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Mayur FF - MJHT GANG UDATED AT PG 31

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Posted: 10 September 2009 at 12:43pm | IP Logged

(Mayank aur nupur k bare me puri gang ko pta chal chukka hai. Nupur ghar per hai. )

 

N :- Mayannnnk tummmmmmmm room kya kar rhe ho. Aur Yahaan aaye kaise.

M :- Na pani pucha. Na welcome kiya. Swal per swal kiye jaa rhi ho.

N :- Pehle tum yeh batao tum mere room me kar kya rhe ho aur yahaan aaye kaise. Aur kisi ne tumhe dekh lia to' Hey bhagwan'

M :- Mujhe kisi ne nhi dekha hai. Main balcony se aaya hu.

N :_ kya zarurat thi balcony se aane ki. Agar kuch ho jaata to.

M :- per hua to nhi. Badi chinta hai meri

N :- tumhari nhi. Pipe ki. Agar kuch ho gya to

M :- pakka na. tumhe pipe ki hi chinta hai. Meri nahi'..

(now mayank one step forward, nupur one step backward. There is eyelock)

N :- mayank koi aa gya to.

M :- aane do. Ab to sabko pta hai hamare bare me.

N :- kisi se dekh lia to.

M :- dekhne do. Wo khud dekhna band kar dega.

N :- agar chacha ji ko pta chal gya to

(now mayank very closer to nupur)

M :- ek din to unhe bhi pta chalna hi hai. Aaj kyun nhi.

N :- chacha jiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

(Mayank ko lagta hai sach me nupur k chacha ji room me aa gye hai aur wo pakde gye hai. Wo ekdum se piche hat jaata hai. Yeh dekh kar nupur hasna start kar deti hai)

N :- by god mayank. Abhi to keh rhe the kabhi to pta chalna hai unhe. Aaj hi kyun nhi. Aur unka naam sun k kitna darr gye ho tum. Dekho apni shakal

M :- Dekho nupur. Tum hasna band karo. Main dara nhi tha

N :- main dara nhi tha. Shakal dekho apni. Saaf saaf darr nazar aa rha hai.

M :- haan. Thoda sa to darr gya tha. per yeh kya mazak hua. Aise koi mazak karta hai kya.

N :- to fir kaisa mazak karte hai. Mazak karne k liye bhi koi terms & conditions apply hote hai kya.

(again mayank one step forward, nupur one step backward. There is eyelock)

M :- wo bhi btana padega k apne boy friend se aisa mazak nhi karte.

N :- wo to main bas aise hi

M :- Main bas aise hi kya. Tumhe kaha aur main darr gya.

N :- nhi main to hi tumhe test kar rhi thi

M :- aur tumne socha k main fail ho gya.

N :- haan'.. mera matlab hai nhi.

M :- Tumhe pta hai tum kya bol rhi ho.

N :- Nhi. Mera matlab hai haan.

M :- fir se'''

(both are closer to each other )

N :- gunjan..

M :- tumhe kya lagta hai tumhari ek hi trick 2 baar kam karegi.

N :- nhi sach me.

(Gunjan dono ko dekhti hai. Wo thodi embrassed feel karti hai'Embarrassed)

G :- sach me mayank main hu.

(gunjan ki awaz sun kar mayank piche hat jaata hai. Gunjan mayank ko nupur k sath khada kar deti haiEmbarrassedEmbarrassed)

G :- Mujhe pta nhi tha mayank tum aaye ho. Warna main knock kar ke aati. Aur waise bhi ab to tumhe kisi se chipane ki zarurat bhi nhi hai. Main jaa rhi hu. Tum continue kar sakte ho apna last scene.

G (jaate huye) :- aur main dyan rakhungi k room me koi naa aaye''.Smile

(gunjan chali jaati hai )

M :- tum bta nhi sakti thi k gunjan aayi hai

N :- maine tumhe kaha tha.

M :- haan. Waise wo sahi keh kar gyi hai k ab hume chipane ki zarurat bhi nhi hai

N :- matlab.

M :- matlab yahi k hum apna scence continue kar sakte hai.

N :-  Iss baar bhi koi aa gya to

(again mayank one step forward, nupur one step backward. There is eyelock)

M :- nhi aayega

N :- per fir bhi koi aa gya to

M :- gunjan hai na bahar..

N :- per agar wo bhul gyi to

M :- nhi bhulegi. Mujhe pta hai

N :- to tum kya karne aaye the

M :- wo main tumhe gud night kehne aaya tha

N :- wo to tum phone per hi keh sakte the

M :- Haan. Per fir main tumhare itne kareeb nhi hota. (both are very close to each other)

N :- ab to gud night bol dia ab

M :- ab  hamari sweet dish.

 

(ab baki ka scene khud soch lo. Gunjan bahar hai. Room me koi aur aa nhi sakta. Mayank aur nupur me akele hai'''..)



part -1 pg-1

part 2 pg 3

part 3 pg 5

part 4 pg 8

part 5 pg 10

part 6 pg 13

part 7 pg 16

part 8 pg 19

Part 9 pg 21

Part 10 pg 23

part 11 pg 26

PART 12 PG 29

PART 13 PG 31

 



Edited by Annudsweetgirl - 19 January 2011 at 4:27am

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Posted: 10 September 2009 at 2:12pm | IP Logged
Nice Shot!!
Thanks for the PM......


Edited by Radhika Shah - 10 September 2009 at 2:13pm
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Posted: 10 September 2009 at 3:14pm | IP Logged
very romantic n sweet os

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Posted: 10 September 2009 at 5:28pm | IP Logged

Gosh gal.. this is really te best...

 
u stooped it wen it reached te peak of passion.. not gud haah..
 
par very good one..
 
keep writing more and plzz add me to ur PM list so tat i can keep a track of watz going on.... plz
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Posted: 10 September 2009 at 7:13pm | IP Logged
wow
just awesome yaar
koi aa jayga
well write more and thx for pm

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Posted: 10 September 2009 at 8:00pm | IP Logged
vryyyyyy nice oneshot........thnxxx a loot for d pm.......keep writin moreeeee......Big smile
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nice one shot. loved it.
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Hi annu.
good shot.
keep it up
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