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My Promise






iss fic ka naam "my promise" isliye hai kyunki maine vertika se promise kiya tha ki uss par fic likhungi.. so this fic is purely dedicated to vertika(Mahak sinha)..













yeh ek aisi ladki ki kahani hai jo bholi nahi hai masum bhi nahi hai par sacchi hai aur sabse achi hai.. yeh kahani hai vertika ki..
vertika shimla main rehti hai par job mumbai main karti thi....zindagi ki har mushkilo ko paar kar haste muskurate jiti hai.. apne pairo pe khadi hai independent.. duniya ki kabhi parwaah nahi ki na hi duniyadari ki.. apna pichla job isliye gawa diya kyunki ek bahot hi important meeting ke liye yeh late pahunchi aur wajah thi ek masum baccha jo kho gaya tha aur apne maa baap ko dhundh raha tha.. aas paas koi uski madad karne ko taiyaar nahi tha.. vertika ne uss bacche ki madad ki halanki police ki karwahi aur sabb main uska juice nikal gaya par jab uss bacche ko uske parents mil gaye tab vertika was on cloud 9..

bass isske baad use kahin bhi koi decent naukari nahi mili.. soo usne socha "kya rakha hai inn multinational companies main.. mujhe jine ke liye waise bhi jitna kamana tha kama liya abb mujhe wo karna chahiye jisse mujhe khushi mile.."bass phir kya tha she joined chote baccho ka school(anaath baccho ka..).. uski subah bhi haste muskurate nikalti hai aur shaam bhi..

par kahin na kahin uske akelapan, khalipan mehsus hota hai apni zindagi main.. "sabke bich hokar bhi main akeli hoon..aur akele hokar bhi sabke saath..khushiyaan hai par khushi baatne wala nahi aur khushi baatne wale hai par woh khushi nahi.."



kahani aur vertika dono ka hero hai arjun.. arjun punj.. bahot suljha hua insaan hai.. itna suljha hua hai ki koi uske aaspaas bhatakne se bhi darta hai.. in short use insaano se zara chidh hai..


abb sochne wali baat yeh hai ki jab arjun punj ko insaano se itni si nafrat hai aur vertikarjun ke bich koi link bhi nahi hai to dono milenge kaise?? well link yeh hai ki arjun ko chote insaano matlab baccho se bahot pyaar hai.. aur woh ja raha hai shimla ke school main chief guest bannkar.. yeh wahi school hai jaha vertika baccho ko sambhalti hai..iske alawa bhi inn dono main ek link hai..



sare program ki zimmedari vertika par hai kyunki sabhi bacche use bahot chahte hai aur uski baat bhi mante hai.. par vertika baccho ko sikha sikha kar thak gayi hai par bacche hai ki jab unka mann hota hai tabhi practice karte hai warna shor machate hai..

finally wo din aa hi gaya jiska sabko intezaar nahi tha bass school walo ko tha jinko donation milne wala tha arjun punj se aur ladkiyon ko intezar tha arjun punj ka.. aur vertika ko intezaar tha apni mehnat safal hone ka .. jab chote chote masum bacche uska sikhaya hua stage par apni masumiyat ke saath perform karenge wo pal vertika ke liye bahot ehum hoga..


dhire dhire performances hoti ja rahi thi.. har performance arjun bade hi utsaah se dekh raha tha.. yahi to ek din hota hai jab arjun muskurata hai.. finally performances khatam hui aur principal ka bhashan shuru hua.. principal ne baccho ki to nahi par haan arjun ki khub tarif ki aur use 2 shabd kehne ko stage pe bulaya..

Arjun - hats off to these little angels.. sabhi baccho ne bahot pyaara perform kiya.. par usse bhi jyada tarif ke kabil woh log hai jinhone inn baccho ko sikhaya to main unn sabhi teachers ko stage pe bulana chahuga jinhone inn masum baccho ko itna acha sikhaya...

sabhi bacche ek saath chillaye vertika didi..

sabhi teachers ke muh latak gaye kyuki kisi ne bhi madad nahi ki thi.. vertika stage par ayi.. arjun punj shocked tha.. actually vertika ko arjun ne hi job se nikala tha late ane ki wajah se aur uske reason ko arjun ne jhooth karar diya tha.. aaj arjun ko khud par hi sharm aa rahi thi.. bahot chota mehsus kar raha tha arjun vertika ke saamne.. aur arjun ko aur jhatka tab laga jab vertika ne aisa react kiya jaise wo arjun ko janti hi nahi ya uski zindagi main arjun punj ki zara bhi ehmiyat nahi..

program khatam ho gaya.. sabhi apne apne ghar jane lage.. vertika ne sabb baccho ko aram se unke room mein bheja aur abb wo bhi ja rahi hai sadak par akele.. tufaan to uske mann main bhi utha hai arjun punj ko lekar.. wo bahot kadr kart thi arjun ki aur shayad aur bhi kuch tha uske dil main par uss waqt sabkuch khatm ho gaya jab arjun ne uss par zara bhi vishwas nahi kiya..

vertika chalti ja rahi hai..

arjun aaj khush bhi hai aur khudse naraz bhi.. usne vertika ko galat samjha wo vertika jo uske liye kabb khaas bann gayi thi wo bhi nahi janta tha.. use kisi aur se koi matlab nahi tha bass vertika har baat main aur har cheez pe perfect hona chahiye thi.. aur usi vertika ki ek choti si galati jo ki actually main galati thi hi nahi arjun se bardasht nahi hui aur usne use job se nikal diya..

arjun ko vertika nazar ayi akele ja rahi thi.. usne car lejakar uske saamne rok di.. vertika hairaan thi.. arjun utra gadi se aur vertika ke paas aya..


arjun - vertika.. (bass isse jyada uske muh se aur kuch bhi nahi nikla..)

vertika - sirr... aap iss tarah..

arjun - i m sorry uss din maine tumhe..

vertika - nahi sir sorry ki kya baat hai.. aapne mujhe bilkul sahi pehchana tha.. aaj bhi aapka kaha hua ek ek ilzaam yaad hai mujhe..

arjun - am sorry for that .. mujhe tumhare saath aise behave nahi karna tha..

vertika - arey sir aap kyo sorry bol rahe hai.. maine kaha to aap bilkul sahi thi.. main aisi hi hu.. selfish, dhokebaaz , logo ko fasana aur unka faida uthana janti hu aur aapke saath bhi to main wahi kar rahi thi par aap bahot jaldi mere changul se nikal gaye.. ya shayad kabhi fase hi nahi the..

vertika ki aankho main ansu hai.. arjun ne yahi shabd vertika se kahe the par aaj yahi shabd uske sine me teer ki tarah chubh rahe hai..

arjun - mujhe maaf kardo akhri bar.. main bahot sharminda hu khudse nazre nahi mila pa raha..

vertika (gusse mein) - aaj bhii aaj bhii aapko apni hi parwaah hai.. mera kyaaa(vertika ne arjun ka shirt pakad lia dono haatho se) boliye mera kya ?? kya mujhe dard nahi hota?? mere paas bhi dil hai jise chot ka ehsaas hota hai.. jo .. jo dhadakta hai ek patthar dil insaan ke liye...
she hugged him.. arjun is on cloud 9.. jo wo keh nahi pa raha tha wo usne sunn liya.. jo uske dil main tha wahi arjun ke dil main bhi tha.. par himmat nahi thi arjun ke paas..

arjun - i love u vertika.. i love u too..

vertika durr ho gayi arjun se..

vertika - i love u too ka kya matlab maine yeh to nahi kaha ki main aapse.. main aapse pyaar karti hu..]

arjun ne vertika ko itna pareshan kiya thoda haq vertika ka bhi to hai na..

arjun smiled at this..

arjun - acha mujhse nahi to phir kisse pyaar karti hoo.. well mujhe nahi janna.. main tumse pyaar karta huu bass aur tum chaho ya na chaho main tumhe utha kar le jauga would be mrs. arjun punj..

vertika blushed.. she colud not control more.. she hugged him more tightly..

vertika - kyon kiya tha aapne mere saath aisa.. boliye?? kitna chaha maine aapko jaisa apne kaha waisa kiya, aapki har baat mani par aapne hi mujh par vishwas nahi kiya.. aur aisa kya galat kar diya tha maine late hi to ayi thi na halaki meeting subah 11 baje ki thi aur main raat ko 11 baje ayi thi par ayi to thi na main.. (she said cutely..)

arjun - haan mam kitni professional hai aap late ayi par waqt par ayi bilkul 11 baje subah nahi to raat ko hi sahi.. aur main bhi ek acha boss hu janta tha meri pyaari si professional ayegi zarur..

arjun ne pocket main se rose nikala.. aur ghutno ke bal baith gaya..

arjun - Ms. vertika kya aap Mrs. vertika arjun punj banna pasand karengi??

vertika - yes Mr. arjun punj..

iske baad vertikarjun ne har khushi aur har ghum saath bata.. dono bahot khush hai.. aur ek saath hai jeevan bhar ke liye....



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very nice fic
excellently written

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thanks rituka.. u r the first one to reply.. thanks a lot sweetieBig smile muaaahhhhh for u Big smile

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Wow.....wat a cute shot. I luved the patch up scene. Arjun said Vertika chahe ya na chahe wo usse uthake le jayega......kitne haq se kaha usne.....and I just luved it. And the best part was....subah k nahi to raat k 11 baje to ayi thi na.....LOL.....it was really gud. In fact outstanding. Luved it dear. Thnx for the PM n this wonderful shot. It was a perfect sixer.

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Originally posted by sumaiya wahid

Wow.....wat a cute shot. I luved the patch up scene. Arjun said Vertika chahe ya na chahe wo usse uthake le jayega......kitne haq se kaha usne.....and I just luved it. And the best part was....subah k nahi to raat k 11 baje to ayi thi na.....LOL.....it was really gud. In fact outstanding. Luved it dear. Thnx for the PM n this wonderful shot. It was a perfect sixer.



thanks for the wonderful and quick commentSmile.. darr lagg raha tha ki acha hoga ya nahi par abb acha lagg raha haiBig smile thanks a lot sweetie..Smile

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Posted: 22 September 2009 at 6:25am | IP Logged
Hey bhagwaan aaj mai IF me ye fic padh kar jitne hairaan par phir bhi khush hue hoon utni shayad kabhi nahi hue thi tu ruk mai aaram se karti hoon is par comment.


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Posted: 22 September 2009 at 6:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Mahak Sinha

Hey bhagwaan aaj mai IF me ye fic padh kar jitne hairaan par phir bhi khush hue hoon utni shayad kabhi nahi hue thi tu ruk mai aaram se karti hoon is par comment.


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tujhe acha laga to meri mehnat safal ho gayi.. main intezaar karungi teri comment kaBig smile

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Posted: 22 September 2009 at 6:35am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by Mahak Sinha

Hey bhagwaan aaj mai IF me ye fic padh kar jitne hairaan par phir bhi khush hue hoon utni shayad kabhi nahi hue thi tu ruk mai aaram se karti hoon is par comment.


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tujhe acha laga to meri mehnat safal ho gayi.. main intezaar karungi teri comment kaBig smile


Koi mere liye itna bhi kar sakta hai, nahi jaanti thi par aaj laga ki shayad mai itne bhi buri nahi hoon. LOL LOLLOL

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