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Posted: 14 September 2009 at 6:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -simi-

beautiful!!! liz this is soo amazing i cant tell u how much!

you really have the ability to take something so small and really write a lot on it.. for ex, this story.. we dont know anything about this character's past, her present, or her future. we dont know where she is and what the 'pain' is thats being talked about.. we dont even know what this character is like, how old she is, and yet i could feel the emotion inside me, the rush of facing the fears and going ahead in life..
 
amazing one liz!  *bows down* LOL
 
OMG.
 
This is a MiRAAcle.! Shocked Sims...I mean SIMS has written out a LONG comment for the very first time in her life! Shocked *Faints* Simz, I'm so honoured to have been that person who recieved your very first long comment! Thankyou! Hug
 
hehe..Thanks simz! I'm glad you liked it..I was actually thinking that it might fall flat because of the vagueness..but i'm happy to know that it came across well Big smile thanks again! Big smile
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Posted: 14 September 2009 at 6:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ammygurl

nice one....
please continue writng like this and inspiring us...awww....so good.
the quotes taken were from classmate register? I think? hehehehe...
but it was good,....very nice....
Please keep writing.




Ananya
 
Thanks Ananya! Big smile
 
Hehe no..it wasn't from a classmate register, i googled it up LOL
 
Big smile

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Posted: 14 September 2009 at 7:49am | IP Logged
now i call this ...'
giving words to Ethics we are taught from our society !

well done.

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Posted: 14 September 2009 at 10:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by KashFanatic

very beautifully written -NEETZ- :)
i like how you slip into the past and then the present .. and also how you gave the story an optimistic ending !
like simi said we dont know where the girl is, how old she is or what her past, present and future is like  .. yet i still felt that emotion of uncertaintly and fear in me ..
i also love the quotes you used .. very apt and inspirational !
this one shot is amazing ! do write more stories like this =P
 
 
KASHFANATIC! Big smile
 
Thankyou so much! the best compliment i can get for this story is that the basic emotion of the story comes across well...Big smile
 
Thanks again! Embarrassed
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Posted: 15 September 2009 at 2:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by *Nishi*

.. yes tis very vague LOL but i like it.. it obviously has a lot of imprtance for you Big smile something only you and your best friend know about.. it was very nice Embarrassed
 
thanks alot! Big smile yup..it does have importance for me :D i hope you liked it! Smile
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Posted: 15 September 2009 at 7:34am | IP Logged
Wow Neeta! another of ur fabulous work!
 
just loved the way u wrote it! *claps*
 
Do write more yaar
 
-Aish

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Posted: 16 September 2009 at 12:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Steff_DMG

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That was a nice one Neeta, The emotions were expressed so beautifully, I just got into it so much, totally lost in itEmbarrassed i have seen you around in the FF section, damn, i dont get time to check outta your FFs though, may be sumtime i'll catch them, but if u do start a new FF, One shot, etc, PM meWink

-Steff

 
Hey Steff! Thanks alot Big smile 
 
Yeah, I do write FFs but let me warn you they're absolutely mush-less LOL I'm officially claiming that I'm incapable of writing mush lmfao.
 
Yeah, I shall PM you positively =D

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Posted: 16 September 2009 at 3:06am | IP Logged

Heya Lizi!!

Read this on the journal link you had earlier in your signature. Commented there too. Again telling you that was just superb. Emotions so perfectly described. Cheers!!!

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