..(a bit sad thinking of armaan,ridhima and now what shud she do)
ABHI:Lagtha hain aap logon ne mujhe abhi tak accept nehi kiya….
ANJALI:Nehi Mr.Modi aisi koi baat nehi hain….sach…haina atul..
ATUL:Haan ..hume khushi hui yeh jankar ki aapko armaan ki fikr hain….(sirf armaan ki-that's what he was thinking)
ABHI:So ………friends….(he gives his hand)
ANJALI:Friends…………………(anjy shakes hand and also atul but still he was suspicious about whats going between abhi-armaan)nikki..   (asking nikki)
NIKKI:Kuch ristey itni aasani se nehi judte anjy…
ABHI:Agar tum koshish hi nehi karoge toh kaise pata chalega ki yeh risthey judenge ya nehi…(repeating armaans words,nikki was a bit shocked listening to those words that too from abhi)
ANJALI:Mr.modi …humne aapke saath bahut galat kiya..we are very sorry..(swimming pool incident,posters etc,,,)
ATUL:Haan Mr.modi..sorry…
ABHI:Abhimanyu…sirf abhimanyu…aur haan galti insaan se hi hoti hain,, (seeing nikki)aur main bhi insaan hoon aur mujhse bhi bahut saari galtiya hui hogi….aapne maafi manga wahin kaafi hain..bahut log toh maafi mangne par bhi maaf nehi karthe,,,,…(facing them again) khair chodo..mujhe aapse koi shikayat nehi..
Nikki was startled by what abhi said just now,,was this a sign that he still loved her and wanted to be with her…but why did he do all that to her..why didn't he left jiah??all these questions ran around her mind disturbing her….
ANJALI:Thanks..
ABHI:U r welcome…
ANJALI:So abhimanyu tumhare aur jiah ke beech sab kaisa chal raha hain…
Hearing jiahs name..nikki came back to sense,,
ABHI:Fine…(to himself)yeh armaan kahan chala gaya..

Armaan was sad and was in corridor thinking of ridhima and it striked him suddenly that this is the correct time and made his way to shashanks cabin….

Sid was searching for tamanna…
He sees her sitting alone….he tries go near her,,but a little girl comes to her,,
She was the same girl-daughter of Mr.Avinash who was operated,their family too was invited,but her mother was taking care of her father,so she came here to say thanks to all…

GIRL:Aap ne bhi mere papa ko bachaya hain na..thank u (gives flower)
Tamanna was again feeling guilty ..
TAMANNA:Nehi ..maine ….
SIDDANTH: (cutting her words)Haan…miss gayab ne bhi ki hain aur maine bhi..(she also gives him flower and kisses him on cheek and goes away saying. thank u.)
SIDDANTH:kya hua…miss gayab..kahan kho gayi hain aap??(asking funnily)
TAMANNA:Sidhant…. thanks ……..and sorry..
SIDDANTH:Thanks…sorry……….kis liye..
TAMANNA:Sorry iss liye ki maine tumpe bina soche samjhe chillaya…
SIDDANTH: wow!!!!!its o.k(sitting on chair)Aur thanks kyun..
TAMANNA:Kyunki ..tumne mera saath diya hamesha……..Tum bahut achche ho sidhant..
SIDDANTH:Oh my god!!!tum aur meri bare mein nicely bol rahi..ho..waise kyun…
TAMANNA:Tumne J.P ko itna satane ke baad bhi usse maafi manga,usse manaya aur wooh bhi sab ke saamne..
SIDDANTH:Toh…
TAMANNA:Par maine itni badi galthi karne ke bawjood kissi se kuch neh kahan,,,main bahut buri hoon…(she was feeling guilty)
SIDDANTH:Please please..ab phir se apne naigara falls shuru mat kar dena…….tum apne aap ko itna underestimate kyun karthe hoo.. [Thanks arushi,this ones for u…for boosting me..] maine kahan na tumhari koi galti nehi hain…..
TAMANNA:Agar kisi ko pata chal gaya …..aur ……aur….mujhe sanjeevni se nikal diya toh..(she started crying)
SIDDANTH:Tum aise hi roti tahogi toh sab ko pata chal jayega…
She was seeing him with tearful eyes..
SIDDANTH:Okok..agar kisi ne kuch kaha toh ..main keh donga…..ki ….ki…maine kiya hain..waise bhi mujhe yahan rehne ka koi shauk nehi hain..mujhe toh america jana hain….wow!!!!kya idea hain..maine kabhi socha hi nehi,,,
TAMANNA:Sidhant,,nehi tum aisa kuch mat karo…
SIDDANTH:Toh………………tum rona band karo..
She smiles..
TAMANNA:That's good…ab kuch actual party ho jaye…..
TAMANNA:Matlab…

The scene changes………..

All staff and others are around sid and sid is in center..all singing..and dancing..
     (All)
Wanna naach all night
Do you feel alright
Wanna naach all night
Do you feel alright

Sid-Dance with me baby, wont you dance with me all night
Won't you party party party, wont you burn the floor all night
    
          (All)
Wanna naach all night
Do you feel alright
Wanna naach all night

Naina,J.P,atul,anjali joins….and all are dancing around…tamanna is sitting and watching..

Sid-Pyaare pyaare lamhe, pyaari pyaari baatein
Atul-Sapno ke din hain, sapno ki raatein
Naina-Ho goonjen hai dil ke taraane
Anjali-Machle hain geet suhaaneh

All-Behke hai saare deewane
Toh nach le nach le all night

Atul-Where's the party tonight
J.P-Somewhere down the road
Sid -Where's the party tonight
J.P-On the dance floor

All-Oh sapno ke din hain, sapno ki raatein
Where's the party tonight


Armaan searching for file in shashanks cabin but couldn't find it …

Oh……… sajna, oh ……………sajna ……………………….
Tere bina main……………… nahin……………….


Sid-I Wanna go dancing ,all-where's the
Atul -take you out ,all-party tonight
Naina-I Wanna go dancing, all-where's the
Anajli-let's scream and shout ,all-party tonight


Naina-Jo meri manzil tha pagal jispe dil tha
Haan woh mujhe mil gaya
Sid-Phool jo mehka tha, jispe dil behka tha
Bahon mein woh khil gaya (going near tamanna)
Anjy-Mehki hain pyaar ki raahen
Behki hain saari nigahen
Atul-Phaili hain khwabon ki baahen
(All)
Toh nachle nachle all night

Sid goes near abhi and nikki and pulls them to join in dance....

Abhi-Where's the party tonight
J.P-Somewhere down the road
Abhi-Where's the party tonight
J.P-On the dance floor

All-Oh sapno ke din hain, sapno ki raatein
Where's the party tonight

Sid-atul-abhi
Nacch, naach all night
Get it right….

Anjali-Meri yeh kahani, jiski hoon diwani
Woh hai diwana mera
Atul-Jo hai dil ki rani usko bhi zabaani
Yaad hai fasana mera
Nikki-Woh poori hui koi kahani (Thinking of abhi-jiah )
Mil gayi dil ki nishaani (seeing abhi,he sees her and feels sad)
Sid-Jhoom uthi yeh zindagani
All -Toh nachle nachle all night

Naina-where's the party tonight
J.p-somewhere down the road
Sid-where's the party tonight
Atul-on the dance floor
Anjali-oh sapno ke din hain, sapno ki raatein
All-where's the party tonight

Abhi-nikki were seeing at eachother,tamanna was sitting silently and seeing…..

Armaan is still searching for file,he sees locker,but its locked,he remembers about key and searches for it………

Ahh ………………Ahhh……(tune)

Armaan didn't got the keys and was in frustation throwed the files..
He saw ridhimas photo and went near it….he tried to take it and saw keys kept behind it…he smiled at photo thinking as ridhima helped him and fastly opened the locker and searched for ridhimas file and yes he got it..he kept all back in its place and moved out of cabin to find a safe place to see it……..
locker room!!!

He was really happy seeing the file and is walking fast so that no one can see him……….

Back at canteen…

Sid-I Wanna go dancing ,all-where's the
Atul -take you out ,all-party tonight
Naina-I Wanna go dancing, all-where's the
Anajli-let's scream and shout ,all-party tonight

Naina-Nach with me…….

All are dancing and shouting and enjoying…the sound was at its peak and no one cared….

VOICE:Band kariye yeh sab!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Precap:
ARMAAN:Kya chahthe hain aap??
SHASHANK:Wahi jo maine kahan….main aapko nehi nikal saktha…toh apko khud sanjeevni chod kar jana hoga…..

Please do comment
sri

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do comment guys...
please...
need u r support.....
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Again...Dear.............It was too...gud...
Loved it................

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Originally posted by yogithasingh

Again...Dear.............It was too...gud...<br>Loved it................<br>

thanks dear a lot..........
keep commenting ....
will update very soon.....
sri....

hey simi...where r u dear,why didnt u comment ....
waiting...???

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hey nruthi???all u guys...
where are u ??...
guys please comment....
waiting...
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Originally posted by sri_4

hey nruthi???all u guys...
where are u ??...
guys please comment....
waiting...
sri
hey sri my name is NRUTI n i just got here
 
comming to ur part
it was gr8
i realy loved the abhiman part u know doshtana
that was cool
finaly anji accept atul
i hope they confess soon to each other
the part was very well writen
i lovedit very much
do writ more parts
n ua rember to PM me i usualy not around coz of study n all
so its wud help
thanxs
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Originally posted by arluver15

Originally posted by sri_4

hey nruthi???all u guys...
where are u ??...
guys please comment....
waiting...
sri

<FONT size=4 face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">hey sri </FONT>
<FONT size=4 face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">my name is NRUTI </FONT>
<FONT size=4 face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">n i just got here</FONT>


<FONT size=4 face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">comming to ur part </FONT>

<FONT color=#ff0000 size=4 face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">it was gr8 </FONT>

<FONT color=#ff0000 size=4 face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">i realy loved the abhiman part u know doshtana </FONT>

<FONT color=#ff0000 size=4 face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">that was cool </FONT>

<FONT color=#ff0000 size=4 face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">finaly anji accept atul </FONT>

<FONT color=#ff0000 size=4 face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">i hope they confess soon to each other </FONT>

<FONT color=#ff0000 size=4 face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">the part was very well writen </FONT>

<FONT color=#ff0000 size=4 face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">i lovedit very much </FONT>

<FONT color=#ff0000 size=4 face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">do writ more parts </FONT>

<FONT color=#ff0000 size=4 face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">n ua rember to PM me i usualy not around coz of study n all </FONT>

<FONT color=#ff0000 size=4 face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">so its wud help </FONT>

<FONT color=#ff0000 size=4 face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">thanxs</FONT>

<FONT color=#ff0000 size=4 face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">nruti</FONT>


hey nruti..thanks u liked it...
ya i will pm u for sure dear..why not..
do comment...
happy diwali...
sri!!!

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hey guys...
i thought to update it tom..but this episode ends with kind of suspense that i dont want to give that to u all on diwali...
so am updating it now...enjoy...and yes..
happy diwali..

"Diwali ke Is Mangal Avsar par,
Aap Sabhi ki Manokamna Puri ho,
Khushiyan Apke Kadam Chume,
Isi Kamna ke Saath aap Sabhi ko,
Diwali ki Dhero Badhaiyan"

Thanks to all who commented,"like"d,also silent readers…
Heres my next part,,,
Please do comment…please………………………………….
sri

ARMAAN-RIDHIMAA : PART 8

"Laye hum Hasi laye hum Khushi jee le phir se zindagi…
Taaron se aage hum jaayenge cheen le ayenge roshni …
Dil ho jahaan dost ho vahaan aisa manzar hain yahan…
Manzil nayi,rasthe naye …
Phir bhi chale,hum saath mein…
Hum toh chale the dost banke…
Jaane kahan dill mill gayye!!!!"


Locker room…….

Armaan went fastly to locker room,interns were in party and others were busy,so he checked here and there and sat on the table….
He was very happy seeing the file and was about to open file when he heard some sounds of steps….
He tried to hide himself and in hurry he kept the file in one of locker,closed it and went to changing room….

He heard steps coming near and near and it stopped,he sneaked out to find who was it,armaan could see his back..

The person opened the locker,it was same locker in which he kept file..
ARMAAN:Shit!!!!

The persons Phone rang and he lifted,turns around …and armaan sees him…….its

YUVRAAJ:Theek hain…main aa raha hoon….(Cuts call)

YUVRAAJ: (loudly)Ab dekthe hain…kya hoga….

He smiled..

He locks his locker and goes away taking his helmet….

Armaan comes out,he tries to open the locker but it wasn't coming…….

ARMAAN:Damn it!!!!ab kya karoon……….yeh toh chala gaya tha………………..yahan kya kar raha hain…..waise yeh kisse baat kar raha tha…kuch toh zaroor hain…..

He was busy with his thoughts when Suddenly his phone rings….

ARMAAN:Haan anjy,,bolo…
ANJALI: (tensed)Armaan…………….papa!!!

Armaan is shocked and cuts call,runs towards canteen,once looking back towards locker…

Back at canteen…….

SHASHANK:What the hell is going here…..
All were silent and no one dared to look up…
SHASHANK:Yeh hospital hain ya koi vegetable market ?…….yeh sab kya ho raha hain…..pura ka pura sanjeevni yahan hain toh patients ko khayal kaun rahega….agar unhe kuch ho gaya toh aap par nehi mujhpar haath uthenge….
SHASHANK:Interns…. aake kuch din bhi nehi hue aur (he was looking at all and yes especially J.P,seeing his superman costume,J.P tried to hide) ….disgusting……...
SHASHANK: (he sees abhi,nikki,anjali)Aur doctors aap bhi…..shame on u…….maine kahan tha aapse pehle hi ki I want discipline in sanjeevni par shayad aapne meri baat seriously nehi liya…and now all of u have to suffer for whatever u did………
He saw around and saw the banner "welcome Dr.Armaan"….
SHASHANK:Yeh party kisne rakha hain….
No one answered………
SHASHANK:Maine pooncha yeh party kisne rakha hain… (shouting)
WARDBOY:Wooh Dr…..Dr. armaan ne…
SHASHANK:O.k… now I know who did this…..aur uski himmat kaise hui yeh sab karne ki…..i am not gonna leave him…….kahan hain wooh………kahan chupa hain wooh………..

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ARMAAN:Main chuptha nehi hoon Dr.Shashank…main yahan hoo…..
SHASHANK: (shashank turns back)Dr.armaan…u are..
ARMAAN: (cutting him..)Dr.Shashank hum yeh sab akele baat kar sakthe hain…….ya phir… yahan sabke saamne…u decide….
SHASHANK: (shashank thought for sometime and then ordered)Sanjeevni ki poori staff abhi issi waqt wapas apne duties par jayiye…baaki… go back to u homes…...main aap sabse kal deal karoonga……. now……leave…….
All started leaving….
Anjali comes near shashank….
ANJALI:Papa..wooh..armaan ne kuch nehi……..
SHASHANK:Dr.Anjali Gupta……….please go home….. I will talk to u later…..go now……..
SHASHANK:Mere cabin mein..now……..(facing armaan and he leaves)
ATUL:Armaan……..mere bhai…(he hugs armaan)
ARMAAN:Its o.k …aap sab jayiye……. (pushing all to go)
NIKKI:Par armaan…….
ARMAAN:Go…..jao….. (he indicates abhi to take care of nikki and atul to take care of anjy)

Armaan is tensed not knowing whats going to happen,how will he handle the situation,his friends for whom he actually kept party to reunite them,sanjeevni,file,,,,and ridhimaa……………all this thoughts made him more tensed and he kept his hands to his head……..he breathes heavily and makes his way to shashanks cabin…….

All staff went back to their duties,and others interns to home……..

Outside sanjeevni…….

Atul and anjali were walking they were tensed….

ANJALI:Pata nehi papa kya kahenge armaan se….maine kahan tha usse ki ab sab kuch badal gaya hain…par usne… usne meri baat nehi suni..
ATUL:Anjali ….sab theek…
ANJALI:Nehi atul sab theek nehi hoga…main hi stupid thi ki papa ke baare mein janne ke bawjood usse nehi roka…I am so stupid…agar papa ne armaan ke saath phir se kuch kiya toh…..pehle hi papa ne armaan ke saath itna galat kiya…no I wont let it happen this time…..(she turns around to go back)
ATUL: (stopping her)Anjali….anjali…dekho.. wooh armaan hain…armaan…wooh kuch na kuch zaroor karenga…mujhe uspe bharosa hain..wooh itni asani se haar nehi manega………..hain na…….
ANJALI:mmm.. par phir bhi agar papa ne….
ATUL:Dr.Shashank kuch nehi karenge armaan ko…wooh yahan apne case ke liye aaya hain..aur trustees ne bheja hain..woh usse itni aasani se kuch nehi kar payenge……..
ANJALI: (she thought and felt atul was correct that without trustees order shashank cant do anything)
Haan… shayad tum theek keh rahe ho..
ATUL:Ab tum relax ho jau…
ANJALI: (she smiled)Thanks atul…pata nehi agar tum nehi hote toh…
ATUL:Main tumhare saath hamesha tha anjali aur hamesha rahonga,,,(seriously and with low voice)par shayad tumhe hi mujhpe bharosa nehi tha….

Atul was now a bit sad…anjali heard him and felt bad,she remembered her conversation with armaan and decided to give a try…

ANJALI:Atul…….i am sorry…really sorry…tumne hamesha mujhse itna pyaar kiya,mujhe khush rakha,mere saath diya,mere liya sab kuch kiya…..par main hi tumhe samajh nehi payi…
ATUL:Nehi anjali..tum ne kuch nehi kiya..main hi tumhare layak nehi..
ANJALI:Atul……..main tumhare layak nehi hoon…..
ATUL:Anjali yeh tum kya keh rahi ho,,(confused)
ANJALI:Mujhe bolne do…….please……..atul……….pehli baar jab maine tumhe dekha toh tum mujhe bilkul pasand nehi the,tum hamesha mere peeche pade rehthe the,meri aas paas rehthe the,meri body guard ke jaise rehthe the,mujhe yeh sab bilkul achcha nehi lagtha,mujhe laga yeh sab tum sirf dikhave ya phir cool banne ke liye kar rahe ho,is liye maine kabhi tumhe seriously nehi liya,aur haan jab maine tumhe mauka diya-hamare pehle date par,wahan bhi tumne kuch na kuch gadbad karthe rahe,……I felt……. u were not my type…tumhare plants,tumhara dressing style,tumhare harkathe,they were so irritating,I always thought ki tum jaise insaan ko kaun pasand karega ………kaun pyaar karega…..,

Atul was so sad hearing all that,he never wanted to hurt her,but he did,he was feeling embarressed…

ATUL:Sorry anjali..aaj ke baad main tumhe kabhi pareshan nehi karounga..promise…..
ANJALI:Yahi………….. tumhari yehi baat mujhe bahut achche lagne lagi…
ATUL: (confused)Kya…kya matlab……..
ANJALI:Jab bhi main armaan aur ridhima ko dekthi thi mujhe bahut jealousy hoti thi,mujhe lagtha tha ki kya mujhe bhi itna pyaar karne wala milega,mere itna khayal rakhega, ……..maine bahut socha…..tab mujhe ehsaas hua ki shayad mere liye yeh kisi ne pehle hi kiya aur aaj tak kartha rahan hain..aur mein hi bewakoof thi ,,,,wooh saamne tha aur main usse pehchaan nehi payi……jisse mera khayal hain….aur jisse mein bahut pasand karthi hoon,,
ATUL: (to himself)Yeh anajli kiski baat kar rahi hain… (to anjali)Achcha anjali,,kaun he wooh lucky guy……….
ANJALI:Tum abhi bhi nehi samjhe……. wooh…….tum ho atul………(catching his hand and stopped walking)tum……….tumne mere liye har wooh cheez ki jo ek ladki chahthi hain….shayad maine thodi deer se jana…I really like u atul….i think I lov………
ATUL: (atul was shocked but he thought about something)Anjali…..nehi…….please kuch mat kaho…..
ANJALI:Kya hua atul…main tumse pya..
ATUL: Nehi…. please anjali………main..main. jaa raha hoon………(he turns to go)
ANJALI: (stopping him)Par kyun,,,tum mujhse pyaar nehi karthe the,,,,,,,ya phir…ab nehi karthe ho……..
ATUL: (turning back)Anjali…..main tumse hamesha pyaar kartha tha,kartha hoon aur apne marthe dam thak karoonga…
ANJALI:Atul…….kya mujhse koi galthi hui hain…maine kuch…
ATUL: Nehi anjali tumne kuch nehi kiya……….
ANJALI:Phir..kya baat hain..mujhe nehi batoge…
ATUL: (thinking for sometime)Anjali…tum ab ek badi doctor ho-Dr.Anjali shashank gupta,jiske papa sanjeevni ke head hain (anjali was not getting what he wanted to say)……aur main abhi bhi ek intern hoon..jo fail ho gaya…..main tumhare liye sahi nehi hoon anjali…….tumhe toh mujhse bhi bahut achche ladke milenge……..
ANJALI:Par tum toh nehi miloge na atul(he was startled)………..tum mere baare mein aise sochthe ho,,,haan shayad agar mein wooh purani anjali hoti jisse sirf ek tall,fair,handsome,well educated,rich boy friend chachthi thi……..toh shayad aise hi sochti…par mujhe aaj us sab se badkar ek cheez chahiye..jo sirf tumhare paas hain..woh hain……..pyaar…..jo mujhe un bahut achche ladkon mein nehi milegi,,kabhi nehi…….aur yeh tum main intern tum doctor kya laga rakha hain…..tumhe bhi pata hain aur mujhe bhi ki kin halaton mein tum fail hue,ismein toh tumhari galthi bhi nehi,,u are a great doctor…and I know that …..atul……..mujhe sirf tumhare saath ki zaroorat hain..aur kuch nehi…
ATUL:Par tumhare papa..
ANJALI:Mujhe nehi pata ki papa kya kahenge aur wooh kya sochenge,…par mujhe lagtha hain maine tumhe chun kar sahi kiya hain…aur main hamesha tumhare saath doongi…promise….ab toh batao na atul…please…
ATUL: (getting convinced and smiling)Anjali…..wooh,,,mein……..tumse…bahut ………. (hesitating)
ANJALI: (hugging him)I love u atul………….
ATUL: (hugging her back but a bit uncomfortably)I ………..too …….love u ……..anjali……..
Anjali smiles at him,she was on top of world and so was atul but a bit sad,he wasn't still sure that anjali just accepted him,,…….. seeing this anjali understands and talks to him…
ANJALI:Atul kya tumhe mujhpe bharosa nehi hain..
ATUL:Anjali………mujhe tum par khud se bhi zyada bharosa hain…par …. main iss risthey ko kuch samay dena chahtha hoon…tumhare liye mere liye…hum dono ke liye,,,,taaki hum ek doosre ke baare mein jaan sake……
ANJALI: (playfully)Atul tum toh mere baare mein sab janthe hoo…..
ATUL: (seriously)Shayad nehi…maine kabhi nehi socha ki tum yeh sab…….
ANJALI:Atul………… kya tumhe mere pyaar pe vishwaas nehi hain………
ATUL:Nehi anjali… par mein ye chahtha hoon ki yeh vishwaas hamesha rahe,kabhi bhi na toothe…
kabhi bhi..issliye keh raha hoon…   
ANJALI:Hmmm..theek hain..tumhare liye toh main itna kar sakthi hoon….aur shayad hum dono bhi ek saath kuch time spend kar sakthe hain….par hum baaki sab ko toh bata sakthe hain na…
ATUL:Nehi…abhi nehi..mera matlab hain ki ab sab pareshan hain na…hum.hum baad mein bata denge…
ANJALI:Theek hain atul,,,,,,,jab sab saath hoonge tab sab ko kehenge…par tum mere saath donge na…
ATUL:Main hamesha tumhare saath rahoonga anjali…promise…
ANJALI:Main aaj bahut khush hoon attul…..bahut bahut khush….(hugging him again)
ATUL:Main bhi anjali……
ANJALI:Toh chale….main tumhe drop kardoongi..
ATUL:Main auto se ya taxi se chala jaunga…
ANJALI:Atul….please chalo na…mere liye..
ATUL:Theek hain anjali….
ANJALI:I love u atul..i love u so much…….(taking his arm and walking)
ATUL:I too love u anjali..

ATUL: (to himself)Kaash hum humesha aise hi saath rahe….

Nikki and abhi…..

Nikki was in parking ….she saw her car…it was punctured…….

NIKKI:Oh shit!!!car ka tyre puncture ho gaya..ab main ghar kaise jau….
ABHI: (whos coming from back and seeing her car)Nikki..main tumhe drop kardonga,,,chalo…
NIKKI:Thanks Mr.Modi ..par mujhe aapki meharbani nehi chahiye…main chali jaoungi…
ABHI:Dekho nikki bahut raat ho gayi hain,,,tumhe taxi bhi nehi milegi …chalo…
NIKKI:Maine kahan na mujhe aapki help nehi chahiye…
ABHI:Nikki…please..
NIKKI:Dr.Nikita malhotra…..aur waise bhi main kaise jau, aapko kya… I can handle myself..
ABHI:Dekho agar tumhe kuch ho gaya toh….
NIKKI:Toh…kya …kya ….agar mujhe kuch ho gaya toh…kya fark padtha hain..
ABHI: (catching her shoulders and pushing her back to car)Fark padtha hain..damn it ..bahut farak padtha hain……
NIKKI:Kyun..
ABHI:Kyunki main tumse bahut pyaar kartha hoon nikki,,,aur agar tumhe kuch ho jayega toh ,,,main jee nehi paunga…main mar…
Nikki keeps her hand to abhis lips….
NIKKI: (crying and holding his collar)Toh phir kyun abhi kyun tum mujhse abhi bhi itne door hoon….jab bhi main tumhe jiah ke saath dekthi hoon,toh main apne aap ko bahut lachaar samjhthi hoon,,,mere ankhon ke saamne tum uske saath…mein ye sab nehi dekh sakthi abhi…nehi…main tumse bahut pyaar karthi hoon and tumhe khona nehi chahthi hoon…
ABHI:Main jantha hoon nikki,,par main kya karoon….
NIKKI: (leaving his collar and hugging him)Tum usse divorce kyun nehi dete…hum phir se ek saath reh sakthe hain…abhi…
ABHI:Nikki..tumhe toh jiah ki tabiyat ke baare mein janthi ho na..main usse is halat mein akela chod do..
NIKKI: (leaving him)Aur main..tum mujhe akela chod sakthe ho….nehi abhi ….tum agar chahthe ho to tum yeh kar sakthe the par shayad tumhe mujhse zyaada jiah fi fikr hain…..
ABHI:Nikki please mujhpe bharosa rakho…all I need is just time…
NIKKI:Time…6 …6 mahine ho gaye abhi…ab aur kitna waqt chahiye tumhe..poori zindagi…..
ABHI:Ek baar tum meri bhi halat samjho nikki…
NIKKI:Tum meri halat dekho abhi….uss din se aaj tak ek pal bhi aisa nehi tha jab maine hum dono ke baare mein nehi socha….aur tumhe jiah ki chinta hain…meri nehi…………..
ABHI:Nikki please stop being childish..…….
NIKKI: (stops crying.leaving him and says louldy)Enough Mr.Modi ..enough shayad main hi pagal thi jo tum par phir se bharosa kiya..tumhari toh purani aadat haina dil todne ki..aur aaj bhi aap jeet gaye….(abhi tried to say something but nikki stopped him showing her hand and shouts at him)tum mujhse pyaar nehi karthe abhi…pyaar nehi karthe…..i hate u…I hate u ….(she goes leaving him)
ABHI:But I love u nikki I love u ….mujhe maaf kardena..

Anjali leaves atul at his home….they are talking in car…

ANJALI:Tumhe pata hain atul agar armaan ne aaj mujhse baat nehi kiya hota toh main kabhi bhi tumhe kuch nehi keh pata ..
ATUL: Armaan ne tumse bhi baat ki…
ANJALI:Haan..tumse bhi matlab…
ATUL:Ab main samjha…usne yeh party kyun rakha…toh yeh tha uska idea….(he remembered what he said in canteen to him and nikki)wooh…hamare baare mein itna sochtha hain na…
ANJALI: (understanding)Humko milane ke liya itna kuch kiya…..hes so sweet..
ATUL:Pata nehi anjali…hamare liye yeh sab karke wooh khud is sab mein fas gaya………
ANJALI:Haan mujhe bhi uski bahut chintha ho rahi hain….
ATUL:Its ok..anjali …sab theek ho jayega..bye…goodnight..
ANJALI:Goodnight atul… (kissing him on cheek,he blushes,he gets down and goes)

She goes thinking of the wonderful moments with atul….

ATUL:Kaash Dr.Shashank ne usse kuch nehi kahan ho……..

Back in shashanks cabin…

Shashank was in full temper and started shouting at armaan………

SHASHANK:Dr.Armaan…..what do u think of urself,sanjeevni mein wapas kya aa gayye,,phir se apne purane karthothe karne lage……yeh ek hospital hain….pub nehi ki koi party ho….how dare u …

Armaan was listening coolly…….

SHASHANK:Aap sanjeevni ke logon ko apni taraf karna chahthe hain……..yeh kabhi nehi hoga…….do u understand…

ARMAAN:Dr.shashank……..relax….bait jayiye….. ………….Aap itna chilla kyun rahe hain….aapki awaz toh party se bhi uncha hain…….
SHASHANK:Tumhari himmat kaisi hui yeh sab karne ki,
ARMAAN:Mujhe jahaan tak yaad hain..sanjeevni mein isse pehle bhi bahut baar parties hui hain..aur aap bhi unmein shamil hue the…
SHASHANK:Wooh purani baat hain…sanjeevni ab badal gaya hain…….
ARMAAN: Sanjeevni badal nehi gaya Dr.shashank …yahan ke log badal gaye hain…aap badal gayye hain..
SHASHANK:Shutup armaan…..
ARMAAN:Dr.armaan mallik…………waise is party se kissi bhi patient ko koi problem nehi hua… bas ek normal get-together hain….so whats the problem in it…….
SHASHANK:Aapko yeh sab masti-mazak lag raha hain…aur Sanjeevni ka poora staff bhi apne kaam chodke party kar rahe the ,,,,and u are asking whats the problem…u are the problem..u….I will not leave u nor I will leave them,un sab ko sazaa zaroor milegi…..
ARMAAN:Aapki beti ko bhi……….(shashank saw him seriously)Dr.shashank,,,,,,,,Party maine rakhi hain,,,,,aap un sabko kyun sazaa dene ki baat kar rahe hain…..jo sazaa deni hain aap mujhe deejiye….
SHASHANK:Vaah !!!!galti karthe hain aur phir sazaa mangthe hain….(he laughs)
galtiyan karna toh aapki aadat hain…aap galthi pe galthi karthe jayeenge aur hum bas dekhthe rahenge…I will not let this happen… aapne ek operation kya kardiya,,apne aap ko bada hero samjthe hain………..no Dr.armaan …no…pehle hi aapne jo meri beti ke saath kiya kya wooh kam hain…main yeh doobara nehi hone doonga,,
ARMAAN:Ridhima ko beech mein mat layiye Dr.shashank….
SHASHANK:Apni gandi muh se ridhima ka naam bhi mat lo….. maine tumse pehle bhi kahan hain aur aaj bhi keh rahan hoo.. main tumhe ab ek pal bhi yahan nehi dekhna chahtha…chale jau yahan se,sanjeevni se,hamari zindagi se….. just go…….
ARMAAN:Main itni aasani se nehi jaunga,main yahan apne kaam se ayaa hoon aur usse pura karke hi jaunga…yeh trustees ka order hain…….and no one can stop that..
SHASHANK:Fine….toh aap yahan se nehi jana chahthe…toh aapki sazaa puri sanjeevni ko milegi… main sabko keh doonga ki unhe kal se balki aaj aur abhi se unhe sanjeevni chod kar jana hoga….
ARMAAN:Aap aisa kuch nehi karenge…
SHASHANK:Main aisa kar saktha hoon…haan mujhe tumhe nikalne ka powers nehi hain..par unhe nikalne ka hain..and I will do it….aapki wajah se poora sanjeevi ke staff ko apni jobs chodni padegi…soch leejiye aap Dr.armaan mallik…sirf aapki wajah se…….

Armaan was tensed,how could he let all staff suffer because of him…….

ARMAAN:Kya chahthe hain aap??
SHASHANK:Wahi jo maine kahan….main aapko nehi nikal saktha…toh apko khud sanjeevni chod kar jana hoga….. ya phir poori staff……
ARMAAN: (he talked gaining courage again)Mere jaane se unhe koi problem nehi hoga iski kya gurantee hain….
SHASHANK:Guarantee …. main kal shaam ko yeh announce karoonga ………jab aap apni resignation denge….wooh bhi sabke saamne….
ARMAAN:Aap yehi chahthe hain na ki main yahan se chala jau,,………….toh theek hain..main sanjeevni ko chod kar chala jaunga … Dr.Shashank,.aur aap bhi apna wada yaad rakhiye…
SHASHANK:Of course Dr.Armaan sanjeevni ki staff ko kuch nehi hoga… promise..
ARMAAN:Kal aake mein sabke saamne yeh announce karoonga jaise aap chahthe hain….
SHASHANK:Toh kal shaam ko milenge Dr.Armaan……… akhiri baar….
ARMAAN:Zaroor Milenge Dr.shashank….


He leaves..

Shashank is happy and is smiling thinking that he is succeded in sending armaan out of sanjeevni….

Armaan is walking in corridor thinking of the day he came back and what has it turned in just few days… why him?????-That was what he thinking,but he didn't want anyone to get suffered just because of him…. all those moments flashed in his mind,,,,he remembered the day he left sanjeevni and now again he is the same state….

ARMAAN:Main haar gaya ridhima main phir se haar gaya…main apna vaada nehi nibha paya… main apni galti ke liye itni saare logon ko sazaa nehi de saktha…. mujhe maaf kardena,,,

(Song playing-sad)

Hum toh chale the dost banke…….
Jaane kahan dill mill gayye………..

He leaves sanjeevni….

A night with different endings….we see all of them in one screen…….

Atul and anjali are happy in love….
Nikki and abhi are trying to avoid their love….
Armaan is leaving all of them who he loves….

"Love" is what is connecting them….

What will happen next…in which angel will their lives take turn….?

          *************************************************************
Precap:

SISTER:Please Dr.Armaan aap mat jayiye,hum sab ko aapki zaroorat hain…
ATUL:Please armaan..
ALL: Please…
ARMAAN:Main faisla kar chuka hoon aur tum mein se koi bhi mujhe nehi rok sakthe….
ARMAAN:Main jaa rahan hoon…
VOICE:Aap ko kahin jane ki zaroorat nehi hain Dr.Armaan..


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