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Posted: 29 September 2009 at 1:45am | IP Logged
Wow man....
Very good....
A very nice one....:D
All I can say is...umm....whoa...U guys improve my vocabulary and my perspective of looking at things....
YOur name is Smriti, I believe..so smriti..well..A very nice shot..
We need more writers like you here....
:D
Take care

ananya

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Posted: 29 September 2009 at 6:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Prasanthi

Smriti!! I am glad that you haved PMed abou this.. will reserve it for now.. caught up with something so important.

Will be back soon.

Edit:
 
A very well written thoughts I must say. I absolutely loved reading this. It just reminded me of some random verse of mine though it is not so related.. but still can't stop myself from mentioning it here :D.
 
Dark and Light
 
The dark clouds in the sky
Make me wonder I don't know why
For I could see a silver line border
As if it is our life order
 
Our life is like the dark cloud
Which has the sadness aloud
But for sure there is a light in the border of the sky
Like our Love which always gives us joy...
 
 
I know I know this one is not at all related.
 
Hope to read more from your pen.


Hey Prasanthi!!!!!

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting! I am glad you think the thoughts were well written. As for your verse, even though not related its similar in its theme. Indeed life is like clouds turning all shades of colors, white, grey, black and so on. Love and faith works as the silver lining that carries us through......
Btw beautiful verse!!!!! I especially love it because its in line with my thinking :D
Thanks again!

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Posted: 29 September 2009 at 6:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ammygurl

Wow man....
Very good....
A very nice one....:D
All I can say is...umm....whoa...U guys improve my vocabulary and my perspective of looking at things....
YOur name is Smriti, I believe..so smriti..well..A very nice shot..
We need more writers like you here....
:D
Take care

ananya


Hey Ananya!!!!!

Firstly, beautiful name!
Thanks for liking the one shot! As for increasing your vocabulary, I never thought a day would come when I would become a source for that especially knowing that my vocabulary is just average! :) Good to know that I have helped increase yours nevertheless. As for improving perspectives, at the fear of sounding philosophical I'd say perspectives are just perspectives; nothing to improve about them for there are no set norms about what they should be like. By definition an individual's is their own take on a situation. So each to his own. I am you liked mine though! :D
Thanks again!

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Posted: 29 September 2009 at 9:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by smriti.tweety

Originally posted by ammygurl

Wow man....<br>Very good....<br>A very nice one....:D<br>All I can say is...umm....whoa...U guys improve my vocabulary and my perspective of looking at things....<br>YOur name is Smriti, I believe..so smriti..well..A very nice shot..<br>We need more writers like you here....<br>:D<br>Take care<br><br>ananya
<br><br>Hey Ananya!!!!!<br><br>Firstly, beautiful name!<br>Thanks for liking the one shot! As for increasing your vocabulary, I never thought a day would come when I would become a source for that especially knowing that my vocabulary is just average! :) Good to know that I have helped increase yours nevertheless. As for improving perspectives, at the fear of sounding philosophical I'd say perspectives are just perspectives; nothing to improve about them for there are no set norms about what they should be like. By definition an individual's is their own take on a situation. So each to his own. I am you liked mine though! :D<br>Thanks again!<br>


Awww...that's okay smriti...and yeah...one's perspective is one's own...Maybe your vocabulary isn't upto your mark, but then I like the way you linked dark clouds with Armaan's life..
I call it metaphorical Fanfiction LOL But that's true.!
Your's is a good one and I am really glad that you replied..!

Ananya...

P.s thanks for appreciating my name..credit goes to my mom.. Wink
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Posted: 29 September 2009 at 12:54pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ammygurl



Awww...that's okay smriti...and yeah...one's perspective is one's own...Maybe your vocabulary isn't upto your mark, but then I like the way you linked dark clouds with Armaan's life..
I call it metaphorical Fanfiction LOL But that's true.!
Your's is a good one and I am really glad that you replied..!

Ananya...

P.s thanks for appreciating my name..credit goes to my mom.. Wink


Thanks a ton for liking the metaphor that I have drawn! By way of suggestion you should read Prasanthi's lines about the same. She's penned down the comparison beautifully in her verse. Her comment is on the previous page! As far as replying goes..... its you i should be thanking for taking time to read and comment rather than the other way round! :D
I am really happy you commented! :) Thanks Again!



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Posted: 02 October 2009 at 9:32am | IP Logged
lovely...

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Posted: 02 October 2009 at 12:54pm | IP Logged
hey simply mindblowing one shot....loved it....

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@ lilsunshine and karan : Thanks a ton for liking it! :D

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