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ammy-ridz

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Posted: 22 September 2009 at 10:38am | IP Logged
AR- one shot  
I m not good at poetries or verses or any thing of that kind but just as I wanted to write something this thing stuck my head. It is an old episode of dmg which I tried to write as a poem..i hope it will sound like one. Any ways here you go. You can guess which episode.
 
Dejected,insulted,harassed and continious percecute
My heart was screaming in  for you in that  depressing solitude.
 
The whole night I stayed up in the dark chamber wide awake.
Shattered was I why you din't trust me and blamed it was my mistake.
 
You stood against me in Haste and uncertainity
Who was she yours that you trusted her over Me.
 
But it was too late when you tried for it to rectify
I was so  gravely hurt and  never gave you a chance to pacify.
 
How could you ask for me to forgive you?
When it was you who risked my Life and Career too.
 
You came to me uninvited  dressed looking like a Princess
But, I injured your pride blaming you turned my life in a mess.
 
You left from there Hurt and Heart-broken
I too felt bad for how rudely I had spoken.
 
You cried your heart out and fell in a deep trouble
As I saw you on my way, My anger left me and I worried double.
 
Turning to save you from your misery  I tried as much as possible
I could see you were so afraid and much more vulnerable.
 
God's grace I managed to get you out of the fiscle
But it was not the end but the beginning ? a Renewal.
 
 *@*@*@*@*@*@*@*@*@*@*@*@*@*@*
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Thank u.


Edited by ammy-ridz - 02 October 2009 at 1:25am

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its a lovely poem.....too good
loved it...its related to the time when armaan went back to kasauli after the misunderstandings...u describeed it very well 4m the point of view of armaan

love
debadrita



Edited by Debadrita Saha - 22 September 2009 at 11:23am

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Posted: 22 September 2009 at 11:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Debadrita Saha

its a lovely poem.....too good
loved it...its related to the time when armaan went back to kasauli after the misunderstandings...u describeed it very well 4m the point of view of armaan

love
debadrita

Thanx soooooo much debadrita.  I kno it is not that good not even average..but thank u so much for encouraging me and appreciating it.
Umm..the part is not kasuli part..but the one where Ridz gives a statement against Armaan and he is in the jail and then Party and Vivek fisaco...But it was too close..i myself got confused when i read it again.
Once again THANK u.

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Posted: 22 September 2009 at 11:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ammy-ridz

Originally posted by Debadrita Saha

its a lovely poem.....too good
loved it...its related to the time when armaan went back to kasauli after the misunderstandings...u describeed it very well 4m the point of view of armaan

love
debadrita

Thanx soooooo much debadrita.  I kno it is not that good not even average..but thank u so much for encouraging me and appreciating it.
Umm..the part is not kasuli part..but the one where Ridz gives a statement against Armaan and he is in the jail and then Party and Vivek fisaco...But it was too close..i myself got confused when i read it again.
Once again THANK u.




ya i read it again....actually first i thougt the she is muskan.....but now after telling it i realized it...actually i got confused because he wasn't in love with riddhima during the vivek's incident...but its really good....everyone has its first time...n u shud be proud of yourself to try one...n its really very nice...better than average

love
debadrita

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Posted: 22 September 2009 at 11:54am | IP Logged

I like how you've formed the lines...interlacing reactions and responses..!!

good stuff!..you should rite more..:)

nijaL



Edited by missypatel - 22 September 2009 at 11:56am

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Originally posted by missypatel


I like how you've formed the lines...interlacing reactions and responses..!!

good stuff!..you should rite more..:)

nijaL

  Thanxx ninjaL. I m really glad you appreciate my work.
Will definitely try to write more in future.
Thank u  :)

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