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            Angad is abt to go & hug her but Kripa stops him with the wave of her hand… breaking his heart…

A: how come u r alive… u jumped to the middle of the sea & never ever have u been swimming.

M: how sad to see Kripa alive Angad is'nt it… may be becoz now u can't have her money or her properties???

Angad gives her a "get lost" look while Shabd holds her hand.

SH: honey maintain ur cool… harsh words & a hot mind will not get us any where… it is not our place to interfere… let them sort this matter on their own.

            Mahi is abt to back ans him but Kripa's eyes tell her what she wants & she decides not to interfere.

A: I'm still waiting for ur ans…

            Kripa tells him everything… from the time she got the call from Kashish till the time she reached USA.

K: Angad, I have a daughter.

            Angad is shocked to hear that… the 1st thing that crosses his mind is that Kripa met some1 & got married & has a child with him…

K: (takes a deep breath) what I meant to say is that WE have a daughter… even though she has never seen u she is quite like u.

            Angad gets up from his seat & holds Kripa's hand tightly.

A: y the hell u never me???? Y did u keep my daughter away from me???

K: so that I can give her a better future… wht future could u give her?? Wht would u teach her??? How to lie??? How to cheat??? How to double cross every1 around u?? Sorry Angad… but I believe my daughter deserved better than that… I believe that my daughter deserved all the love in the world… the thing that me & my family were able to provide her over here…

A: then wht do u want from me now…

K: Sneha, our daughter… she was detected with bone marrow cancer last week… we have to replace her bone marrow at the earliest. Every1 in the family has tested for it… none of them have matched.

A: u can check for me…

K: Arman & Shabd spiked u & got it done… its –ve…

A: how & when???

K: it's not important… the only thing important now is Sneha

A: how can we save her…

K: the docs tell that the only way to save her now will be if she could get the bone marrow of her sibling… which is not there right now… none of us… as per my knowledge has any other children…

A: so we have to have a baby… to save Sneha…

K: nothing physical… we will go for artificial insumation…

A: if u have decided everything what do u want from me???

K: the deal is u give us ur semen & v give u ur freedom with ur record completely clean.

A: but I don't want that… I want my life with my family… i.e. with my daughter & my wife…

K: u will never be able to take me as ur wife… I don't want to ever give that part of my life to any1… especially u…

A: & then I can't help u…

K: u will b welcome to see our children but u will never have any relation with me… I can't give that to u Angad. It is the only thing I can offer u.

A: I will accept this (in his mind- till the time I make u realize that I really fell in love with u).

K: fine. U will b set free tom Morning. U r free to go any where after u give us what v need.

A: don't worry… I'm coming home… to be with my family.

K: no Angad… only with my daughter… I will never be part of it…

A: v shall see.

hey guys,
sorry i have been missing for such a long time... may b i will b back on track soon...
so here's the next part...hope u enjoyed it.
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Posted: 22 November 2011 at 12:26pm | IP Logged

O H M Y G O D! ! ! !  You updated!!!! You have N O idea how long I have been waiting. Will read it later on in night. Thank you so so so so much Hug

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nice update




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welcome back...
update was very good
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thnx 4 pm.grt update.

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