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i am posting my second part..please read and tell me how is it..
ARMAAN-RIDHIMAA : PART 2
Armaan sees Dr.Keerthi coming ..
ARMAAN:Hello Dr.keerthi..
KEERTHI:Oh !!!! main tumse hi milne aa rahi thi armaan...yeh hain naye interns aur interns yeh hain yahan ke naye…..
NAINA:INTERN!!!
SIDDANTH:Hi dude u look cool..mein hood siddhant..sid for short..
NAINA:Hey main hoon naina…(slowly coming near to him)..yahan ki sabse happening girl…
J.P:Ji main JP,main aapko pura sanjeevni ghooma donga,mujhe sab raaste pata hain..
Yuvi wasn't interested as usual and was leaning on door and seeing it calmly..
Tamanna was confused looking at others talking and so she couldn't talk..
SIDDANTH:Are u from abroad like me..???
NAINA:Hey..waise tum itne late se kyun join hue ho..
J.P:Its o.k ji main aapko pura kaam samjha doonga.mujhe sab pata hain..hum mougal saraye mein top kar chuke hain..aur hamari photo bhi chapi thi..
NAINA:3rd page par ..
SIDDANTH/ NAINA: We knw that!!!!
J.P: Hehehe!!!
NAINA:Toh tumhara naam kya hain..????
SIDDANTH:Tum kaha rahthe ho??
Armaan was confused with those bombarding questions but he was about to answer when..
KEERTHI:INTERNS!!!!stop it…
yeh hain sanjeevni ke naye doctor ..Dr.Armaan mallik…got it..aur aage se kuch bhi bolne se pehle soch lijeeye…..
KEERTHI:Aur haan Kal se aap mein se kuch log Dr.Armaan ko assist karenge unke cases mein..aur is mein koi gadbad nehi honi chahiye…
SIDDANTH/J.P/NAINA: Sorry maam!!!
Yuvraj was smiling seeing them….tamanna was still confused..
KEERTHI:Warna…
Keerthi is about to talk to interns when armaan interupts..
ARMAAN:Dr.keerthi wooh patients ki files..
KEERTHI:Oh..yes..Armaan I will meet u in u r cabin in 10 minutes..i will get u details of patients.ok..(pointing to interns..ordering)now get back to u r duties..
Dr.Keerthi leaves….
NAINA:Oh my god aaj toh bar baar bach gaye yaar!!!
SIDDANTH:Warna yeh Miss khadoos types ki ..
ARMAAN:Ahem..ahem.. (armaan coughs..)
NAINA:Sorry sorry sir..i mean ..dr….
SIDDANTH:Sorry Dr.armaan …
ARMAAN:Hey cool guys main toh bas mazak kar raha tha….nice to meet u all..
They all start walking in corridor..
ALL: (except yuvi)Same here sir…
ARMAAN:Sir………..!!!!oh please u can call me armaan…
J.P: Par sirji..
ARMAAN:Just armaan..
TAMANNA: (to herself) Yeh naam toh kahi suna hua lag raha hain…shayad sanjeevni mein..
SIDDANTH:Armaan ..Thnks a lot dude hume us khadoos se bachane ke liye,,
Armaan stops walking and stares seriously..
SIDDANTH:I mean ki wooh..bahut ..strict…
ARMAAN:Relax…relax..waise hum bhi Dr.Keerthi se bahut darthe the….(they start walking again)
J.P: Darthe "thee" matlab…
ARMAAN:Matlab..i mean…(he starts thinking for a suitable reason),,,yahan ke purani interns ne mujhse kaha tha,wooh bahut darthe the unse..
NAINA:Oh ok!!!
ARMAAN:So whats u r name..(pointing to tamana)
TAMANNA:Tamanna ….
SIDDANTH:Nehi..iska naam toh.. gayab puppy..hain…hehehe..!!!!
He starts laughing at his own joke..
Tamanna stares at him…sid looks at her innocently and asks "what..?"
ARMAAN:And u r naina right!!
Naina was staring armaan continuosly with open mouth..she was dumbstruck by armaans personality..his attitude,style,smile..etc..she really liked him…
TAMANNA:Naina!!!!!naina!!!
NAINA:Haan ..haan!!!tum toh bilkul doctor nehi lag rahe hain armaan,,
J.P: Ji aap toh fresh fresh vegetable ki tarah I mean naye intern lag rahe hain..
ARMAAN:Thanks And what abt u,whats u r name?? (pointing to yuvi who was walking in front slowly)
YUVRAAJ: (He turns back)Yuvi..,,,yuvraaj …
NAINA:Bond…james bond…duffor kahi ka..pata nahi apne aap ko kya samjhtha hain..
Yuvi stared at her..
NAINA:Aise kya dekh rahe ho..???
J.P: Aap jaise najuk Flower ko aise kanthe se mooh nehi lagana chahiye naina ji..
Yuvi sees naina again with a disgusting look on face..(as usual)
NAINA:Iski tho main…(she tries to hit him but JP and sid catches her.. )
SIDDANTH:Hey hey cool…
ARMAAN: (to himself)Wow..!!yeh log toh basket aur mujhse bhi zyada ladthe hain..
Armaan was remembering his internship days….
How they used to fight,have fun,etc..and he remembers her first meeting with ridhima in sanjeevni…
Where he fooled her laying on bench as patient with sauce and she thinks it as blood…and how ridhima and he had fought after that….
He came back to senses..
ARMAAN:Hey guys..main aapse baad mein milunga..i have to meet Dr.Keerthi..ok bye..
SIDDANTH:Bye doctor,,,oops armaan.. bye..
Armaan leaves thinking in mind…
ARMAAN:Mujhe jaldi se kuch karna hoga..
NAINA:Haye …kitna hot aur handsome hain na..(naina is again lost in her world…)
J.P: Nainaji!!nainaji!!! kaha kho gayi ho gayi aap??
SIDDANTH:Hey yeh uncle..
NAINA:Uncle..tumne armaan ko uncle kaha .wooh itna cute hain,handsome hain,,smart hain.. …how dare u???
SIDDANTH:Hey relax main to wooh atul ko…
TAMANNA:Tumne kaha tha usse uncle nehi bulavoge..
SIDDANTH:Ohk!!!i mean AJ kaha hain..wooh armaan se milne nahi aya..??
J.P: Wooh toh duty mein busy hoga..
SIDDANTH:Ab chalo warna wooh khasdoos phir se aa jayegi..
TAMANNA:naina chalo..
NAINA:Chalo maine kab mana kiya….(she was still dreaming,sid drags her)
All leave for their duties..
Yuvi whos last of them thinks..
YUVRAAJ:Nautanki …
He shakes his head and follows them…
Armaan is back in his cabin..
Keerthi enters…
KEERTHI:Hello armaan..yeh rahe patients ki files..ismein saare details hain..tum isse dekhlo..main tumse baad mein milthi hoon..
Shes about to leave when armaan stops her..
ARMAAN:Dr.Keerthi ismein se…basket ki..i mean,..ridhima..ki file kaun si hain…..
KEERTHI:Wooh Dr.Armaan………. ,ismein unki file nehi hain..
ARMAAN:Nehi hain..matlab..mein jin cases ko solve karne ke liye aaya hoon..ridhima ki bhi usmein ek case thi..
(under his breathe)Warna mera yahaan aane ka kya matlab hoga…
KEERTHI:Wooh Dr.Shashank ne ..
ARMAAN:Dr.Shashank ne..??
KEERTHI:Wooh..Dr.Shashank ne ridhima ke file tumko dene ke liye mana kiya hain..aur unhone yeh bhi kahan ki tum ridhima ke case mein interfere na karo…na hi uske paas jane ki koshish…
ARMAAN: (cutting her words and Shouting)Wooh aise kaise kar sakthe hain….(calmly)meri kaam ke beech wooh aise….
KEERTHI:I can understand Dr.Armaan, par ridhima ki poori case history ki file unke paas hi hain….aur wooh khud saare details handle karthe hain..anjali ko bhi nehi batate.. ..i am sorry ..main …ismein aapki koi madad nehi karsakthi…main chalthi hoon..
Keerthi leaves,,,
ARMAAN:Pata nehi yeh sasurji hamesha mere peeche kyun pade rehthe hain….…mujhe ridhima ki poori case history chahiye..uski treatment toh yahan bhi nehi hui… main kisse poonchu…anjali..par Dr.Keerthi ne toh kaha ki Dr.Shashank kisiko ko interfere nehi karne dete…ab mein kya karu…kuch sochna padega..
At canteen…break time..
Armaan was having his coffee and thinking what to do..
Just then interns enter,,,,
SIDDANTH:Arre yaar aaj kitna kaam tha..,
NAINA:Main toh bahut thak gayi…
J.P: Ji main toh nehi thaka,pata hain mugal saraye mein hum isse bhi zyada kaam karthe the,tabhi toh hamari photo chapi thi..
NAINA:3rd page par..hume paat hain…
J.P: Ji aapko pata hain..how sweet ji..
SIDDANTH:Hey miss.gayab puppy…. tum kuch bol kyun nehi rahi ho..kya hua??
TAMANNA:Nehi ..kuch nehi..
(To herself)Pata nehi baba ne mujhse yeh wada kyun liye…
All interns take their seat..
But Just then naina sees armaan whos having coffee in side table and is again lost in him,,and she stops walking suddenly…she gets hit by chair and is about to fall when..
Yuvi whos is behind her catches her with his left hand supporting her right hand and other one at her back...
Naina who till now is busy seeing armaan stares into yuvis eyes and is lost in them..
Both are lost in eachothers eyes…but yuvi comes to senses ..
YUVRAAJ:Maine kaha tha,mujhe tum main koi interest nehi hain..
Naina comes back to senses,adjust herself…and stands…
NAINA:Mujhe bhi tum mein koi interest nehi hain..
YUVRAAJ:Toh ….haath toh chodo…
He points her hand…..
She sees her right hand is still in his left hand ….and removes it fastly..
NAINA:Acha..toh maine kab pakda tha….,,,,duffor kahi ka..
She joins her friends on table,,yuvi sits at a table away from them…
Naina sees armaan and is again staring at him with her mouth open..
J.P: Nainaji..aap theek toh hain…???
SIDDANTH:Yeh tum hamesha gir kyun jathi ho..agli baar girogi toh koi nehi bachayega…hahaha!!
NAINA:Main toh pooori tarah gir chuki hoon…
TAMANNA:Kab…kaha????
NAINA:Wooh…. Dr.Armaan ke ankhon mein….…
SIDDANTH:Wooow..!!!love at first sight…kya..yeh toh sirf "indian"..filmo mein hota hain,,,
NAINA:Pata nehi…par wooh kitna handsome hain na..
J.P didn't like naina staring….
Nikki enters..and goes and sits opposite armaan..smiles..
ARMAAN:Hey nikki…
NIKKI:Hai armaan..so kaisa raha aaj ka din..
ARMAAN:Not bad…
NIKKI:Oh haan,anjy ne kaha ki who tumhe aaj nehi mil payegi..
ARMAAN:Kyun..???
NIKKI:Wooh bahar gayi hain..sanjeevni ke kaam se…shayad kal ya parson tak aajayegi..
ARMAAN:Ok..
Atul enters…he sees armaan and nikki ,he wants to talk to armaan ,his best friend ,"his bhai",who he met after 6 long momths…...but…
SIDDANTH:Hey AJ,wahan kya dekh rahe ho..woh toh senior doctors ki batch hain..hamari interns ka toh yahan hain..chal aa .ja..
Atul is sad and unwantedly joins the gang.. and they start chatting..atul is silent and is looking towards armaan and nikki in between..
Armaan and nikki stares at him for a while…
ARMAAN:Champ!!..fail…par kaise,,,
NIKKI:Hmm..kaash..agar us din kuch nehi hota..toh aaj atul intern nehi hota…
Abhi enters….
He tries to come near nikki when..
SIDDANTH:Hey bhai..kaha the aap…(coming to him and keeping his hand on his shoulder..)
Armaan and nikki sees him..
ARMAAN: (to himself)Bhai!!!sid abhi ka bhai hain..??
Seeing nikki and answering sid..
ABHI:Kyun,,,???kuch baat hain kya..
SIDDANTH:Haan..wooh JIAH bhabhi neh mujhse kaha ki aapko yaad dilado ki aapne unse promise liya tha lunch ke liye par nehi legayye.. isliye.. dinner ke liye le jana hoga aur woh aapki wait karthi hogi…ok..
ABHI: (After a long pause)..Theek hain ..
SIDDANTH:Phir se mat kehna ki maine kaha nehi..nehi toh bhabhi mujhe nehi chodegi…
He joins table again….
Abhi comes near armaan and nikkis table..
ABHI:Hai..armaan,,kaise ho…
ARMAAN:Theek hoon……so Dr.Modi………….. aapki …….shaadi ho gayi hain……par kab..??
NIKKI:Armaan mujhe kuch kaam hain ,main jaa rahi hoon..(she starts to get up from her seat)
ARMAAN:Nikki..
ABHI:Nikki please…
NIKKI:Abhi mujhe tumse baat nehi karni..
ABHI:Fine,main jaa raha hoon,,tum…yahi ruko..
Seeing nikki with a sad eyes..
ABHI:Bye Dr.Armaan….
He leaves..
ARMAAN:Nikki yeh sab kya ho raha hain..tumhare aur Dr.Modi ke beech ,,
NIKKI:Please armaan mein is bare mein baat nehi karna chahthi hoon..
ARMAAN:Par nikki….
NIKKI:Please armaan agar tum mere best friend ho toh,is bare mein mujhse kabhi bhi baat mat karna..
ARMAAN:Ok!!!
(to himself)Main tumhara best friend hoon nikki issi liye mujhe tuhari fikr hain.Mujhe pehle yeh pata lagaan hoga ki yeh ab bhi ek doosre se pyaar karthe hain ya nehi,,,yeh ek doosre ke feeling ko samjhthe hain ya nehi..tab hi main kuch kar paounga,,
Armaan is lost in his thoughts,when..
NIKKI:Armaan..
ARMAAN:Haan..
NIKKI:Tum. itne dinno se kaha the…mera matlab hain ki…main tumse milne aayi thi tumhara ghar pe,
par lock tha......
ARMAAN:Results ke baad main bahut din tak pareshan tha,mujhe samajh hi nehi aa raha tha ki main kya karu..par.. (armaan was really feeling heavy in his heart saying all this,he was remembering all those days where he was alone,without his ridhima..he couldn't see her,couldn't talk to her..he didn't know how she was…his eyes were wet..)
Par maine ridhima ke…..humare sapne ke liye "life care" hospital join kiya..itne din se main wahi kaam kar raha tha… wahi quarters par rehtha tha…mujhe waha bahut opportunities mil hain nikki… apna talent dikhane ke liye,main ek acha doctor toh ba gaya pa shayad tum sab ko kho diya
NIKKI:Nehi armaan…hum humesha tumahre saath the,hain aur rahenge..
(Armaan looked at nikki and smiled)Aur aaj main yahan hoon….tumhare saamne….ek behter doctor banke..shayad yahi aane ke liye main wahan gaya tha…
NIKKI:Aur ab tum kaha rahoge.. tum mere ghar mein..
ARMAAN:Nehi nikki..mujhe wapas ghar jana hoga….
NIKKI:Par tum akele wahan…...armaan ..
Nikki knows armaan,,he may be hard outside..but he is very sensitive and was worrying if he could handle all things..…
ARMAAN:Nikki mujhe pata hain,tumhe meri fikr hain..(he keeps his hand on her hand)…par please main handle karloonga..(assuring her)
NIKKI:Hmm…
ARMAAN:Acha mein chaltha hoon..kal milunga…bye nikki (gets up to leave)
NIKKI:Armaan….
Armaan turns back..
Nikki takes out some things and gives to armaan..
NIKKI:Yeh tumhare locker mein the…
She gives her the teddy bear and ridhimas photo which she got from locker..
He sees it and hugs nikki..
NIKKI:Thanks nikki..bye..
Armaan drives in his byke back to his house,,
He opens his house lock …
Its been 6 months he came here..there was dust here and there..and all furniture were covered with clothes..
He removed some of clothes from furniture..and enters to his bed room..
He switches on the lights..
He sees ridhimas photos every where in room..
He goes near one of photos and caresses it..
He sits on the bed and takes out the tedddy bear and ridhimas photo which nikki gave…
He stares at her photo…..and tears start rolling in his eyes thinking about ridhima….
{Song starts playing at back…}
[I felt this song is just "perfect" for this situation]
(i dedicate this part and song to my lovely sister-(its her fav song)-who have supported me in every moment of my life-love u deeds!!!)
Aaaa…aa.aa….
{Whole room gets dark and we can see only armaan in light…….}
Na hai yeh pana, na khona hi hai…
Ridhima in white sparkling beautiful dress,her hair flowing from wind..comes near armaan and wipes his tear coming from his eyes with her hand….
Tera na hona jane, kyun hona hi hai…
Armaan is staring at her with shock…. Ridhima is smiling at him with sparkel in her eyes..
Tum se hi din hota hai, surmaiye shaam aati, tumse hi, tumse hi...
She takes out the photo from his hand and keeps on bed….
Har ghadi saans aati hai, zindagi kehlati hai, tumse hi, tumse hi ...
She takes his hand and make him stand up…keeps his hand on her waist ,she keeps her hand on his shoulder and dances with him..
Aaaa…aa.aa….
Aankhon mein ankhein teri, bahoon mein baahein teri....
Shes seeing into his eyes with lots of love…and places her hand on his cheek..
Mera na mujhmein kuch raha, hua kya....
And then rests her head on his chest and they both dance..
Baaton mein baatein teri, raatein saugatein teri ....
Near window…
Ridhima is sitting on chair,talking to armaan who is opposite her and armaan is listening to her..
Kyun tera sab yeh ho gaya, hua kya...
Armaan comes close to her,kisses her on forehead,ridhima blushes and goes away..
Armaan follows her..
Main kahin bhi jata hoon, tumse hi mil jata hoon, tumse hi, tumse hi...
Armaan comes to living room seraching for her..ridhima comes and hugs from back..
Shoor mein khamoshi hai, thodi si behoshi hai, tum se hi, tum se hi...
He tries to say sorry,but ridhima keeps her finger on his lips..smiles and goes away..
Armaan tries to find ridhima but cant see her,,,he sits on sofa….thinking his memories..
Aadha sa wada kabhi, aadhe se jayada kabhi...
"Main armaan mallik aaj ridhima gupta se wada kartha hoon ki main tumse bahut pyaar kartha hoon aur tumhe kabhi chod ke nehi jaounga."
Jee chaahe kar lu is tarah wafa ka....
"Yeh tumhare liye hain basket – humari pushtani "kangan" "
Chhode na chhoote kabhi, tode na tute kabhi.....
"Main apni beti ka ristha aapse hamesha hamesha ke liye tod raha hoon…"
Jo dhaga tumse jud gaya wafa ka.....
He remembers the day he kept engagement ring on her finger,,
Main tera sarmaya hoon, jo main ban paya hoon, tumse hi, tumse hi.....
Ridhima comes and waves her hand before him,armaan sees and smiles at her…and she starts running around,,,he tries to catch her..
Raaste mil jaate hai, manzile mil jaati hai, tumse hi, tumse hi....
Armaan lifts her in his arms and takes her in to room and places her on bed…
He sees at her beautiful face and gets lost in her eyes…,,,
Aaaa…aa.aa….aa....
Armaan tries to touch her,,when suddenly ridhima dissappears…
He sits on bed and takes photo of ridhima and stares at it..
ARMAAN:I love you..basket..main tumhe jaldi se theek kar doonga..par uske liye mujhe …. "file" …
Armaan thinks something in his mind and tries to sleep…thinking of beautiful memories of him and ridhima…
Next day …
At sanjeevni…
Reception..
ARMAAN:Dr.Shashank aa gaye hain kya???
SISTER:Nehi sir wooh abhi tak nehi aaye…
ARMAAN:Ok…
He silently goes near cabin..and looks left and right….and enters,,
Shashanks cabin….
He starts searching for file…in drawers,,,near study table,,,,on desk….he sees a locker in desk …tries to open it….and takes out file from it..
Its written on it "PATIENT NAME:RIDHIMA GUPTA"
He smiles seeing at it..
VOICE:Aap..yahan kya kar rahe hain???
Armaan is shocked listening to voice,,,he turns around..and sees……
What will armaan do now???
Will shashank allow armaan to treat ridhima???
Will he able to sort out things between abhi-nikki???
PLEASE REVIEW..CRITICISM/APPRECIATION BOTH ARE ACCEPTED..
SRI 😊Edited by sri_4 - 14 years ago
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