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Posted: 14 years ago

Meri zindagi ke iss mod pe ye kaisa waqt aaya hai,
Zakhm iss dil ka zuban pe aaya hain,
nahi rote the hum kaanto ki chuban se,
aaj kisi ki yaad nehumko rulaaya hai


Mujhko aisi saza mili tum se ki ab dil nahi dhadkega 

Kisi ke liye or tum ko aisi saza miley rab
 
Ki tum bhi tadpo kisi ke pyar liye
 
Mein roti rahunghi teri bewafai ke liye
 
Tu bhi tadapna kisi ke pyar ke liye.
 
If u like it press hit like button😊
Edited by Parm_kaur - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago
it's very nice
thanks for sharing
 
 
Posted: 14 years ago
parm its very nice ,

I would like to  suggest something different for the last line , please dont mind

Mujhko aisi saza mili tum se ki ab dil nahi dhadkega 

Kisi ke liye or tum ko aisi saza miley rab
 
Ki tum bhi tadpo kisi ke pyar liye
 
Mein roti rahunghi teri bewafai ke liye
 
Tu bhi tadapna kisi ki wafa ke liye.

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