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Mayur FF - MJHT GANG UDATED AT PG 31 (Page 3)

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Posted: 11 September 2009 at 10:36am | IP Logged
very sweet n romantic one shot.....
mayu aur itna romantic....by god......
thanx for the pm...keep writing more...
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Posted: 11 September 2009 at 11:52am | IP Logged
thanx all for ur comments


waise mujhe iska ek aur part sujha hai woh bhi post karungi jald hi tab tak isse hi enjoy karo
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On the other hand out of the room

D to G :- Gunjan maine samrat aur benji ko dinner per bulaya hai.

G :- thik hai dia. Main kitchen dekh leti hu

D :- thanx dear. Maine mayank ko bhi phone kia tha per wo ghar per nhi tha. uski mom ne bataya wo bahar gya hai. Syad kisi se milne. Main nupur se puchti hu. Usse zarur pta hoga.

G (shocked ) :- Mayankkkkkk.

D :- haan. After all ab wo hmari sister k sath hai. Mujhe to yakin nhi ho rha mayank aur nupur sath me. Main abhi nupur se puchti hu.

(Gunjan dia ko rokte huye)

G :- tum di se abhi baat nhi kar sakti.

D :- kyun.

G :- Di abhi so rhi hai.

D (surprisingly) :- Bina dinner kiye. Usse kya hua. Main abhi dekhti hu

G :- Nhi. Dia tum nhi jaa sakti abhi room me.

D :- Gunjan dear. Kya chipa rhi ho. Kuch to gadbad hai. AngryTum mujhe room me kyun nhi jaane de rhi. Tum bta rhi ho. Ya main khud room me jau.

G :- wo dia. Mayank hai di k room me.

D (shocked ) :- kyaaa??? Per main to kab se hall me baithi hu. Wo to aya hi nhi.

G :- wo syad balcony se aaya.

D :- Mayank aur balcony se????? Shocked yeh mayank aur nupur hume daily surprise karte rahenge kya. Aaj main inhe surprise karungi.

(Dia uday ko awaz laga kar bulati hai )

D to U :- dodo. Tum Gunjan k sath yahaan hall me hi rahoge. Chahe kuch bhi ho jaye tum dono yahaan se nhi hiloge.

G to D :- tum kya karne wali ho

D to G :- kuch nhi dear. Bas tum dono yahaan rahoge. Aur Main aur nupur balcony me. Ab dekhti hu mayank kaise bachta hai. Na wo darwaje se bahar jaa sakta hai na hi balcony se. Aur sammy aur benji bhi aate hi honge.Wink

G to D :- Dia se thik nhi hai.

D to G :- aur jo mayank aur nupur ne kiya kya wo thik tha. Hum unke friends hai aur abhi tak hume yeh bhi nhi pta k unki love story kab start huyi.

(Gunjan aur uday bahar hall me. Aur dia jaan bhuj kar knock karke jaati hai but wrong movement per)

(nupur k room me )

N :- kaun si sweet dish

M :- Main tumhe sirf gud night kehne nhi aaya hu. Kuch aur bhi kehne aya hu.

(both r very close to each other. Itne pass k dono ko ek dusre ki dil ki dhadkane bhi sunayi de rhi hai)

N :- kyaaaa

M :- I love u.

N :- I love''(Interrupted by dia. She is knocking the door)

N :- Dia iss whqt. Mere room me. Mayank tum jao yahaan se.

M :- agar naa jau to.

N :- to Main door open kar rhi hu.

M :- wo to already open hai tumne kab close kia. Per dia knock kyun kar rhi hai.

N :- Manner kehte hai isse. Kisi k room me aane se pehle knock karna chahiye. Kisi k bhi room me bina puchne balcony se nhi aana chahiye. Ab jao

M :- itni derr me to dia ander aa jeygi.

N :- haan thik hai. Tum bathroom me chip jao. Main usse jaldi se bhej dungi. Fir tum chale jaana

D :- nupur main ander aa rhi hu.

(Mayank bathroom me chip jaata hai )

N :- haan dia.

D :- hey dear. Kya hua tum itni gabrayi huyi kyun ho.

N :- nhi to. Wo main so rhi thi.

D :- hmm. Achcha. Waise main mayank k bare me tum se puchne aayi thi

N :- mayankkkkkkk'. Shocked

D :- haan. Actual me maine sammy aur benji ko dinner per bulaya hai. Maine mayank ko bhi call kiya tha. Per wo ghar per nhi hai tumhe pta hai wo kahaan hai

N :- kaisi baatein kar rhi ho. Mujhe kya pta mayank kahaan hai

D :- to tumhe nhi pta.  

N :- nhi. Kyun pta hona chahiye tha kya. Dia chodo na yeh sab baatein chalo hum hall me baith kar baat karte hai.

D :- nhi dear. Tum so rhi thi na. to ab hum yahi baith kar baat karenge.

N :- per abhi main uth gyi hu. Aur thik bhi hu. Hum bahar chalte hai

D :- Nhi dear. Main nhi chahti k tum aur kuch karo. Hum yahi baithenge. Right

N :- right.

M to himself :- kahaan fas gya. Wow wo 3 magical words to face to face mujhe sun ne naseeb nhi hai. Ab nupur k bathroom me khud ko lock kar lia hai. Na balcony se bahar jaa sakta hu. Aur na hi sidhe raste se.

(Nupur aur dia last half hour se baatein kar rhe hai. Nupur sari koshishe kar leti hai. Per dia wahaan se nhi jaati. Aur mayank abhi tak bathroom me hai. Sammy aur benji bhi aa jate hai jinhe dia nupur k room me hi bula leti hai aur uday aur gunjan bhi sath me hai )

D to all :- ab main tumhe ek surprise deti hu.

S to D :- dia tumne hume dinner per bulaya hai ya surprise dene. Aur mayank kahaan hai.

N to all :- pta nhi. Wo ghar per nhi hai. Dia ki uski mom se baat huyi.

D to all :- Haan. Wo kisi se milne gaya hai per wo hamare sath dinner zarur karega.

B to D :- ek question hai. Jab usse pta hi nhi hai to dinner k liye wo kaise aayega.

D :- zarur aayega.

D (shouting) :- mayank tum bahar aa rhe ho. Ya hum sab friends ko milke tumhe dhudna padega.

N (surprisingly) :- to tumhe pta tha dia.

D :- haan dear. Per tum log itne surprises dete ho. To socha tumhe bhi sataya jaye.

D (shouting) :- mayank tum aa rhe ho ya hide & seek khelne ka iraada hai.

(As usual mayank k pass koi aur option nhi hai wo bahar aa jata hai Mayank & nupur feels embrassed Embarrassed)

S to all :- aaj tak to main hi balcony se aaya hu. Aaj mayank ne bhi iska use kia. Per wo pakda gaya. Main kabhi nhi.

D (surprisingly ) :- tum bhi balcony se aaye ho. Huh. Mujhe to pta hi nhi tha.

S to D :- mujhe chodo yeh socho. K aaj to chamtkar ho gya. K mayank sharma cheating karte huye pakda gya.

M to all :- lagta hai mujhe chalna chahiye. Main chalta hu.

(Mayank balcony ki taraf jane lagta hai )

S to M :- mayank chaho to door ka use kar sakte ho. Waise agar tumhari balcony se jaane ka mann hai to koi baat nhi

(Mayank feels oh shit. Aur wo door ki tarah jaane lagta hai.)

D to M :- Mayank waise maine tumhare ghar tumhe dinner per invite karne k liye call kiya tha. Ab tum nupur se to mil hi chuke ho. Dinner kar k jaana. Ya fir''(interrupted by benji )

B to M :- Ya fir nupur ki pyari pyari aur dher sari baatein sun ne baad tumhe bhuk nhi hai.

M to all :- aisa kuch nhi hai.

S to M :- agar aisa kuch nhi hai. To dinner karke jaana. Aur agar tum chahoge to hum tumhe dinner k baad nupur bhushan k sath akela chod denge. Per tumhe dinner hmare sath hi karna hoga.

M to all :- guys aisa kuch nhi hai. Aur main dinner kar rha hu''.

 

(Itna mayank ko kabhi syad hi tease kiya gaya ho''.. abhi tak yeh hi dimag me aaya. I know sabko umeed thi k yeh part romantic hoga. Per thoda sa alag hai'' agar aage kuch sujha to zarur likhungi )


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Posted: 11 September 2009 at 1:28pm | IP Logged
omg i feel so embarrassed for mayur!!
poor them but i loved the teasing!
wonderful work
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Great part!!!
Thanks for thePM..
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u cracked me a lot.. i was ROFLing after readin this part.. u rocked dear....   
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so sweet annu... Smile i got 2 knw about is ff of urs frm orkut mjht community..realy u write very nice..kp writing more such 1 shots.. Thumbs Up tk cr...
luv mayur always!!! luv mjht... Hug
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