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Posted: 01 October 2009 at 9:00am | IP Logged
i have posted this is main posts,but kavya suggested me to post here also ....
i have written 2 parts of it and am posting the both here..
thnks kavya fro helping me out!!!Smile thnks a lot!!! and also others who suggested the same..
thnks to others who have commented there and i wud like u to comment here also!!!





It was a hospital room..there laid a girl on the bed.she had oxygen mask on her face and many wires were connected to her and the medical equipment beside her bed.The monitor was showing the pulse beat that shows the girl is alive..but she was laying there unconsious without any movement..shes in "COMMA"'

Some one entered from the door and took a seat next to her'

VOICE:Kyun ridzy..kyun???hamesha yeh sab tumhara saath hi kyun hota hain..
Her eyes startes to get wet..
VOICE:Meri choti si ridzy ko bhagwan ne itna dukh kyun diya hain..
Anjali was a very modern girl,,but she always loved her little sister and couldn't see her in this state..
ANJALI:Kaash tumhe us din kuch nehi hota'kaash tum wapas armaan ke paas jane ki zid na karthi'kaash???

All this thoughts made her remind the day which has changed their lives drastically'

Two unknown persons attacking sanjeevni..making ridhima their hostage'armaan going to ridhima'
Ridhima going back to armaan'gun man's firing'how the bullet hit ridhimas she and armaan fell their badly they wanted to just touch their hands..but couldn' everyone were shocked'.

She took ridhima's hand which was as cold as ice and which didn't had any movement'
ANJALI:Tum aur armaan ek doosre se kitna pyaar karthe ho..par armaan bhi tumhe nehi bacha paya' aur khud usse bhi itni badi saza milli..jiska woh zimedar bhi nehi hain,,,

ANJALI:Chehe(6) mahine..6 mahine ho gaye..par abhi tak kuch nehi badla..shayad badlega bhi nehi..
Her eyes began to wet again..

She took out her hand from ridhimas hand and folded and prayed to god,,

ANJALI:Hey bhagwan'please maine zindagi mein aapse kabhi bhi kuch bhi nehi manga hain..please meri ridzyy ko theek kardo'.please..

She never believed in god nor did she did prayer..but today she needed all good wishes to her sister who is struggling her life in this state from past 6 months '

She heard her phone ring and saw the name flashing on screen "ARMAAN", She wiped her stears'
She lifted the phone..

ANJALI:Hello '
ARMAAN:Hello anjy..
ANJALI:Armaan..kais..e ho tum'
ARMAAN:Anjy..ridhima kaisi hain'
She starts crying..
ARMAAN:Anjy..ridhima kaisi hain,,,please batao'anjy..please
(one cud see the curiosity in those words which were waiting for her answer)
ANJALI:Wooh..sob'sob'theek ..sob..sob..hain..armaan'par'sob'
ARMAAN:Par kya anjy..
ANJALI:Mujhe bahut dar lag raha armaan kahi usse kuch ho na jaye..
ARMAAN:Nehi.. anjy..usse kuch nehi hoga..MERI SAANSEIN AB BHI CHAL RAHI HAIN ANJY,AB BHI CHAL RAHI HAIN'jab thak main zinda hoon,meri basket ko kuch nehi hone doonga..
ANJALI:Par 'sob'armaan..
ARMAAN:Mujhpe vishwaas karo anjy..
ARMAAN:Tum log sanjeevni kab aaye ho'.
ANJALI:Hum 'kal aaye hain ,,,ridhima ka ilaaj ab yehi hoga'papa ko lagtha hain ki ridhima ka ilaaj yehi sakhi tareeke se ho saktha' unke ankhon ke saamne..unhone kisi doctor se bhi baat kee hain'
Armaan really wanted to see ridhimaa..he really missed her like hell..these 6 months were not less than torture to him..these 6 months were like 6 decades to him..
ARMAAN:Main 'main..basket se milna chahtha hoon anjy'
ANJALI:Nehi armaan..nehi..tum toh papa ke baare mein janthe ho na'
ARMAAN:He remembered some thing which made him tensed'
ANJALI:Wooh tumhe sanjeevni mein kabhi bhi nehi aane denge..wooh tumhe ridhima se kabhi bhi milne nehi denge'.tumhe toh yaad hain na us din unhone kya kaha tha'.


"RIDHIMAA'." Shanshank shouts'
"Ridzy,,,"anjali fell on her knees ,tears coming out from her eyes'
Abhi,nikki,atul,muskaan..everyone one shocked'.


Abhi-nikki were treating ridhima'
Shashank and anjy were waiting outside ,padma joined them..all were tensed'no one could talk anything..
Anjy was hugging padma and they were consoling each other..
Shashank was roaming from left to right..

ABHI:Bullet toh bahar aa gayi hain..par hume ridhima ko hosh mein laana hoga warna'
NIKKI:Warna kya abhi..
ABHI:Shayad hum ridhima ko bacha nehi payenge

Suddenly,as abhi thought ridhima was having difficulty in breathing..

ABHI:Nikki jadi se karo..ridhima ka pulse rate gir raha hain..nurse.. quick.. jadi se injection dijejiye..
Abhi is trying hard to save ridhima..
NIKKI:Abhi'mujhe bahut dar lag raha hain..
ABHI:Kuch nehi hoga nikki' hum ridhima ko bacha lenge..
Abhi gives injection to ridhima..she's back to normal..but still she didn't get consious..then''.

After some time,outside the O.T

Abhi and nikki comes out of O.T,
SHASHANK:Kaisi hain ridhima'.wooh 'wooh..theek tho hain na'
Padma and anjali are also waiting to hear the answer anxiously..
ABHI:Dr.shashank humne bahut koshish ki hain lekin'
SHASHANK:Lekin kya Mr.modi 'aap mujhe saaf saaf kahiye'
Padmas cries increased..

NIKKI:Wooh.. ridhima ..ridhima..
SHASHANK:For god sake batayiye..
ABHI: (Abhi came in between )..Dr.ridhima COMMA mein chali gayi hain..
Shashank was dumstruck..
Anjy and padma were shocked..padma couldn't bear the shock and fainted..

Some where near in another room at same time..

Muskaan and atul were assisting Keerthi to treat armaans wounds'

KEERTHI:Dr.muskaan jaldi se O+ blood ,blood bank se leke ayiye..inka bahut blood loss hua
MUSKAAN:Jee Dr.keerthi..(muskaan leaves)
ATUL:Dr.keerthi armaan theek tho ho jayega na..
KEERTHI:Dr.atul don't worry,,inhe zyada chot nehi aayi hain..but haan shayad glass pieces ke lagne se inke sar se bahut khoon bah gaya hain...maine inka head ka bandage kar diya hain.. .hume jald se jald inhe treat karna hoga'
MUSKAAN:Yeh lijeye mam,,blood..
KEERTHI:Sister aap yeh jaldi se Dr.armaan ko chada deejiye..aur haan yeh tablets/injections inhe waqt pe de dijeyega..inhe jald hi hosh aa jayega..
KEERTHI: (turning to muskan and atul)Dr.muskaan aur Dr.atul aap Dr.armaan ka khayl rakhiye..main bakki patients ko treat karthi hoon..
MUSKAAN/ ATUL:Jee Dr.keerthi..
ATUL:Armaan mere Bhai..tu jaldi se theek ho ja..

After some time..

Armaan gains consious..
ARMAAN:Awhh'Ridhima mujhe awhh.. maaf kardo..main tumse awh'kabhi bhi kuch bhi nehi chupaunga..ridhima please..ahhww'.ridhimaa'
Armaan opens his eyes..
ARMAAN:Champ.!!!muskaan!!!main yahaan kya kar raha hoon,,mein toh apni car mein tha..phir achanak'Accident'???mera sir'.
He keeps his hand to his head which was paining..
ATUL:Arre yaar lagtha hain tujhe apni memory wapas aa gayi..

He tries to remember'his head pains a lot..he tries to sit'
He keeps his hand on his head trying hard to recollect and yes he remembers every thing..

Accident..How police came to sanjeevni to drop he met she teased her as "TEACHER".the basket ball match..the day when ridhima was he got to knw abt his love ''basket".how he went to terrace to commit ridhima came.. he loved ridhima again..ridhimas replacing answersheets..ridhimas promise to shashank not to meet did she left him to airport..but he went to shashank and he was convinced'their engagement prepartions'then sanjeevni'attack by 2 he went to rescue ridhima'how ridhima came back to him 'and '''''

Ridhima was shot by bullet''''.

Armaan was shocked to remember his ridhima was shot 'this thought made him worried,tensed..
He was panicked..   

ARMAAN:Ridhima ..ridhima..wooh'wo..oh kaisi hain..usse toh golli lagi thi..
MUSKAAN:Arre haan atul ridzyy.kaisi hain..hume usse milna chahiye'

Just then anjali enters..    

ATUL:Anjali tujhe pata hain armaan ka memory wapas aa gaya hain..
MUSKAAN:Haan yaar..kitna acha hain na,,ridzy..kitni kush hogi'

ATUL:Anjy tu kuch bol kyun nehi rahi hain..
ARMAAN:Anjali..basket..kaisi hain..???????????

ANJALI:Ridhima COMMA mein chali gayi hain..

He tries to get up..
ATUL:Arman ruk yaar teri tabiyat theek nehi hain'ruk,,
But he doesn't listen..he takes out the needle on his hand..and runs out of room,,,limping,,,keeping hand on his head,,its paining a lot..but he didn't care..all he wants to see his ridhima..his basket..
Anjali fells on her kneels..atul supports her..tears flowing from both their eyes..
ATUL:Anjali..sab kuch' theek ho jayega..

Muskaan follows armaan and supports him'

Arman wanted to see ridhima he didn't know where he was going..untill he saw abhi-nikki talking to padma'
ARMAAN:Nikki'ridhima kaisi hain..mujhe..mujhe usse milna hain'
NIKKI:Nehi armaan tum usse nehi milsakthe wooh I.C.U mein hain..
ARMAAN:Mujhe milna hain'mujhe milna hain..please..nikki..
Armaan tries to go inside but abhi stops him..
ABHI:Please control Dr.armaan,,app abhi usse mil nahi sakte..
ARMAAN:Bas ek baar please main usse ek baar dekhna chahtha hoon..please..
SHASHANK: (coming from I.C.U)Kya dekhna chahte hain aap Dr.armaan,,yehi ki wooh abhi bhi mar chuki hain ya nehi..yehi dekhna chachte hain aap??
MUSKAAN:Yeh aap kya keh reha hain sir..
SHASHANK:Aap please chup rahiye Dr.muskaan,main aapse baat nehi kar raha hoon'
Atul and anjali enters'
SHASHANK:Batayiye kya dekhna chahte hain aap'ki kaise meri bachi waha apni zindagi aur maut ke beech lad rahi hain'
Armaan eyes filled with tears on hearing those words "zinadgi aur maut".he couldn't imagine his ridhima going through all this..
SHASHANK:Ya phir yeh dekhna chahte hain ki aapki galti ki saza usse kaise mil rahi hain..kya dekhna chahte hain aap..
Armaan got hurt with those words..he cudnt stand still'atul comes for his support
ANJALI:Par papa'ismein armaan ki kya galti hain..
SHASHANK:For gods sake anjali..tumhari behen waha I.C.U mein zindagi se jhooj rahi aur tum yahaan is insaan ke tarafaari kar rahi ho..jisne itni badi galthi kardi..agar isne usse roka nehi hota toh aaj..
ANJALI:Par papa' ridzy..khud wapas gayi thi armaan ke pass..aur'papa armaan ko bhi toh chot lagi hain na??
SHASHANK:BAS ANJALI!!!!mein aur kuch nehi sunna chahtha hoon..bas!!!Aaj jo bhi ridhima ki halat hain wooh sirf aur sirf armaan ki laparwahi ka nateja hain..iski bewakoofi se meri beti''.(facing armaan)tumhare pyaar se usse kabhi koi bhi khushi nehi mili aur na ni kabhi milegi'tum jaise insaan se pyaar karke usne apne zindagi barbad karlii hain.. ab mein aur nehi sahunga aur na hi apni beti ko sehne doonga'''..
tumne sanjeevni ko bhi kahi ka nehi choda'.tum jaise insaan se toh baat karna hi bekaar hain..

Tears starts rolling in his eyes..he turns to go ..but stops and talks again..

SHASHANK:Aaj se balki abhi se tumhara aur ridhima ka koi ristha nahi hain..main apni beti ka ristha tumse hamesha hamesha ke liye tod raha hoon'

Armaan head started rolling ..he remembered how happy ridhima was when he kept ring on her finger..

SHASHANK:Dr.armaan tum'''aap' yahan ek patient hain isi liye main aapko yahan rukne ke liye mana nehi kar raha hoon..par jaisi hi aap theek ho jayenge aapko SANJEEVNI chodni hogi.. hamesha ke liye..thats final!!!!
ANJALI:Par papa armaan ka intenship..please papa aap aisa mat keejiye..please..
MUSKAAN/ ATUL:Please sir..
KEERTHI:Haan sir..aap is galti ki saza iske career par nehi dal sakthe..after all yeh sanjeevni ke reputation ka sawal hain..
Armaan didn't care anything ,,,he was staring at the I.C.U..
SHASHANK:Ok!!!!one last week..aap sab log bhi prepare karleejiye..Dr.armaan aap ko us exams ke results bhej diye jayenge'uske baad aap ka aur SANJEEVNI ka koi ristha nehi rahega'
SHASHANK:Aur haan meri beti se iss zindagi mein kabhi milne ki koshish bhi mat karna ,,,nehi toh iska anzaam acha nehi hoga Dr.armaan mallik'.
SHASHANK:Padma aur Anjali chalo yahaan se..
Anjali left with shashank and padma'
Atul and muskaan were with armaan who was still staring at I.C.U door..
Armaan couldnt understand what was happening around,he walked towards the I.C.U.but'Dr.keerthi
Stopped him,,it was her duty not to allow him inside..but she allowed him to see from outside..she smiled and left..
He just came near the door and looked from the glass his "ridhima".laying there without any movement..
Tears started rolling again..he kept staring at her for long time..
Atul and muskaan came to him and took to his ward and he lied there without saying any word..

One week passed'
Armaan tried many times to meet ridhima,but always shashank used to be with her.
Atul,anjali,muskaan tried to support him,make him back to normal,,but he was just a body without life,his "life"was in I.C.U..his ridhima..

On day of locker room
Armaan was not all interested but
ANJALI:Armaan ..mujhe pata hain..tum kaise feel kar rahe ho,,
She tries to console himkeeping her hand on his shoulder,, ..he was fine now..
Armaan didn't talk these all days to anyone..he was like dumb..but today..
ARMAAN: (Shouting)Nehi anjy tum nehi samjh sakthi'kabhi nehi samajh sakthi'.meri ridhima wahaan I.C.U mein bejan si padi hain aur main..main kuch bhi nehi kar tab aur na hi ab!!(calmly)Tumhare papa sach kehthe hain 'sab meri galthi hain..sab meri galthi hain..mujhe usse bhejna chahiye tha'aaj wooh to bach jathi..par mein'shayad' mein.. mein ridhima ke layak hi nehi hoon..main uske pyaar ke layak hi nehi hoon..
He was crying with his hands on his head'
ARMAAN:Mujhe yeh exam,internship yeh sab nehi chahiye mujhe sirf meri ridhima chahiye..anjy..
mujhe sirf meri ridhima chahiye'
He started crying ,anjy hugged him,,

After this incident no one thought that anjali will support armaan as she was a girl who always pointed out defects in armaan..but anjali realised on the same day how much one can love'armaan and ridhima's love was as pure as pearl....their support for eachother at all times 'on that day armaan went to search ridhima and ridhima believed in armaan and went back for him without caring their lives'.
She realised their love is eternal..and she really felt that would she ever be able to get a love like that or atleast she will help in uniting armaan and ridhima..but she could never cross her limits and go against shashank and their family'

Atul and muskaan entered'

ANJALI:Armaan agar ridhima yahan hoti toh wooh yehi chahti ki tum yeh exam likho aur apna internship complete karo..taaki tum ek bahut achche doctor bano..
MUSKAAN:Haan armaan anjy sahi keh rahi hain..
ATUL:Haan mere bhai,,agar tu hi aise himmat haar jayega toh mera kya hoga..
ANJALI:Please armaan humare liye na sahi ridhima ke liye toh tu yeh karsaktha hain na..
Nikki enters'
NIKKI:Haan armaan ..please..
Armaan nods..

Armaan unwilling writes the exam..all others too write their exams'no one is in a mood'all are worried about ridhima and one could concentrate on their exam.
Dr.keerthi was invislator..
Armaan cudnt write anything,,,his mind was full of ridhimas thoughtd..
KEERTHI:Dr.armaan..please aap apne exam par concentrate keejiye..
He knows after this exam he will be not able to see sanjeevni again, may be his friends,and mainly his ridhima,,
After the exam'
Armaan goes to all places where he and ridhima used to meet in sanjeevni....
All his memories flashed in his mind..

--Hum Se Hasi Hum Se Khushi (walking in corridor)
How he first came to sanjeevni'how he met all his friends..then ridhima'

--Hai hum hi se zindagi ..(seeing childrens ward)
Basket ball match..their lonavla trip

--Taare hum zameen par le aaye(near fire escape)
How he proposed her'karvachaut 'he gave kangan to her,,,

--Hum laaye hain roshni (near reception)
How he left to casauli and ridhima came to bring him back

--Dil jahaan dost vahaan(near canteen)
All his friends..sapna,atul,anjali,muskaan,rahoool,nikki..everyone'

--Aisa manzar aur kahan(on terrace)
How they used to meet on terrace silently..

--Hum toh chale the dost banke(near I.C.U seeing ridhima for last time)
How happy were they on day before engagement'

--Jaane kahan dill mill gayye(near sanjeevnis entrance)
How he kept ring on her finger,,how happy were they'

--Jaane kahan dill mill gayye
He left sanjeevni once looking back at it'remembering all his life these years'..

ARMAAN:Main nehi jaan chahtha hoon ridhima ,main tumse ek pal bhi juda nehi hona chahtha hoon,par mein majboor hoon..mujhe maaf kardena..

After some days when he got his result-he was passed,he tried to contact with his friends but couldn't.
He tried to see ridhima,going to sanjeevni,but got to knw she was taken abroad for treatment by their family'

He was alone,,,no one with him,,he cried thinking of her day and night,,,,

But he realised that no one can take ridhima away from her and he will do anything to get back to ridhima'.
"Main humare pyaar ko itni asaani se haarne nehi doonga ridhima..main vaada katha hoon main tumhe jaldi hi theek kardonga'yeh ARMAAN MALLIK KA VAADA HAIN RIDHIMA GUPTA SE!!!"


Anjali had contacted armaan after they came from abroad'she knows how armaan wud be feeling all these days..and she always wanted armaan and ridhima to be back again,,

ANJALI:Wooh tumhe sanjeevni mein kabhi bhi nehi aane denge..wooh tumhe ridhima se kabhi bhi milne nehi denge'.tumhe toh yaad hain na us din unhone kya kaha tha'.

Armaan remembers those words..

"Main apni beti ka ristha aapse hamesha hamesha ke liye tod raha hoon'"

"Meri beti se iss zindagi mein kabhi milne ki koshish bhi mat karna ,,,nehi toh iska anzaam acha nehi hoga Dr.armaan mallik'."

ARMAAN:Mujhe pata hain anjy'par mein ridhima se milkar hi rahoonga..itne din tumhare papa ne usse mujhse door rakha 'main ab yeh nehi hoone doonga'
ANJALI:Armaan ..please..
ARMAAN:Nehi anjy'

Just then shashank enters the room..
ANJALI:Armaan.. papa aaye hain'mein tumhe baad mein phone karungi'
She cuts the call..

Shashank was talking on phone..

Hello mr.mehra,achcha kab aayenge wooh?
Aaj '11:00 baje ,,,main unse milne ke liye wait karunga..
Akhir yeh meri beti ki zindagi ka bhi sawal hain..
Jee zaroor ,,..main milke baat karunga..
Thanks again jee bye..

He cuts the call and hugs anjali..
ANJALI:Hello dad..
SHASHANK:Kaise ho beta..
ANJALI:Main theek hoon'aap ridhima ke paas bethiye main jaathi hoon,,,,
Anjali leaves'

He sits near ridhima and takes her hand'and talks to her..

SHASHANK: He stared her for a long time and talked to her thinking she might be listening to him ..

Tumhare liye kaha kaha nehi gaye ,,,itne saare doctors se iilaaj karvaya in 6 mahino mein
par kuch bhi nehi hua'kuch bhi nehi..
Ridhima beta'apne papa ko aur kitna tadpaoge'Jaldi se theek ho jau'
Tears starts rolling from his eyes..

Kaash us din tumne armaan ki baat nehi manti hoti toh yeh sab nehi hota..

Now his tears turned to anger,,,he remembered that day..

Main us insaan ko kabhi maaf nehi karoonga'kabhi bhi..
Meri beti ko itna dard deke wooh kabhi bhi kush nehi rah payega'

At sanjeevni's entrance..

Sanjeevni has changed a lot in these 6 months..the ambience,the colour,new staff was appointed except some old ones.. no one dared to talk about what happened on that day..before 6 months..
After that day minister blamed shashank for his daughters condtion..
Media was always at sanjeevni disturbing them..
Shashank felt it was good to leave sanjeevni for some days,for him and also ridhima,who cud be treated at abroad with nice medical facilties.
shashank before leaving with his family handed all responsilbilties to Dr.keerthi,Dr.abhimanyu modi and Dr.nikita malhotra'.

A byke came with zooming speed and stopped '
The guy was still wearing a helmet..he parked his byke and went inside ,,,he removed his helmet..
His hair was flowing with wind'
He was looking handsome..with his cool shades..
He was wearing a black jeans and a white shirt..with a jacket on it..
which cud make any girl mad..
All nurses were looking at him turning back,'..

At reception'

VOICE:Mujhe Dr.shashank se milna hain'
Staring at him and then regaining..
SISTER:Jee ..jee' wooh sir abhi apne cabin mein honge..
VOICE:Kahan hain unka cabin..
SISTER:Straight..and 2nd left..
VOICE:Thanks..and yes this is for u ..
The guy gives a rose to sister..
VOICE: A beautiful rose to beautiful lady..
He leaves the sister whos staring at his back and blushing..

He goes through children ward and sees lots of children playing and shouting..
He enters with a serious look..
All children look at him with fear..they thought he will complain to Dr.nikki'
But he keeps his hands in pocket..
Children sees eachother with annoying face and then to him..
He takes out lots of choclates and give to all? '
All children say "THANKS" to him..and he leaves saying bye to them

He's walking in corridor' where he sees an old lady who couldn't walk properly '
He helps her and makes her sit in wheel chair..
The old lady gives him blessing..
"Humesha kush raho'beta..tumhe jo chahiye wooh tumhe jaldi hi mil jaye"

VOICE: Wooh toh mujhe mil kar hi rahega'

At ridhimas room same time..

SHASHANK:Main usse kabhi bhi tumse milne nehi doonga..

VOICE: Main tumse mil kar hi rahunga..

SHASHANK:Main usse sanjeevni mein kabhi aane hi nehi doonga..

VOICE: Main sanjeevni aagaya hoon 'mujhe ab koi nehi rok saktha..

At reception'

SISTER:Dr.shashank aapse milne koi aaya hain'
SHASHANK:Ho yes shayad naye doctor honge..kahan hain..
SISTER:Aapke cabin ki taraf gaye hain..
Shashank goes towards his cabin..
He opens the door not noticing the person inside ,comes and talks to him..
SHASHANK:Hello doctor..aapke bare mein yahaan aake bahut suna hain'welcome to sanjeevni..toh kaisa laga aapko Doctor'.
He looks up to see him'
He removes his shades'.and we see him'
ARMAAN:Doctor armaan mallik sir'.
shashank was dumbstruk'many thoughts going through his mind..

SHASHANK:Armaan'Tumhari himaat kaise hui yahaan aane ki..
ARMAAN:Dr.shashank gupta,,,armaan nehi Dr.armaan mallik..aur haan yahan aane liye mujhe himmat ki nehi..bus mere paav ki zarrorat hain..
SHASHANK:Aapko yahaan aane ke liye kisne permission di,,
ARMAAN:Wooh naya doctor main hi hoon Dr.shashank gupta
SHASHANK:Yeh kaisa ho saktha hain..maine suna hain ki wooh bahut bade doctor hain aur kafi sare patients ko theek kar chuke hain'aur aap..
ARMAAN:Sir main sanjeevni se hi doctor bana hoon,,kya aapko lagtha hain sanjeevni itni buri training di hain mujhe ki main itna kamayab doctor nehi ban saktha..appko sanjeevni par shak hain..
SHASHANK:Mujhko sanjeevni par nehi aap par shak hain'
ARMAAN:Yeh toh aapko meri treatment ke baad ki pata chalega'
SHASHANK:Tab tak aap yahan rukenga kaha..aap abhi isi waqt jayeeya yahan se jayenge..
ARMAAN:Main yahaan aapke kehne par nehi balki Dr.mehra ke kehne par ayya hoon'jo sanjeevni ke trustees mein se hain..aur mujhe unhone jaane ko nehi kahan hain..
SHASHANK:Main abhi unse baat kartha hoon..
ARMAAN:Sochiyega bhi mat,,,trustees ne already yeh decision le liya hain..main apne cases solve karne ke baad hi jaunga..aur haan aap bhi mujhe rok nehi sakthe.. Dr.shashank gupta
Shashank is furious..he cant do anything..he has to bear with him...he has to follow the trustees,after he left to abroad,trustees have been taking all the he cant refuse them.. its a question on sanjeevnis reputation'
Shashank cools down..but..
SHASHANK:Aap yahan aa toh chuke hain Dr.armaan mallik par aap apni iradon mein kabhi kamayab nehi ho payenge..
ARMAAN:Yeh toh waqt hi batayega sir..
SHASHANK:All the best.. Dr.armaan mallik
ARMAAN:Thank u sir'.
Shashank leaves his cabin tensed'
ARMAAN:Main apne iradon mein kamyab ho kar hi rahunga.. Dr.shashank gupta..aap bas dekthe raheyega..

Armaan comes out of cabin..he looks all around..its been 6 months he came here,he missed every part of sanjeevni ..
Armaan seeing around didn't notice some one coming around..and bumps into him..

ARMAAN:Aap dekhke nehi chal sakthe..
He looks up and notices its none other than ATUL
ARMAAN:Champ..!!!!!!!!!!!!!! kaisa he tu'itne dinno baad mil raha hoon ..tune apne bhai ko ek phone bhi nehi kiya..yeh kya yaar..tu toh kuch baat bhi nehi kar raha..
ATUL:Armaan'oh' kaise ho..
ARMAAN:Main theek hoon yaar tu bata'
They start walking in corridor..
ARMAAN:Toh tu yahaan doctor ban gaya..wah yaar teri life toh settle ho gayi hogi anjy ke saath ..hain na??shashank sir ko kaise pataya tune..
Atul was looking down and couldn't meet armaans eyes'he was feeling very bad..
ARMAAN:Anjy ..kaise ho'
ANJALI:Armaan tum yahaan,,papa dekhenge toh humgama ho jayega jaao yahan se..
ARMAAN:Main unse milkar hi aa raha hoon..
ANJALI:Unhone kuch nehi kahan..(shocked)
ARMAAN:Arre yaar main hi naya doctor hoon jo Dr.mehra ne bheja hain kuch critical cases solve karne ke liye..
ANJALI:Papa man gaye..
ARMAAN:Manthe nehi toh kya karthe..armaan mallik ka jadu ka asar toh hoga hi..
ANJALI:I can't believe this armaan'I am so happy happy for u.. (she hugs him)


ATUL:Armaan mujhe jana hain..bye..(he leaves)
ARMAAN:Hey' atul ..isse kya ho gaya hain'oh,,wow..wait'usne tumhe "anjali" ko ignore kiya hain..whats happening. !!!
ANJALI:Armaan atul..atul..FAIL ho gaya hain..wooh apna internship dobara kar raha hain..
ARMAAN:Kya..????par kaise..
ANJALI: Ab chodo armaan..ab mujhe aadat ho gayi hain..woh badal gaya hain armaan..wooh muhjse bhi baat nehi kartha..sirf apne kaam kartha hain aur chala jata hain..


ANJALI:Armaan gotta u at lunch..bye
ARMAAN:Bye ..anjy'''atul fail ho gaya,,,hows that possible..shayad issi liye wooh kuch baat nehi kar pa raha tha,,,shit!!
He sees some one..
NIKKI:Armaan'.tum yahaan'kaise hoo..
ARMAAN:Main theek hoon par tumse naraz hoon tumne ek phone bhi nehi kiya,,arre abhi ke pyaar mein itna pagal ho gayi ki apne best friend ko hi bhool gayi tum....not fair nikki,,
NIKKI:Armaan aisi koi baat nehi hain,bas thodi sa busy thi..
ARMAAN:Modi ke saath..
NIKKI:Armaan ..please..
ARMAAN:Arre yaar..kya please wahaan champ aur yahaan tu..yeh sab kya ho raha hain..waise muskaan kaha hain..
NIKKI:Armaan muskaan bhatinda wapas chali gayi hain..
ARMAAN:Kya???oh shit yaar,par kyun???'

ABHI: Dr.armaan aap yahaan'
ARMAAN:Arre yaar subah se sab log yehi pooch rahe hain..mein Sanjeevni ka naya doc hoon ..lagtha hain meri aane ki khabar notice board par lagvana chahiye..hain na..nikki....(he starts laughing)
Just then jiah enters'
JIAH:That's funny!!!
ARMAAN:Ho..aap kaun hain,,yahan ka naya doc..
JIAH:Please main yahaan ki doc nehi hoon,,waise bhi yeh doctors humesha itne busy hote hain.
.hi!!I am jiah modi,abhi ki wife..
JIAH:Woah!!!maine kuch galat kaha jaanu..
She sees abhi..
ABHI:Haan !!! yeh meri wife hain Dr.armaan..
(he looks at nikki ..whose gaze is down)
NIKKI:Armaan mujhe jana hain..main tumhe lunch time par milungi..bye(she leaves)

JIAH:Hey'jaanu hum bhi chalthe hain..aaj tumne mujhe lunch promise kiya hain'bye doc!!
ABHI:Bye Dr.armaan,,main aapse baad mein miltha hoon..
Jiah holds abhi by hand and takes him away..
Armaan is very confused..
ARMAAN:Yeh sab yahaan kya ho raha hain..

Then he sees Dr.keerthi..
ARMAAN:Dr.keerthi'.kaise ho aap..
He sees her stomach ,shes pregnant..
KEERTHI:Dr.armaan good to see u,toh aap yahan ke naye doctor hain..aayeye main aapko apke cabin dikathi hoon..
They start walking towards armaans cabin..
ARMAAN:Congrats Dr.keerthi..
He looks at her stomach..
KEERTHI:Thank u'waise aapse milke khushi hui..aapke jane ke baad toh'
She stopped mid sentence..
KEERTHI:Yeh raha aapka cabin..aur haan agar koi zarorat hain mujhe call keejiyega..main aapse baad mein milungi..naye interns se mulaqat karane ke liye..
ARMAAN:Naye interns..???
KEERTHI:Haan bas kuch hi din hue hain 5 naye interns join hue,,they will help u in u r cases..ok then I will leave..
She turns around,but arman calls her..
ARMAAN:Dr.keerthi'ek minute..
She looks at him'
ARMAAN:Ridhima ka kamra kaun sa hain..
She tries to say some thing but armaan cuts in between..
ARMAAN:Please Dr.keerthi..
KEERTHI:She smiles..3rd floor ,308,I.C.U mein..
ARMAAN:Thnks '.
She leaves..

Armaan goes to 3rd floor as fast he can on steps..
He sees the room no.308..he thinks to enter,his heart beat beats fastly'he can see now his ridhima after such a long time..he missed her a lot..his eyes were filled with excitement..but he sees shashank inside and stops..

SHASHANK:Uski himmat kaise hui yahaan aane ki,,main usse chodunga nehi..
Main phir se usse tumhare saath koi bhi bewakoofi nehi karne doonga..tumhari zindagi barbad nehi karbe doonga..nehi karne doonga.. ridhima..kabh nehi..

He leaves the room not noticing armaan'

Armaan enters the room..
He sees ridhima lying down unconsious,without any movement.
Tears start flowing from his eyes'

He sat beside ridhima and took her hand..
ARMAAN:Basket..tumhe dekhne ke liye 6 mahino se meri ankhen taras gayi thi'
He kisses her hand..
ARMAAN:Main aa gaya hoon ridhima'main ab tumhe kabhi chod ke nehi jaunga,,.main tumhe jaldi hi theek kar doonga..tumhe theek hona hi hoge'mere liye'tumhare armaan ke liye..aur main iske liye kuch bhi karunga'is baar haar nehi galthi pichli baar ki thi wooh ab nehi karunga..main hamare pyaar ko haarna nehi doonga..basket.. promise. I love u basket..i love u ..

Ishq leta hai kaise imtahan''
Ishq me jiyun ''
Ishq me maru ''
Ishq hi mera bhagwan,
Haya raba tu he meri jaan tu he jahan'''
Tu hi meri manjil tere ishq me main qurban'

"I love too..armaan.."ridhimas voice echoed in his ears..
He stared at ridhima for some time,,
He felt like ridhima was talking to him..but it was his imagination..

Suddenly he remembered his meeting with his friends..

ARMAAN:Yeh sab kya ho raha hain ridhimaa...humare friends badal gaye hain ..sanjeevni badal gaya hain..yeh wooh sanjeevni nehi hain jo maine 6 mahine pehle dekhi hain..yeh sab kaise..

He remembers atul..whos changed..he remembers their past days..where atul used to be damn funny and silly but now'
Abhi and nikki both have changed,,,abhi is married to can he do that to nikki,,,,
Muskaan and Anjali''..Everyone in sanjeeevni changed'

ARMAAN:Yahan ke log badal gaye hain ridhima..bahut badal gaye hain..apna chehre pe koi dosre hi chehra pehen liya hain..yeh sab ek doosre se natak kar rahe hain'ek doosre se bhaag rahe hain..apni duniya mein kush nahi rah ke bhi khush rahneki natak kar rahe hain..mujhe inhe badalna hoga..ridhima..inhe phir se pyaar sekhana hoga.. jeena sikhana hoga..
Tumse door rahke hi toh main yeh sab seekha hoon..phir se kisiko dukhi mein dekh sakta..par..
main kya karoon 'ridhima,,,,, tumhare bina mein yeh sab akele kaise kar paunga..

"Main tumhare saath hoon armaan'hamesha..." ridhimas voice again echoed in his ears..
He felt that ridhima cud actually hear him..and is giving him answer and supporting him..

He kissed ridhimas hand and stood up and left to door..

He once last time ridhima and left the room..

He came out wiped his tears..

ARMAAN:Ab mujhe koi nehi rok payega sanjeevni mein phir se khushiya lane mein'
Main sanjeevni ko phir se pyaar sikhaunga..humare pyaar jaisa kabhi bhi nehi tooth saktha aur kabhi bhi choot nehi saktha'main vaada kartha hoon..basket..
Par mujhe ismein kisiki madat chahiye,,, kaun karega meri madat'kaun???....

Just then he sees Dr.keerthi coming with 5 new interns..

ARMAAN:Shayad mujhe pata hain mujhe kya karna hain..

But these interns were having different things in their mind'

Interns thinking in their minds'
SIDDANTH:Abbe yaar yeh papa aur abhi bhai ne mujhe kaha fasa diya hain..
NAINA:Ab do saalon ke liye no shaadi sirf azaadi'.
TAMANNA:Mujhe apne baba ke sapne aur chawl ka naam uncha karna hoga..
YUVRAAJ:Focus..yuvraaj..tumhe sanjeevni mein apne mission jald hi pura karna hoga..
JITENDER:Pata nehi mere maugal seray mein toh mein hi hero tha,,yahan toh mujhse bhi zyaada hero hain,aur main kya ,,,,,zero'!!!

Kya hoga aage???
Amaan ridhima ko theek karpayega???
Shashak kya karega???
Kya armaan aur naye interns mein dosthi hogi???
Armaan apne friends ko aur sanjeevni ko badal paayega???
Armaan aur ridhima mil sakenge???

SRI Smile

Edited by sri_4 - 02 April 2010 at 4:24am

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hey loved the pridiction
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Armaan sees Dr.Keerthi coming ..

ARMAAN:Hello Dr.keerthi..

KEERTHI:Oh !!!! main tumse hi milne aa rahi thi armaan...yeh hain naye interns aur interns yeh hain yahan ke naye…..

SIDDANTH:Hi dude u look cool..mein hood siddhant..sid for short..
NAINA:Hey main hoon naina…(slowly coming near to him)..yahan ki sabse happening girl…
J.P:Ji main JP,main aapko pura sanjeevni ghooma donga,mujhe sab raaste pata hain..

Yuvi wasn't interested as usual and was leaning on door and seeing it calmly..

Tamanna was confused looking at others talking and so she couldn't talk..

SIDDANTH:Are u from abroad like me..???
NAINA:Hey..waise tum itne late se kyun join hue ho..
J.P:Its o.k ji main aapko pura kaam samjha doonga.mujhe sab pata hain..hum mougal saraye mein top kar chuke hain..aur hamari photo bhi chapi thi..
NAINA:3rd page par ..
SIDDANTH/ NAINA: We knw that!!!!
J.P: Hehehe!!!
NAINA:Toh tumhara naam kya hain..????
SIDDANTH:Tum kaha rahthe ho??

Armaan was confused with those bombarding questions but he was about to answer when..

yeh hain sanjeevni ke naye doctor ..Dr.Armaan mallik…got it..aur aage se kuch bhi bolne se pehle soch lijeeye…..
KEERTHI:Aur haan Kal se aap mein se kuch log Dr.Armaan ko assist karenge unke cases mein..aur is mein koi gadbad nehi honi chahiye…
SIDDANTH/J.P/NAINA: Sorry maam!!!
Yuvraj was smiling seeing them….tamanna was still confused..
Keerthi is about to talk to interns when armaan interupts..
ARMAAN:Dr.keerthi wooh patients ki files..
KEERTHI:Oh..yes..Armaan I will meet u in u r cabin in 10 minutes..i will get u details of patients.ok..(pointing to interns..ordering)now get back to u r duties..

Dr.Keerthi leaves….

NAINA:Oh my god aaj toh bar baar bach gaye yaar!!!
SIDDANTH:Warna yeh Miss khadoos types ki ..

ARMAAN:Ahem..ahem.. (armaan coughs..)

NAINA:Sorry sorry sir..i mean ..dr….
SIDDANTH:Sorry Dr.armaan …
ARMAAN:Hey cool guys main toh bas mazak kar raha tha….nice to meet u all..

They all start walking in corridor..

ALL: (except yuvi)Same here sir…
ARMAAN:Sir………..!!!!oh please u can call me armaan…
J.P: Par sirji..
ARMAAN:Just armaan..
TAMANNA: (to herself) Yeh naam toh kahi suna hua lag raha hain…shayad sanjeevni mein..
SIDDANTH:Armaan ..Thnks a lot dude hume us khadoos se bachane ke liye,,

Armaan stops walking and stares seriously..

SIDDANTH:I mean ki wooh..bahut ..strict…
ARMAAN:Relax…relax..waise hum bhi Dr.Keerthi se bahut darthe the….(they start walking again)
J.P: Darthe "thee" matlab…
ARMAAN:Matlab..i mean…(he starts thinking for a suitable reason),,,yahan ke purani interns ne mujhse kaha tha,wooh bahut darthe the unse..
NAINA:Oh ok!!!
ARMAAN:So whats u r name..(pointing to tamana)
TAMANNA:Tamanna ….
SIDDANTH:Nehi..iska naam toh.. gayab puppy..hain…hehehe..!!!!
He starts laughing at his own joke..
Tamanna stares at him…sid looks at her innocently and asks "what..?"
ARMAAN:And u r naina right!!
Naina was staring armaan continuosly with open mouth..she was dumbstruck by armaans personality..his attitude,style,smile..etc..she really liked him…
NAINA:Haan ..haan!!!tum toh bilkul doctor nehi lag rahe hain armaan,,
J.P: Ji aap toh fresh fresh vegetable ki tarah I mean naye intern lag rahe hain..
ARMAAN:Thanks And what abt u,whats u r name?? (pointing to yuvi who was walking in front slowly)
YUVRAAJ: (He turns back)Yuvi..,,,yuvraaj …
NAINA:Bond…james bond…duffor kahi ka..pata nahi apne aap ko kya samjhtha hain..
Yuvi stared at her..
NAINA:Aise kya dekh rahe ho..???
J.P: Aap jaise najuk Flower ko aise kanthe se mooh nehi lagana chahiye naina ji..
Yuvi sees naina again with a disgusting look on face..(as usual)
NAINA:Iski tho main…(she tries to hit him but JP and sid catches her.. )
SIDDANTH:Hey hey cool…

ARMAAN: (to himself)Wow..!!yeh log toh basket aur mujhse bhi zyada ladthe hain..

Armaan was remembering his internship days….

How they used to fight,have fun,etc..and he remembers her first meeting with ridhima in sanjeevni…
Where he fooled her laying on bench as patient with sauce and she thinks it as blood…and how ridhima and he had fought after that….

He came back to senses..

ARMAAN:Hey guys..main aapse baad mein milunga..i have to meet Dr.Keerthi..ok bye..
SIDDANTH:Bye doctor,,,oops armaan.. bye..

Armaan leaves thinking in mind…
ARMAAN:Mujhe jaldi se kuch karna hoga..

NAINA:Haye …kitna hot aur handsome hain na..(naina is again lost in her world…)
J.P: Nainaji!!nainaji!!! kaha kho gayi ho gayi aap??
SIDDANTH:Hey yeh uncle..
NAINA:Uncle..tumne armaan ko uncle kaha .wooh itna cute hain,handsome hain,,smart hain.. …how dare u???
SIDDANTH:Hey relax main to wooh atul ko…
TAMANNA:Tumne kaha tha usse uncle nehi bulavoge..
SIDDANTH:Ohk!!!i mean AJ kaha hain..wooh armaan se milne nahi aya..??
J.P: Wooh toh duty mein busy hoga..
SIDDANTH:Ab chalo warna wooh khasdoos phir se aa jayegi..
TAMANNA:naina chalo..
NAINA:Chalo maine kab mana kiya….(she was still dreaming,sid drags her)

All leave for their duties..

Yuvi whos last of them thinks..

YUVRAAJ:Nautanki …
He shakes his head and follows them…

Armaan is back in his cabin..

Keerthi enters…

KEERTHI:Hello armaan..yeh rahe patients ki files..ismein saare details hain..tum isse dekhlo..main tumse baad mein milthi hoon..
Shes about to leave when armaan stops her..
ARMAAN:Dr.Keerthi ismein se…basket ki..i mean, file kaun si hain…..
KEERTHI:Wooh Dr.Armaan………. ,ismein unki file nehi hain..
ARMAAN:Nehi hain..matlab..mein jin cases ko solve karne ke liye aaya hoon..ridhima ki bhi usmein ek case thi..
(under his breathe)Warna mera yahaan aane ka kya matlab hoga…
KEERTHI:Wooh Dr.Shashank ne ..
ARMAAN:Dr.Shashank ne..??
KEERTHI:Wooh..Dr.Shashank ne ridhima ke file tumko dene ke liye mana kiya hain..aur unhone yeh bhi kahan ki tum ridhima ke case mein interfere na karo…na hi uske paas jane ki koshish…
ARMAAN: (cutting her words and Shouting)Wooh aise kaise kar sakthe hain….(calmly)meri kaam ke beech wooh aise….
KEERTHI:I can understand Dr.Armaan, par ridhima ki poori case history ki file unke paas hi hain….aur wooh khud saare details handle karthe hain..anjali ko bhi nehi batate.. ..i am sorry ..main …ismein aapki koi madad nehi karsakthi…main chalthi hoon..
Keerthi leaves,,,
ARMAAN:Pata nehi yeh sasurji hamesha mere peeche kyun pade rehthe hain….…mujhe ridhima ki poori case history chahiye..uski treatment toh yahan bhi nehi hui… main kisse poonchu…anjali..par Dr.Keerthi ne toh kaha ki Dr.Shashank kisiko ko interfere nehi karne dete…ab mein kya karu…kuch sochna padega..

At canteen…break time..
Armaan was having his coffee and thinking what to do..
Just then interns enter,,,,

SIDDANTH:Arre yaar aaj kitna kaam tha..,
NAINA:Main toh bahut thak gayi…
J.P: Ji main toh nehi thaka,pata hain mugal saraye mein hum isse bhi zyada kaam karthe the,tabhi toh hamari photo chapi thi..
NAINA:3rd page par..hume paat hain…
J.P: Ji aapko pata sweet ji..
SIDDANTH:Hey miss.gayab puppy…. tum kuch bol kyun nehi rahi ho..kya hua??
TAMANNA:Nehi ..kuch nehi..
(To herself)Pata nehi baba ne mujhse yeh wada kyun liye…

All interns take their seat..

But Just then naina sees armaan whos having coffee in side table and is again lost in him,,and she stops walking suddenly…she gets hit by chair and is about to fall when..
Yuvi whos is behind her catches her with his left hand supporting her right hand and other one at her back...
Naina who till now is busy seeing armaan stares into yuvis eyes and is lost in them..
Both are lost in eachothers eyes…but yuvi comes to senses ..
YUVRAAJ:Maine kaha tha,mujhe tum main koi interest nehi hain..
Naina comes back to senses,adjust herself…and stands…
NAINA:Mujhe bhi tum mein koi interest nehi hain..
YUVRAAJ:Toh ….haath toh chodo…
He points her hand…..
She sees her right hand is still in his left hand ….and removes it fastly..
NAINA:Acha..toh maine kab pakda tha….,,,,duffor kahi ka..

She joins her friends on table,,yuvi sits at a table away from them…
Naina sees armaan and is again staring at him with her mouth open..
J.P: Nainaji..aap theek toh hain…???
SIDDANTH:Yeh tum hamesha gir kyun jathi ho..agli baar girogi toh koi nehi bachayega…hahaha!!
NAINA:Main toh pooori tarah gir chuki hoon…
NAINA:Wooh…. Dr.Armaan ke ankhon mein….…
SIDDANTH:Wooow..!!!love at first sight…kya..yeh toh sirf "indian"..filmo mein hota hain,,,
NAINA:Pata nehi…par wooh kitna handsome hain na..
J.P didn't like naina staring….

Nikki enters..and goes and sits opposite armaan..smiles..

ARMAAN:Hey nikki…
NIKKI:Hai kaisa raha aaj ka din..
ARMAAN:Not bad…
NIKKI:Oh haan,anjy ne kaha ki who tumhe aaj nehi mil payegi..
NIKKI:Wooh bahar gayi hain..sanjeevni ke kaam se…shayad kal ya parson tak aajayegi..

Atul enters…he sees armaan and nikki ,he wants to talk to armaan ,his best friend ,"his bhai",who he met after 6 long momths…...but…

SIDDANTH:Hey AJ,wahan kya dekh rahe ho..woh toh senior doctors ki batch hain..hamari interns ka toh yahan hain..chal aa .ja..
Atul is sad and unwantedly joins the gang.. and they start chatting..atul is silent and is looking towards armaan and nikki in between..
Armaan and nikki stares at him for a while…
ARMAAN:Champ!!…par kaise,,,
NIKKI:Hmm..kaash..agar us din kuch nehi hota..toh aaj atul intern nehi hota…

Abhi enters….

He tries to come near nikki when..
SIDDANTH:Hey bhai..kaha the aap…(coming to him and keeping his hand on his shoulder..)

Armaan and nikki sees him..
ARMAAN: (to himself)Bhai!!!sid abhi ka bhai hain..??

Seeing nikki and answering sid..
ABHI:Kyun,,,???kuch baat hain kya..
SIDDANTH:Haan..wooh JIAH bhabhi neh mujhse kaha ki aapko yaad dilado ki aapne unse promise liya tha lunch ke liye par nehi legayye.. isliye.. dinner ke liye le jana hoga aur woh aapki wait karthi hogi…ok..
ABHI: (After a long pause)..Theek hain ..
SIDDANTH:Phir se mat kehna ki maine kaha nehi..nehi toh bhabhi mujhe nehi chodegi…
He joins table again….

Abhi comes near armaan and nikkis table..

ABHI:Hai..armaan,,kaise ho…
ARMAAN:Theek hoon……so Dr.Modi………….. aapki …….shaadi ho gayi hain……par kab..??
NIKKI:Armaan mujhe kuch kaam hain ,main jaa rahi hoon..(she starts to get up from her seat)
ABHI:Nikki please…
NIKKI:Abhi mujhe tumse baat nehi karni..
ABHI:Fine,main jaa raha hoon,,tum…yahi ruko..

Seeing nikki with a sad eyes..

ABHI:Bye Dr.Armaan….
He leaves..
ARMAAN:Nikki yeh sab kya ho raha hain..tumhare aur Dr.Modi ke beech ,,
NIKKI:Please armaan mein is bare mein baat nehi karna chahthi hoon..
ARMAAN:Par nikki….
NIKKI:Please armaan agar tum mere best friend ho toh,is bare mein mujhse kabhi bhi baat mat karna..
(to himself)Main tumhara best friend hoon nikki issi liye mujhe tuhari fikr hain.Mujhe pehle yeh pata lagaan hoga ki yeh ab bhi ek doosre se pyaar karthe hain ya nehi,,,yeh ek doosre ke feeling ko samjhthe hain ya hi main kuch kar paounga,,

Armaan is lost in his thoughts,when..
NIKKI:Tum. itne dinno se kaha the…mera matlab hain ki…main tumse milne aayi thi tumhara ghar pe,
par lock tha......
ARMAAN:Results ke baad main bahut din tak pareshan tha,mujhe samajh hi nehi aa raha tha ki main kya karu..par.. (armaan was really feeling heavy in his heart saying all this,he was remembering all those days where he was alone,without his ridhima..he couldn't see her,couldn't talk to her..he didn't know how she was…his eyes were wet..)
Par maine ridhima ke…..humare sapne ke liye "life care" hospital join kiya..itne din se main wahi kaam kar raha tha… wahi quarters par rehtha tha…mujhe waha bahut opportunities mil hain nikki… apna talent dikhane ke liye,main ek acha doctor toh ba gaya pa shayad tum sab ko kho diya
NIKKI:Nehi armaan…hum humesha tumahre saath the,hain aur rahenge..
(Armaan looked at nikki and smiled)Aur aaj main yahan hoon….tumhare saamne….ek behter doctor banke..shayad yahi aane ke liye main wahan gaya tha…
NIKKI:Aur ab tum kaha rahoge.. tum mere ghar mein..
ARMAAN:Nehi nikki..mujhe wapas ghar jana hoga….
NIKKI:Par tum akele wahan…...armaan ..
Nikki knows armaan,,he may be hard outside..but he is very sensitive and was worrying if he could handle all things..…
ARMAAN:Nikki mujhe pata hain,tumhe meri fikr hain..(he keeps his hand on her hand)…par please main handle karloonga..(assuring her)
ARMAAN:Acha mein chaltha hoon..kal milunga…bye nikki (gets up to leave)
Armaan turns back..
Nikki takes out some things and gives to armaan..
NIKKI:Yeh tumhare locker mein the…
She gives her the teddy bear and ridhimas photo which she got from locker..
He sees it and hugs nikki..
NIKKI:Thanks nikki..bye..

Armaan drives in his byke back to his house,,
He opens his house lock …
Its been 6 months he came here..there was dust here and there..and all furniture were covered with clothes..
He removed some of clothes from furniture..and enters to his bed room..
He switches on the lights..
He sees ridhimas photos every where in room..
He goes near one of photos and caresses it..
He sits on the bed and takes out the tedddy bear and ridhimas photo which nikki gave…
He stares at her photo…..and tears start rolling in his eyes thinking about ridhima….

{Song starts playing at back…}
[I felt this song is just "perfect" for this situation]
(i dedicate this part and song to my lovely sister-(its her fav song)-who have supported me in every moment of my life-love u deeds!!!)

{Whole room gets dark and we can see only armaan in light…….}

Na hai yeh pana, na khona hi hai…
Ridhima in white sparkling beautiful dress,her hair flowing from wind..comes near armaan and wipes his tear coming from his eyes with her hand….

Tera na hona jane, kyun hona hi hai…
Armaan is staring at her with shock…. Ridhima is smiling at him with sparkel in her eyes..

Tum se hi din hota hai, surmaiye shaam aati, tumse hi, tumse hi...
She takes out the photo from his hand and keeps on bed….

Har ghadi saans aati hai, zindagi kehlati hai, tumse hi, tumse hi ...
She takes his hand and make him stand up…keeps his hand on her waist ,she keeps her hand on his shoulder and dances with him..


Aankhon mein ankhein teri, bahoon mein baahein teri....
Shes seeing into his eyes with lots of love…and places her hand on his cheek..

Mera na mujhmein kuch raha, hua kya....
And then rests her head on his chest and they both dance..

Baaton mein baatein teri, raatein saugatein teri ....
Near window…
Ridhima is sitting on chair,talking to armaan who is opposite her and armaan is listening to her..

Kyun tera sab yeh ho gaya, hua kya...
Armaan comes close to her,kisses her on forehead,ridhima blushes and goes away..
Armaan follows her..

Main kahin bhi jata hoon, tumse hi mil jata hoon, tumse hi, tumse hi...
Armaan comes to living room seraching for her..ridhima comes and hugs from back..

Shoor mein khamoshi hai, thodi si behoshi hai, tum se hi, tum se hi...
He tries to say sorry,but ridhima keeps her finger on his lips..smiles and goes away..

Armaan tries to find ridhima but cant see her,,,he sits on sofa….thinking his memories..

Aadha sa wada kabhi, aadhe se jayada kabhi...
"Main armaan mallik aaj ridhima gupta se wada kartha hoon ki main tumse bahut pyaar kartha hoon aur tumhe kabhi chod ke nehi jaounga."

Jee chaahe kar lu is tarah wafa ka....
"Yeh tumhare liye hain basket – humari pushtani "kangan" "

Chhode na chhoote kabhi, tode na tute kabhi.....
"Main apni beti ka ristha aapse hamesha hamesha ke liye tod raha hoon…"

Jo dhaga tumse jud gaya wafa ka.....
He remembers the day he kept engagement ring on her finger,,

Main tera sarmaya hoon, jo main ban paya hoon, tumse hi, tumse hi.....
Ridhima comes and waves her hand before him,armaan sees and smiles at her…and she starts running around,,,he tries to catch her..

Raaste mil jaate hai, manzile mil jaati hai, tumse hi, tumse hi....
Armaan lifts her in his arms and takes her in to room and places her on bed…
He sees at her beautiful face and gets lost in her eyes…,,,


Armaan tries to touch her,,when suddenly ridhima dissappears…

He sits on bed and takes photo of ridhima and stares at it..

ARMAAN:I love you..basket..main tumhe jaldi se theek kar doonga..par uske liye mujhe …. "file" …

Armaan thinks something in his mind and tries to sleep…thinking of beautiful memories of him and ridhima…

Next day …
At sanjeevni…

ARMAAN:Dr.Shashank aa gaye hain kya???
SISTER:Nehi sir wooh abhi tak nehi aaye…

He silently goes near cabin..and looks left and right….and enters,,

Shashanks cabin….

He starts searching for file…in drawers,,,near study table,,,,on desk….he sees a locker in desk …tries to open it….and takes out file from it..


He smiles seeing at it..

VOICE:Aap..yahan kya kar rahe hain???

Armaan is shocked listening to voice,,,he turns around..and sees……

What will armaan do now???
Will shashank allow armaan to treat ridhima???
Will he able to sort out things between abhi-nikki???

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Posted: 01 October 2009 at 9:08am | IP Logged
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loved the pridiction
way to go sweety


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Posted: 05 October 2009 at 5:42am | IP Logged
Guys sorry for the late update,I was struggling with my net connection all these days,,,,
And thank god I got it now..,,
I will be including my title song which I wrote for DMG..(its like old one,but with some different touch,hope u like it)from now before my every part…
Thanks for everyone who read it and comented,and also others who "like"ed it..
I am posting my next two parts….hope u like it..


"Laye hum Hasi laye hum Khushi jee le phir se zindagi…
Taaron se aage hum jaayenge cheen le ayenge roshni …
Dil ho jahaan dost ho vahaan aisa manzar hain yahan…
Manzil nayi,rasthe naye …
Phir bhi chale,hum saath mein…
Hum toh chale the dost banke…
Jaane kahan dill mill gayye!!!!"

Shashanks cabin….

VOICE:Aap..yahan kya kar rahe hain???

Armaan is shocked listening to voice,,,he keeps file back on table…he turns around….

He starts sweating..and sees the person..his tensed face turns to normal and he heaved a sigh of relief..

ARMAAN:Yuvraaj…………..tum yahan kya kar rahe ho..
YUVRAAJ:Woooh..main Dr.Shashank se milne aya tha..par aap yahan kya kar rahe hain..??
ARMAAN:Good question..main bhi wahi karne aaye hoon jo aap karne aaye hain..
YUVRAAJ: (He was a bit tensed)Main ..main kya karne aaya tha….
ARMAAN:Dr.Shashank se milne..
YUVRAAJ:Oh!!par wooh toh yahan nehi hain..
ARMAAN:Yeh toh mujhe bhi dikh raha hain..
YUVRAAJ: shayad wooh ab tak nehi aaye…


ARMAAN:Shayad aapko kahi report karna hain..
YUVRAAJ:yes!!!(he turns to leave)
Just then armaans pager rings asking him to come to nurse station,..
YUVRAAJ:Aap nehi chal rahe……
ARMAAN: (to himself,)Shit!!ab main kya karoon!!!
ARMAAN: Haan chalo!!!(to himself)yeh toh mere pecha hi nehi chod raha..

Armaan sees the file on table,want to take it, but unwantedly goes out of room and yuvi follows him..


Every one comes fastly and stands ,.
Sid still didn't came …

NAINA:Yeh sid kahan hain..(asking tamanna and wearing her lab coat)
TAMANNA:Mujhe pata nehi..
NAINA:Arre jaldi nehi ayye toh maar padegi….
ATUL:Aur haan rectals bhi..

Just then..Armaan and yuvi comes
Yuvi joins them,hes standing beside naina..

Sid comes running and pushes yuvi and stands beside naina..
J.P: sidhant ji…aap late ho gaye..
SIDDANTH: (wearing his lab coat)Ya I knw..traffic jam..miss.kahdoos toh nehi ayi na..
NAINA:Nehi!!!yaaar ..chill..

Armaan sees atul and usually talks to him….
ARMAAN: Hye champ!!!kaise ho tum!!!
J.P: Aap ek doosre ko pehle se janthe he…
SIDDANTH:AJ toh kal armaan se baat bhi nehi ki.. (atul is tensed now)
Everyone are seeing armaan and atul with questioning look…yuvi too with his eyebrows raised..
ATUL:Wooh…Hum aaj …..
ARMAAN: (armaan realises what he said and tries to handle the situation)Aaj …..aaj subah parking par mile..wahin hamari dosti hui..
SIDDANTH:Aur "champ"!!!
ARMAAN:Wooh..……………..yeh bilkul champion ki sunny deol lagtha hain ,iss liye maine isko champ naam diya..haina champ!!!
ATUL:Haan !!!!haan…(laughing artificially)

J.P: Sunny deol!!


Atul as sunny deol and all interns staff are back of him cheering and shouting with "A.J" wriiten on cards in boxing ground…
J.P is his competitor…armaan is refree and he whistles indicating to start the fight..…
Atul came towards J.P and caught his collar
ATUL: "yeh dhai kilo ka haath agar kissi pe pad jaye toh,aadmi gir nehi uth jata hain…"
Atul beat him hard and we can see black circles around his eyes..
Armaan and atul were laughing in a very horror style..(we can see there closeup faces while laughing..)
Atul started beating him more and more ,armaan encouarging by shouting..
"Champ …cahamp!!!!",,
After getting beaten by Atul ,J.P heads spins and he is fainted…


(Out of his dream-he is still confused and is scratching his hair..)

Dr.Keerthi enters..

KEERTHI:Hello Dr.armaan..
ARMAAN:Hye maam…
(facing inerns)Interns !!!
KEERTHI:Dr.Tamanna and Dr.sidhant aaj se aap dono Dr.Armaan ko unki case mein asssit karenge..
Dr.Atul-aids ward, Dr.Yuvraaj and Dr.naina-general ward, Dr.prasad-path lab phir aap children ward mein jayenge..
Now go to u r duties..

Keerthi leaves..
Armaan thinks to talk to atul but thinks its wud be problematic for atul to talk infront of interns..he smiles at him..atul nods…
Atul and J.P leaves for their duties…yuvi following them,,,he sees seriously towards armaan..
Armaan notices yuvi seeing at him..and feels that there is something mysterious about him…
Naina is watching armaan and has not moved from her place..

SIDDANTH:Uff!!!yeh miss.khadoos bhi na..
SIDDANTH:Hello kya dekh rahi ho…(he shakes naina)
SIDDANTH:Chalo…tumhe general ward mein duty hain…
NAINA: Arre yaar haan us dafod ke saath…ok..bye!!!
She leaves staring back at armaan again..

ARMAAN:Aap dono mere cabin mein aayiye..
SIDDANTH:Miss.gayab chalo..
ARMAAN:So Dr.sidhant,…………….abhimanyu….i mean Dr.Modi aapke bhai hain..
SIDDANTH: (he starts talking nonstop…)oh yes..mera cousin hain,,papa ne aur bhayi ne zid kareke mujhe sanjeevni mein internship ke liye join kiya,,nehi toh mera man to bilkul hi nehi tha,,aur wooh bhi india mein..oh god..aur koi jagah hi nehi millli..
ARMAAN: (Armaan cutting his words) Dr.Modi ki shaadi kab hui..
SIDDANTH:Bhai ki shaadi..nearly 1saal ho gaye hain..
ARMAAN: (he stops walking)1 saal (to himself) Matlab jab Dr.Modi yahaan aaya tha,uski shaadi ho chuki thi,phir bhi usne nikki se pyaar kiya,………..usse dokha de raha tha…aur nikki bhi..,,,mujhe Dr.Modi se baat karna hoga..oh god!!!
SIDDANTH:Kyun armaan..kya baat hain..
ARMAAN: Nehi kuch nehi..chalo.. (walking again)

They enter armaans cabin..armaan sits in his seat and sid and tamanna sits opposite to him..
Sid is as usual cool,but tamanna is afraid thinking how she will handle the case,,
Armaan takes out some files..and takes one out of them..sees and gives to sid and tamanna..

ARMAAN: Yeh case file hain.. Mr.Avinash ki,inhe brain tumor hain,,….case kaafi complicated hain….
(he gets up from seat and starts explaining) iska illaj sirf operation hain,par Mr.Avinash iss state mein nehi hain ki hum unhe operate kare..woh ek diabetic hain..aur sugar levels kaafi high hain..
Pehle humme unki sugar levels ko kam karna hoga,phir operate karna hoga..hamare paas time zyada nehi hain..,,so hume jald se jald yeh karna hoga..u both need to attend this case with full concentration and yes u will be helping me in operation file mein unki sari reports hain and yes agar aapko koi doubt hain toh u can ask me..
Tamana was fully concentrating and taking notes,,,sid was playing with a pen nearby..

ARMAAN: Sid aur tamana aapko samajh mein aaya maine kya kaha..
Tamanna nods her head..
SIDDANTH:Haan !!armaan don't worry we will handle..haina miss.gayab..
ARMAAN:Main aapki help kartha rahunga..but u two have to handle its team it..
ARMAAN: Ok then main ab chaltha hoon.. page me agar kuch problem hain…
Tamana was already scared with her first case and sid being a part of it made her more worried as he never used to be serious in any thing….we see her tensed face…

Armaan thinks before shashank comes he has to take the file which is on table…
He goes towards shashanks cabin..but he stops when he sees shashank entering ..

He hides behind wall…and sees inside from corner of door…

Shashank sits and is checking all files,,when he sees ridhimas file…

SHASHANK:Yeh file yahan kaisa aya hain..

He sees here and there and towards door..armaan quickly backs off from door..and sees again after shashank is seeing towards file..
Shashank takes the file and keeps in locker ,but locks it and takes keys with him and keeps in his coat and gets up…
Armaan again hides behind wall,shashank leaves not noticing armaan..
Armaan seeing inside towards locker..

ARMAAN: Shit!!!!ab mein kya karu..ek achcha mauka mila tha..wooh bhi haat se chala gaya…

Everyone was tired after the long day full of work..

J.P was still in childrens ward and was trying hard to get away from there but the children were not letting him go…and one was pulling his right hand and other his left..and other children rounded him..

J.P: Arre..chodo..chodo mujhe,,kya kar rahe hoo..mujhe jana hain..
1st child: Pehle hume kahani sunao..
2nd child: Mujhe chocolate laake do..
ALL:Mujhe bhi….Mujhe bhi..
J.P: Aree koi..bachao….mujhe…

Tamanna ,sid ,yuvi and naina who were leaving to their homes stopped by his shouts…

J.P: Naina ji….tamanaji..bachao..mujhe..yeh bach..(before he could complete sentence children made him sit down and were beating him)
SIDDANTH:Hahaha!!!wow india ke bache toh bahut strong hain..
TAMANNA:Tum india ke nehi ho kya..
J.P: Bachao…
NAINA:Guys chalo…

Sid and naina helped J.P stand and were trying to control children,,,,but they couldn't and children were shouting more and more..yuvi was enjoying all this without saying a word and then left.. ..
Tamanna tried to sort out the situation..

TAMANNA:Bacho…kisko kahani sunni hain,..wooh yahan aa jaye,,,

All children who were around J.P,sid and naina left and gathered around tamanna who was standing near a bed ,shouting and screaming with joy..

SIDDANTH:Yeh kahani sunayegi toh sab bachche darr jayenge..hahaaha..
J.P: Tum kuch karthe toh nehi ho,,,,jo karthe hain,,ussse kyun pareshan kar rahe ho..
SIDDANTH:Come on ….ab tum mat shuru ho jana…

1st child: Kahani,,,,!!!
2nd child: Kaunsi kahani.??
3rd child: Pariyon wali..
pinky:Nehi rajkumari wali…
ALL:Batao na didi????
TAMANNA:Pehle sab chup chap apne bed par jao…

All children went to their beds fastly and covered with blankets,,,

ALL:Sab log chup chap sunenge…pinky..shaitani nehi chalo bed par jao..(the little girl goes back to bed)
(tamanaa starts telling story)Ek baar ek sundar si ladki thi….
pinky:App se bhi sundar..
TAMANNA: (She blushes,)haan mujhse se bhi bahut sundar..uska naam the "cindrella"..

Sid,naina,J.P were also listening to her,,

NAINA:Arre yeh kahani toh mujhe pata hain…
J.P: Mujhe bhi ji,mujhe sab kahaniyan paata hain..panchatantra ke bhi,,,main hamesha story writing mein first aata tha,,,…main bhi batata hoon tamana ji..
Naina smiles at him artificially..

Naina and J.P joins tamanna telling the next part of story and all are enacting it ..

J.P: Uski ek sauteli maa thi ,,bahut buri…HAHAHA!!(showing his hands in air,children were afraid..)
NAINA:Aur haan uski do sauteli behen bhi the,bahut tang karthe the usse,saare kaam karathe the….satathe the..

1st child: Bahut bure the wohh….bechari cindrella…
2nd child: Usske paas koi nehi tha..
TAMANNA:Hain na..usske friends the..
pinky:Friends ..kaun kaun the..

Tamanna started telling the story again..J.P and naina helping her in between….

Sid was seeing tamana ,actually staring,not even blinking his eyes,,,the way she talked ,her hair moving with wind ,how she moved her hair back to her ears…the way she was enacting,the way she was going to children and helping them cover blankets….he could only see her and nothing else…

Someone else who was seeing her was……. Atul…Who was passing by and stopped seeing her…

He remembered all his old days he and his friends has spent in that ward…

How Armaan planned and surprised ridhima..
How they all danced to make dhruv back to normal….
Mini,gappu,nana…how they all enjoyed with them..
All those beautiful moments…
Tears start flowing from his eyes remembering those moments…

A hand was kept on his shoulder,……..he quickly wiped his eyes and turned back to see ..
ATUL:Armaan…who mein bas..
ARMAAN: Apne bhai se ansoon chupa rahe ho….
Atul cant control himself,he was waiting for this moment for 6 months…he hugged him tightly and so did armaan..
ATUL:Armaan..mere bhai..kahan chala gaya tha tu..apne champ ko akela chod kar kaha chala gaya..
Armaan also couldn't control his tears..They both come back to positions..and started walking ..
ARMAAN:Champ!!i am sorry main tumhare saath us waqt nehi de paya jab tumhe meri bahut zaroorat thi..mujhe maaf.. (he felt bad that he couldn't be there at time he failed)
ATUL:Yeh kaisi baatein kar rahe ho….bhala apne bhai ko koi sorry botha hain kya…
Armaan smiled…
ARMAAN:Pata nehi yaar….kitna badal gaya hain sab kuch..pehle kya tha..aur ab kya hain..
ATUL:Hum kitne masthi karthe the…,kitne shaitaniya karthe the,,
ARMAAN:Ladkiyon se kitna jhagdthe the ..
They remembered all those moments starting from joining sanjeevni..
ATUL:Arre haan yaar…wooh basket ball match..yaad hain..
ATUL:Aur lonavla ka trip..truth aur dare…
ARMAAN:Jab humne girls banke gaye,tum-shobha tai..
ATUL:Aur tum-gurpreet..   
ARMAAN:Aur rahul-stella…kitna hot lag raha tha…
ATUL:Pub mein party..   
ARMAAN:Haan humne ladayi ki aur jail bhi gaye the yaar..
ATUL:Agar Dr.shasahnk nehi aaate toh ..
ATUL:Padma aunty ke shaadi mein kitni masti kee thi humne..

Armaan was feeling sad remembering all those days he spent with ridhima and his friends and shashanks name made him more sad…making him remember the day he asked to break his relation with ridhima..
Atul noticed and changed the topic..

ATUL:Aur jab hum picnic ke liye gaye the….
ARMAAN:Aur ladkiya hume chod kar akele hi chali gayi lorry mein..(he was smiling again).
ATUL:Anajli kitni hot lag rahi thi na swim wear mein…
ATUL:Aur Valentines day party…..
ARMAAN:Sanjeevni ka concert….. hum sab ne kitna mehnat kiya..
ATUL:Doctor modi ko kitna sataya…..…
ARMAAN:Jab hum mere summer house gaye…aur wooh kabaddi match…..
ATUL:Arre yaad mat dilla,pata nehi sukeerthi ko bachanae ke chakar men mujhe aur rahul ko paat nehi kya kya jhelna pada….uske baad toh padma aunty aur anjali mujhe kuch aur hi samajhne lagi….
Atul face was sad..
Armaan was laughing out ,,,,after few seconds atul too joined him…
ATUL:Shubankar sir aur keerthi madam ki shaadi…..kitna achcha hua tha..
ARMAAN:Kya din the yaar….
ATUL:Armaan…………rahul aur muski ki bahut yaad aathi hain….
ARMAAN:Pata nehi wooh kaise hain….
ATUL:Sab milkar kitna masti karthe the na.
ARMAAN:Khair chodna yeh sab..ab main aa gaya hoon…phir se hum milkar sab theek kardenge..aur haan deklena rahool aur muskaan bhi jaldi hi hamare saath honge…
Atul noded..
ARMAAN:Atul……(after a long pause….atul was also worried what armaan would ask as he said "atul" and not "champ")kya tum anjali ko apne pyaar..
ATUL: (Atul understood what armaan was upto and tried to divert the topic)Chodo na Armaan in baaton ko..
ARMAAN:Champ…ab tu mujhse bhi baatein chupayega..,,apne bhai se??
ATUL: Armaan …………Anjali ab ek badi doctor ban gayi hain..aur main abhi bhi intern hi hoon………..wooh sahi kehthi thi…………….main kisi kaam ke layak hi nehi………
ARMAAN:Champ!!aisa mat kaho yaar….
ATUL:Kya fark padtha hain….pata nehi wooh mujhse..
ARMAAN:Padtha hain ,,,,,,bahut farak padtha hain..champ..,..tum agar koshish nehi karoge,,to kaise pata chalega…
ARMAAN:Par war kuch bhi nehi…..
ATUL:Main yeh sab..
ARMAAN:Main hoon na..akhir tumhara bhai kuch toh kaam ayega..
ATUL:Armaan ...(he hugged him) thanks yaar..
ARMAAN:Bas bas…. ..bahut din ho gaye..chalo saath chalthe hain..mere ghar…??
ARMAAN:Champ..tum chalo mein bas abhi aata hoon..
ATUL:Kahan jaa rahe hoo??
ARMAAN:Basket….. se milne..
(Atul smiled…he definetly has changed..if he would be same atul he would have asked that he too will come with him….but ..)
ATUL:Mein wait kartha hoon..     
Armaan smiled,,,,

Armaan in ridhimas cabin….

ARMAAN:Ridhima…main har koshish kar raha hoon tumhe jaldi se theek karne ki…humare doston ko saath lane ki,,,,,,bas tumhe ab theek hona hoga….tab hum sab milkar party karenge….ladke vs ladkiyan..aur hamesha ki tarah tum hi jeet jana…
He starts crying…
A tear drop fells on ridhimas hand….
Armaan kisses on her forehead…
ARMAAN:I love u ….ridhima…
He gets up ..
ARMAAN:Goodnite basket….. leaves the room shutting the door..

Ridhimas hand moves a bit and stops..(its same place where armaans tears fell)

Kya ridhima theek ho payegi???
Kya hain armaan ka agla kadam???
Kya wooh apne maksad mein kamyab hoga???


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"Laye hum Hasi laye hum Khushi jee le phir se zindagi…
Taaron se aage hum jaayenge cheen le ayenge roshni '
Dil ho jahaan dost ho vahaan aisa manzar hain yahan'
Manzil nayi,rasthe naye '
Phir bhi chale,hum saath mein'
Hum toh chale the dost banke'
Jaane kahan dill mill gayye!!!!"

Back in childrens ward'..

Tamanna completed her story..
TAMANNA:Rajkumar ne cindrella ko apne mahal le gaye aur wooh khushi khushi rehne lage..
All clapped after her story'
1st child: Rajkumar toh bahut achcha hain..
2nd child:Apko rajkumar kab le jayega..
Tamana blushed at the question..

TAMANNA:Kahani khatm'ab chalo sab achche bachon ki tarah so jau..chalo'
She off the lights and asked all to move out'
J.P and naina smiled at her and left..

Tamana was also leaving when a little girl catches her hand and asks again..
pinky:Baato na didi ,,aapko le jane kab aayega rajkumar..

SIDDANTH:Bahut jald'
Tamanna turns and finds sid..
SIDDANTH:Kuch nehi chale..
Tamanna leaves,sid blinks his one eye to that little girl and leaves..the girl smiles and sleeps..

Outside in corridor..
SIDDANTH:Wow!!!tum toh bahut achacha story suanti lee hain kahi'.jab mere kids honge na tab mein tumhe hi bualunga story sunane'hahaaha!!
Tamana sees him with her one eyebrow raised..
SIDDANTH:Sorry!!!.....achacha toh miss gayab ,itni achchi story sunane ke liye tumhe ek gift milthi hain..
SIDDANTH:Haan main tumhe ghar drop kar doonga..
TAMANNA:Nehi main chali jaungi..
SIDDANTH: "Nehi main chali jaungi.."(imitating her)dekho mere paas gadi hain,aur tumhara ghar rasthe mein padtha hain..toh chalo..
SIDDANTH:Tum itni jaldi maan gayi..!!!!maine toh''.
TAMANNA:Sidhant.. ..
He moves his hand from left to right on lips like zipping it..
Tamana smiles'

Outside sanjeevni''..

Naina is waiting for her friend JIGNESH to come and pick her up,,but he hasn't come and its really late as they were busy in childrens ward all this time..
She tries to call him,,but its not reachable..

NAINA:Arre'.. yeh jigni kaha chala gaya..ab mein kya karu..

She starts walking for sometime to find a taxi..but she didn't got any one..
She thght to ask someone lift..,sees a byke and asks lift..
The byke stops ,,and the person removes helmet..
He sees at her,,,and asks..
YUVRAAJ:Lift chahiye.?
NAINA:Tumse bilkul nehi..main akeli chali jaungi..
NAINA:Soch liya..main tum jaise dafod ke saath nehi jaungi''

Just then a jeep comes making lots of noise,,,,,naina asks lift from it..,,the jeep goes passing her and comes back'.

There were 4-5 guys in it'
1ST GUY: (One of the guy asking others to be silent..and facing naina..)Lift chahiye'(asking nicely)
2ND GUY:Chalo..hum tumhe drop kar denge..

Naina sees yuvraaj who is still waiting'she doesn't want to go with those guys as shes a bit afraid but to show yuvarj that she can do anything alone..she goes with them'

YUVRAAJ:Mat jao'
NAINA:Tumhe kya'main jahan bhi jau'(facing the guys)..chalo guys..
They go with full speed'naina looking back at yuvi'and giving him a smile..

After covering some distance..

NAINA:Yahan roko'.(but they did't listen and go more fastly.).
NAINA:Maine kahan roko'mujhe jana hain..
1ST GUY: Hey baby!!!humne tumhe jaane ke liye thooda lift diya hain'kyun??
They stop the car near a deserted place..and tries to take naina out of jeep forcefully..
NAINA: Chodo mujhe..tumhe nehi pata ,,mujhe..mujhe ..karate mein black belt hain..
3RD GUY:Achcha toh hume bhi toh sikha'hahaha!!!

They take her out of jeep,3 guys are catching her and shes trying to free herself'

1ST GUY: Dekho babes..agar tum cooperate karogi toh'.tumhe no problem..aur na hume..
NAINA:Achcha (in sweet voice)..toh pehle chodo mujhe..
1ST GUY: Hey!!!!yeh toh humari type ki lag rahi hain..chodo usse..
All left her and the main guy is coming close to her'
1ST GUY: Agar sab ladkiyan tumhari jaisi hogi toh humari toh koi problem hi nehi hogi..(touching her cheek)

Naina hits hard in his stomach and runs away,,some are trying to handle the guy who fell on ground with pain..
1ST GUY: Pakdo usse'pakdo'
All go back of naina leaving him'

Naina runs and runs and bumps ito someones byke ..
NAINA:Please help me..please'..

The 4 guys stand infront of the person in byke a little far..Naina is standing beside him..
The byke guy gets down and stands opposite them and naina back of him helding his arm..

2ND GUY:Hey ladki ko hamre pass bhej do,,,..
He removes the helmet and shakes his head,,,,naina sees him,,,Its yuvraaj'.
3RD GUY:Zyada hero mat ban!!!chal ladki ko bhej..

YUVRAAJ:Maine thodi roka hain tumko'lejana hain toh le jau'mujhe kya?
Naina leaves his arm and moves back..
NAINA:Tum '.

2ND GUY:Hahahaah!!!yeh toh bahut darpok hain re'
3RD GUY:Ismein toh bilkul himmat nehi..
4TH GUY:Chal bachcha jaa,''..apne mamma ke pass'''.,raat bahut ho gayi hain''..hahaha!!!
Saying this they all come towards naina who is Still looking at yuvi with hope'

One of the guy tries to catch naina with his hand..but..

*** *** ***

We see the guy on ground growling with pain'

The other 3 guys come and attack yuvi'surrounding from all sides..
He see them from corner of eyes'.
One of them try to attack him,but he was acting fast and punched him hard in his chest..which made him tremble'and fell down..
The other two guys came together,but yuvi was prepared..
He kicked one of them with his right leg and punched other'both were growling with pain'
The two who fell regained and took positions to beat him..
4TH GUY:Tumne toh kaha tha,,tum hume nehi rokoge'
5th GUY: Lejana hain toh le jaou ..

YUVRAAJ:Kahan tha..,,,par yeh nehi kahan ki tum meri mazak udao'

Naina who was happy that yuvi was helping out,,,got furious to know that he had beaten them not for her but because they have insulted him..
NAINA:U '(She started coming toward him')
Suddenly yuvi pulls her toward her and she is jammed on his chest,,they both gets lost in eachothers eyes ..but ..
YUVRAAJ: Awwa!!!
Yuvi arm was hurting as the main guy has come back and has hit him with KNIFE'he has pulled naina to protect from knife'
He moves naina back and takes out knife,blood started flowing..naina was shocked to see'

All 5 guys are ready to attack him'yuvi beats all of them to black and blue'.they left him running ..
But still yelling..

1ST GUY: Main tum dodno ko chodunga nehi..awwww!!!

Naina comes close to yuvi'yuvi is keeping his hand on his arm which was bleeding'
Naina tries to see his wound,,but he moves back..
NAINA:Tumhe toh bahut chot lagi hain'.
She takes out her scarf from her neck and bandages it on his arm,,, He sees into her eyes'
YUVRAAJ: Chalo main tumhe drop kardunga..
Naina didn't say a word all way and he dropped her home,,,
She got down and saw him '.

NAINA:Thanks..Agar aaj tum nehi aate toh'.pata nehi ..woh log..
YUVRAAJ: Pata nehi tum un logon ka kya karthi'..becahre' bach gayye..
NAINA:Kya?kya kahan tumne'wooh bechare aur main..
YUVRAAJ: Nautanki'.
NAINA:Tumhari to main'..
YUVRAAJ: Maine kahan na mujhe tumme koi interest nehi hain'
NAINA:Mujhe bhi nehi hain'.. 'good night'.

She leaves banging her foot om ground'.

He sees her going safely to home and smiles,goes away'''
She goes into home'and bumps into someone'.
NAINA: (who was lost in her world till now ..gets angry seeing him..)jigni tum'tum kahan the..mein tumhari wait kar rahi thi,,
JIGNI:Wooh naina,soory che'main apni friend se milne gaya,,,,
NAINA:Pata nehi aaj wooh dafod nehi aaya hota toh kya ho jata..tum na,'
JIGNI:Kya hua,,tum theek to ho'.
NAINA:Haan mein theek hoon,,par kal se time pe aajana',,main bahut thak gayi hoon,,,sone jaa rahi hoon'bye'.

Sidhant and tamanna

Sid drops tamanna'
TAMANNA:Yahan roko,,
SIDDANTH:Mein ghar tak drop kar doonga,,
TAMANNA:Nehi main chali jaungi' (To herself) agar baba ne dekh liya toh'.(to sid) thanks'
She gets down the car,,,but her duppata stucks in car when she tries to close door....she is trying hard to remove it,, she tries to open door '. but its jammed'
Sid was sitting in back seat and was seeing her struggling with dupatta and is laughing loud'
TAMANNA:Has kyun rahe ho'help karo na'
SIDDANTH:Main kyun karu'jaake ke tum apne gaayab puppy se pooch lo'!!!!jaise us din tume uske liye kiya tha..,,
She was still trying with as serious face after hearing sid's words..
Tears started flowing from her eyes'
He sees her and is lost in her again'.but as soon as he sees her tears'
SIDDANTH:Rukoo..main madad kartha hoon..
He comes and pushes the door hardly 2 times and it comes out,,,
TAMANNA:Thanks(she takes out dupatta)
TAMANNA:Ab ronna band karo..pata nehi hamesha roti kyun ho,,,,,,bye!!!!
He sits back in car seat,,tamana too leaves'he stares her going for sometime'..

SIDDANTH:Pata nehi jab bhi iss tamanna ko dektha hoon'kuch ajeeb si feeling aati hain..
Sid yeh tu kya soch raha hain..'stop it dude..!!!

Nainas place'

Back in her room,she changed her clothes and was thinking about what happened laying on bed'.
How he helped her,how he fought,how he got hurt because of her..

NAINA:Waise jitna socha tha yeh dafod itna bura bhi nehi hain'naina..kya soch rehi hain..soo ja'!!

Next day'


Tamana and sid
Tamanna is busy seeing patients reports which armaan handled them and talking to nurse..

TAMANNA:Sister,,inki sugar reports leke aayeye..
SISTER:Ji Dr.Tamanna'
She sees here and there'sid is busy chatting with a girl in side ward and flirting with her'

SIDDANTH: Ek minute'(Saying to girl..who nods..he comes near tamana ..)
kya hain aise chilla kyun rahi hoon,,,mein gayab nehi hua hoon uss puppy ki tarah..saamne toh baitha hoon..
TAMANNA:Kya kar rahe the..
TAMANNA:Kausa kaam..
SIDDANTH:Bahut important..tumhe kya..
TAMANNA:Sidhant..yeh case hum dono ko handle karna hain..aur tum meri madad bhi nehi kar rahe ho'
SIDDANTH:Oh please'aise chote mote kaam tum akele handle karu,,,mein sirf complicated case hi kartha hoon..(raising his collar')
SIDDANTH:Matlab..koi badi si surgery'wooh bhi Dr.Shashank ke saath '..
TAMANNA:Aur Dr.Armaan..
SIDDANTH:Main aise chote mote doctors ke saath kaam nehi kartha u see..
Tamanna sees towards door and suddenly..
TAMANNA:Good morning Dr.Armaan..
SIDDANTH: (sid hearing armaans name stands still)Hello Dr.Armaan'mein wooh bas mazak'
He sees back and finds no one'tamanna and others are laughing..
SIDDANTH:Tumko toh mein'
TAMANNA:Kya karoge Mr.Sidhant'.
SIDDANTH:Its sid ..not sidhant'
They both are fighting with there voices on top'all are seeing them suddenly'
The patient who has been enjoying seeing both of them fight..has sudden pain in his head'he keeps his hand on his head'and is crying and shouting,,,

TAMANNA:Oh god!!!kya ho gaya hain..sidhant..
Tamana gives a killing look'
He starts checking the patients pulse and his condition'he laid down on bed'
TAMANNA:Lagtha hain inki condition kaafi serious hain..(suddenly it strikes to tamanna) Dr.Armaan'.(facing nurse)sister..aap Dr.Armaan ko please jaldi bulayiye..
SISTER:Yes doctor..(she leaves)
Tamanna is sweating with fearing and tears coming out from eyes..sid sees it,,
SIDDANTH:Its ok!!!sab theek ho jayega..dont worry..
She nods'

Armaan comes just in time..
ARMAAN:Kya hua hain'what happened'he starts checking patients pulse and heart beat'
TAMANNA:Sir'achanak inki sar mein pain hone laga'
SIDDANTH:Inhi pulse bhi kaafi low hain'
ARMAAN:Hume jald se jald inki operation karni hogi'abhi issi waqt..tamana and sid ,,get ready..sister aap operation threater ready kijeeye'fast'patient ko shift keejiye..
SISTER:Yes sir'
ARMAAN: sister inke report leke aayiye'. Sid tum mere saath aaoo'.we need to do some tests'..(he goes with armaan..)

TAMANNA:Operation!!! '.
Tamana was scared ,she was trembling with fear,,,,she saw the patient who was being taken in stretcher'who was in critical condition '
TAMANNA:Main kaise kar paungi'..mujhe bahut dar lag raha hain..

After sometime'
At operation threater..

Outside patients relatives are standing'.they stop tamanna who is going was the patients wife'
PATIENTS WIFE:Meri pati ko bacha leejiye'(she starts crying.)
Theres also a small girl..
PATIENTS DAUGHTER:Meri papa ko kuch nehi hoga na..
Sid and armaan sees it'
Armaan tried to console the patients wife..and sid the little girl..tamana was still tensed.seeing them'.
SIDDANTH:Kuch nehi hoga aapke papa ko'
ARMAAN:Bharosa rakhiye'..

They enter the O/T'
ARMAAN:Dr.Tamanna and Dr.Sidhant '..are u ready,,
Both nod while getting dressed in surgical gowns'
ARMAAN:Dr.tamanna ,'aap patient ki pulse track karthe rahiye'aur kuch bhi ho toh inform keejiye,,,
She nodded'
ARMAAN:Dr.sidhant..(armaan noded'and sid too..)
They started the surgery'.it was a very long one and took a lot of time'

Outside ..
The patients family were worried'

At shashanks cabin'''

SHASHANK:Yeh sab kya ho raha hain'meri permission ke bagair..wooh aise kisi ka operation kaise kar saktha hain'.
KEERTHI:Dr.Armaan ne mujhe inform kiya tha.. Dr.Shashank'maine aap se contact karne ki koshish kii..par aapka phone nehi lag raha tha'.case kaafi complicated hain'.agar waqt par operate nehi kiya gaya toh'.patient ki jaan ko khatara hain'
SHASHANK:I don't understand..kissi senior doctor ki help ke could he do this all alone'.
KEERTHI:Dr.Sidhant aur Dr.Tamanna unko assist kar rahe hain sir..
SHASHANK:Wooh abhi interns hain''.wooh aise kisi patient ke zindagi ke saath khel nehi saktha..,,,,,,,,,,pehle hi usne meri beti ke saath jo kiya hain..wooh kum hain kya??
He couldn't talk further,he gets frustated and leaves the place..

Operation threater..

ARMAAN:Dr.tamanna'.(asking abt pulse)
TAMANNA:Its fine sir'.
Armaan removed the tumour'.the operation was in last stage ans crucial to know if patient has capacity to handle and survive..'
Sid was helping and tamana was still tensed that she couldn't concentrate for some time now and was sweating'suddenly..
TAMANNA: (she sees towards monitor)Dr.Armaan pulse gir raha hain'..

All are very tensed,the patients condition is dropping ,armaan,sid and others are trying hard to save him,,,
Armaan gives a look to tamanna'all are seeing her..

TAMANNA: Maine yeh kya kar diya'.

Kya patient bach payega???
Kya hoga aage???

thanks all who liked it...
please do comment..
really appreciated

Edited by sri_4 - 04 January 2010 at 3:38am

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Posted: 06 October 2009 at 4:01am | IP Logged
Part 1,2,3,4 - page 1
Part 5 and 6- page 2
Part 7 and 8 -page 3
Part 9 and 10 -page 5
Part 11-page 6
Part 12-page 8
Part 13-page 13
Part 14 - page 16
"PM LIST- Page 16"
Part 15 -page 18
Part 16-page 19
Part 17- page 20
Part 18 n 19 -page 23
Part 20 -page 25
Part 21 -page 26
Part 22-page 27
Part 23-37 -from page 30 check out
Epilogue n thank you message-page 35
guys please comment ...
i have posted here so that many who dont read in DMG main posts can read here....
i hope u will comment...atleast a line/word
it wud be appreciated..

sri :-) Smile

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Posted: 06 October 2009 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
hi sri
remember me
well i m same simi from blog
well its great you have posted your predictions here , i have read only part 1 till now , will surely read next all parts and will comment later ,
till then my comment is reserved
till then take care
lots of love

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