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I too feel ronak should have a girl in his life. Maybe someone who loves him but whom he may not have feelings for, initially. But living day in and day out with such a person may make him start caring about her. That's life......If u don't get what u want u slowly begin to like what u get.

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Originally posted by mithilalovesksg

NOTE PLS CHECK IT
guys i am afraid u may not like ending which i have planned as everybody is saying ronak should move on with life do u all want any other girl in his life or want to read what i have plaaned pls give me your views so that i can rescript it

i would like to see ronak with someone else
and yea i loved the post..
just read it
thanx for pm

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PART 87

Karan could not remain away from princess for long so he came and ronak went hi and ani home for rest

 

Ani has locked herself in her room and ronak was forcing her to open the door but she has not opened it at last he breaks the door he was shocked to see ani sitting on floor her hair all messed up eyes were red and swollen her all past snaps with sharad and letters were scattered in the room 

 

Ronak: yeh kya hai

Ani not speaking anything

Ronak: gud tum dono apne ego ko leke batehe raho tum dono ka kuch nahi ho sakta na karan maya se baat karne ko tayar hai aur na tum sharad se aur jab dono apni zindagi aage bada rahe hai to bhi um log khush nahi ho kya chiye

Ani was still quite

Ronak: will u say something I am asking u something u still love him don't u then why u are running when he also wants to talk to u ani speak up

 

Ani: I don't love him anymore

 

Ronak: oh really good then why these snaps and letters are still here haan why u should throw them Na u cannot do that right ok I will do this was collecting all the snaps

Ani: don't touch them leave them were they are

Ronak: why if u doesn't love someone then no use of keeping this just took a match stick from a drawer and burning it

Ani just snach the snap and in order to remove the fame from the fire burnt his hand

 

Ronak: pagli kehti hai pyaar nahi karti photo to jalta hua nahi dekh sakti usse kisse aur ke saath kya dekhogi tum taking her hand shit dekho kitna jal gaya apne pagapan ke wajah se

Ani: haath hi jala hai not a big deal

Ronak: stop it ok stop it who udhar haath pe chot lagata hai tum haath jalati ho aur kehte ho not a big deal do u all ever think of me nahi na mujhe kaisa lagta hoga apne doston ko aise dekhne main kabhi socha hai

Getting the firsaid box

Applying ointment to her hand

Ani: sorry main bahut pareshaan karti hoon na tumhe

Ronak: chup bahut sunli maine tumari aur karan ki bakwaas apne ego ki wajaha se tum log chaar chaar zindagiya barbaad kar rahe ho

Ani: main much nahi kar rahi wohi maya se shadi ka\r raha hai

Ronak: to who tumse baat karna chathe tha ki tumne usse baat aur waha karan ko yeh kyun lagta hai pata nahi maya ke aane se shikha ke saath sahi nahi karega aura b o uski ek aur problem hai who bahut aisho araam se pali hui hai main usse who sab nahi desakta ka tum dono ko yeh samjh nai tata pyaar main paison ya ego ki koi ahmeeth nahi hoti  yeh to bahut hi khubsuratt ehsaans hta hai shyad tum log pyaar ko samjha hi nahi paye

Tum dono apne ego ki wajahs se galat decision le rahe ho aur who log status ki wajah se compromise kar rahe hai shyad aur kar bhi kya sakte hai Na tum shrad ki baat mane ko tayaar ho aur na hi karan maya ki

 

 

Next morning

 

Ar room

 

They were sleeping as usual cuddling very closely to each other and armaan holiding her tightly

Ridhima wake up and was haapy to see his life sleeping peacefully with a smile on his face he was looking so cute while slleping that she gave kiss lightly on his cheek so that he don't wake up then trying to free her self from his grip which is the most difficult job for her

Armaan: kaha bhaag rahi ho meri special mithai abhi tak nahi miili check par nahi lips par kiss karne ki deal hai shyad

Ridhima: tum uthe hue ho

Armaan: now coming on her top kitni baar kaha hai tumari jaise khubsurat biwi jiske ghar main ho who ghode bech ke kaise so sakta hai ab kiss

Ridhima giving her his kiss jiske bina uski subah nahi hoti

 

Then armaan slightly moving down towards ridhima tummy slightly kissing it

Heloo baby gud morning aaj aapko aur aapki mumma ko bahut bada surprise milega enjoy again kissing it

 

Ridhima: kya bad bada rahe ho mujhe bhi batao

 

Armaan: yeh mere aur baby ki private talks hai main kyun bataun hai na baby slightly stroking the stomach

 

Ridhima: putting her hands on her stomach dekha baby aapke aate hi aapke papa mujhe bhul gaye ab private talks bhi hone lagi hai huh

 

Armaan: awwwwwwwwwwww  baby aapki mumma kitna jalti hai waise jalte hue bhi kitni cute lag rahi hai

 

Ridhima: armaan bataona kya baat hai

 

Armaan: no wasy yeh to aapko aaj raat ko hi pata chalega chalo abhi mujhe jana hai ange thode der main yah aaati hi hogi

 

Ridhima: anjie kyun aaegi uski duty nahi hai kya

 

Armaan: nahi jaan aaj usne chuti le hai ab main fresh hone jar aha hoon tum yehi baitho main aake breakfast bana lunga kitchen main khusna bhi mat

 

Ridhima: par armaan ajjeb hai kuch bata hi na hai anjie ne off kyun liya hai chodo usse hi pooch lungi

 

 

Armaan: ridhima tum wohi ho na shouting from bathroom

 

Ridhima: haan kyun

 

Armaan: nahi mujhe laga tum kahi kitchen main na gayi battein karti raho na

 

Ridhima: kyun main radio hoon

 

Armaan: haan

 

Ridhima: kya

 

Armaan: are jaan main sirf yehi chatha hoon ki mujhe pata chalta rahe tum wahi hoon tumara kya bhrosa kab nashta banae bhag jao

 

Ridhima: tum chinta mat karo aaj main kuch nahi karne wali kar lena sab kuch huh aaj kal battein bhi chupane lage ho

 

Armaan: be patient raat tak sab pata chal jayega and he was not irritated as he knows this time ridhima can get angry with slightest thing he had already asked  padma about what changes she will go and how he can tactle that

 

Finally armaan somehow make ridhima mood gud and make her have her breakfast panner ke pakode and went away after angie came

 

Ridhima anjie

 

Ridhima: di aaj aap hospital kyun nahi gayi kya ho raha hai mujhe armaan ne kuch nahi bataya

 

Aanjie: be patient raat tak sab pata chal jayega abhi main teri juice ki tayari karke aati hoon

 

Ridhima: nahi di mujhe juice nahi peena

 

Anjalie: mujhe juice nahi peena imitating her armaan se pitwayegi kya haan aura b main juice aur khana acha bana hi leti hoon aaj kal mom se cooking seekh rahi hoon so don't worry u are in save hands

Going

 

Ridhima: huh isne bhi kuch nahi bataya mujhe janna hi hai yeh sab kya ho raha hai par kaise

 

In hospital

Each and every staff from ward boys to nurses and doctors and interns are talking about armaan suprprize party which he is giving to ridhima  as she has given him world best gift he will be going to be father the surprze party took much time because he planned it in a grand way

 

 

In general ward

 

Ronak is seeing the checking the patient one eye is constanly looking him it was ria who was just not able to make her eye contact break she don't know why hw mush she stops herself not to look him but she was not able to stop herself she was confused she used to love a guys who was married and tried to commit suicide for him also and now looking him or just checking him she was totally confused what going on bt she knows she has crush on ronak from beginning as she loves his sigining and on stage but was even more impressed seeing him here the way he talks to patients take care of hem the way he cares for shikha she is totally seeing a different side of a rocks tar which she was used to know

Armaan also noticed this he wnt to ria

 

Armaan: heloo

 

Ria: hi

 

Armaan: kuch soch rahi thi

 

Ria: yaha ke saare dr itne handsome kaise ho sakte hai

 

 

Armaan: hahaha tum yeh soch rahi thi

 

Ria: I must say u are very handsome

 

Armaan: thaku but I am married going to be father

 

Ria:oh lagte nahi hai

 

Armaan: stop flirting ab bolo tum ronak ko kyu khr rahi thi

 

Ria: main hmmmm main kab khur rahi thi

 

Armaan: jab log bolte hue fumble karte hai matlab jhoot bol rahe hai

 

Ria: oh ok who bahut ache hai issliye

 

Armaan: ab aayi na line par to usse freinship karo

 

Ria: we are friends par usse zada nahi

 

Armaan: who kyun

 

Ria: kyun ki who bhi kisse se pyaar karte hai

 

 

Armaan: par who to unhe mil nahi sakti

 

Ria: aapko kaise pata aap jaante hai who kaun hai

 

 

Armaan: nahi par yeh baat to sabko pata hai kyun ki unhone khud media main kaha hai hai na

 

Ria: oh haan

 

Armaan: to tum try to kar hi sakti hon dosti kea age jane ki

 

Ria: nahi ek rejection main sehen kar chuki hoon aur nahi

 

Armaan: as u wish

 

Going from there thinking ronak aise to apni zindagi barbaad kar dega  usse aage badna hoga agar kuch hua bhi nahi to bhi mujhe yeh gum nahi rahega ki maine koshish nahi ki

 

In evening

 

Ridhima is having very hard time anjali padma and nani all are there getting her ready

 

Ridhima: koi batayega yeh kya ho raha hai pls mujhe aise sajaya kyun jaa raha hai

 

Padma: beta hum log bhi to saje hue hai na dekh to bas ab thode der aur

 

 

Meanwhile the venue side

Those who were coming were astonished by the arrangement it was open space beach side everyrthing is decorated colorfully with lot of colours having mickey mouse tom jerry and different carrotoons figure every where decorated it was looking as if party is thrown for kids

One side stage is there with white staps all around chairs support also  mickey mouse shape

 

One side was food area with everything arrange there from Indian to chinees to thai .

 

 

Ridhima was in car send by armaan and she has white strap on her eyes as soon as car stops she again started the blanter bt then she can feel the touch who holds her hand it was armaan.

Ridhima was wearing cream clour lehnga chole looking stunning and armaan in black suit as hiot as ever

 

Ridhima: armaaaaaaan yeh kya bachpana patti kholo na kaha se aaye tum aur subah se phone bhi nahi uthaya koi bataega yeh kya ho raha hai

 

Armaan: just whispering on her ears u are looking stunning jaan kissing lightly her neck

 

Ridhima: armaan hum kaha hai

 

Armaan: have patience

 

Ridhima: aur nahi rakha jata subah se to rakha hua hai

 

Armaan: shhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Ridhima dint realize when he and ridhima sat on a glass trolly

Actually it was a trolly hand over a rope tied by two tress tough and tight check 1000 times it is perfect or not by armaan

 

Armaan just open her straps and told her to look front and she was just astonished to see the sight

 

The whole sky was covered with fireworks and it was written

 

Thank u ridhima meri zindai main aane ke liye

Thank u ridhima mujhe apna banae ke liye

Tum janti bhi nahi tumne mujhe kya diya hai

Aaj baap banke ki khabar dekhe

Tumne mujhe naya ehsaas diya hai

Ek naya janam diya hai

Thank u ridhima

 

Ridhima was totally shocked seeing this then look downwards was again shocek to see everybody looking them and clapping then finally armaan came out from trolly bt ridhima was still she was shocked usse kuch samjh nahi aya in 5 mins main usne kya dekha  finally armaan carefully holding her hand bring her out then t\from the platform at top they were bring down when everybody was throwing roses on them ridhima was num don't know hw to react usne kabhi socha hi nahi hoga armaan aisa bhi kuch kar sakta hai

 

Armaan treid again to bring ridhima back from shock no use so he lifted her up and carefully placed her in the chair obn stage everybody started clapping seeing this armaan hold a mike

 

Thank u from coming u all shyad ridhima abhi kuch zada hi shock main hai yeh surprise usse shyad itna pasand nahi aya ya phir kuch zada hi pasand aya ab ek aur surprice main aap sabke samne ridhima ko yeh batana chathe hoon ki main uske liye kya mehsus kart a hoon

 

After then guitar started playing by armaan and he is singing

Imagining total eye lock session of armaan and ridhima in this song


Tu Hi Haqeeaqat
Khawwb Tu
Dariya Tu Hi
Pyaas Tu
Tu Hi Dil Ke Beqarari
Tu Sukun Tu Sukun

Jau Mein Ab Jab Jis Jagah
Pau Mein Tujhko
Us Jagah
Saath Ho Ke Na Hoon
Tu Hai Roobaru Roobaru
Tu Humsafar
Tu Humkadam
Tu Hamnava Mera
Tu Humsafar
Tu Humkadam
Tu Hamnava Mera

Aa Tujhe In Bahon Mein Bharke
Aur Bhi Kar Loon Main Kareeb
Tu Juda Ho To Lage Hai
Aata Jata Har Pal Ajeeb

Is Jahan Hai Aur Na Hoga
Mujhsa Koi Bhi Kushnaseeb
Tune Mujhko Dil Diya Hai
Mein Hoon Tere Sabse Kareeb
Mein Hi To Tere Dil Main Hoon
Mein Hi To Saason Mein Basu
Tere Dil Ki Dhadkano Mein
Mein Hi Hoon Mein Hi Hoon

Tu Humsafar
Tu Humkadam
Tu Hamnava Mera
Tu Humsafar
Tu Humkadam
Tu Hamnava Mera

Kab Bhala Ab Yeh Waqt Guzre
Kuch Pata Chalta Hi Nahi
Jab Se Mujhko Tu Mila Hai
Hosh Kuch Bhi Apna Nahi

Uff Yeh Teri Palkein Ghani Si
Chav In Ki Hai Dilnasheen

Abb Kise Dar Dhoop Ka Hai
Kyun Ki Hai Yeh Mujhpe Beechi

Tere Bina Na Saans Loo
Tere Bina Na Main Jeu
Tere Bina Na Ek Pal Bhi
Reh Saku Re Saku

Tu Hi Haqeeaqat
Khawwb Tu
Dariya Tu Hi
Pyaas Tu
Tu Hi Dil Ke Beqarari
Tu Sukun Tu Sukun

Tu Humsafar
Tu Humkadam
Tu Hamnava Mera
Tu Humsafar
Tu Humkadam
Tu Hamnava Mera

 

 

Aaj ke liye kafi hai next to next week phirse milungi is ff ke saath baki ff bhi update karne hai

Bye bye

Karan ki dewani mithila

 

 

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Posted: 20 October 2009 at 10:27am | IP Logged
Hey mithila thanxs a lot for the PM loved teh part WOW armaan throw that part in grand way i sure he must be on coud 10 or 11 or maybe higer after getting the news fo him becomming a father lookes like armaan is trying to be a cupid in between ronak n ria gud it was realy excelent part loved it thanxs nruti

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grea job!!!!!!
fantastic update........
plz brng
                      karan-maya
                      ronak-ria
                      sharad-anisha
together Day Dreaming

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Posted: 20 October 2009 at 11:07am | IP Logged

hey!!!

that was rocking part yaar...

wow what a surprise man...

the best one....

aaawww armaan is really cute.....

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Posted: 20 October 2009 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
hey Miths..
Awesome update..
so Armaan would be Love Guru for Ronak nd Ronak would be the one for Maya nd Karan AND Ani nd Sharad.. cool..!
yar aapki FF mein na Surprises vala element bohot hi different aur pyara sa hota hai..
Padho to lagta hai kitna Simple aur pure hai lein socho to lagta hai isse aise likhne mein aur sochne mein time laga hoga..
 
Superb part..
Aur baaki Fics ke update ka bhi main wait karing..
Thanx alot for PM nd Update..
 
luv
Rucha

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