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Posted: 10 September 2009 at 11:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jyothi_cool

cool intro thanks cont soon

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Originally posted by j44a

Hey Adi..hey
 
Congrats on the new fick.. =) thanks
Love the intro n character sketch ... thanks
Seems realli interesting.. hope so
Update soon... i will
N pls pm me wen u update... thx..will
 
Love Jess...

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Originally posted by vruls

thanks for the pm  u r welcome
i really liked the character skecht thanks
the concept sound cool thanks again
so
pls ad me to ur pm list of this ff  ok
thanks
Love Sanam

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Posted: 10 September 2009 at 11:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by spvd

hey adi dear hey............great awesome intro thanks................kripa n mahi r alike............or am i mistaking it? they r 2 different people with same face... n kripa is a divorcee of angad? i will disclose in the coming part wonder what went wrong............. n its good sujal n kashish r married but y kashish is insecure yep...............very nice n PM me dear..............cont soon with the first part dear i will.......good luck................. i need it

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Originally posted by golu_1677

waiting pls cont i will

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Originally posted by sameira-90

hey great intro..thanks
cntinue soon... i will
Plzz add me to ur pm list.. ok

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Posted: 10 September 2009 at 11:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aanchal_c

nice............thanks plz include me in ur pm list.

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Originally posted by pinky901

hi dear hey
thank uuuuuuuuuu so much for starting new fic having my fav couple s-k u r welcome
i 'm really excited to see s-k in this new avtar.
i  really want to know abt the s-k relationship n the insecurities of our very own sweet kashish. will tell u shortly
eagerly waiting to see lots of romance b/w s-k in ur fic . will try
 
it seems really exciting as krips has 2 roles with angad n shabd resp. true
 
all characters are jus superb n this fic is surely rocks thanks
pls do contttttttttttttttttttt so sooooooooooooooon
luking fwd for the strt.
thank u so so very much
bi n tc

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Originally posted by NYPunjabii

Angad Khanna widower to Kripa? yep But she is alive..isn't she? And tooooo many characters. I hope I can get a grasp on them will try 2 keep them simple
Anyways
Continue Sooon

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Posted: 10 September 2009 at 11:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nisha1984

nice intro thanks
waiting for next part i will try 2 do it soon

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Originally posted by chahatmalhotra

hey nice fanfic update soon.......... i will

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Originally posted by monikaseth

Thank You Very Much Dear For Pm ....  u r welcome Awesome Intro thanks... aww Ak Separated  so sad yep ... Add Me To Pm List Please.  i will

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Posted: 10 September 2009 at 11:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by adi_gupta

hey adi your ff is very intersting thanks
well i want to read it more so soon update i will
and sure pm me ok

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Originally posted by SaziArmaan

ooo sounds reli interesting... thanks
nice character sketch!thanks again
plzzz do cont. soon!will try
nd do pm me if possible!
 
 
Luv SAZ!Big smile

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Originally posted by twinkle94

cont soon!

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Posted: 10 September 2009 at 11:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sun_423

adi the intro was very interesting thanks..i'am very curious to read the fanfic...i hope not to dissapoint u a cool start..please do continue soon..Smile i will

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Originally posted by Angad-Kripa#1

Hey Adi!! That sounds really interesting!!thanks So Kripa and Angad were married but now are divorced??may b Armaan and Ridhima arent gf-bf??no... right now they hate each other Anways update soon and please PM me. ~Jot~

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Originally posted by x!reema!x

Hey it seemz really interesting!!thanks
do cont. soon and pm me!i i will

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Posted: 10 September 2009 at 11:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by angel_1692

wow loved it. ...............thanks
continue soon... i will
add me to you PM list....i ok







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Originally posted by ak lover

hey dear thnkx for the PM. u r welcome nice intro but u have written Kripa wife of Angad and Angad widower of Kripa? lol i cudn't understand this Confused. fick will tell
plz add me in ur pm list Smile. ok

love anamika

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Originally posted by Anam Ali

Sounds Interesting thanks

Gr8 Concept thanks
 
Cont Soon i will

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Din aur raat dharti aur assaman'. Ek duje bin sam adhure hai'.

No din ruika hai raat ke liyer na dharti asman ke liye'

Yeh hawaie' yeh nazare' sab mein chupha hai pyaar'

Sirf kissa kahaniyo mein hota hai yeh pyaar'

Pyaar mein to haar ke bhi jeet hai'

Matlab nikalne ka sabba hai'

Jo dubta hai vahi paar hota hai'

 

Andekhi anjaani, kya yeh mohabbat hai...
Chupke se milte dilon ki yeh aahat hai...
Kyun pyar ke sab diwaane?
Jo kho gayaa, woh hi jaane...

 

Baatein kitaabon ki...
Raatein hain khwaabon ki...
Har khwaab izhaar hai...

 

Kaisa yeh pyar hai...
Kaisa yeh pyar hai...

 

Kya pyar, kya ishq'
Kaisi yeh chaahat hai'
Bekaar naakaam logon ki aadat hai'

 

Yeh do dilon ki sadaa hai'
Khaamoshiyon ki zubaan hai'
Hai khel, sauda hai'
janmon ka waada hai'
Har dil ka armaan hai'

 

Kaisa yeh pyar hai
Kaisa yeh pyaar hai

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            Angad woke up with a start' same dream' it had been 5 years & still this dream never left him' it had been 5 years since she had been dead' her body wasn't found but there was no way Kripa could have survived' she was no swimmer' & they were in the middle of the sea' he knew it was his fault' he had pushed all this to the extreme' he didn't value her life' knowing she belonged to him' was his wife' who loved him truly' she was innocent & yet very beautiful' he had known it when he had seen her for the 1st time'

He closed his eyes aging thinking of the time when he had 1st seen her' it was on the day of their marriage' she was looking gorgeous' even when they were living in the 21st century India' he being an orphan' rich orphan' he didn't want to see her' becoz he wanted to destroy her' as his family was destroyed by her family'

She had walked down the aisle looking like an angel' all eyes were on her only' but she looked a little bit nervous'

 

            But yet she was his source of life' once he looked at her he thought of her & nothing else' it was only when Abhi kicked him in the back that he realized that the basis of this marriage was destruction & not love' yet he had fallen in love with her that instant' but never realized it' not even after her death' 5years ago' & he knew that he was the reason of her untimely death & not Abhi'

            Abhi was doing just what Angad had told him to do' Kripa had fallen of the cruise in order to escape Abhi' the police stated in their records that it was an accidental death hence no1 was arrested' but Angad knew it was not so' he was responsible for his wife's death'

            The strangest thing was' even she had come to know the reason of their marriage before her death & had left him a letter along with the divorce papers which she had managed to sing & taken his signs also without his knowledge' stating that she knew the reason for this marriage & she is giving him a divorce & she had given all her property to him' stating that he wanted that only' so it was his & now she was committing a suicide'  she knew what he had planned on the cruise' & in the letter she had promised him that she would never make it back to him' as they both didn't deserve each other'

            In the end he knew he had killed her' she had stated that in her letter' & he didn't know how to deal with it' he had changed' he no longer was the woman's guy' he was the hard core businessman' Angad Khanna' who knew only 1 thing' WORK' it was the only thing which helped him to over come the guilt of killing his Kripa..  his wife' & may b' the love of his life'



hey guys,

so here's the 1st part of the fick....

hope u enjoy it....

do leave ur comments...

LOVE

ADI



Edited by AngelsHeaven - 10 December 2009 at 9:53am

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