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Mayur FF - MJHT GANG UDATED AT PG 31 (Page 7)

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wonerful dear.. aage kuch bhi soach looo cracked me.... lolzzzz..........   anyways wonderfully written...

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Good update n so romantic.
Sammy really did good job n Mayu took the advantage of the moment in a good way.
waiting 4 next part.

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too good yaar..!! Thumbs Up
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absolutely rockin!!!!n stunning too...kp writin dear...god bless ya...!! Clap Star
luv mayur always!!! luv mjht... Hug
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PART ' 4

 

(Nupur Mayank se hath chuda kar aise bhagti hai jaise ab sidhe morena jake hi rukegi. Wo jaise hi niche pahuchti hai hall me baki sab usse dekhte hai. Nupur apne room me jaane lagti hai to ')

S to N :- Morena Express itni speed se kahaan jaa rhi hai

N :- Ab morena express bol hi dia hai to speed to hogi hi na. Main room me jaa rhi hu

B :- Waise nupur agar tumhari mayank se baatein khtam ho gyi ho to hum se bhi baatein kar sakti ho. Abhi dosto se baatein karne me govt. ne tax nhi lagya hai (Everyone giggling) LOL

N to B :- Benji, Tumhe kya baatein karni hai mujh se Mujhe bhi to pta chale.

(itne me mayank bhi teriss se gunjan ki book le aata hai )

D to All :- Lo mayank bhi aa gya

N :- Main apne room me jaa rhi hu

U :- tum nhi jaa sakti.

N :- KYun???????

U  (confused) :- wo mujhe nhi pta. Per tum nhi jaa sakti. KYun nhi jaa sakti wo tumhe sammy batayega.Confused

D to N :- yeh tumhe sammy  nhi main bataungi.

(Dia nupur aur mayank ko sath me baithati hai. Mayank aur nupur ek dusre ko dekhte hai aur fir apne sare friends ko jo unki taraf hi dekh rhe hote hai. Both feels aaj to class lagne wali hai wo bhi solid wali. Per mayank hamesha se class me first aata hai. Per iss class k liye wo bhi taiyar nhi hai )

D to M,N:- wo isliye k tum logo ne abhi tak apni love story nhi batayi hai. Wo to humne pta kar lia warna tum log hume kabhi nhi batate. To ab to tumhe story starting se batani hogi.

N (uththe huye ):- main jaa rhi hu. Mujhe nind aayi hai.

D :- Nupur tum per yeh sharmana bilkul suit nhi Aur aaj tum dono me se kisi ko bhi aise hi jaane nhi dia jayega. Jab tak tum log hume sab kuch nhi bataoge. Sab kuch matlab sab kuch.

(Dia Nupur ko fir se mayank k sath bitha deti hai)

M to N (wishpiring ):- kaha tha na tum per yeh sharmana bilkul suit nhi karta. Aur kya lagta hai ye log aaj hume chodne k mud per me lag rhe hai. Yeh tumhari galatfehmi hai. Yahaan baithne me hi hamari bhalai hai''''

N to M :- mujhe bhi aisa hi lag rha hai.

B to M, N :- Koi pandit ko bulau kya.??????

M, N (shocked ) :- kya ShockedShocked ?????

B :- arre mujhe laga k tum log mahurat dekh kar batane ka decide kar rhe ho to socha k pandit ko bula kar mahurat nikalwa lia jaye. Waise chaho to aur bhi bahut se kaamo k liye pandit ko bula sakte hai. (everyone gigiling)LOL

(Mayank aur nupur ek dusre ko dekhte hai aur expression hai  k aaj to kaam se gye )

D :- guys tum log jitni derr karoge utni hi tumhe problem hogi. Kal hum sabko college bhi jaana hai. Aur aaj hum bina sune jayenge nhi.

(itne me gunjan sabke liye coffee le aati hai)

N to G :- gunjan tu bol na in sabko. Kal college bhi to jaana hai.

G to N :- di main kya bolu. Aur waise bhi mujhe bhi to pta chale tum log kab se sath me ho.

D to G :- kyaShocked?? Tumhe bhi pta tha.

D to M, N :- Ab to tumhe batana hi padega. Main aaj tum dono me se aise hi kisi ko jaane nhi dungi

B. U :- hum bhi nhi. Aaj to btana hi padega.

(mayank aur nupur k pass aur koi option nhi hota. Wo sari story batate hai. Ahemdabad trip se lekar play k last scene tak )

D :- what? Play to hum sabne bhi dekha tha per hume kyun nhi pta chala. Aur yeh baat tamanna mam ko bhi pta chal gyi thi aur per hume kyun nhi.

M :- wo syad isliye kyunki un dino tum rv k sath busy thi.

D (in sad voice ) :- syad haan. Kash wo person meri life me aaya hi nhi hota

N to D(try to cheer dia) :- Agar wo nhi aaya hota na to tum hamare sath syad aaj bhi nhi hoti aur tumhe aaj bhi humari story k bare me pta nhi chalta. Aur tum aaj hamari aise bitha kar class nhi le rhi hoti

D to N :- haan wo to hai. Tum logo k hote huye mujhe koi fikr nhi hai. Waise mujhe abhi tak yakeen nhi hota k mayank ne pehle purpose kia. Aur mayank ko pehle pyar hua. Mujhe to laga tha nupur ne hi sab kuch kia hoga.Smile

B :- waise wo purposal play me tha. aur in logo ne play ending k dialogue change kiye the. To hum logo ko pta kaise chalta. Kash main wo play ki ending dobra dekh pata. Ab zyada play enjoy kar pata. (Everyone giggling.)

S :- waise play ka end maine aur chishmish ne bhi nhi dekha tha. Isliye hume bhi baad me hi pta chala

(Mayank aur nupur ek dusre ko dekhte hai k yeh sab ho kya rha hai. Per dono kuch nhi kehte.)

D :- to matlab ham me se kisi ne bhi nhi dekha. To kyun na ab dekh le. Ab mayank nupur ko hum sab k samne purpose karega

Every one said yes.

M, N :- kya???????????ShockedShocked

N :- yeh mujh se nhi hoga.

D :- nupur sweet heart tumhe sirf haan karni hai. Tumhe kuch nhi karna hai. Jo karna hai mayank ne karna hai.

N :- mera matlab hai mayank se nhi hoga.

S :- kyun nhi hoga. Aur tumhe kaise pta k mayank se nhi hoga. Mayank jab pyar kar sakta hai. Tumhare liye balcony se aa sakta hai. To yeh bhi kar sakta hai Kyun mayank

M :- wo nupur sahi keh rhi hai. Hume ab play k dialogue yaad nhi hai. Isliye nupur ne bola

B :- tum aur kuch bhul gye not possible.Ya to tum bahane bana rhe ho. Ya fir nupur ne mana kar dia hai isliye keh rhe ho

M :- aisa kuch nhi hai.

S :- agar aisa kuch nhi hai. To fir karo na. Aur jab tum log play k dialogue modified kar sakte ho to ab bhi kar lena. Hume kaun sa same dialogue chahiye. Aur chaho to ek dusre ko mana karne k iss se achcha mauka dobra nhi milega (everyone giggling).

 

(Mayank aur nupur ek dusre ko dekhte hai. There is eyelock. )

S to both :- to mayank tum kar rhe ho.

(mayank nhi suntan. To samrat zor se bolta hai )

S :- mayankkkkk

M :- haannnnnn

S :- gud to tum kar rhe ho nupur ko hum sabke samne purpose.

M:- aisa maine kab kaha

S :- abhi tumne hum sabke samne kaha hai. Kyun guys.

Everyone said yes

M to himself :- aaj to hum dono achche fase hai. ab yeh bhi karo

 

 

TO BE CONTINUED''''''''''''..

PART 5 PG 10

 



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Wow wonderful dear so we are going to witness the proposal scene again thats mindblowing....

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