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Posted: 26 September 2009 at 10:31am | IP Logged
heyyyyy smriti...
 
that was an amazing one shot...
omg..it was beautifully wriiten...
the way u described abt trust and love...
and the ending was the most most beautiful part...
 
loved it tons !!!!!!
and btw...i love the title...it kinda ingnites the hope in one person :)
 
wonderful work hun !!! keep it up!!!

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Posted: 26 September 2009 at 10:39am | IP Logged
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Posted: 26 September 2009 at 10:41am | IP Logged
awesome attempt.do try some more.

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Posted: 26 September 2009 at 10:44am | IP Logged

hi...............

ur first attempt is surely very nice.........

keep up the good work......... and do write more..............

but sumwhere i felt that sum facts were missing.................like a lil insight abt the incident.............and may be lil more of rids side..........

but i really enjoyed it

bye

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Posted: 26 September 2009 at 11:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Pebblez

Hey there, Smriti!!
 
Owing to the fact all others are still in the 'reserved' zone, i'd say um the first one to comment :D...! You said it was your first attempt at writing? Then damn right, it was one of the best first one shots i have ever read! :D you are amazing girl...you have this knack of holding out the reader till the very end. It was a unique concept, well written, intriguing...and had eveyrhting right! Welcome to the forum girl, i am SO looking forward to reading more stuff from you...i sense great potential ;)
 
An awesome read overall, Smriti...:) loved it!
 
Kiran


Hey Kiran!!!!!!

I am sure you can imagine the joy of finally reading a comment after the series of reserves :D
I can't begin to verbalize the honor of you liking the fic. As I must have told you, yours was the first FF I felt compelled to comment on and its wonderful to read your encouraging comments! To be frank the idea was a very vague picture in my mind and the attempt to hold out the reader followed as a natural consequence of Armaan's reluctant flow of thoughts.
I am glad you found everything right though I caught my own faults at mixing the active and the passive wrongly in some of the lines! Big smile Just edited it!
Thanks again for taking time and commenting, your comments are very motivating! I hope I'll be able to meet the expectations next time round!

Love
Smriti
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Posted: 26 September 2009 at 11:45am | IP Logged
Hey Smriti ... I liked this ff. How true, trust is essence of any relationship, especially Love. The concept, feel and narration was very well.

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Posted: 26 September 2009 at 11:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by hannahdmg

You know what I LOVE about the fan fiction section on India Forums, is that we get to see a breath of fresh air once in a while, and its writers like you that put a smile to my face. You penned the thoughts playing in his mind so well, that one couldn't help but visualize. A futher aspect which I enjoyed reading was the way you described their relationship, How words seemed insignificant and the way they understood one an other.

I also liked the title. I open a good fiction based on the title and yours was intriguing.

Peace Out
Much Love Hannahxx


Hey Hannah!!!!!

Aww..... Your comment brought this huge smile on my face! Big smile
I am glad that you were able to visualize, I see it as a success for myself if the readers are able to do so!
As for the words being insignificant; I believe that there comes a time in every relationship close to the heart where words aren't a necessity, where the heart communicates with the heart in a language of its own!
As for the title; the credit goes entirely to NJ! She was the one who suggested it and I must thank her for attracting readers by the title itself! :)
Thanks for your wonderful and encouraging words!

Love
Smriti
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Posted: 26 September 2009 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SunainaTM007

heyyyyy smriti...
 
that was an amazing one shot...
omg..it was beautifully wriiten...
the way u described abt trust and love...
and the ending was the most most beautiful part...
 
loved it tons !!!!!!
and btw...i love the title...it kinda ingnites the hope in one person :)
 
wonderful work hun !!! keep it up!!!


Hey Sunaina!!!!!

Thanks a ton for taking out time and commenting! I am happy to know you you found it beautiful!
Trust I feel is an absolute essential in any relationship, be it friendship, love or even enemity for that matter. After all you trust your enemy never wish well for you :)
As for the ending; it came to me just then, while writing the end down. :) The only clarity I had when I began was the beggining itself! :)
Again i am glad you liked it! Gives me a boost to know if the reader appreciates the attempt!

As i stated in the beginning of the fic; the credit for the title goes entirely to NJ. She came up with it and it seems to have been quite a blessing!
Thanks again for the lovely comment!

Love
Smriti


Edited by smriti.tweety - 26 September 2009 at 11:53pm

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