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Posted: 26 May 2010 at 11:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sun_423

sumaiya yaar jaldi se continue karo na please..Smile


Dii...abhi to main apne laptop par hu....jo har word ke baad 5 sec ka break leke chal raha hai....and part cousin k PC me hai....that too not ready....sorry par mujhe thoda aur late ho jayega UD karne meConfused....but haan 31st se pehle kar dungi....pakka!!Big smile

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Posted: 29 May 2010 at 2:35am | IP Logged
Hey here comes the reply for the update on pg. 123,
Really wonderful update yaar.
Ayaan really did a nice thing by bringing Asmi to meet her father. Har pita ki iccha hoti hai na ki itne badi khushi k mauke pe vo apni beti k saath rahe par jab kismat me nahi tha to vo vahan nahi aa paaye. Fir bhi ashirvaad ki kami Ayaan ne poori kar di Asmi ko vahan la k.
Kitna khayal rakhta hai na vo Asmi ka, kahin Asmi k man me bhi ek feeling rahi hogi ki us k dad us k saath hote kaash is mauke pe. Par ek baar fir se Ayaan ne bina kuch kahe sab samjah liya. Their scenes wid each other were really cute.
Ayaan bhi romantic ho raha hai ab, night me call kiya us ne.

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Posted: 29 May 2010 at 11:28am | IP Logged
Guys.....maine part 32.....naye thread pe post kiya.....here is the link:

http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1405093&PID=30615128&#30615128

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Posted: 29 May 2010 at 11:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sur_Singhania

Hi Sumi Hey Sur....Big smile
Is fic ko itne dino baad updated dekh kar sach me dil khush ho gaya!
Really great! I'm glad tumhara dil khush hua....though I dont knw how u found the part....and yeah....even I was happy to hav finally updated the part!!LOLLOL
No doubt Asmi is surprised to see the romantic side of her fiance. Hum bhi kafi surprise huye hai. But its good. Finally he is getting over Pari...:) Yeah he needs to move on.....and he can do that only wid Asmi.Big smile
Phone conversation kafi sweet thi. No doubt ayaan ko apni jaan pyari hai. IB officer hua to kya hua, har admi apni gf se darta hai...:D Bilkul.....aur hamesha aisa hi hona chahiye....no matter wat!!WinkLOL
Viase ye baat to sahi hai- ayaan ko itni lambi chutti fir kabhi nahi milegi...lekin agar usey chutti nahi mili, to Asmi se maar bhi to khayega...I think u shud do something abt this Sumi. Arre mera bas chale to maon usse ghar pe bithake hi puri mahine ki salary de du....LOL...but haan...fic me hero ko special consideration to zarur milegi....Wink
It was really sweet of him to meet those kids like that...ussey kya laga, saare bachche Ghajini ki aulad hote hai jo sab bhool jaye?
ha? Lolz....I was really laughing reading this line....waise baat to sahi kii tumne...LOLLOL
I wonder ye usne kis film me dekha k baar baar shadi se pehle sausral nahi jana chahiye It has to be a film which was not released....LOLLOL
Kinjal aur Samay ko shadi k pehle aur baad ka kafi experience hai...badiya hai, they can advice Asmi nd Ayaan. though Im sure they dont need it.  Exactly....even I was abt to say this only....they dont need or rather they wont follow any advice....hamesha kuch hatke karenge na....WinkWink
Bechara Samay...bekaar ban gaya
Ab Asmi se chote bachche bhi flirt karne lagey hai...man Ayaan ko comp dene ki himmat! ye agar kuch saal bada hota, to iska kya haal hota na! Ayaan ka reaction dekhne layak tha! I'm glad u liked the portion....par haan....agar wo thoda bada hota uski guitar, piano, band.....sab baja deta Ayaan!!LOLLOL
Ayaan bhi kafi samakhdari ki baate kar leta hai...aur flirt bhi karta hai!
wow Guess....he is learning all this very efficiently!!Embarrassed
Ab ye Ayaan shadi se pehle bhi stuntman bana fir raha hai...Isko pata nahi hai, agar Asmi ko pata chal gaya k ye yaha nahi hai, to wo usey kisi layak nahi chodegi, Mauli se badla lena to door ki baat hai! Wo baat to sahi hai....lekin mujhe nahi lagta Asmi uska reason dekhne k baad usse kuch kahegi!!LOLLOL Waise....stuntman wala dialogue badhiya tha.LOLLOL
Ayaan shayad kabhi nahi sudhrega..aur na hi Asmi ko publically koi compliment dega...phew...style hai boss. Awe....how coolly u said that!! Love it yaar!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Mauli aur Nishant sari zindagi yuhi ladte rahenge! mast hai entertainment to fix hai humara.  So to hai!!LOL
Its really good k Ayaan k juniors usey itna respect karte hai.
Beautiful ud Thanks yaar!!Tongue
Ab jaldi mere sone se pehle ud post karo! Ohh mujhe to pata hi nahi chala tum kab soyi....LOLLOL....jokes apart next UD maine post kar diya hai....hopefully kal aapko dikh jayega....LOLLOLWink
Take Care U too dear....
Sur

P.S. Suhana Di, congrats on moving to US and best of luck to you nd your husband! love you!


Thanks for the wonderful reply....and am glad u liked the part!!!
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Posted: 29 May 2010 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Mahak Sinha

Hey here comes the reply for the update on pg. 123,
Really wonderful update yaar. Thank u Vertika....Big smile
Ayaan really did a nice thing by bringing Asmi to meet her father. Har pita ki iccha hoti hai na ki itne badi khushi k mauke pe vo apni beti k saath rahe par jab kismat me nahi tha to vo vahan nahi aa paaye. Fir bhi ashirvaad ki kami Ayaan ne poori kar di Asmi ko vahan la k.Hmm....Ayaan did a noble thing I guess....U c...jaisa maine kaha....ye uske lye zaruri nahi tha...yet he did that....so this was indeed very sweet of him!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Kitna khayal rakhta hai na vo Asmi ka, kahin Asmi k man me bhi ek feeling rahi hogi ki us k dad us k saath hote kaash is mauke pe. Par ek baar fir se Ayaan ne bina kuch kahe sab samjah liya. Yup....after all he doesnt claim to love her too much....without any reason!!WinkWinkTheir scenes wid each other were really cute. Thanks...am glad u liked yaar!!
Ayaan bhi romantic ho raha hai ab, night me call kiya us ne. Hehe....naughty n romantic Ayaan....EmbarrassedEmbarrassedWinkWink



Thanks for replying Vertika....and am loving to hav these replies as its taking me bak to the past....and ts basically helping me to remember my own fic!!LOLLOL

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Posted: 02 June 2010 at 5:43am | IP Logged
Ye raha page 128 k liye reply.
Nice update dear.
Asmi n Ayaan went for marriage shopping. Nitya jee ko aakhir pata chal hi gaya ki Ayaan Asmi ko le gaya tha un k dad se milaane. Sach me kitne khushi hue hogi na in ko jab ye samajha hoga ki vakai me Ayaan bahut pyaar karta hai Asmi se tabhi us ne bina Asmi k kuch kahe sab kiya. Varna to Asmi shayad jaane me itna hesitate kar rahi thi.
Ayaan n his as usual a g8 nautanki expert, har jagah chaloo rehta hai vo bhi. Liked the ice cream n dress selection session n their cute arguments.

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Posted: 03 June 2010 at 11:57pm | IP Logged
Reply for the update on pg 132,
Good one. Clap Clap Clap
Jab Ayaan ne dekh hi liya ki Mauli n gang un ko chup k watch kar rahi hai to kitma badhiya trick apanaya na us ne. Sach me Mauli ko kaise nahi samajh me aaya ki vo Ayaan k uper najar rakh rahi hai aur ye baat Ayaan ko pata nahi chalegi.
Akhir vo Ayaan hai bhai, jahan tak baat rahi us k selection ki to sach me bahut time lagagta hai kuch bhi khareedne me. Itna to gals nahi karti hain. Asmi ne badhiya leg pulling ki Samay ki. Asmi ka gussa hona natural tha Ayaan se ki jab vo call kar rahi thi to us ne uthaya nahi us ka phone.
Kitna manaya hai na Ayaan ne Asmi ko aur itne saare gifts bhi diye, so sweet of him. Sahi kaha na Asmi ne ki acche lagte hain Mauli n Nishant ek doosre k saath. To madam Ayaan jee ko painting gift dene ka soch rahi thi. Ayaan ne dekh hi li vo painting good.
Par sach me us ne Ayaan ki shirt ko bhi rango se bhar diya. That gift was really pretty. I love naughty Ayaan. card bhi nahi choose kar raha tha bacchon jaise ki us k pass nahi rahega to select karne se kya fayda?
good one
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Posted: 08 June 2010 at 11:57pm | IP Logged
Gud update on pg. 142,
To Ayaan Asmi ko le kar us music school gaya jahan vo dono last year aaye the. Vahan k bacche bhi un dono ko pehchaan gaye. Vaise vo tumhara kid 2 kaafi smart tha yaar. Ayaan k saamne hi Asmi ko line maar raha tha.
Un dono ko hi kya pata tha ki dono ek din saath me yahan aayenge. Ab to bhabhi ban rahi hai Asmi bacchon ki. Par ye Ayaan beech me kahan chala gaya tha ek din k liye? Bus Mauli ko bata k, i think jaroor kuch surprsie plan kar raha hoga.
Mauli ka gussa hona bhi natural hai Ayaan se aakhir us ki kitne leg pulling karta hai na vo. Dresses were superb n Ayaan chahe kuch na bhi kahe Asmi ki khoobsurati k liye par vo jaanti hai us ki aakhon se ki vo kaise lag rahi hai.

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