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not fair.....i want an update!

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part 12

(girls kitchen ki halat sabse pehle sudharti hai.. uske baad sab milkar khana banana start karti hai.. as dia ne aaj se pehle kabhi kitchen me pair bhi nhi rakha hota to gunjan uski help karti hai kheer banane me)

SU : hum log kya banane wale hai?????
D : I think cheez banana chahiye
N (shouting) : nhiiiiiiiii
G : di aaram se.. pr tumhe to paneer psnd hai naa?? fir kyun mana kar rhi ho....
N (dusri taraf dekhte huye) Wo actual me mayank ko paneer bilkul nhi psnd..
All girls said together : oh ohhhhhhhhh
N : haan... mayank ko paneer bilkul nhi psnd.... waise dia paneer to tumhe bhi kuch khas psnd hai.... fir tumhe kyun bola???? tumhara kya chakker hai ye bhi to pta chale...(dia k shoulder pr hath rakhte huye)
D (Nupur ki taraf dekhte huye) : aisa kuch nhi hai... bas main to isliye keh rhi thi k kal maine benji ko kehte huye suna k uska paneer khane ka mann hai.. pr baad me wo uday ka jaa nhi paaya... bas isliye suggestion dia tha..
Su, N, G : Shocked Shocked Benji... Ohhhhhhhhh
D (with fake anger) : Kya ohhhhhh.... aur waise bhi maine kabhi cheez khane se mana nhi kia...
G : pr  kabhi tumne kaha bhi to nhi hai..
D : ab kaha to kaun sa tum log agree ho gye
N : oh hhh.. chalo thik hai aaj hum cheez hi banayenge...aur rahi baat mayank ki to uske liye hum kuch aur bana skte hai..
Su : to chalo.. ab kaam start karte hai..
D : Kafi bhuk bhi lagi hai
G : aur aaj to dia waise bhi special kuch banane wali hai...to chalo kaam karte hai...

(on the other hand boys)
S : Kya guys.. hum girls k liye ek whqt ka khana nhi bna paaye... sari zindagi unhe khus rakhne k wade karte hai
U (confused) : by the way samrat girls kya khana banane se khus hoti hai.. fir to jitne bhi cooks hai.. unki kafi sari girlfriends hoti hongi naa?????
B : uday mere bhai girls khana banane se nhi... commitment nibhane se khus hoti hai... humne aunty se wada kiya tha k hum khana banayenge.. pr hamari halat dekh kar girls ne khud hi khana banane ka faisla kar lia
A : haan.. aur iss se girls pr hamara ye impression gya k hum sirf baato k sher hai.. unke liye hum ek whqt ka khana banane k kabil bhi nhi hai
M : to fir hume kuch aisa karna chahiye..k girls ko lage k hum unki care karte hai.. hume unki parwah hai
S : u r right mayank.. pr kya karna chahiye. bcoz wo log lunch to bana hi rhi hai... to aur kya kare
M : hum log girls k liye kuch gifts lekar aate hai.. bcoz sari girls k hatho ka hum pehli baar khana khayenge... to kuch dena to banta hai naa...
A : gud idea... like jaise shadi k baad jab ladki pehli baar sasural me khana banati hai to usse kuch dene ka riwaz hai
M (with fake smile) : ye kuch zyada ho gya.... aur waise bhi ladki sasural me sabse pehle sweet dish banati hai...
S : kuch bhi ho.. jab tak girls khana banati hai.. hume unke liye gift lene jaana chahiye..
(sare boys girls ko bina bataye surprise gift lene chale jaate hai.. aur kitchen me girls khana banate huye baat kar rhi hai)

N : ye ladke bhi naa... aunty ko to haan keh di.. pr khana banana inke bas ki baat nhi hai..
Su : sahi kaha nupur.... fir bhi becharo ne koshish to ki thi
D : koshish to ki thi.. pr khana banane ki nhi.. kitchen ki shakal bigadane ki
G : haan.. jab hum aaye the to kitchen ki halaat kitni buri thi...

(kuch derr baad boys girls k liye gift lekar aate hai, pr unhe chupa dete hai, idhar girls ka khana  bhi ready ho jata hai.. aur dia ki kheer bhi.. nuput boys ko bulane mayank k room me jati hai... )

N to boys : chalo khana kha lo... khana lag chuka hai... kafi derr ho gyi hai, waise tum log hume kitchen me lga kar gye kahaan the????????? (interrupted by mayank)
M : bas nupur.. bich me saans bhi le lia karo... kisi din aise bolte bolte saans lena bhul jaogi...
N : (with anger) : haan tum to yahi chahoge naa.. k main saans lena bhul jau aur maar jau ....jis se tumhe mujh se chutkara mile
(mayank khada hota hai aur nupur ki aankhon me aankhen daalte huye ek step nupur ki taraf badhate huye kehta hai)
M (with high tone) : Kya kaha tumne.. k main????
N (with a very slow tone) : k tum mujhse chukara chahte ho..
(nupur apna balance kho deti hai... to mayank usse girne se bachta hai then their is eyelock)
M : to tumhe aisa lagta hai..
N : nhiiiiiiiii... wo to main bassss
M : tum to kya????
N : mayank chodo mujhe???
M : nhi chodu to....
N : wo mayank sab dekh rhe hai
M : dekhne do
N : khana thanda ho rha hai
M : hone do...
N : tum sab k liye dia ne kheer banayi hai...
Boys : Shocked Shocked Shocked kya???????
(all boys are shocked.. k dia ne kitchen me kuch banaya hai... aur ye sunte hi mayank nupur ko chod deta hai.. aur nupur cute se expression k sath haan me sir hila deti hai)
S : tumhe pta hai nupur tum kya bol rhi ho...Shocked Shocked
N : haan...
U : syad tumhe koi galatfehmi huyi hai...dids aur kitchen me???
A : impossible....
N : to main kya jhut bolungi
M : Haan ye bhi hai.. Pr dia aur kitchen dono sath me????/ ye baat kuch hajam nhi ho rhi...
N : to chalo lunch kar lo.. tumhe khud hi pta chal jayega...
(sabhi lunch karne k liye room se dinning table pr aa jaate hai.. girls bhi wahi hai.. sab lunch start karte hai)
M to N : nupur tum kuch keh rhi thi room me????
N : main?????/ Kya???????
S : yahi k aaj dia ne kuch special kia hai
N : haan to wo bta dia naa maine.. aur kya batana hai (tabhi mayank ek dish ki taraf hath badhta hai)
N to M : mayank usse rehne do.. wo paneer hai.. tumhe nhi psnd.... tumhare liye ye palak banai hai...
boys : ohhhhhhh... palak ki sabzi.........
N to boys (with anger look) : kya ohhhhhhh.... tum log paneer khao naa.....aur benji tum?????
B : haan.. maine kya kiya..
N (with her cute smile) : tumhe paneer psnd hai naa.. to tum paneer khao naa..
U : kya baat hai nupur... tumhe sabki psnd k bare me pta hai..
G : waise to di ko sab pta hota hai.. pr di ko sirf mayank ki psnd ka pta hai.. ye to dia ne bataya k benji ko paneer psnd hai
Boys : Shocked Shocked dia ne?????? Shocked Shocked
D : Isme itna shocked hone wali kaun si baat hai guys????
U : well excuse me dids... tum ye btaogi k ye ho kya rha hai...
D : Kya???????
A : pehle tumhara kheer banana??????? aur ab ye benji ko kya psnd hai kya nhi???etc... etc....
D : guys.. kal maine benji ko dodo se baat karte huye suna.. isliye mujhe pta hai.. aur koi baat nhi hai...
B : ohhhhhh... mujhe lga........
S to B : kya lga tujhe?????
M to B : hume bhi to pta chale.. k benji ko kuch lagta bhi hai
B to D : kuch nhi... dia tumne kheer banai hai naa.. to main lunch finish kar chuka hu.. to kya mujhe kheer milegi?????
D : yes ofcourse.. tumhare liye hi to.....(baat ko sambhalte huye) tum sab k liye hi to banayi hai.......(dia benji ko kheer serve karti hai.. Benji jaise hi 1st spoon khata hai.. dia k mann me jaan ne ki ichcha hoti hai k kheer kaisi bani hai )
B to all : kheer mithi hoti hai naa????????
N : kyun????? tumne kabhi namkeen kheer bhi khai hai kya????
B : nhi bas aise hi time pass kar rha tha
D to B : benji abhi tak kisi ne kheer ko taste bhi nhi kia hai.. aur main bhi taste karna bhul gyi.. to tumne taste ki hai to btao naa kaisi bani hai...
B : Dia tumne ye pehli baar banayi hai naa????????
D : haan... kyun achchi nhi bani kya?????
B : nhi.. bahut achchi bani hai...even itni achchi bani hai k mera irada puri ki puri kheer finish karne ka hai
D : tum sach keh rhe ho
B : lo bhala main tumse jhut kyun bolunga
(dia khus ho jati hai... boys jaldi se khana finish karte hai.. aur jab sab boys kheer taste karte hai to realised karte hai k kheer mithi nhi namkin hai.. pr dia k face ko dekh kar wo log aankhon aankhon me decide kar lete hai k girls ko kheer nhi milni chahiye.. taki unhe kuch naa pta chal sake)

N to M : kya hua mayank.. kheer psnd nhi aayi kya tumhe
S : nhi nhi.. kheer to bahut achchi hai..aur dia ne banayi hai wo bhi hamare liye to psnd kaise nhi aayegi
A : haan.. aur ye hamare liye bani hai to hum log iss tum girls ko nhi dene wale
Su : how mean.. dia ne pehli baar kuch banaya hai.. aur tum hume hi taste karne ko nhi doge.
G : aisa nhi chalega..
(tabhi uday kheer ka bartan utha lena hai.. )
U : meri dids se kheer banayi hai.. wo bhi pehli baar... to isliye iss pr  mera haq hai.. ye dids ko bhi nhi milegi..
(boys milkar kheer khatam kar lete hai.. iss tarah se girls ko pta hi nhi chalta k kheer me sugar ki jagah namak tha.. but iss baat se girls naraaz ho jati hai..boys ko pta hai k girls naraaz hai.. pr iss situation me wo kr bhi kya skte hai..)
M to N : nupur baat to suno..
N : kya hai mayank... tumhari jo marzi aaye karo.. ek to tum logo ne aunty ko promise kia tha..  k tum log lunch banaoge.. aur jab humne banaya to hamare liye kuch bhi nhi choda..
S : let me correct.. kuch bhi nhi.. sirf kheer hi to nhi mili.. tum log dobra bana lo
G : samrat ye mazak ki baat nhi hai.. dia ne pehli baar kitchen me kuch banaya tha.. itne mann se.. aur hum girls ko to taste karne ko hi nhi mila..
A : to kya hua... dia se dobra banwa lo...
U (busy in eating an apple): haan.. aur iss bar di dyan se kheer me sugar hi dalna salt nhi...
Girls : Shocked Shocked kya?????/
boys : oh shit,,, Angry Angry
B : tu naa khane pr dhayan rakha kar bola mat kar.. jab bhi bolta hai poll khol deta hai.... Angry Angry Angry
Su : kheer me chini ki jagah namak tha...
A : haan .. isliye.....(interrupted by mayank)
M : isliye hum log nhi chahte the k tum logo ko pta chale
Dia feels bad k uss se galati kaise ho gyi same time she feels gud also becoz uske frds itne achche hai

D to all : I'm sorry guys.. ye maine jaan bujh kar nhi kia..
B to D : hum sabko pta hai.. ek to waise hi tumne pehli baar kitchen me koi kaam kia hai galtia to sabse hoti hai...
M : haan har insan perfect banke nhi aata.. koshish karne se hi kamyab hota hai..
S : iss baar tumne kheer me salt dala hai next time sugar daal dena.. isme itna upset hone ki kya baat hai...
(but Dia bad feel kar rhi hai.. isliye wo sofe pr sar jhuka kar baithi hai.. sabko ye baat achchi nhi lagti)
B to D : waise dia itni bhi buri nhi thi.. k tum apna face jhuka kar baith jao.. agar itni buri hoti to hum log kha paate kya?????
B to boys : kyun guys????
Boys : yes..
U: itni bhi buri nhi thi...bas sugar ki jagah salt ho gya tha.. baki sab thik tha
B : dekho uday bol rha hai.. jo hum sab me se sabse zyada khata hai.. iska matlab sach me itni buri nhi thi...aur mere pass tumhare liye kuch hai
D : kya??????
(benji dia k liye jo gift laaya hota hai wo usse deta hai.. ye ek simple chain necklecs hai.. sare boys shocked hai.. bcoz benji ne ye gift kab purchase kia kisi ko nhi pta...jabki benji un sabke sath tha)
D to B : thanx dear...Hug
(sabhi boys ko yaad aata hai k wo girls k liye gifts laaye hai.. to mayank nupur ko, samrat gunjan ko aur adhiraj suhani ko gift deta hai.. aur uday bhi dia k liye gift laaya hai... tabhi)
S to all : hum boys ko kuch baat karni hai.. akele me
(sare boys mayank k room me chale jaate hai aur room ko ander se lock kar lete hai aur benji ko pakad lete hai)
S to B : ye kya chal rha hai
B : kya kya?????
U : yahi k tum aur di.. kab se chal rha hai tum dono ko
B : tumhari dimag kharab ho gya hai kya.???? kahaan dia....(with dreamy eyes) aur kahaan main (with sad tone)
M : to fir ye gift?????
B : guys... dekho mayank ne nupur k liye, samrat ne gunjan k liye, raj ne suhani k liye gift lia.. to mujhe lga k dia akela feel karegi...k uske liye koi gift nhi laaya..
U : wo meri di hai to main uska khayal rakhunga..
S : aur uday ne hamare saamne dia k liye gift lia tha
B : haan.. haan.... wo wo.. main ... main naa.....
M : kya haan wo main... saaf saaf batao...
B : guys mujhe kuch kaam yaad aaya, mujhe jaana hai
S : kaun saa kaam???
B : wo main baad me btaunga.. ab main jaa rha hu
(then benji wahaan se nikal jaata hai..pr uske jaate hi sare boys ek dusre ko smile karte hai)
M : ye karta ho hai........
S : haan pr kehne se darta hai
A : pr wo kya sochti hai ye bhi to nhi jaanta....
U : to hume pta karna chahiye... aur iski help karni chahiye..
M : right.....
U : pr waise hum kis bare me baat kar rhe hai


TO BE CONT.....

PART 13 - PG 31



Edited by Annudsweetgirl - 19 January 2011 at 4:26am

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Posted: 24 August 2010 at 6:55am | IP Logged
nice, lovely part. too good.loved it.

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Posted: 24 August 2010 at 7:37am | IP Logged
thats really sweet loved the mayur n benia bits v much!!

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Posted: 24 August 2010 at 8:20am | IP Logged
nice update
cont soon

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Posted: 24 August 2010 at 9:48am | IP Logged
lovely updte anu
i enjoyed the whole gang scene
beautiful update
keep updating

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Nice on..........
Continue soon................

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gr8 update

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By -Ravjot-
a mjht gang scene...

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luv_AnYaSGKaSh 109 10344 22 May 2010 at 9:58am
By -CreativeSoul-
mil gaye hum tum{mjht gang}

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ashmika328 10 1767 07 May 2010 at 8:26pm
By sweetMonayaSanu
ff jaane tu ya jaane na mayur n mjht gang

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