Fortuitous - Armaan Riddhima One Shot FF - Page 5

Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by karans_angel


choooooooooooooo chweeet....really awesome......loved it...i was smiling throughout....😃
arima is same like armaan..hehehe...sooo cute...
keep up d good work.....

Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by nidha1983


woah Deepu  its really an awesome one mind blowingso cuteur rockstar dearwoh spl like the line Papa ki Gud morning kiss yaa she is truley Armaan's daughter thanks for the pm


"To me you're like an angel, sent by God above,
To cleanse my soul of sadness, and fill it with love.
You are my inspiration and I wanna thank you,
For everything you have ever done,
To make my life better.
You all touch my life with your kindness,
You know just what I need."







Nidha 
 
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by sameera_12


Hey Deepu,
That was fabulous!!!!!!!!
So sweet and cute.......Especially the second last and last scene😆
Thanks for writing down this one shot.....

Love,
Sameera😊
 
 


Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by shilpa-darling


wow deepu,
this is the best one shot ever.
i was reading and reading and reading.
why did you end it so soon ? ;(
i wished more was there.
 
hehe. armaan reading in riddhima's diary was awesome.
lol. she got jealous even. haha. i loved it.
 
hats off for your sence of humour.
 
the way you made arima, riddhima and armaan's dinning table scene.
 
hatsoff for your creativity. love it a lot. just came online after a pretty long time and found this.
 
love you loads and i demand for more one shots.
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by shilpa-darling


dont cry deepu. it hurts me even
Sorry dear.. I wont cry again..
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by kashishk


Hey Deepu,
This FF was really sweet, I loved it.
It was really great, how their friendship turns into love and Armaan, the tube light, realized it when he went far away.
But I am glad he read her diary and did confessed, it was really cute.
Their daughter is truly too much and why not she Armaan Mallik's copyright😆
The last bit of the part was very adorable as well as funny, from now on Armaan will victim of her daughter's naughty antics😆
Keep it up the great work.

Luv u<333
Kashish
 
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by angelina_2005


re
Will be waiting for your comment angelina..
 
luv
deepu :)
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by crazygal25


hey deepu,
awwwww....such a sweet one shot...
completely loved the 'candy' wala part and the way arima said abt armaan's kiss wala part!!!
 
it was really sweet...
 
keep writing more...
 
and plz do pm me next tym
 
luv:
shatz
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by nidha1983




Bacha don't cry u don't look gud while crying it hurts
And i have replied on pg 1 sorry being late latif
I wont cry from now on di.. just reaplied for your comment...
thanks a lot for the comment...
 
loads of love
deepu :)
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by Steff_DMG


Reserved
Will be waiting for your comment steffi..
 
love
deepu :)

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