Tumse mera AASHNA(on rajeev)(epi 6 pg16) - Page 15

Hey ijust finished reading ur fic's part one.

It's really nice dear, the way u expressed each of ur character and it's current situation is really nice. So there is competition b/w Raj n Armaan n no doubt Raj is the best I know. Again Raj found Arjun as his real bro, so happy I am (needless to say that my sweeties look hot in that suits). Raj's dad Mihir had made his reputation down because of his behavior. I think he must see  "Taare Zameen k". How can parents be like this. I hate such people.

Shilpa was batch mate of Armaan, so may be Zaina is his daughter. But it's my guess only I think may be real story will be different.   Arohi is not interested in studies so I think she should join Arjun, tabhi to hume maza aayega na. Loved the choice of characters and Sana's character specially but u must tell us who's playing it? Ziana is also nice.

Here Angad n Kripa are already settled so the one track would start from here soon. Daddaji's character is nice, he loves Raj n vice versa.

grt prt n grt twist dear

Good part 5,

Mera Raj bechara to fuss gaya in Sana aur Nandini k beech me. Ab Mihir kahega ki Sana ko chodo aur Nandini ko pakdo aur Raj Sana ko pakadna chahega. Is sab se accha hai tum log ek new character introduce kar lo story me Vertika naam ka aur kyounki Arjun darling already booked hain to mujhe Raj k saath bus Vertika ko dekhna hai.

Ok, apart from this, part was was really nice. Sab se khushi se Raj ko birthday wish kiya, i hope Mihir jee ko chod k. Vaise jab Mihir Mehra's k ghar jaa rahe the tabhi mujhe laga tha ki jaroor un ki koi beti hogi jo vo Raj se pair up karna chahenge. Vahi hua bhi na, par Raj k liye to Sana hai na, fir Nandini k liye Karan bhi aa hi jaayega kahin se.

Sana ko Raj ne bcahya aur same day ko dono fir se mile Raj ki birthday party me. Ab kuch start hua hai to jaldi hi aage bhi jaayega. Tulsi jee ko bada khayal hai na Raj ka, tabhi us ki pasand ki cheejin banayi hain na us k birthday par. Tabhi to Arjun complain kar raha hai na. Us ko to saamne Arohi ko dekh k maza hi aa gaya hoga.