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Posted: 15 September 2009 at 10:59pm | IP Logged

Part # 2

 

It's the engagement day'..and we r entering a big room''the room is very well kept'.everything is neat n clean'. very organized'..and now we c a person pacing in the room'..well that's our wud-be groom Samay Shergill (played by Iqbal Khan)'he seems to be pissed off with sumthing'just then a girl enters the room'.yup that was Asmi.

 

Asmi: Bhaiya'..(as he looks up)'arre apka mood itna bigda hua kyun hai? Sagai nahi karni kya?? (he gives her an irritated look) Aap chaho to main Bhabhi se BAAT kar sakti hu '.(she stressed on "Baat")

 

Now Samay was really irritated'.poor guy could not talk to Kinjal since yesterday'actually Kinjal was really busy n cudnt manage to talk to him properly '.and so lover boy was extremely frustrated.

 

Samay: Haan haan'.ja kar baat kar na'..kuch bhi baat kar'..yaha kyun khadi hai'.sab baat hi to karte hai'..tu bhi karle'yaha to sabko baat karna ata hai'mujhe hi nahi ata'.

 

Asmi: (giggled) Bhaiya'.apna chehra dekhiye aaine me'.kitna frustrated lag rahe hai'.agar koi dekhega to kahega'.aap se zabardasti se ye sagai karwai ja rahi hai'.hehe

 

Samay: Jisko jo kehna hai kahe''(murmers) jise kuch kehna chahiye wo to nahi kehti'.

 

Asmi: Bhaiya'that was loud enough'.

 

Samay: Huh'kya?.....dekh tu mujhe paka mat'.mera dimag bahut garam hai'..ja yaha se'.akela chhor de mujhe'

 

Asmi: Well, chali to main jaungi'.par apko akela chhor ke nahi'..wo kya hai na'.koi bahut betaab hai'apse BAAT karne ko'..(she shows him her mobile) lekin koi baat nahi main unse keh deti hu'.apka dimaag abhi garam hai'aap baat nahi karoge'thik hai?

 

Samay: Haan'haan'thik hai.


Asmi: (on the phn) Bhabhi'..

 

As soon as she says that, Samay rushes to her n snatches the phn n rolls his eyes'Asmi giggles n goes away'..

 

Samay: Helo''

 

On the other side, we see a girl turning'..thats Kinjal Dixit (played by Neha Bamb)'.Samay's love, life n wud-be wife'..

 

Kinjal: Samay'.tumhara phn kyun switched off hai??

 

Samay: Jee'.aap kaun bol rahi hai?

 

Kinjal: Hmm'.to janab abhi tak naraz hai'..par kya iska matlab ye hai k wo humse baat tak nahi karenge?

 

Samay: I guess narazgi ka yehi matlab hota hai'madam.

 

Kinjal: To sir'..iss narazgi ko kaise dur kiya jaa sakta hai??

 

Samay: Wo to unhe sochna chahiye jisne naraz kiya hai'..

 

Kinjal: Agar hum kaan pakre to chalega?

 

Samay: Umm'khata bahut bari thi ma'm'..itni asani se maafi nahi milegi'.

 

Kinjal: Wat abt "I am sorry"''

 

Samay: I hav 3 better words for u to say'.

 

Kinjal: Jaise?? (knwing very well wat he meant)

 

Samay: Jaise " I love you"'.

 

Kinjal: Dhatt'.Samay'pls ab iss baat ko jane bhi do na'.tum to jante ho kal main kitna bz thi'.saare rishtedaar aye hue the'.sab mujhe hi dekhna chahte the'..mujhse baat karna chahte the'.ab agar aise me main phn pe lagi rehti to kitna ajeeb lagta na?

 

Samay: Arre'tumne pehle kyun nahi bataya? Dekho tum na ek kaam karo'..ye phn rakho'aur mujhse baatein karna chhor ke rishtedaaro se baatein karo'..in fact on a better note'..sagai bhi unhi se karo aur shaadi bhi'

 

Kinjal: Samay'.dekho chupchap maan jao'.warna niche jake sabko keh deungi k ye sagai rukwade'(she warned playfully)


Samay: Arre wah'.acchi zabardasti hai'..naraz bhi main hu'..aur dhamkaya bhi mujhe hi jaa raha hai'.kisiko yaha meri fikr nahi hai'.koi PYAR SE sorry bolne tak ko tayyar nahi'.

 

Kinjal: Ab sorry to kaha na'.jab ki meri utni ghalti bhi nahi thi'

 

Samay: Thik hai'baba'.mana tumhari ghalti nahi thi'.aur tumhe kuch bhi kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai'.(he said being disappointed)

 

Kinjal: Arre aise kaise zaroorat nahi hai'..I need to say how much I LOVE U'..

 

Samay: Hmm''(suddenly realizing) Kya kaha'..phir se kaho'.

 

Kinjal: Bye Samay'..shyam ko milte hai'Take care.

 

Samay: Ahh'suno to sahi'helo'Kinjal''.arre yaar I LOVE U TOO'.. (sighs)'.I am deeply in luv man''(and this forms a smile on his lips)

 

Now lets go downstairs'..here Asmi is busy with many preparations. Just then a car stops in front of the mansion n we c a guy getting down from the driver's seat and there was another guy accompanying him.

 

This is wat the first guy is wearing'.





And this is wat the second one wearing''.he is also wearing glasses'






Edited by sumaiya wahid - 07 November 2009 at 8:16am

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Posted: 15 September 2009 at 11:12pm | IP Logged
Ok guys, this is the 2nd part jisse UD karne me almost meri jaan nikal gayi....ye pics na!!! (thnx to goodkashish for her help warna shayad main pura din isime gujar detiLOLLOL) I knw its not big either n u all may want to kill me for stopping it here. But I had to end it here as it suited the best. Thnx to all for commenting n hope u like the part.

Luv,

Sumaiya (Sumi).SmileSmile

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Posted: 15 September 2009 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
for part:1

hey Sumaiya...lovely start... Tongue
Female lead...hmm..for me only priyanka bassi opposite rajeev.. Wink
so asmi n her brother has been neglected by their parents... their mom seems to understand them but bonded with her husband n her duties towards him that she forgot her duty towards her children..!!
waiting for the next update...!!!! Smile

Edited by sweet_shona - 15 September 2009 at 11:27pm

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Posted: 15 September 2009 at 11:30pm | IP Logged
Hey vow a new RN fic just loved that yaar. Vartu is so quick na, she is already.
Good work yaar keep on updating fast.

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Posted: 15 September 2009 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
hey nice update!!
 
hmm...so samay is irritated coz kinjal didn't speak to him properly and Asmi is doing her best to irritate him all the more!!
 
aree waise who are these two guyz???
 
I guess...i hav 2 wa8 till next part for thatWink
 
Jaldi update karo....Smile

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Posted: 16 September 2009 at 12:23am | IP Logged

Hiiiii Sumi......Big smile

 
sweet ud......Clap Clap Clap
 
samay & kinjal ...dono ki sagai hai...par sagaiwale din bhi ladai kar rahe hain...chalo pyar se hi sahi...Big smile  Big smile  Big smile!!! vaise yeh sach hai ki gulz 143 kahne se pahle boys ko kaphi pareshan karti hain...!!! aur yeh un ka haq bhi hai...!!!LOL LOL LOL
 
vaise Asmi ne achhi tease ki hai Samay ki...Tongue Tongue Tongue!!! vaise jo do mahashya aaye hain...itne fashionable tarike se...un me se koi apne hero toh nahin...???Wink Wink Wink
 
phir se chutku sa ud tha...par koi baat nahin...agar tum regular ud karogi aur aise hi sweet sweet ud deti rahogi...toh tumhare sare gunah maaf...!!!Big smile Big smile Big smile
 
do cont fast......Big smile


Edited by Lion_Priya - 16 September 2009 at 12:25am

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Posted: 16 September 2009 at 12:36am | IP Logged
Hi Sumi,Smile

Nice update dear.ClapClapClap But as Priya said, a chutku update.LOLLOLLOL

So Samay is irritated ki Kinjal ne usse baat nahi ki.Tongue Dont worry Samay, shaadi ke baad toh zindagi bhar Kinjal ki baat hi sunni hai, tab ye shikayat hogi ki Kinjal ki baat sunni padti hai.Wink

Ye do naye entries kaun hai? ConfusedKahin humare dear Rajeev inme se ek toh nahi?Wink Par ye toh sirf tum aur tumhara next update hi bata sakta hai.Smile

Keep updating and we will keep on commenting.Smile

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Posted: 16 September 2009 at 2:18am | IP Logged
hey janu very beautiful dear......................i loved it very much................so now iqbal n neha also here very interesting.................and i really loved their convo..............samay is completely  frustrated n betaab hai to see n speak to his love...................wonder who the 2 guys r...............hope one is raj..............wow cant wait for the next part..................ur writing is very good............first time but still made it very perfect.................cont soon dear..............

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