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Betrayed By Life: THE DEAL:UPDATE PG 65 (Page 7)

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Posted: 10 September 2009 at 1:53pm | IP Logged
Oh...interesting intro. U portrayed Angad's state of mind really well. Gud to knw abt the past history n I must say I liked the first bit b4 the song. Pls continue soon.
NYPunjabii Senior Member
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Posted: 10 September 2009 at 1:55pm | IP Logged
OMG! Kripa committed sucide. Angad is sooo sad.
Take them out of their misery
Continue sooooooooon
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Posted: 10 September 2009 at 2:12pm | IP Logged
nice part
really emotional one
good update
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Posted: 10 September 2009 at 5:47pm | IP Logged

Aww how sad!! Kripa is dead?! Oh no! Poor Angad, he feels so guilty but still hasnt realized he loves her. Abhi...i want to kno more but i guess i have to be patient. LOL.

Angad should not have tryed to avenge his family's death through Kripa just becuase she belonged to the family that killed his family. Oh well, whateve has to happen, happens. Hopefully Kripa will appear once again, magically; if its not posssible. LOL. Update soon and PM me adi! Live.Laugh.Love, ~Jot~
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Posted: 10 September 2009 at 6:00pm | IP Logged
wow.. nice concept.. and very different

update soon
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Posted: 10 September 2009 at 8:56pm | IP Logged
oh woow! so sad n dramatic cont soon n thnx!
 
 
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Posted: 10 September 2009 at 9:38pm | IP Logged
Wow.. Great update...
Kirpa is dead. Nooo... Feel so sad... I guess she will be alive.. Mayb lost her memory or sth.. Cant wait...
Angad wanted to take revenge, but still i feel sad foa him nao..
N he still havent realize he realli loves her...
Aww continue soonn...
N thx foa the pm...........
 
pinky901 Goldie
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Posted: 11 September 2009 at 12:07am | IP Logged
grt start dear
pls cont soon.thank u
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